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Tom

Feb. 24, 2020

¿Porque me preguntó ¿Dónde está la biblioteca??

Cuando estoy en la universidad muchas personas me preguntan ¿dónde está___?
No creo que soy muy guapo...pero me perese simpatico. Es como "resting nice face". Yo no sé si a otras personas ante me preguntaron o no, pero casí todos los días me se preguntó.
No es el peor en el mundo, pero cuantas personas son malas. Por ejemplo, una vez yo eschuchaba la musica mia caundo una mujer y su hija venaron a frente me. No pudo escuchar ellas por la musica, y no me pudo ir por ellas en frente me. Entonces, me preguntaron ¿dónde está la biblioteca? Le dijé la dirrection porque no soy un burro, pero no quiero contestar todos los preguntos sobre dirrectiones cuando estoy caminando. De nuevo, sea bien si solas unas vezes pero ¿casí todos los días?

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Tom

Feb. 24, 2020

저는 한국 배우고 싶은 사람입니다.

저는 2년 전에 한국인이랑 결혼했는데 아직도 한국어로 잘못 해요. 지금은 제 아내와 미국에서 살아요. 강아지가 있어요. 행복하게 살아요. 그런데 장모님과 장어른꼐서 방문하시거나 우리는 그를 한국에서 방문하면 재가 한국어를 아기처럼 말해서 부끄려워요. 얼굴이 빨개지고 던어를 다 깜박해요. 그래서 연습할게요.

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Shikhar

Feb. 23, 2020

Een conversatie

Ze is heel slim en zeer leuke ook, he? Denk je dat niet? Zeg steeds de waarheid omdat de waarheid uiteindelijk uitkommen. Als je de waarheid niet sprekt, je kan niet vertrekken. Komaan, vertelt mij! Je geheim is veilig met me.

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grutendon

Feb. 23, 2020

日本語ができません

長いあいだで日本語を勉強しているのにまだ話せません。ペラペラになりたいですがパリには日本語を話す機会があまりありません。私の友だちはフランス語と英語がよくできるので結局この言語で話し合います。

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grutendon

Feb. 23, 2020

한국어

한국어랑일본어를공부해요. 한국어를하고십어요. 시월에가족하고같이한국에서가예요.

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jinnovation

Feb. 23, 2020

かぼちゃの煮物

今朝、彼女がお粥を食べたがってたので、僕は当然に作ることにした。しかし、その前に、お粥を食べる時、おかずがなければダメだと思ったから、「どうすればいい」と思った。突如、この間かぼちゃを買ったことを思い出した。それに、冷蔵庫に昨日作っただしもある。「それじゃ、かぼちゃの煮物を作ればどうだろうか？」と思って、作り始めた。そして、作り終わった後、家で静かな朝ごはんを食べることができたから、中々嬉しくなった。

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Aik

Feb. 23, 2020

ゾンビ

The CranberriesのZombieは知りますか？日本にはあまり人気じゃないと思うが、欧米で凄く有名な曲です。９０年代の一番有名な政治的曲かもしれない。今、ユーチューブで十億回視聴と近いです。

１９９３年で北アイランドのテロ組織IRAがイングランドの商店街で爆弾を使って二人の子供を殺しました。Zombieはこの件に対して書きました。曲の意味は簡単と説明するなら、「私達はアイランド人が、この馬鹿げた暴力を同意しない」。

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Ejga4kJUts

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eeprom

Feb. 23, 2020

Sonntag

Gestern Nacht war das Wetter sehr windig und praktisch wie einen Tag im Sommer, denn es war fast 16 Grad in der Nähe von dem Tegernsee, Oberbayern.

Was ist eigentlich los mit dem Klimawandel? Es ist wirklich zu spät, um unsere Welt zu retten? Oder haben wir genug Schaden gemacht? Ich frage mich, was kann ich bzw. die Menschheit besser fürs Klima tun?

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jackweston

Feb. 23, 2020

Mis on vahed soomlaste ja eestlaste vahel?

See on väga subjektiivne arvamus, aga minu arvates eestlased on sõbralikumad kui soomlased, sest soomlased on üldiselt ükskõiksed, olgugi et ma püüdsin rääkida soome keelt kui olin Helsingis. Seesugune kogemus juhtus viimasel nädalal Rootsis. Ma soovisin Stockholmi vanalinnas olev soomlases kirikus soome keelt harjutada. Kirikus töötaval mehel on halba suhtumist. Kui käisin Eestis esimest korda, ja rääkisin eesti keelt eestlastega, nad oli õnnelikud sellest, et oskasin nende keelt. See on põhjus, miks tahan õppida eesti keelt soome keelt asemel. Mõlemad keeled on rasked, aga kui emakeeleoskajad on südamlikumad, raskus pole midagi.

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simpo

Feb. 23, 2020

２日

私はポケモンみってます

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michiru

Feb. 23, 2020

From The News

There is a superstition in Mumbai of India that honking makes the red light of the traffic signal change to the green light fast. Drivers have to wait 90 seconds for the green. There is a second clock by the signal and the time shows in countdown style like 89, 88, 87 towards 0. The drivers can see how many seconds they will wait, yet they start to honk all at once when the singnal turns red.
The police attached a noise level meter under the second clock to improve this large noise. While the clock was showing the time in countdown, when the noise level reached 85 decibel, the time went back to 90 seconds as the initial value. And the countdown started again. Many drivers got angry and the police officers were doing a high five with each other.
It was so hilarious that I thought it was a comedy. But I figured out that it had been difficult to improve it so far as to do such a thing. I thought the police came up with a good idea.

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kyoko

Feb. 23, 2020

What I Get Through My Experience

I don’t want to do anything.
I want nothing.
I just want to become like sand and want to be blown away by the wind to disappear from this world.

Have you ever thought this way?
I have.
These thoughts had controlled my mind for over half a year.

Thanks to my supportive family, I’m getting through it.
Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some stuffs that I’d wanted, and I noticed that I was getting back myself.

Now I tend to be happy so easily because of my hard experience.
Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, funny story with my son.
These small things are so bright and lovely to me.
Still there are not good days in our lives, but I’ll keep on noticing good sides. :)

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bb779

Feb. 23, 2020

Today

Writing is a daily struggle. I never know what to jot down, especially when it comes to IELTS or some formal stuff. For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything that I'll probably write an entry about. I've never passed the IELTS exam. Nonetheless, I'd like to pass it. Well, I downloaded one app about IELTS, then wrote my first essay. As a result, it turned out dreadful and weird, even though it's just an introduction and half of the first paragraph. Additionally, I mixed up informal and formal styles together. The topic was about crime if you're interested. I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips to try and get a high score on the exam or at least a score that is enough to pass. In spite of an hour of writing the essay and racking my brain, I didn't lose the motivation to keep on improving. Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to a lack of ideas on how to answer the IELTS essay question.

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julia00

Feb. 23, 2020

Could you check my English?

I have heard many times this song on the radio before.
So I have tried to translate.

You gave me butterflies in my stomach when I saw you first time
I longed for the adult wistful love when I was 21 years old
I felt that my makeup don't good on me because I was overdoing
The beginning of love

I can't help it because I like you a lot

give me a big hug
Sometimes, I would say selfish
Because I want to you hold hands all the time.
I love to burst into laughter

He always strong but I feel so happy when you sleep in my arms
I need you
I feel like that makes us stronger when protect something
The beginning of love

I can't help it because I like you a lot
But my heart aches a bit
The time that can't meet is the magic of bringing nice love
My heart is always looking for you

I can't help it because I like you a lot
I've never felt like this before
I want to still be by your side, please
Expressing my honest feelings is hard

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Bees

Feb. 23, 2020

문구점에서 돈 날리기

문구점이 나에게 위험한 곳이다. 문구점에 들어갈 때마다 나는 무의식적으로 당장 필요없는 것들을 보게 되고 원래 사러 거기에 들어간 것에다가 이것저것을 추가로 사게 된다. 종이, 볼펜, 형광펜, 스티커... 유용하거나 귀여운 것을 보면 참기가 어렵다.

오늘도 문구점에 가게 되었다. 남편이 오늘 아침 인터넷으로 나에게 특별한 공책을 사줬는데 그 공책을 사용할 때 정해진 펜만을 사용해야 되니까 그 펜을 찾으러 문구점에 갔다. 쓸데 없는 것을 피할 수 있었는데 필요한 펜 브랜드를 너무 많이 사서 그래도 돈을 예상보다 많이 쓰게 되었다. 역시... 문구점이 위험하다.

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matthew713

Feb. 23, 2020

Pratique de grammaire du français

1. La voiture dont je rêve est très chère.
2. L’homme dont tu parles, portait-il une chemise blanche et un jeans bleu foncé ?
3. Ne mentionne pas la guerre en sa présence, il n’aime pas en parler.
4. Ce qui m’a choqué le plus, c’est leur manière de vie.
5. Mon frère a un enfant et moi, j’en ai trois.
6. – Pourquoi tu n’as pas acheté des pains aux raisins ? – Il n’en y avait plus à la boulangerie.
7. – Tu es sûr que c’était lui à l’arrête de bus ? – Je n’en doute pas.
8. Je acheté ce pull à la boutique à côté de laquelle j’habite.
9. La vase est tombée de la table et s’est brisée en petits morceaux.
10. – Est-ce que vous croyez aux fantômes ? – Oui, j’y crois.

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bb779

Feb. 23, 2020

”一边...，一边..." 语法的用法

1。不要一边刷牙，一边打开水龙头。
2。他总是一边跳舞，一边听音乐。
3。我喜欢一边静坐，一边想没什么。
4。你一边看电影，一边看字幕吗？
5。我要当共时的口译员，所以我会一边听懂，一边翻译。
6。你们喜欢一边听嘻哈，一边做作业吗？
7。你不应该一边吃毒，一边喝酒。

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bb779

Feb. 23, 2020

Example Sentences of "Yet" and "Still"

1. He hasn't acceded to our demand yet.
2. He still hasn't acceded to our demand.
3. Drug dealers still haven't curtailed the output of weed.
4. Drug dealers haven't curtailed the output of weed yet.
5. Are they still worn out?
6. Are they worn out yet?

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sambal

Feb. 23, 2020

2020.02.22(土)

ついに、今週2回ジムで運動したことができた！その上に、私は怠くしていなくて、努力していた。

それより、明日はジャパンボウルという日本語と日本文化の知識を競う大会に行く。でも、私は参加者じゃなくて、もう去年の行われた大会で参加していた。私のチームは勝ったので、また参加してはいけない。それで、今年、私の勝ったチームは今年のジャパンボウルに参加する興味がある生徒たちを少し手伝うボランティアをしてた。だから、明日、この大会を見に行く。楽しみにしてる！

去年勝ったから、外務省から私たちを一週間日本に送ってもった。提供された資金で、全部が無料だった！だけど、自由に出歩くことができなくて、日本にいても、日本語で話す機会があまりなかった。😅 でも卒業旅行で行く予定がある！もっと喋るといいなー。スピーキングがとても下手だから、日本で流暢話せるように頑張ります！

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mrgglock

Feb. 23, 2020

日記（第５９番)：伝票

おばは伝票があります。合計は２００ドルで、円に転換すると、やく１６０００円の値打ちがついています。そして、３月に切れるようなので、早く使わなければいけません。そんなに多くて、どうやって使ったらいいかなと思っています。食べ物に使ったら、２００ドルを使いきれませんね。おばはカバンに使いたがっているようです。私なら、おそらくパソコンパーツを買うかなと思います。自転車もあり得ます。

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trap

Feb. 23, 2020

Les pommes et les cerises

Les fruits au fil des ans ont été une partie importante de notre alimentation, comme ils ne nécessitent aucune préparation et sont facile de cultiver. Alors, d'où viennent les fruits? Tout le monde connaît les pommes, mais saviez-vous qu'elles sont venu d'Asie Centrale? Les pays par exemple La Chine et La Kazakhstan sont où les pommes ont été mangés pour la première fois, et elles sont l'un de mes préférées. Je les aime dans les tartes, que je crois est la meillure façon de les déguster.

Qu'en est-il les cerises? Franchement, je ne les aime pas vraiment. Mais elles viennent en fait de La Turquie, qui est toujours le premier producteur des cerises après toutes ces années.

Quels sont vos fruits préférés?

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simpo

Feb. 22, 2020

こんにちは！

こんにちは！私の名前はシンポ。私は日本語を話せませ。私こんにちは！私の名前はシンポ。私は日本語を話せませ。私はかんじ学びません。

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sila

Feb. 22, 2020

Catching Up The Updates

It has been long time to browse LangCorrect and write. There was a lot of differences since the last time I had looked up. But, there was no new Turkish entries. If I tell the truth, It is kind of dissapointed. Also, I noticed the level of proficiency was added which I can't decide what is my proficiency level.

Summarising the view of proficiency where I ground, A2 seems like "I am learning the English from years, I want to be better", B1 seems "maybe, but still a lot of things off.", B2 seems like a "I wish, but don't be ridiculous. "

I had been at Greece with my sister and my friends around 5 days for vacation, it was good but reminded me why I love to travel by myself. The conversation part was mostly up to me and my sister and that was hard. I had been thinking all the day like that, how should address things, is it accurate? Some of the people we had encountered spoke so fast and I couldn't catch. Sometimes, I don't I understand what they meant.

I mean, there is a lot of way I need to go.

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Shikhar

Feb. 22, 2020

Woorden met 'vang-'

Het meisje vang de bol in de lucht.

De politie heeft de dief gevangen

Als je illegale dingen doet, ga je naar de gevangenis. Dan woordt je een gevangene.

Het is een goede moment om te aangevangen. Laat we beginnen.

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matthew713

Feb. 22, 2020

Learning effectively

I used to be a voracious reader. Sometimes I finished a book in one day. I aspired to become a well-rounded person that can hold a conversation on a wide variety of topics ranging from the theory of evolution to baseball offensive strategy. I thought the more I read the faster I would get there. But to my great disappointment, reality, once again, proved to be different from my naive expectations. I forgot most of what I read in a few weeks’ time and what I was left with was only superficial knowledge, just enough to create an illusion of competence. An illusion that didn’t hold up to scrutiny. Every time I tried explaining my newly acquired ideas to others, I failed miserably. I couldn’t find the right words or piece them together in a coherent way and usually after struggling for a few minutes I would give up and change a subject.
And truth be told, for a long time it didn’t bother me that much. Well, at least not enough to make me look for solutions. Most of the stuff I was trying to learn about was not something that would drastically change my life for better or would help me improve my career perspectives. But since I started learning foreign languages I have been on the hunt for the most effective studying methods. I’m yet to discover them (spoiler, they don’t exist) but at least I got an understanding of how I could get more out of reading.
Now I’ll briefly talk about a few learning techniques that I use. If you’re interested in learning more about them, there is tons of information on the Internet. Most likely though, you’ve already come across them a dozen of times.
1. Mnemonics
Something, e.g. an image or a word, that helps to recall information when you need it.
You can use them only to get information quickly to your short-term memory; in order to commit it to your long-term memory you still need to implement one of the techniques described below.
2. Recall.
After you’ve finished, for example, a chapter of a book, put it aside and try to recall as much of what you’ve just read as you can.
3. Spaced repetition.
Review information at gradually increasing intervals.
3. The Feynman technique.
Take something you want to understand and write down an explanation of it as if you were teaching someone else. If you get stuck – get back to the source material. You have to repeat the circle until you no longer need to use the source material to write an explanation.