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Mobile phone
I forget what kinds of brands of mobile phones I first use.
As far as I can tell, it should be in the year 2000 that my parents in law gave me a mobile phone, and it was Nokia c5-03.
Later on, my second brother gave me a second hand mobile phone; that is probably my first time knowing about Samsung phones. When I buy a mobile phone, I usually choose one that is not very expensive; also not the cheapest.
I never bought a phone that cost too much, especially didn't buy those that were just launched, because it is unbelievably expensive!
If I am interested in a type of phone, I usually buy it one year later; generally it can get 1000 to 1500 Yuan cheaper.
But things didn’t always go follow my will. When I bought Samsung S8, I had to pay at the full price for it because there was no other choice then (I once bought Oppo R9 for alternative, but it couldn’t deal with the things that Samsung could do, so I had to go back to Samsung).
In fact, every time before I am going to buy a phone, I always went to the domestic made mobile phone stores, especially the Huawei, but every time I failed to buy it for some detail aspects.
Recently, my S8 doesn’t seem to be in good condition. Something always went wrong and it couldn’t work according to my thoughts. At times, it even broke.
The usage of the phone for me recently is just for learning, so I want a high display quality, big screen and a reasonable aspect ratio (I had experienced the Huawei mate30, its screen is colorful, but I didn’t feel well with it; it's kind of unnatural).
I almost went over to the big mobile phone store in my city, but their phones are all in slender shapes.
Take Samsung s20+ for example, it’s only 73.7mm wide though it has a 6.7 inch screen.
If it is a little wider, I think it can show big Chinese characters, so it would be better for me to read. Ultimately, only one of Apple’s phones is wider, which has 77.8mm width and 6.5 inches screen.
This size is very suitable.
A little bigger is too big to handle, a little smaller is not suitable for my bad vision, but its price is too high to my expectation (it costs more than my two month salary).
I am not a person who worships foreign products and I am very rational.
I didn’t buy an Apple phone when people were proud of it, but now I just have to.
If our domestic products have a better display quality and are not too long too narrow (I have bought a Huawei pad m6 for learning use, but I quickly changed to mini5 because I easily get eyes tired when I watch it).
If Samsung had a phone with short length and a wider width, I definitely wouldn't have chosen Apple, but in fact there is no 'if'.
In addition to the display quality, size and aspect ratio, I don’t think pro max has any advantages, and that it fits very poorly with other Apps.
I really don't know how they dare to sell that much, maybe partly because of the soaring goods prices.
I hope this phone can work well forever because I hate spending money on phones.
If I have to, I still want to buy a domestic made one.
Aug. 14, 2020
Aug. 14, 2020
最初の投稿? （一応自己紹介）
初めてlangcorrectを使うから、初めまして？
日本語を勉強して以来も四年が経ったが、結局日本語で書くことは指で数える。最近コロナの故に時間がたっぷり出来上がったから、ようやくライトノベルは何とか読めるになった（辞書は頻発使うですけど）。
そして、これからもっと日本語を精進ためにここに行った。何を書くべきが分からないが、出来る限り一日２００字ぐらいは頑張ってる。
詰まらない内容だが、よろしくお願いします。
。。。。
ちなみに最近は熱いですね。うちはファンや空調はないですから、二時間ごとにシャワーを行う。急にAMAZONでファンを注文する。今日は新しいファンは配送されるけど、熱はも下がった。一応少し熱さを感じるですから、ないよりましっか・
Aug. 14, 2020
Aug. 14, 2020
Aug. 14, 2020
Aug. 14, 2020
О '8 часов челлендж'...
Вы помните, что я написала о 'вывод/челлендж', где я изучала русский язык восемь часов? Ну, я продержалась только 2 дня. На третий день я чувствовала очень плохо. У меня была сильная головная боль. Я должна была сделать паузу.
Сегодня я проснулась с лихорадкой, поэтому я решила это оставить на другую неделю. Я учила лишь 4 часа сегодня.
Aug. 14, 2020
Aug. 14, 2020
Aug. 14, 2020
Vorstellen
Ich bin anjali.
Ich komme aus Indien.
Ich wohne in neu delhi.
Ich bin zwanzig jahre alt.
Ich sprache sprechen englisch und hindi
Ich lerne deautch
Sprache ich ein bisschen deautsch.
Ich esse die pizza gern.
Trinke ich der apfelsaft gern
Mag ich badminton spielen
Meine hobbies sind tanzen und buch lesen .
Fertig
Aug. 14, 2020
Aug. 14, 2020
Economía dirigida vs. economía de mercado
Las economías modernas se colocan entre la economía dirigida y la economía de mercado.
La primera es un modelo donde el gobierno te ordena producir cierto monto de un bien. La última es un modelo donde la producción está libre según lo que quieres producir en el momento.
Aug. 14, 2020
Beaver cup
Yesterday, I went for a 10 km run. It somehow reminded me a run from last year as a part of the race called "Beaver cup" for teams consisting of 3 people—a runner, a cyclist, and a canoeist, and I was the runner. It took place on 5 October 2019. The weather was cool, wet and a bit rainy. The run was 15 km long. It's been my longest run so far. I don't usually exceed 10 km because I don't need to run more than that. So it was a bit harder for me to finish it. But that's not what is so special about it; there are plenty of running races longer than 15 km. I was told I will have to wade across the river a few times. What I did not expect was the fact I had to wade right at the beginning of the race 2 times in sequence. That was a complete shock to me, and I didn't know it until the river was right ahead of me and tens of people already in the water. It wasn't just a shallow ford. The height of water was something between the knees and the waist. It was so goddamn cold! My breath stopped, I just wasn't able to. Imagine that! You have to run and you can't breath because of the shock caused by the cold water! Fortunately, It doesn't last long; you regain your breath and continue. There were 2 more wading during the run and one more at the end of the run. To be honest, I was so warmed up during the run that I was even looking forward to the next wading. That was nuts! I don't think I'm gonna participate in the near future. Maybe you have figured out by now where the name comes from. It was a great experience, though.
Aug. 14, 2020
Aug. 14, 2020
Thinking in foreign languages
Some books insist that you can deepen or organize your thoughts by thinking in foreign languages.
There has been famous physiological hypothesis if languages influence people's thoughts or not.
I believe that hypothesis is true. When I express my thought in English, I have to make my position clear.
On the other hand, you can make significant difference in your impression from someone by writing in Japanese without intonation and dialect.
For example, there are a lot of words represent "I" in Japanese. You can guess one's personality, situation, gender, relationship, and even the period he lives from pronoun.
It is good example that people are struggling with how to translate 「お兄ちゃん」 into "my brother" in Japanese animation.
Therefore, most Japanese people are seriously worried about how they looks.
It is most critical reason why people won't remove a face mask even in this crazy hot summer.
Aug. 14, 2020
La vérité des pengouins
Les pengouins avaient été etudié par plusieurs des scientifiques. La plupart croient que les pengouins fabriquent ses troupeaux à ses réchauffents et pour proteger leurs oeufs. Cepandant, cette avis est carrément con.
En revanche, la vraie raison qu'ils forment ses troupeaux est pour faire des fêtes. On pourrait se demander pourquoi les pengouins n'ont ses filmé jamais s'il est le cas. Le raison est bien simple. On devrait que fassent des fêtes avec David Attenborough ? Je l'aime, mais franchement, il ne parait pas le genre d'un fêtard. Les pengouins simplement utiliser le froid et leurs oeufs pour une excuse afin d'il ne ses faut pas l'inviter.
On pourrait aussi se demander pourquoi c'est qu'ils cachent leurs oeufs desous leurs jambes. Il peut on étonner à découvrir que le vrai objectif de cet habilité est pour cacher l'alcool pour leurs fêtes. Tous le monde ont en quelque moment d'enfance ont dû caché l'alcool de leurs parents. Avec les pengouins c'est le même chose. Cependant, les pengouins est mieux que nous grace à leur pratique !
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Aug. 14, 2020
Girlfriend
I'll write again. Please rate this compared to the last one. I broke up with my girlfriend about two weeks ago. I had been dating her for about ten months. One of the reasons is that we were planning to break up when I go to study abroad next year. However, the main reason is that I was growing apart from my her and she couldn't stand it. Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her back because the fault is with me. She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything and everyone, even animals, plants and more. I really love her inner beauty. I wish her all the happiness from the bottom of my heart.
Aug. 14, 2020
Lo spettacolo vuoto
Il pianista più famoso della città si sveglia del sogno più lungo di tutta la sua vita. È in un posto diverso dal solito: tutto lì è troppo sporco. Si ricorda dello spettacolo con paura di essere in ritardo:
-Tutta la città mi aspetta!
Decide correre al concerto e mentre lo fa nota che la città sembra un po' diversa...
Quando finalmente arriva al concerto si spaventa: dov'è la gente?
Pensa che non sia in ritardo, quindi entra nel posto e cammina verso il suo grande pianoforte. Si siede sul banco e decide praticare la musica.
Suona il vecchio strumento con piacere mentre guarda tutte le sedie vuote per ore, quando infine arrivano i primi spettatori: un paio di adolescenti.
-Benvenuti! - dice il pianista
Ma poi succede qualcosa di strano: I ragazzi ascoltano la musica del piano anche se non c'era nessuno là tranne loro. Spaventata, la ragazza dice:
-C-conosco questa musica, è una delle musiche più famose del pianista Piper!
- Ma lui è morto ormai da 25 anni! - dice il ragazzo
Il paio scappa velocemente dal concerto, Piper li guarda senza dire una parola, finisce la musica, si alza e torna alle strade. Adesso riesce a riposare, ha finalmente suonato il piano per l'ultima volta...
Aug. 13, 2020
Aug. 13, 2020
Aug. 13, 2020
Ist Reisen sicher?
Leider ist Corona nochmal schlecht ... Trotzdem wir nicht als schlimm als vorher sind, sollen wir nicht so oft reisen. Besonders in andere Länder.
Zum Beispiel, in 2 Woche habe ich eine Reise nach Alicante in Spanien geplant, weil ein Freund aus Berlin da wohnt, und ich habe nicht ihm für so lange Zeit gesehen.
Aber die Situation in Spanien ist jetzt die schlechte in Europa, also habe ich keine Ahnung über was ich tun soll. Auf einer Seite möchte ich meinen Freund besuchen, aber auf der andere wisse ich nicht, ob das eine gute Idee ist ...
Heute habe ich mit ihm gesprochen. Wir haben eine Video-Konferenz gemacht, und er hat mir in Video geschaut, wie die Stadt jetzt ist. Es gabt Leute auf der Straße. Sie müssen die ganze Zeit eine Maske tragen, aber sie haben total Freiheit zu spazieren gehen und auf dem Strand bleiben. Es sieht nicht so schlecht, aber wir wissen nicht, was in den nächsten 2 Woche passieren wird.
Aug. 13, 2020
Eine Briefvorlage
Liebe Susanne,
ich hatte heute einen Stresstag! Meine Mutter ist gestern ins Krankenhaus gekommen.
Heute Morgen bin ich zuerst zur Bank gefahren. Ich hatte kein Geld mehr und ich habe Geld geholt.
Dann bin ich zum Kiosk gegangen und habe eine Zeitschrift für meine Mutter gekauft.
Danach bin ich zum Bahnhof gefahren und habe eine Ticket nach Berlin bezahlt. Der Zug habe um 11 Uhr abgefahren. Um 13 Uhr bin ich in Berlin angekommen.
Am Nachmittag bin ich noch zur Blumenladen und habe viele Blumen gekauft. Dann bin ich ins Krankenhaus gefahren. Meine Mutter sieht ja ganz gut aus!
Hast du am Wochenende Zeit? Sollen wir wieder mal zusammen ins Kino gehen?
Bis Bald!
Viele Gruße,
Claudia.
Aug. 13, 2020
Aug. 13, 2020
Morgen habe ich eine Prüfung!
Dieses Semester konnte ich nur an zwei Uni-Fächern teilnehmen. Die Vorlesungen haben online stattgefunden. Ich war zwei Monate nach dem Anfang des Semesters in der Uni angemeldet. Deswegen konnte ich nur zwei Uni-Fächer lernen.
Morgen ist die Prüfung von eine der Fächer und ich bin dafür vorbereitet. Es gibt keine Prüfung für das zweite Fach aber ich sollte ein Projekt mit einem Report abgeben.
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