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Am Morgen
Am Morgen, ich aufwache und esse ein einfaches Früstuck:
eine Tasse mit Milch und Kaffee.
An dieser Morgen, ich laufe zu dem Fenster
und ich schaue den Nebel über dem See an
Das ist eine schöne Aussicht bestimmt
Ich mag das düsteres Wetter, weil das mich der Fried bringt
Ich plane ein paar Stunden zu verbringen und Deutsch zu studieren
Ich bin nicht sicher wann ich zuhören und verstanden kann, aber ich arbeite an diese Aufgabe
Ich weiß dass ich kann es tun, nachdem ich genug Zeit verbringe
Jan. 25, 2020
Jan. 25, 2020
Jan. 25, 2020
Jan. 24, 2020
Injured US Soldiers Increase to 34 from Iranian Missile Stri
Injured US Soldiers Increase to 34 from Iranian Missile Strike
The Pentagon’s chief spokesman Jonathan Hoffman told the reporters at the press conference on the 24th that 34 service members in serving in Iraq have suffered injury from the Iranian missile attack earlier this month. All injuries included symptoms of concussions caused by the impact of the attacks. Eight of the 34 were transported to the U.S. Initially, the U.S. government officials announced that there were no casualties from the attack, however, on the 16th, revised the number to eleven.
According to Hoffman, nine members are undergoing treatment at a hospital in Germany, and seventeen have gone back on duty in Iraq. Iran launched ballistic missiles on the 8th on Ain Assad Airbase located in Al Anbar governorate in mid-west of Iraq. On the 24th, the U.S. secretary of defense Mark Esper ordered a more efficient and rapid delivery of information related to casualties of U.S. troops.
At a press conference conducted on the 22nd, President Trump told, “I heard that they had headaches and a couple of other things, but I would say and I can report it is not very serious.”
Based on the report of zero casualties, President Trump held back retaliatory measures against Iran. Intending to prevent further conflict between Iran, President explained that the situation is not serious.
Jan. 24, 2020
Ersten Schritten
Ich habe niemals auf Deutsch gescreibt, aber sagt man dass ein Tagebuch ein gut Methode ist für einen Sprache zu lernen.
Ich habe heute frei Zeit, und will ich viel Deutsch lernen. Ich benuzte heute WhatsApp mit meinen Freunden in Deutschland und Niederlands, aus Deutsch und aus Latein. Demnächst, beginne ich das Abendessen kochen.
Jan. 24, 2020
Chinesisches Neujahr!
Morgen beginnt das chinesische Neujahr. Es ist das Jahr der Ratte! Was symbolisiert es? Menschen, die im Jahre der Ratte geboren sind, sind gut geeignet, Führer oder Muziker zu sein. Zusätzlich eine Ratte steht für Fruchtbarkeit, Fortpflanzung und Reichtum, entsprechend der chinesischen Kultur. Sie repräsentieren auch Gemeinheit und Schüchternheit! Welches Tier bist du? Ich bin ein Drache!
Jan. 24, 2020
Zusammenfassung meiner Fehler, 2. Teil
4. Eintrag. Hier schrieb ich: „Heute spielt eine meine Lieblings band der Welt, Opeth.“. Hier geht es darum, den Genitiv richtig zu benutzen. Also, „einer meiner“ anstatt „eine meine“. Außerdem sollte ich auf die Rechtschreibung des Wortes „Lieblings band“ aufpassen.
Dann habe ich geschrieben: „Ich habe viel Zeit für das Konzert erwartet, und natürlich bin ich sehr aufgeregt darauf.“. Richtig sagt man hier: „lange auf“ statt „viel Zeit für“, wenn man lange auf etwas gewartet hat. Offenbar habe ich auch am Ende „darauf“ falsch benutzen, denn „darauf“ passt einfach nicht am ende des Satzes.
Am Ende schrieb ich dies: „Opeth hat ein neues Album letzten Monat veröffentlicht, heißt „In Cauda Venenum“. Erstens habe ich „letzten Monat“ vertauscht, da vielleicht man vor dem Subjekt die Zeit schreiben sollte?. Darüber hinaus habe ich das Pronomen „es“ nach dem Komma vergessen.
Und das war es für heute. Ich habe gehofft, mehr als einen Eintrag heute zu überprüfen! Na ja, das hat mir Spaß gemacht.
Jan. 24, 2020
Jan. 24, 2020
My thoughts and "Yesterday"
Today is a heavenly, calm, and pleasant day. Namely, it's Friday. Consequently, I can rest a lot. I couldn't settle on a reading a book, so I settled on writing this entry. My classmates left school just before me because I was changing I was out of my P.E. uniform to my normal one after P.E. class.
Frankly speaking, absolutely nobody ever brings their uniform for P.E. I have no idea why; maybe they have no interest in the subject ; who knows. I remember that blackout scarcely occurred at home when I was using the computer. Also, I must admit that the class across the hall from m in e is much more active. When I tried to turn my laptop on, it lagged so much that I couldn't even click the mouse. It drove me up the wall, so I turned it off and nearly hit the laptop.
I was hoping to post an entry, but I wasn't able to. Because of that, I meditated for ten minutes.
It helped me release the anger in my mind.
“Yesterday” one song in contemporary musical history that has a great back story.
I thought about how the Beatles' song “Yesterday” was made when I was listening to it.
Coincidentally, I was translating a text about this song from my native language to English.
I found out the song's fascinating backstory : According to McCartney, he wrote a song as he dreamed.
He wondered what it could be, so he played the tune on an upright piano that was nearby him.
He liked the song and could not believe that something so wonderful was totally his.
What's more, it was the first song that ha d been written without the help of other members. McCartney wrote it alone.
Keen to not forget the song, he jotted down some placeholder words for it.
If I remember correctly, they went: “Scrambled eggs, oh, my baby, how I love your legs”.
I also have to mention that “ scrambled eggs” was a joke in the band before the song was fully recorded.
Lennon said, “ The song was around for months and months before we finally completed it. Every time we got together to write songs for a recording session, this one would come up. We almost had it finished. Paul wrote nearly all of it, but we just couldn't find the right title. We called it 'Scrambled Eggs ' and it became a joke between us.”
Jan. 24, 2020
Jan. 24, 2020
Jan. 24, 2020
社会人になるというのは一体どういう意味ですか！？
僕の大学のあるプログラムによって、2，3年生になったら求職活動して6ヶ月ぐらい働かなきゃいけないことになっています。そして、また学校に通い繰り返すことになっています。なぜかというと、卒業するときにもう一年か一年半の経験があるので、仕事を見つけるのは易しくなるからのです。
それで、僕が仕事を見つけて、最近プログラマーとして働いています。コンピュータを専攻しているので、結構楽しいですが、かえって少しつまらないと思います。これを引退するまでしないといけないのを考えると寂しくなります。「どうして8時間以上働かなきゃいけないんだ！」と思い出してしまいます。
仕事は無意味なわけじゃないです。会社の努力によって、他人の生活を楽しくて楽にさせます。ただ、仕事を中心とした人はきっと何かを犠牲しないといけないと思います。僕の場合、それは暇な時間（特に日本語を勉強する時）と家族といる時間のではないでしょうか。これが社会人になるという意味なんですか！？僕にとって「なんか寂しくない？」と考えます。
さて、仕事に行かないと遅刻しますね！
Jan. 24, 2020
Is It Rude or Not?
I chatted with a man in English last night.
It was for the first time to talk to him.
We texted for about one hour, and this morning he asked me about my job.
I replied that I’m currently not working, and only taking care of my son.
Then, he said “That’s good. Kids should get full care and attention from their parents.”
I felt uncomfortable with his words then.
I always use “child/children” to mention someone’s child/children.
I know he just told a general opinion.
Can it be rude to use “kid” instead of “child”?
What do you think?
Jan. 24, 2020
Cháo mọi người :)
Chào mọi người!
Hy vọng các bạn đang có một ngày lễ tết vừa đẹp vừa hành phục!
Mình cũng vừa mới tìm ra cái website này. Chỉ đọc một chút bình luận ở đây thôi mà mình đã muốn đăng ký. Mình rất đanh gia cao mà những công đòng này được tôn tại để giúp học sinh nói ngôn ngữ tốt hơn.
Câu chuyện của mình đã bất đầu khi gặp nhau một người phụ nữ Việt ở đại học khi mình đã học để trở thành một kỹ sư. Chúng mình đã học sinh, và làm việc cùng nhau. Trong thời gian lâu (và nhiều kỳ ừc không những đẹp mà còn vui) mình lấy em ấy như người vợ của mình và những ngày này cuôc sống của chúng mình đã đuọc chưa bao giờ tốt hơn.
Bây giờ, mình đã đọc nhiều quyẻn sách để thử hiểu nhiều hơn và mình muốn phát triển ngôn ngữ của mình nhiều hơn. Có vấn đề khó để tìm thầy cơ hội như cái website này - đăc biết là vì mình sông ở nước ngoài nước Việt. Thường xuyên không có ai ở đây bảo luận bắng tiếng Việt và cũng không có quyển sách nặng cao hơn để đọc.
Giăc mơ ước của mình là có thể nói chuyện tự nhiên với cả nhà cua người vợ mình, và chó phép các con của mình cũng học tiếng Việt. Mình ước các con của mình cũng sẽ có khả năng để chia sẻ văn hoá Việt Nam của họ, và tiếp tục có liên hệ với gia đình Việt.
Xin cảm ơn cho bắt kỳ ai sẽ giúp mình!
Matt đến từ nước Anh.
Jan. 24, 2020
Portret vašeg ljubimca
Slikam portrete ljubimca. Slikala sam otkad sam dijete. I volim životinja. Tako počila sam slikati ljubimce.
Jučer, moj mužev prijatelj mi je pitao slikati njegove mačke. Ima dvije mačke. Jedna mačka se zove "Mavey" i druga se zove "Fred." Obje su zgodne mačke.
Sutra moram ići u umjetničku trgovinu kupiti pribor. Trebam boju, kistove za boju, i platno. Trebat će mi dva tjedna da završim slike. Uzbuđena sam počinjati.
Jan. 24, 2020
Jan. 24, 2020
Jan. 24, 2020
Comida.
A minha lembrança mais afeiçoada da minha infância foi indo ao Wendy´s toda quinta feira com meu avo e minha vo. Eles são bem antigos agora; e sendo assim ja não podemos sair para comer juntos toda semana. Eu sempre vou valorizar estas lembranças; eu desejo que pudesse voltar a estes tempos mas eu sei que o mundo não funciona assim. Mas pensando bem, talvez seja bom que nos deixamos de comer no Wendy´s. Comida daquele tipo não eh exatamente saudável! Eu mantenho uma dieta muito mais saudável hoje em dia. Quase todos os dias eu bebo um batido no pequeno almoço! Eu tento comer vegetais com toda refeição também. Mas parece que eu sai do tópico neh? Enfim, espero que quem le esta publicação tenha uma boa noite (ou dia dependendo da zona de tempo)
Jan. 23, 2020
Jan. 23, 2020
This was an extremely hard piece to translate!
Dow Jones Slides More Than 200 Points on New Coronavirus Fear and Chinese Stocks Selloff
The U.S. stock market on the 23rd started off with a strong(?) selloff. As of 9:45 AM, the Dow Jones Industrial Average is shifting around 29005.28, with a drop of 180.99 points from the previous day, as a result of investor’s concerns for the newly emerged coronavirus triggering a recession of Chinese economy. The U.S. stocks (were affected?) following the decline of Japanese and European stocks as the Shanghai stock market suffered a sharp drop. Throughout the day, Dow Jones fell as much as 200 points.
On 23rd January, a new patient of the coronavirus was confirmed in Singapore. At the threshold of the Chinese New Year, the negative impact on local business and travel industry is unavoidable as the Chinese government has reportedly shut off two more cities in addition to Wuhan, a hotspot for the outbreak.
Travelers Insurance weighed down on Dow Jones as their financial result such as premium revenue for the third quarter of 2019 published on the morning of the 23rd failed to reach the market forecast.
The stocks of China-related construction machinery brand Caterpillar and Dow Chemical were also affected by the selloff. With the decline of the U.S. long-term interest rates, a concern for a low-profit margin is pushing the bank stock prices further down.
Texas Instruments stocks dropped due to weak earning prospects published earlier in the evening of the previous day along with the quarterly accounts.
A tip of semiconductor-related stocks such as Intel and Advanced Micro Devices are being sold off as well.
Jan. 23, 2020
Jan. 23, 2020
Zusammenfassung meiner Fehler
1. Eintrag. Hier habe ich gesagt : "weil meinen Rücken weh tat". Der richtige Weg das zu sagen ist: "weil mein Rücken weh tat". Es geht um den richtigen Weg der Akkusativ zu benutzen.
2. Eintrag. Hier habe ich offenbar alles perfekt geschrieben. Das hat leider nicht bisher nochmal passiert.
3. Eintrag. Erstmal, ich habe "zu" im Titel falsch angewendet. Dann habe ich "so viel" zusammen geschrieben. Darüber hinaus habe ich "noch mal" und "erneut" getauscht. Am ende habe ich dies schrieben "Ich möchte stark und fit geworden". "Geworden" ist falsch, da man "werden" benutzen soll. Das ist für mich noch nicht klar, könnte jemand bitte das erklären?
Jan. 23, 2020
Wuhan City Being Cut Off Due to New Coronavirus WHO Conveys
With the recent outbreak of pneumonia due to the new coronavirus, Wuhan city, the epicenter of the outbreak in China has decided to cut off its public transportation system starting at 10 AM on January 23rd local time. This unusual measure is taken to restrict the public’s transportation to contain the spread of infection.
The World Health Organization conveyed a meeting at the Headquarters in Geneva in the afternoon of 22nd January local time regarding the new coronavirus, and have decided to further discuss preventive measures throughout the 23rd. According to the Chinese state media, Wuhan City will be shutting off intercity busses, subways as well as closing down railway stations and airports. Civilians are banned from leaving the city unless “under special circumstances”. The release of a seal-off is to be announced. Wuhan City is a metropolis with a population of over 10 million people.
The death toll from the new coronavirus reached 17 people as of Wednesday. So far, coronavirus has infected more than 500 people including patients in China, Japan, the U.S., South Korea, Thailand and Taiwan.
The World Health Organization discussed whether to announce a global health emergency regarding the epidemic of the new coronavirus at an emergency meeting held on 22nd January. However, they postponed their decision for further discussion on 23rd.
Jan. 23, 2020
Länder, die ich gerne besuchen würde (I)
Nach einem Gespräch mit meinem niederländisch-deutschen Freundin habe ich beschlossen, mein Erasmus in Berlin zu machen. Nach Beendigung meiner Zeit in Berlin würde ich dann gerne andere Städte in Deutschland besuchen. Hamburg, München, Frankfurt und einige andere Städte kommen mir in den Sinn. Außer Deutschland, würde ich gerne Italien besuchen. Städte wie Milan, Florence und Venezia. Auch die Insel Sardegna, insbesondere Alguer, hier spricht man Alguerés, einen katalanischen Dialekt.
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