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IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING ( detals in notes)
There are 4 reasons in the survey for showing the main reasons for teenagers in one African country using their phones between 2016 and 2019:
1. Social networks
2. Email
3. Digital camera
4. Phone calls
Then we can make comparisons where relevant:
1. The rates of them are decreasing from up and down in every chart between 2016 and 2019. Which are Social networks > Email > Digital camera > Phone calls.
2. The rate of Social networks is accumulating in the four years except year 2017. Which are 50% to 56%.
3.. The rate of Email is decreasing in the four years. Which are 25% to 19%.
4. The rate of Digital camera is accumulating in the four years except year 2017. Which are 15% to 20%.
5. The rate of Phone calls is decreasing in the four years except year 2017. Which are 10% to 5%.
Conslusion:
1. All the dates of the chart are changing stable in these years except year 2017.
2. People in African are getting more and more into social networks, digital camera between 2016 and 2019 by phones.
3. Pople in African are getting less and less into email and phone calls between 2016 and 2019 by phones.
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「からと言うと」を使った例文
この約款から言うと、今更襲撃するとしたら、背信行為と言われて、戦犯として刑を執行されてしまいます。
ある元市会議員の経験から言うと、市議会の中で堕落の事件が多かったです。
社内政治から言えば、あの受付嬢からの噂はなかなか大影響があるよ。
この詩の歌学から言ったら、句切りにも情報がある。
親分の見解から言うと、配下は早起きが容易いぞ。異議を唱えない方がいい。
個人的な資質から言うと、妻のために彼は気配りが行き届いてみたいです。
経済から言うと、複合企業さえ苦境に陥っているのですね。
張本人にとっては、犯罪記録から言えば、短気のあまりに仲間に唆されやすい。
狩野さんは、決意から言えば、どんなに試練を乗り越えることができると思う。
授業から言うと、生徒たちはまだ混迷極まっているでしょうね。
ゲームから言うと、何回か度重なる拉致させたことのあるピーチ姫が怪しくなりはじめてるだろうか。まさか…狂言誘拐なんか？！
信仰から言うと、豚肉を食べてはだめなのです。
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Japan
Definitely I would love visiting Japan because I love anime and they say that the Japanese people are very distant.
I think I will like a place like that but maybe I will never go.
Talking about visiting it on summer is something that doesn't matter but thinking it better it comes to mind the scene of the temples or the singing cicadas.
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Summer Camp
I have never gone to a summer camp but I would love to.
I don't think often about my ideal experience but one of them would be the typical one in a teen drama just because I like manga and I sometimes read things like that.
But If I really go to a summer camp I don't think anything like that happens, but I would really enjoy the events there even if they make me nervous and I'm an introvert
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Mistakes 2
Mistakes can be embarrassing so I think I don't like making any mistakes.
But the worst is always at the beginning because later on, you realize that you don't need to worry about it.
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Es muss gesagt werden.
Ratet mal, in welcher Sprache die meisten unkorrigierten Beiträge sind. Also kann ich euch sagen. In Deutscher Sprache. Fast 500 Beiträge bleiben unkorrigiert, einschließlich 42 Beiträge in diesem Monat. Mein letzter Beitrag wurde auch nicht korrigiert, obwohl ich ein positives Korrekturenverhältnis selbst habe. Es ist einfach unfair, dass die Deutsche Muttersprachlern so schlimm anderen auf dieser Website helfen.
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Grammar Practice 1-5
I want to speak English naturally, and not sound like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
And please let me know if there are any other sentences native speakers use in their daily lives.
Grammar Practice 1-5
Present Simple
I do / I don’t
He do / He doesn’t He does not
She does / She doesn’t, She does not
It does / It doesn’t, It does not
We do / We don’t , we do not
You do/ You don’t, You do not
They do/ They don’t, They do not
1 We use present Simple for things that are true in general.
The earth goes around the sun.
2 Or for things that are happen sometimes
I used to watch movies almost every day, but now sometimes.
3 Or all the time
I like any animal.
4 Confirmed Schedule
I start study tomorrow from 5a.m. .
5 Explanation of a series of operations
You wipe this, put it here. Let me know if you wipe them all.
You go straight until you come to the traffic lights, and then you turn right…
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Grammar Practice 1- 4
I want to speak English naturally, and not sound like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
And please let me know if there are any other sentences native speakers use in their daily lives.
Grammar Practice 1- 4
pronunciation practice
Am I doing it?/ Am not I doing it?
Is he doing it? / Isn’t he doing it?
Is she doing it? / Isn’t she doing it?
Is it doing it? / Isn’t it doing it?
Are we doing it? / Aren’t we doing it?
Are you doing it? / Aren’t you doing it?
Are they doing it?/ Aren’t they doing it?
Am I doing it right?
Am not I doing it right, right?
What book are you reading these days?
What are you doing tomorrow?
Why are you being so beautiful every day?
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Les amies
1. Est-ce que les ami(e)s sont importants ? Pourquoi/pourquoi pas ?
Mes amies sont très importantes pour moi. J’aime elles. Je peux parler avec elles tous les jours et elles sont gentilles. J’aime voier mes amies. Ma mellieure amie est Maria. Elle a longue cheveux marron et elle étudie à mon universitè. Elle étudie l’histoire. Elle est très sympa. En mon aniversée, elle a fait un gâteau pour moi.
2. Qu’est-ce que tu as fait avec tes copains récemment ?
Samedi, j’ai parlé avec ma mellieure amie. Nous avons parlè de la université, nous petits amis et de la economiqué.
3. Quelles sont les qualités d’un bon ami ou d'une bonne amie ?
Une bonne amie est gentillesse, intelligente et sincère. Il n’y a pas amies perfaites, elles ont humains.
4. Penses-tu que tu garderas les copains et copines que tu as maintenant à l’avenir?
Je pense pour je vais faire de nouveaux amis aussitôt que je vais travailler. À l’heure, j’ai assez des amis et je ne dois pas faire de nouveau amis.
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Esercitazione 1
Secondo me, il fonte di stress più grande è il lavoro. Nella società di oggi è molto facile lavorare ventiquattro ore al giorno, sette giorni alla settimana. Non si può mai tranquillizarsi da un alto livello di stress fino che non lasciasse il lavoro qualche volta. Si deve riservare dei periodi per rilassarsi, leggere, riflettersi, in modo che si dimentichi tutto delle esigenze di lavoro.
Un altro modo per combattere lo stress è senza dubbio fare esercizi. Un gran numero di studi medici hanno accertato l'efficienza del esercizio per tranquillizarsi. Non è importante che tipo di esercizio da fare: correre, andare in bicicletta, fare lo yoga, o andare in palestra sono tutti ottimi per migliorare la salute, sia fisica sia mentale.
La cosa più importante è di liberare un spazio sul proprio calendario e prenotare un tempo regolare per rilassarsi, poi aderire strettamente al proprio piano a lungo andare.
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Should literature works be judged and criticized?
It is plausible to think that literary works should not be ranked — they should be chosen freely by readers. Such a literature-populism argument is fallible for two reasons. As for individuals, without proper education and therefore confined to bigotry and short-sightedness, how can one pick up their reads in a “free” way? On the other hand, without appropriate criteria for spiritual civilization, society will eventually lose its insistence and dignity — all will vanish in chaos.
Suppose we abandon criteria and allow lay people to vote for their favorite works. Can we today still appreciate the literature works of Qu Yuan, a statesman who immersed himself into the Miluo river after being impeached? Were they able to vote for Sima Qian, the historian who wrote out of shame after going through torture? What about Tao Yuanmin, the poet who lived and farmed diligently in his remote land? Nowadays, we know their works, not because they won readers' votes in their time. Even contemporary readers who know their names won’t be able to appreciate the true value of those works.
No need to feel sad about this — it is the nobility of literature.
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Atheist or non religious person?
I believed in the Christian God when I was kid.
I used to go to church with friends every Sunday.
Why did I continue to attend to church?
It was probably because I looked forward to hanging out with friends there.
Of course,I liked to listen to the story of Abraham's family history and the Lord's Prayer and liked to sing the hymn even though I don't understand the phrase.
Now I don't go to church and I don't belong to any particular faith.
But I miss those days.
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Juan encuentra a Carmen
Juan viene al bar y ve a su amigo Mateo.
J: ¡Hola Mateo! ¿Que tal?
M: ¡Hola! Muy bien, ¿y tú, cómo estás?
J: Todo va bien.
M: Tengo una sorpresa para ti.
Carmen pasa
C: Hola Juan!
J: Hola!?
Quién es? - pregunta a Mateo
M: ¿A quién te refieres?
J: Me refiero a la mujer delgada con el cabello moreno.
M: No sé, la veo por primera vez, pero es guapa. ¿Tú no la conoces?
J: Me parece familiar pero, no sé quién es, pero me gusta.
Y qué tipo de sorpresa tienes para mí?
M: Sí sí, verdad. Oye, tengo dos entradas de fútbol este fin de semana, ¿quieres venir conmigo?
J: Sí, claro… no, pero no. No puedo. Voy a ver a mis padres en el campo.
M: ¡Es una pena!.... Tengo que ir al baño.
J: Yo voy a pedir dos cervezas.
Juan está sentado y bebe cerveza Mateo viene.
M: Ya sé, como se llama la chica guapa.
J: En serio?
M: Si, su nombre es Carmen!
J: Carmen,... Carmen…? Ya sé! Es una muchacha de mí escuela primaria. Sí, la conozco. Ella era mi primer amor!
M: Pero ahora ya tiene un novio, ¡mira!
J: ¡Oh no!
Mateo y Juan miran a Carmen y su novio.
En el fin de semana:
Juan monta en bicicleta a casa de sus padres y se encuentra con Carmen en el campo.
J: ¡Hola!
C: ¡Hola!
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