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Jan. 26, 2023
Can Children Learn Effectively by Watching TV?
Watching TV is seen as an effective way for children to study, mainly because of its colorful sound and video information. From my perspective, I don’t agree with the idea that watching TV is good for children’s long-term development, although TV indeed brings some benefits for the young.
On the one hand, watching TV is a study tool for children to some extent. TV shows contain lively sounds, plots and storylines, which can give children an intensive visual impact and a deep impression of what they watch. I believe this is a powerful motivation for children to study hard. A historical architecture documentary, for example, provides a fully systematical introduction, including the inner structure or frame of a historical building, choice of building materials and so on, for children through the real videos and images of old buildings, appealing narrators and calming background music. If children are not allowed to watch TV, only receiving information from teachers, I suppose children will feel bored and monotonous shortly afterwards, which will not achieve teaching effects compared with watching TV directly.
On the other hand, spending more time watching TV will have an adverse effect on children’s daily studies and prevent them from participating in other activities. TV programs can distract children from studying easily because they are more likely to be heavily addicted to various kinds of TV shows and pay not much attention to their studies, leading to a sharp decline in their study grades and ranking. Apart from that, the young are far more sedentary than before, so they are supposed to take more quality time to join some outdoor activities rather than sit in front of the TV at home or school. Only in this way, can children have a strong and healthy body. For example, when they participate in extracurricular activities, they can also discuss their problems and difficulties during their daily studies. Not only could they have fun, but also they can get a solution or help from others about a specific question, which is not provided by watching TV alone at home or school.
In conclusion, parents and teachers should set some rules or regulations for children’s TV viewing instead of promoting this activity. Watching TV can influence children’s academic grades to a large extent although it is a useful tool from time to time.
Jan. 26, 2023
jounal
I have been thought a lot about the children education recently。why I do that even though I don’t have kid. Because I associate my experience of education. I always believe that the life and temper and habits we have ,it all because our experience or original family .
I still remember , When I was a kid in the school, some classmate the are bully. Those people we all more or less know some. I though I could simply told my parents, they will help me or encourage me or something. But my parents they just ignored me .they didn’t believe that’s a problem. Since then when I met the same situation I wouldn’t tell my parents . My subconscious told me it wouldn’t help me to inform my parents .
Meanwhile I began getting kind of envious about other classmate who’s parents alway understand them and stand on their side.
When I was in the high scholl , like the most teenager we all have own crush. But I strongly want to get his attention. Even if I wasted a lot of time for that and got a bad note in the examination .
And now I’m an adult, I begin understanding that kind of psychology . Not only I tried to get attention from my parents but also from the boy I liked. human beings always want to get love from our family or friends . That is already in our gene .
At the office we all hope to have a good relationship between colleagues, and so many research reported , the most important factor for employee is salary ,second is work atmosphere.
If you have a fight with your family at the morning , can you still have a good mood in the rest of the day?
If your boss don’t respect you and shout at you sometimes , you definitely want to resign or look for a new job , right ?
So the relationship between us is so important . It has impact on our daily mood and will change our mindset . in addition it will also effects our behaviour .
Jan. 26, 2023
Das Geburtstagsabendessen
Gestern war ich bei einem Freund. Er hat vergessen mich zu meinem Geburtstag gratulieren und hat es vor zwei Tagen gemerkt. Ich habe ihm gesagt, dass es kein Problem sei und es bedeutet auch viel, sogar, wenn er mich ein bisschen später gratuliert. Er hat mich für Abendessen eingeladen als ein Geschenk für meinen Geburtstag. Um 19:45 haben wir uns vor Rewe getroffen, aber weil er im Rewe, was er suchte, nicht gefunden hat, wollte er auch zu Edeka gehen. Wir sind ungefähr 10 Minuten bis Edeka gelaufen und er hat den Mitarbeiter gefragt, ob es frischen Spargel gäbe. Es gab leider nicht und wir haben Spargel im Glas genommen. Ich hab ihn gefragt, was er für Essen vorbereiten will und er hat gesagt, dass er Kartoffeln, Spargel und Pute vorbereiten will. Ich hab ihm gesagt, dass ich kein Fleisch esse und deswegen haben wir für mich auch Tofu gekauft. Ich habe ihm auch vorher gesagt, dass ich momentan kein Fleisch esse, aber er hat es vergessen. Dann sind wir zu ihm gelaufen. Ich habe die Kartoffeln in kleinen Stücken geschnitten und er hat die Kartoffeln gekocht und legte dann in den Ofen, damit sie knusprig wurden. Er hat auch Sauce hollandaise für die Spargel aufgeheizt. Danach hat er die Tofus gebraten. Wir haben den Tisch vorbereitet, und ich habe Deit Tropikal (Mein neues Lieblingsgetränk) in Gläser gegossen. Alles war vorbereitet! Wir haben gegessen und auch viel geredet. Essen war sehr lecker und Reden hat auch Spaß gemacht. Er hat seine Pläne für die Zukunft erzählt. Er will Filme drehen und auch die Skripte schreiben. Es ist sehr schön, jemanden zuzuhören, während er über seine Leidenschaft redet. Ich kann die Funken in den Augen sehen! :)
Jan. 26, 2023
懶得读书
我小的时候，我周围的人认为我是一个书虫。对啊，我以前很喜欢读书。可惜我对读书的爱情开始消失了。现今，如果我成功地读完一本书从头到尾，我就感觉骄傲。对我而言，这是一个巨大的成功。我会不断告诉所有人下来的几周。对阅读我越大越不感兴趣。我连漫画都不太想看。我不但没有时间，而且有困难保留我发现的信息。如果最后我忘记一切，我就为什么要阅读?
如果再这样下去，我会让我爸爸失望。他一直说我应该读很多书。上个月，我下载了一本电子书。这本书是溥儀的传记。我不知道中国人对他有什么印象。你们觉得他是一个英雄、叛徒还是胆小鬼? 因为我听说了他有过悲惨的生活，所以我被这本书很迷住了。但是我还没有开始阅读。我希望我会读完它。
Jan. 26, 2023
Mögt ihr euch selbst?
Diese Frage ist schwierig, aufrichtig zu beantworten. Ich vermute, dass viele Menschen sich nicht völlig mögen, trotzdem geben es nicht zu. Manche machen Witze darüber, andere tun so, als wären sie mit sich zufrieden, nur wenige gestehen, dass sie von sich nicht begeistert sind.
Ich persönlich gehöre zu denen, die sich zwar nicht sehr mögen, scheinen ganz glücklich zu sein. Das finde ich normal, da diese Unzufriedenheit ein Potential für Verbesserung birgt. Allerdings beneide ich die Personen, die trotz allem wirklich sich mögen.
Jan. 26, 2023
What Motivate Students to Choose a College
The pie charts present the changes in what students considered when choosing a university in the UK in two separate years.
Suitable courses and degrees were the top factors for students to choose a college in 1982 and 2002, although they decreased by 6% from 40% in 1982 to 34% in 2002. The figure for location showed a similar pattern, modestly falling from 19% to 16%. There had a sharp decline in costs, only at 5% in 2002 compared with nearly 30% in 1980.
The amount for the remaining three factors presented a different pattern. The percentage of amenities, social activities and sports facilities noticeably grew to 18% in 2002, over three times more than just 5% in 1980. The proportion of students who paid attention to the reputation of the institution was relatively low, at 5% in 1980, but it saw a significant fivefold rise to 25% in 2002. It virtually remained unchanged in admission criteria in these two years.
Overall, suitable courses and degrees were by far the most important factors for students considered. The percentage of amenities, social activities and sports facilities and reputation of the institution increased markedly, while the figure for the remaining three factors showed opposing trends.
Jan. 26, 2023
Divagaciones 10
Es como si el motor no reaccionara a un cambio de la posición del servo, hasta que ya es demasiado tarde.
El servo está abriendo más y más, pero nada cambia con el motor. Eventualmente, acelera mucho y genera mucha más potencia de la necesaria y el sistema de control tiene que bajar el acelerador rápidamente. ¿Hay algo que podría causar esto?
Acerca del archivo que me enviaste, ¿hay algo más que tengo que saber para cargarlo en el controlador del sistema?
Jan. 26, 2023
Una nuova settimana lavorativa
Non ho voglia di niente oggi ma devo lavorare. Mia mamma ha preso un piccolo rafreddore e mi dispiace per lei, specialmente perché presto viaggia. Spero che stia meglio domani.
Ho un sacco di cose da fare oggi ma fortunatamente il tempo vola velocemente questi giorni. Credo di avere il tempo per fare di tutto.
Quando ero bambina, avevo il tempo per fare tutto quello che volevo invece adesso mi sento come non ci sono abbastanza ore in un giorno. È un po' comico ma la vita succede comunque.
Saranno le due quindi fra poco inizio a lavorare. Lavoro fino a mezzanotte, non mi piace per niente ma non ne sono triste.
Comunque sono felice perché ho parlato al telefono con mio papà per quasi un mezz'ora: non ho parlato così tanto da molto tempo. È stato carino e ho saputo di più della sua vita e delle cose che gli succedeno.
Da febbraio posso avere un programma più piacevole e posso dormire di notte come una persona più sana. Il sonno di notte non è paragonabile a niente.
È quasi weekend per gli altri, fra qualche giorno anche io potrò dire quello. Assolutamente non posso dire che ho una vita disordinata, provo sempre a raggiungere i obiettivi.
Adesso vado al negozio che è al piano inferiore altrimenti non ho niente da mangiare per pranzo.
Jan. 26, 2023
Un día
Creo que pueda escribir más en mí diario. Quiero escribir textos interesantes pero estes necesitan mucho tiempo : tengo buscar la idea, escribir ...
Cuando alguien hace una corrección, me encanta pero necesita mucho cuidado. Trato de comprender las faltas entonces las correcciones. Pues escribo una nueva versión del texto. Trato de recordar lsa correcciónes, a veces escribo una nota sobre unas de estas.
Hoy he visto un par de frases bastante simple que alguien ha escrito en francés. Al primer golpe de vista, no parecía interesante pero cuando lo he corregido me gustaba porque había un montón de posibilidad detrás todas esas palabras.
Ahora ya escribo algo así, sólo para escribir un poco.
Jan. 26, 2023
Translation
Good morning, everyone! A new day begins. Yesterday, I taught until midnight, and now I want to record it down. I taught a small class, and a little boy in one on one lesson.
Teaching a small class makes me realize the importance of computer technology and languages! Of course, the children also made me either laugh or angry. A little boy among those students always turned off his speaker and camera, and did other things. Every time I wanted to ask him questions, I had to call him back to the lesson, but he could always give me the right answers, and he had nice handwriting and clear pronunciations, so, I didn't give him strict limits, as long as he could maintain his behavior at that time. I feel excessive demands would be counterproductive.
The little boy who took one-on-one lessons made me upset because he rejected doing anything I asked him to do. When I spent time on my phone in yesterday's class, he came. When I looked up at him, I found him smiling at me, and I felt, "Well, today's class will go well." During the class, he kept his head down. I asked him what he was doing. He said he did nothing. Then I told him, you know what? You are free in my class, and you can do whatever you want, such as paint, play games with me. As long as you listen to me, I will satisfy you with everything. I know he is very tired, and it's necessary for children to learn while they play. He was very happy. We painted words in color and reviewed many words in the process.
I always think that we should teach students according to their aptitude. Although I don't know if l have followed this rule well, I will stick to it all the way.
Jan. 26, 2023
Practicar la salida de emergencia del edificio
El otro día en la escuela hubo un ensayo de emergencia no anunciado para practicar salir del edificio en el caso de que hubiera una amenaza real. En este caso, la clase acababa de comenzar cuando sonó la alarma de incendio. Eso me pilló desprevenido porque normalmente la administración nos pone al aviso cuando va a suceder un ensayo. Los estudiantes estaban atónitos en sus pupitres hasta que se dieran cuenta de que había de evacuar las instalaciones. Entonces, empezaban a pararse y moverse hacia la puerta cuando un alumno me preguntó si me esperaron o ya podían salir. Le respondí que vayámonos y les mandé que se mantuvieran en fila mientras caminaban. Sin embargo, al hacerse a la idea de que realmente no existía una amenaza, algunos me hicieron caso omiso y charlaban con sus amigos mientras salían.
Jan. 26, 2023
La fête nationale de l’Australie
Aujourd’hui, le 26 janvier est la fête nationale de l’Australie. À la fin du 18ème siècle, l’Australie a été colonisée par la Grande Bretagne. En 1901, la Grande Bretagne a adopté des lois permettant l’autonomie, et le pays d’Australie a été créé. Selon les historiens, à l’époque, il y avait six États et de créer un pays était assez compliqué : nos ancêtres travaillaient très dure pour accomplir cet objectif. Ils ont réussi car maintenant nous sommes un pays ayant une population d’environ 25 millions d’habitants.
L’Australie est très multiculturel accueillant un tas de migrants dans le 20ème siècle. Après la deuxième guerre mondiale, c’était des réfugiés européens, particulièrement les Italiens et les Grecs, plus tard les réfugiés vietnamiens et désormais des migrants qui viennent de l’Inde, de la Chine et de l’Afrique. On observe un pays qui est un mélange de cultures, de langues et de traditions. Le jour national doit être joyeux, un jour où toutes les communautés se réunissent. À l’époque, dans toutes les grandes villes, il y avait des festivités comme des feux d’artifice, des carnavals et des parades.
Même si, ce devrait être un jour de célébration, de nos jours, c’est devenu un jour plein de controverses. Les indigènes qui ont été exploités, chassés et tués par les colons anglais ne célèbrent pas le jour. Ils exigent que le jour est renommé comme un jour de réconciliation et plutôt que célébrer l’indépendance, passer le jour en réfléchissant. À leur avis, il est temps de guérir les vielles blessures et de se respecter mutuellement, commençant avec l’établissement d’un jour de réconciliation.
Jan. 26, 2023
Jan. 26, 2023
Day 19: Green Comet
A comet which was seen for last time fifty thousand years ago by neanderthals it's coming back to be seen the days 1st and 2nd February. I would like to see it but I don't know if that it could be possible because where I live there's so much light pollution (like in almost every country). I don't know how it will look in the sky, I never have seen something like this before. I really would like to see it because this comet won't pass Earth again after fifty thousand years.
Jan. 26, 2023
４０：豪雨の一夜
寮から食堂に行くために5分ぐらいだけで歩けるけど、今夜のような天気ではかなり歩きづらい。豪雨のせいで道路の至る所が水で溢れていたばかりか、傘をさしたにもかかわらず、強風で届いた雨は徹底的に僕を濡らした。食堂に着いたところで、全身びしょびしょになった。寮に帰る時もその嵐に冒さなければならなかった。最悪の一夜だった。
ちなみに、雨もかまわず、傘をささずに歩いていた人たちは結構いた。食堂から持ち帰りを取って、寮に戻っている人も見かけた。そんなに食堂で食べるのは嫌？寮に戻った時、飯はもう雨水に浸かっているぞ！と叫びたかったほど呆気に取られた。そのような雨をどうにも思わない人たちはまったくわからない。どうかしているとでも思う。
Jan. 26, 2023
Jan. 26, 2023
笑死我了！
今天下午我依然出去遛狗。狗狗因为看到松鼠跑经过旁边的园子，突然就权力往前跳了。当时我刚好没有把狗链抓得紧，它就从我的手中溜出来了。松鼠看到狗追过来，松鼠就跑到树后面躲了。狗跟在松鼠后面，链子却卡在树根上。小狗继续跑，动量自然让它绕树干绕了几遍，越绕链子越短，一直到狗的头被绑在树干上，动都动不了！我遛过去看狗狗，它斜眼盯着我，一副莫名其妙的样子，好像在问我「我怎么被绑在这儿？！」笑死我了！
While I was walking the dog this afternoon, he jumped after some squirrels and pulled the leash out of my hand. A squirrel ran behind a tree, the dog gave chase, and his leash caught on a root. His momentum turned him around the tree, wrapping the leash around the trunk. The dog kept running till his head was strapped to the trunk and he couldn’t move another inch. When I strolled over to check on him, he was staring at me sideways as if to say, “How did I get here?!” I couldn’t help laughing!
Jan. 26, 2023
笑死我了！
今天下午我依然出去遛狗。狗狗因為看到松鼠跑經過旁邊的園子，突然就全力往前跳了。當時我剛好沒有把狗鏈抓得緊，它就從我的手中溜出來了。松鼠看到狗追過來，松鼠就跑到樹後面躲了。狗跟在松鼠後面，鏈子卻卡在樹根上。小狗繼續跑，動量自然讓牠繞樹幹繞了幾遍，越繞鏈子越短，一直到狗的頭被綁在樹幹上，動都動不了！我遛過去看狗狗，牠斜眼盯著我，一副莫名其妙的樣子，好像在問我「我怎麼被綁在這兒？！」笑死我了！
LMAO!
While I was walking the dog this afternoon, he jumped after some squirrels and pulled the leash out of my hand. A squirrel ran behind a tree, the dog gave chase, and the leash caught on a root. His momentum turned him around the tree, wrapping the leash around the trunk. The dog kept running till his head was strapped to the trunk and he couldn’t move another inch. When I strolled over to check on him, he was side-eyeing me as if to say, “How did I get here?!” I couldn’t help laughing.
Jan. 26, 2023
Aujourd'hui
Ma journée était calme. Ce n’était pas spécial, j’ai travaillé comme d’habitude. Je trouve que maintenant, pendant janvier c’est déprimé. Non, je ne suis pas déprimé mais le temps n’est pas beau. Le ciel est gris tous les jours ! Je veux le soleil, je préfère l’été.
Avant mon travail, j’ai fait du vélo intérieur 15 kilomètres. J’ai mal aux jambes parce que hier j’ai fait de la musculation. Le soir, j’ai lu un livre, c’était un non-romanesque. Finalement, pour la première fois depuis longtemps, j’ai médité. En général, je pense que j'ai passé une bonne journée même si j’ai fait l’habitude.
Jan. 26, 2023
My Life in SZ (6)
The next day about 10 o'clock in the morning. I was already in the downtown areas of SZ. I could see the Diwang Building (Shun Hing Square) which was the highest over 300m at that time. The air was fresh and most of the people were in clean dresses while walking quickly, and the green belt was wide and beautiful...
I had no time to appreciate the scenery because I had no job then and made no reservation for a single room for me that night. It's interesting and a little bit ridiculous because I didn't prepare enough. If I went back to find a job again in an unfamiliar city, I should have reserved a room at least.
In order to save time, I went to a career agent asking for the latest job recruitment information, I'll prove that it was the right decision.
"Hi, young man, what job do you want?" the staff greeted me without any smile.
"I want to find a job." I answered timidly.
"Oh, no problem. Our information is updated hourly, these are effective and the latest information which is all 100% guaranteed. " the staff said quickly and present an A4 paper filled with job news. "100 yuan per information, if you are failed for the first one, come back and we will give you another two more pieces of information for free. You also can pay a monthly fee to become our premium membership... "
"This one, please!" I found an exhibition center was recruiting, a university certificate and fluent communication in English were prerequisites; relevant working experience is not necessary; a strong desire to develop in a creative field.
I want to try the job though I have no university certificate. I started listening to VOA (voice of America) both in English and Chinese program in 1989 (I was in grade 9 then, 1989 was a special and sometimes sensitive number in China). My English was not bad compared to most of my classmates.
In the next entry, I will write about how I got the job smoothly and miraculously.
Jan. 26, 2023
農村發展觀光好還是不好？
我認為農村發展觀光又好又不好。但我寧可農村跟以前一樣，也不要發展得跟城市一樣快。因為在農村我們才可以接近自然，跟這裡的農夫聊天，更了解這裡的人如何對待自然，以及他們的風俗習慣。小孩暫時離開電子設備，在田裡跑跑跳跳，大人可以放下壓力，放鬆心情。如果發展太快，觀光的人沒有環保意識，環境很容易被汙染，也會破壞這裡的人保護環境的努力。傳統的風俗習慣會慢慢消失，取而代之的是便利商店，傳統的小店也逐漸減少。但，利潤低再加上地位不高，許多人離開鄉下到城市想找工資較高的工作，讓城市越來越擁擠。所以這裡的農夫的意見也很重要，他們也有權利在農村發展旅遊業。這樣也會減少農村人來城市的數量，城市也不會太擁擠。
Jan. 26, 2023
Jan. 26, 2023
LangCorrectプロフィールなどの自己紹介
こんにちは！日本語を勉強しているアメリカ人です。
○○を使っている狙いは、自然で流暢に話せる・書けるようになることです。今までドラマや本などで日本語を勉強していましたが、アウトプット力が足りなくて上達させようと思っています。外国語の習得のためには練習あるのみですね！
以前ゲームプログラマーとして働いていましたが、色々なことがあって無職になって暇な時間が増えたので、今のところは日本語の勉強に熱中しています。日本の文学やゲームや料理などが好きなので、副業でもいつか翻訳の仕事に挑戦していきたいと思っています。なので、些細なことでも訂正してもらえたら嬉しいです。
趣味は料理、読書、アイススケート、ゲーム、ドラマを観ることです。
時々返事が遅くなるかもしれませんが、必ず返します！英語を覚えたい方、仲良くしましょう。英語について聞きたい事があれば気軽に聞いてください。一緒に勉強を頑張りましょう！
よろしくお願いします。
Jan. 26, 2023
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