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Wer kann der kann
Im Sommer habe ich die Serie Wer kann, der kann in Netflix gesehen. In der Serie backen drei Amateur-Bäcker Kuchen. Das Ziel ist für die Kuchen von ihnen einen professionelle Kuchen ähnlich zu sehen. Oft scheitern die Amateur Bäcken, deshalb ist die Serie sehr lustig und chaotisch. Der schlechteste Kuchen ist eklig, und die Besten sind nur essbar. Die professionelle Kuchen sind kompliziert, mit unterschiedlichen Dingen, die von Kuchen und andere Nachtische machen. Sie war eine gute Serie, aber ein bisschen repetitiv.
Oct. 5, 2022
vlog
Quand j'étais plus jeune, ma famille et moi sommes allés en Inde. Nous sommes allés au Goa parce qu'il est où ma grand-mère habite. Nous séjournions chez elle pour quelques nuits avant nous sommes retournés à notre appartement à Panjim. Panjim est la capitale du Goa. Au Goa je mangeais les mangues, les noix de coco, les sucreries indiennes et les poissons. En Inde la transportation qu'est plus courant est un rickshaw, mais nous travaillions en scooter. Sur ce scooter de location, mon père et moi visitions la plage Caranzalem à Panjim.
Oct. 5, 2022
My experience in Germany
A few months ago I made trip to Germany. The flight was too long, I think it was 25 hours plus layover. In the plane a met a really nice girl. She was in my country for her holydays, told me that they (she and her boyfriend) visited the south part of my country. Futhermore she explained me that my country were very similar to her city, I mean the weather en stuff like that because she comes from Wisconsin.
I remember that she thaught me how to recline my seat because that was my first trip on plane so I was totally noob in that. I also remember that I was watching the movie in her seat, maybe she thought tha I was wierd or stupid haha.
Oct. 5, 2022
El otoño [2.º intento]
No sé por qué, pero el otoño siempre me pone triste. Quizás es porque me recuerda el transcurso del tiempo o simplemente, porque significa el fin del verano. Esta semana, la temperatura va a caer en picado y no podemos engañarnos: el verano no seguirá ni una semana más. Es gracioso que eso me sorprendería.
No es completamente terrible. Puedo encontrar algunos consuelos, como que hacer ejercicio es más cómodo y las hojas se vuelven bellísimas. Por último, prefiero más el té cuando hace frío.
Oct. 4, 2022
プラスチックを少なくするお菓子会社
お菓子が好きですか。お菓子はおいしいけど、お菓子を袋は環境に悪いです。プラスチックで作られていますから。最近、あるお菓子を作る会社が袋を前の袋よりもっと環境に良くにしています。カルビーは9月中旬から紙を使う袋を使っています。全部紙で作られることではありませんが、まだしょうがない状況です。袋の内面には空気が入らないようにするプラスチックのフィルムが必要ですから。
お菓子会社がプラスチックを少なくすることはとてもいいと思っています。人々が捨てるプラスチックの大部分はリサイクルにならないから、使うプラスチックを少なくすることは環境を保護する方法中一つです。特に会社が使うプラスチックを少なくするのは大切です。人々は生活中必要なものを買わなければならないです。でもスーパーで売れている製品の袋や放送は全部プラスチックで作ったのなら、しょうがない、人がプラスチックを使って捨てることになります。私たちは好きなブランドがプラスチックの代わりに別な包装を使うときそのブランドを応援しましょう！
Oct. 4, 2022
Urlaub mal anders : Freiwillig arbeiten
Freiwilligenarbeit wärend des Urlaubs ist eine gute Möglichkeit gute Taten zu machen und zur gleichen Zeit Spaß zu haben. Man macht etwas sinnvolles für die Gesellschaft und kann gleichzeitig großartige Menschen treffen, die dieselben Werte teilen.
Das empfangende Land hat viel davon zu gewinnen, deswegen gibt es viele Werbeaktionen für Reisen die Freiwilligenarbeit einschließen.
Ich denke dass jeder von uns versuchen soll, freiwillig zu arbeiten, mindestens einmal im Leben. Es ist nur menschlich sich einander zu helfen.
Oct. 4, 2022
Oct. 4, 2022
Oct. 4, 2022
Faire sûr
Dans certains cas les gens croyaient qu'ils avait une dispute avec un ami ou quelque chose de cette manière quand en realité c'était un simple malentendu. La communication est le clè si on n'est pas sûr de la situation on peut justement demander. Quelques ne le fait pas parce qu'ils ont trop fièrte alors qu'il n'y a rien à perdre. On pourrait avoir peur de demander parce qu'on a peur d'une situation gênant mais ceci est cent percent mieux qu'une possibilité de perdre quelqu'un proche à nous.
Oct. 4, 2022
movies
I love movies so much all the fairytales and history have a movie with a pair of different. I like the Customes the actors and the animations. The magic and the stories. Many movies have her own story and reach without a book and have many new things. I mean when they make a movie out a story the make them a pair thing different. Or the make the story better like Greg's diary. I love to go in cinema with the big screen it is like theater with technology. With the dark and sound system, that has all a well effects. But I hate the snacks because the cost so much and that is not fair. Then by mark cost that only 1 Eur. But I like all different on movies. Because that are not only videos but artist.
Oct. 4, 2022
Please review my essay
Topic:
First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job.
To what extent do you agree?
Through exchanging information in an interview, employers form an initial perception of their applicants. Since such perception is of great importance, some people assert that performing well in an interview is the best way to land the desired job. I somewhat disagree as there are several factors that are just as significant.
On one hand, there are certain necessary qualities employers seek in candidates that can only be discovered through a one-to-one interview; one is the ability to communicate effectively. In particular, recruiters usually ask how candidates will behave in a difficult situation such as dealing with an unpleasant colleague This demonstrates how well they can interact with coworkers. Another is enthusiasm to work. Applicants are often asked questions regarding the information about the company they apply for. By answering thoroughly, they can show that they are passionate and interested in the work.
On the other hand, there are also several qualities that can give applicants an advantage. First, years of higher education mean professional knowledge from experts of the field. So those with academic qualifications are often considered as highly educated laborers who can learn things quickly, have innovative thinking and solve difficult problems. Second, if workers have worked in the field before, they can develop practical skills and real experience. These transferable features allow an easy transition into the role, thus immediately benefiting potential employers. Therefore, work experience and a decent academic degree can put candidates in a favorable position.
In conclusion, while employers can look preferentially on applicants that show good interpersonal skills and strong passion to work for the company in the interview, they also are likely to favor those with relevant work experience and proper academic qualifications. Thus, merely acing in an interview cannot guarantee a good employment position.
Oct. 4, 2022
Que faites-vous pour rester en bonne santé ?
Malheureusement, la réponse est probablement « pas assez ». Je n’ai pas franchement une bonne routine pour rester très actif. J’ai récemment acheté un abonnement à un salle de sport, mais, histoire très typique, je n’y vais que rarement. C’est difficile quand je pratique le français le matin, et alors je rentre tard de travail ! La rentrée tard peut aussi encourager des mauvaises habitudes concernant la nourriture, comme manger tous les temps les plats préparés ou à emporter. Pourtant, j’essaie de cuisiner la plupart de repas et, comme j’adore faire du vélo et de la randonnée, j’essaie de les faire où je peux.
Oct. 4, 2022
Mes prochaines vacances
Je besoin du vacances. Je voudrais aller à Cancun, au Mexique le prochain été.
Je voudrais plonger et surfer et c'est pourquoi je vais louer une planch du surf et équipement pour le plongée. Aussie que j'ai promise à ma amiee de rendre visite. Ma amiee s'appelle Julia, est une mexicaine et est très jolie. Elle est aussi très intelligente: parle 4 langue et est une guide touristique.
Oct. 4, 2022
Desayuno Conversaciónes
Quiero poder hacer la cháchara sobre desayuno. Yo estoy me hospedado en el hotel pequeño. El íntimo y no hay mucho hablantes de inglés ahí. Yo vero gente en desayuno y digo "Buenos días". Y ellos responde "Buenos días". Ellos parecen agradable así que deseo haber algo más de responder de ellos. Esta una motivación grande parra estoy aprendiendo español para me.
Oct. 4, 2022
Oct. 4, 2022
日本語を楽しく勉強したい
最近、どうやって日本語勉強した方がいいか分からない。前に英語を勉強し始めた時も同じ考えがあった。中級レベルなら、どんなに頑張ってもうまくならない気がするね。一番嫌な気持だと思う。一人で勉強するのは本当に難しい。今よくこれについて考えている。数か月前最初のiTalkiのレッスンがあってすごく楽しかったが、先生も私も病気で忙しかったから、今全然レッスンがない。今週の土曜日は私の誕生日で、自分にプレゼントをあげたかったから、ほかの先生のiTalkiレッスンを買うことにした。なんか緊張する…でも、この毎週１回１時間日本語だけ使う時間、最高。
レッスン意外に楽しく日本語を勉強したい。暗記カードとか文法の教科書は役に立つけど、楽しくない。いつ聞いたか覚えられないけど、日本語がすごくペラペラな奴はユーチューブで自分の勉強方法について話した。ユーチューブとかネットフリックスで完全なネイティブな日本語のビデオを毎日２，３時間見たそうだ。もちろん、そうする前は基本的な日本語を教科書とかで勉強しないといけないといったけど、私は…基本的な日本語ができる。あの奴の動画を見た日にユーチューブで新しいアカウントを作っていっぱいゲーム実況をアップするユーチューバーに登録して、あの日からずっとあの人のビデオを毎日何回も見る。これのおかげでうまくなるのか？わからない。でも、すごく楽しくて日本語の発音とか単語の使い方とかになれるよ。だから、好き。
手短に言えば: 私が使う勉強方法は楽しい。でも、本当にうまくなるかどうかわからないから…ちょっと心配する。
Oct. 4, 2022
Oct. 4, 2022
Tiempo perdida en autobús
Hace unos meses estaba en camino al gimnasio para asistir a una clase de fitness por la que viajaba en autobús. No tengo transporte personal, así que dependo del transporte público cada vez que tengo que viajar fuera del pueblo. Tener un carro propio agilizaría la realización de mis tareas con diferencia en comparación al transporte público. A pesar de ello, a mí no me vale la pena sacar el dinero para pagar las clases de conducir. En fin, el viaje al gimnasio precisaba tomar dos autobuses porque cada uno recorría distintas rutas, y ninguna conectaba por completo el punto de partida al destino. Ese día el primer autobús corría muy ajustado a la hora que tenía que llegar al punto de conexión para que pudiera bajar y subir el otro autobús que me llevara al destino. Desafortunadamente, durante ese periodo las medidas de bioseguridad estaban extremadas por la pandemia y había unas personas que tenían mal puesto sus mascarillas. Entonces el conductor detuvo el autobús para regañarlos, lo que nos demoró, y a su vez hizo que viera el segundo autobús saliendo justo cuando nos le acercábamos a la parada. Entonces mis planes fueron a la garete y tuve que improvisar algo para no perder el tiempo ni el monto del pasaje por el viaje.
Oct. 4, 2022
Oct. 4, 2022
Otton Le Grand (et III)
Un événement très marquant pour le royauté d’Otton a été de mettre fin aux raids des Magyars dans Europa Occidental. Celui était un problème de longue date, que son père y avait dû faire face aussi. L’ancien Empire Carolingian avait eu à affronter les menaces, pas seulement des Hongrois mais aussi celles des Vikings venant du nord et des Arabes par le sud. Le tournat a été la Bataille du Lechfeld, où durant trois jours l’armée allemande a affronté celle de l’Hungrie. La bataille a supposé le fin de l’armée hongroise ainsi que le fin des raids. L’événement a joué un rôle clé pour l’estabilité du royaute d’Otton.
Otto avait déjà cinquante ans (un âge avancé pour l’epoque) lorsque il a marché a Rome pour venir en aide à le Pape dans sa lutte contre un noble italien. Celui a signifié traverser les Alpes, qui n’étais pas facile à faire à ce moment-là. Le séjour en l’Italie, suivant son couronment comment empereur, aurait une durée de dix ans
Oct. 4, 2022
Please review my IELTS essay
In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some top executives are being paid wages that amount to up to 200 times that of the average worker. Some people show positive attitudes towards this disparity, whereas others argue that governments should introduce a maximum wage, and I agree with them.
On the one hand, there is one main reason why some top managers make exorbitant amounts of money is considered beneficial for the nation. In particular, CEO pay usually commensurates with company’s stock-related and financial performance. In other words, if a company reaches a certain financial target, or its stock value increases, then the wage of its CEOs will increase in tandem. So organizations that can reward their supervisors with extremely high pay are often exceptionally successful too. These prosperous companies in turn might raise their workers’ pay packages or want to expand and need more employees. This creates a large number of employment positions, thus benefiting the country’s economy.
On the other hand, setting a wage ceiling has its own benefits. First, it can reduce financial waste. Millionaire executives often spend their money on luxurious products. However, the luxury industry is typically owned by the rich, and it offers little to the general public and the whole country’s economy. For example, Amazon CEO Jeff Bezos spent $5.5 billion to be in space for roughly four minutes, an expenditure that can provide millions of people with Medicaid. Second, high wage inequality causes workers to feel agitated and unjust, so they might strike. This causes financial losses, social disruption and even an increased crime rate. Therefore, it is essential to set a maximum wage.
In conclusion, although companies with seriously high-paid executives can offer more job opportunities, salaries should be capped at a certain level to prevent wasteful spending and socio-economic instability.
Oct. 4, 2022
Setenta y cinco palabras 18
Nota: Learning Latin American Spanish, using ‘ustedes’ form. I want to sound as authentic as possible, please leave any type of correction.
Write an email to your friend explaining why you are not able to attend her 18th birthday party.
Fecha: 9 de marzo
Para: Ally, mailto: <[email protected]>
De: Fran, mailto: <[email protected]>
Asunto: Tu cumpleaños decimoctavo.
Hola, Ally:
Que te vaya bien. ¡No puedo creer que vas a cumplir dieciocho este fin de semana! El tiempo va muy rápido, ¿no? Gracias por tu invitación a tu fiesta, desafortunadamente, no la iré. Ya prometí a mi mama que le ayudaré con las tareas de la casa. También, todavía no tengo nada idea que voy a comprarte como un regalo. Sabes lo cómo estricto es mi papá, vale... ahora mismo no nos llevamos muy bien, y no me permite ir en coche por dos semanas.
Lo siento, ojalá que tengas un buen cumpleaños, tu amiga,
Fran.
Oct. 4, 2022
Please review my essay
Topic:
Topic:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe the school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
My essay:
Children are undeniably the future of the nation, so their education and development have always been the main concern of society. Some people assert that parents should be responsible for educating their children to become good citizens, while others argue it is the role of schools. In my opinion, it is a collective responsibility.
On the one hand, parents have a profound influence on their children. First, they lay the foundations for their child’s behavior by teaching the differences between right and wrong and guiding the child to behave accordingly. For example, kids are taught to learn proper table manners and be polite to their grandparents. Second, young individuals by nature mimic people around them, and they typically spend most of their time with their mothers and fathers. So parents can deliberately behave in a certain way that embodies good character traits, and their kids are likely to learn from it.
On the other hand, schools also play a key role in youth development. To facilitate a learning environment, schools have to establish a set of rules, and students are taught to strictly adhere to these rules. This promotes necessary characteristics of good citizenship such as self-discipline and obedience. Furthermore, the school is a miniature society with people from various backgrounds. Through interacting with their peers and participating in teamwork activities, students can build up interpersonal skills that are vital for their future careers and generally in life.
In conclusion, while parents can instill in children the basics of good behavior and become good role models, the school can teach them to obey the rules and develop collaborative social skills. Therefore, teaching children good citizenship should be a joint effort between them.
Oct. 4, 2022
Can anyone help review my writing?
IELTS speaking part 1 questions:
Do you work or study? (Do you work or are you a student?)
I am currently working as a bartender for a juice shop owned by my relatives. But this is just a temporary job to pay the bills. I’m studying an online English course that aims at getting a 7.5 in IELTS test. This is because want to be an English teacher, and most language institutions require the applicants to have a 7.5 IELTS qualification.
How do you spend your work day?
I usually start off my day with going to the market near my house and buying buy fresh products for the day such as fruits to stock the shop. Then, I spend around one hour cleaning the shop and preparing the materials. After that, I make drinks for customers, and before going off work, I clean all the equipment.
Is it better to work in the morning or in the afternoon?
Personally, I find that I’m more productive in the afternoon. My energy is usually the lowest around 2-3 hours after I just wake up. I think at that time my brain has trouble functioning properly. So for me, I would perform better during the afternoon.
What do you do to improve your productivity?
I feel that a short nap really boosts my energy and productivity. Whenever I feel tired and sluggish, I just take a 15-minute sleep, and then I can work efficiently again. If I do not have enough time, I close my eyes and try to think about nothing for about five minutes. This can revitalize my brain too.
Oct. 4, 2022
Getting started
I'm starting again in langcorrect since a long time without writing. I remember that I stop writing because I undergone a kind of lack of motivation. But now I'm back again!.
The reason that make me start with it again is that I stayed abroad for the first time in my life. There I had to use my english and I realized that I need a lot of practice. I met a lot nice people but sometime they didn't understand me but most of the times I was who don't understand them. That's why I'm tryin to improve my english. I think that now I have the motivation and tools to reach my objectives.
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