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doodeebah13

Sept. 5, 2020

ゲーム実況はいい実習です。

最近、YouTubeでゲーム実況を観ることがよくあります。僕は読むのがどんどん上手くなってくるらしいですけど、聞くのが非常にまだまだです。でも、毎日に実況を観るのが助かりました。僕にはゲームについて特に詳しい知識があったら、実況者の言う事が分かりやすくなります。今、聞くのが上手くなってきた未来を見えています。

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tommy

Sept. 5, 2020

Surveillance recruitment

Some investigation company announced the launch of the service, by which client companies can identify job-hunting students' secret accounts on social media.
As expected, the news came under fire. (I would be glad if you suggest another phrases.)
Several years ago, it was revealed that famous recruit company "Recruit" had sold the prediction data of how students decline unofficial job offers without agreement with students.
It's natural that I'm disgusted with such companies. However, the biggest problem is that there are many clients who want to know privacy information no matter how these behaviors could lose their reputation.
It is unbelievable that most Japanese companies tend to decide the job offers depend on their characters or loyalty to the company, not their skills, like fortune telling.

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profitendieu

Sept. 5, 2020

La prononciation d'après l'orthographe

Il existe un phénomène presque uniquement anglophone : « spelling pronunciation », la prononciation d'après l'orthographe. L'anglophone natif lettré acquiert beaucoup de son vocabulaire en lisant et il est possible qu'il entendra rarement d'autres personnes prononcer certains mots qu'il apprend. Alors, puisque l'orthographe anglaise réfléchit si mal la prononciation, cet anglophone lettré ne connaît pas les véritables prononciations de nombreux mots. L'exemple typique est celui de « chaos » ; nombreux enfants voient le mot dans des livres avant d'entendre les adultes le prononcer. Il faut aussi ne pas oublier le défi des mots plus communs. Les enfants et les apprenants anglais langue étrangère sont confondus par certains groupes de mots, tels que : « cough », « plough », « rough », « though », et « through ».

Moi, je découvre plus en plus que je ne sais pas comment prononcer tel ou tel mot en anglais. Je me suis étonnée de redécouvrir que « heroin » et « heroine » se prononcent pareillement, parce que je n'avais pas entendu prononcer « heroine » depuis beaucoup d'années. J'ai mentionné que tel ou tel oeuvre était « saccharine », mais je n'étais pas comprise parce que j'avais incorrectement cru que le mot rimait avec « latrine ». C'est très gênant.

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Jack

Sept. 5, 2020

Sweet potatoes

Autumn is a nice season, especially when you just come from summer. Deep sky, beautiful clouds and cool breeze, but one thing I remember clearly in my childhood was harvesting sweet potatoes. After heavy frost, the seedlings of the sweet potatoes died and it meant it was the harvest season of sweet potatoes. First we cut the seedlings off, and then we used one or two cows to pull a plow to harvest sweet potatoes. We followed the plow closely and picked it into our basket. We were so excited when we saw a bigger one. Every harvest season we would choose the bigger one for our villagers to visit. We never ate any fruits when we were kids in the late seventies and early eighties. When the sweet potatoes harvesting season came, they were our fruits. We just wiped the mud off sweet potatoes and ate them. It tasted good at that time. Maybe in 1981 or 1982, my older brother came back from Shanghai and brought our family some apples. That was my first time eating apples. It tastes far yummy than sweet potatoes and it was the first time I knew that there was something in the world that was really yummy than sweet potatoes. Although I rarely eat sweet potatoes nowadays, I still remember that it is the sweet potatoes that feed me.

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heavensblade13

Sept. 5, 2020

日本語日記　第１３話

今日は、「超時空要塞マクロス」を観る始めました。アニメのシリーズです。アメリカでこのシリーズの名前は「ROBOTECH」です。でも、二つの間に物語と場面とキャラクターは相当違います。「ROBOTECH」のフランチャイズの中で、複数の全然関係ないアニメは「超時空要塞マクロス」とつながっています。私は子供の頃、「ROBOTECH」を観ました。本当の物語を知りたいですので、「マクロス」を観ています。昔から数年前アニメは日本からアメリカに来るのはめちゃくちゃなことです。例えば、アメリカで「ワンピース」の最初の英語訳の中にサンジはロリポップを舐めています。でも原作のアニメで、サンジはタバコを吸っています。今この状況は少ないですが、古いアニメの英語訳を避けるのがいいと思います。今私は日本語だけでアニメを観ますので、私にとってどうでもいいです。

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doodeebah13

Sept. 5, 2020

この仕事が楽すぎる。

（休憩しながら暇つぶしのジョーナルだ。自分だけの話だから敬語を使わなかった。多分、今度に敬語を使ってみる）

この仕事は楽すぎる。仕事のおかげでかなりお金を貯められるけど、めっちゃつまらないな。基本的に暇つぶしの仕事だ。毎日「このくそ仕事もうすぐやめたい」と思って、でもやめた後できっと後悔する、当然に金がほしいから。

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derek

Sept. 5, 2020

Kickboxing is cool

最近、私はキックボクシングをよく見ていました。見る組織の名前はK-1です。組織で、面白い選手がたくさんです。私の一番好きな選手はゲーオ・ウィラサクレックです。タイ人いと彼のスタイルはムエタイです。彼はいつも素晴らしい姿勢して強いです。私は彼が相手をノックアウトさせることを見て大好きです。

読んでくれてありがとございました！

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fabledlamb

Sept. 5, 2020

Intentando evitar gluten y lactosa

He intentado solo comer alimentos sin gluten y sin lactosa por más o menos un mes. Decidí hacer este cambio porque estaba sufriendo náuseas y dolor de estómago con frecuencia, y mi doctor me recomendó esta dieta.

Es más fácil evitar productos lácteos que los con gluten porque hay gluten en muchas cosas inesperadas (como salsa de soja y avena, a menos que tiene la etiqueta “libre de gluten”). Hoy he comido un curry con paneer y casi inmediatamente me dolía el estómago. Aunque es difícil tener tanto cuidado con lo que coma, supongo que debería mantener una dieta estricta para encontrarme mejor.

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portuguesia

Sept. 5, 2020

Quanto é pago um contador no Brasil?

Essa é uma pergunta que não confio no google para repostar; Eu quero saber, quanto ganha um contador no Brasil em média?

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lievemealone

Sept. 5, 2020

有声书

在过去几天里我只看了《庆余年》中的一章。最近什么书都完全不要看，可是听了很多有声书。我以前不能注意到有声书的内容，所以一直不喜欢听见。今年最初我又开始绣十字绣。绣十字绣耗费了很多时间，所以决定尝试一边绣制一边听有声书。我竟然喜欢绣制的时候听有声书。由于上个月不上课，我能花了很多时间绣十字绣，也能听了很多有声书。在最近两个星期里，我听了四个有声书。

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iqlc

Sept. 5, 2020

何もしなくている

昨日は何も言語を勉強しなかった。朝におこて、朝ごはん食べてながらテレビを見て、そして昼ご飯を食べて、急に夜になった？何が起きているの…　日々が飛ぶように過ぎるの気持ちだ。早く起きるのが始めなきゃのに仕事をもっと全うできるかなぁ。けど難しい…

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icy

Sept. 5, 2020

Smoothie

I make a fruit and vegetable smoothie every morning. Ingredients for smoothies may vary depending on the day, but my favorite is banana, apple, and Japanese mustard spinach smoothie. Sometimes I buy a smoothie that Kagome sells many kinds of. In this morning, I have limited-time-only Kogome smoothie with muscat. It's more normal than I expected.lol

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brandon933

Sept. 4, 2020

nhk for school を見ました

今日はnhk for schoolの番組を見ました。ことばドリルという名前のコント劇です。小学生向けの番組ですけど、思たより面白かった。その番組は十分に渡る。一話は二つのコントがある。そのコントは簡単な文法や言語ルールなどテーマにして、短いコメディを演出した。基本的にはあるキャラクターは間違い言葉を使って、他のキャラクターはそれを指摘して、正しい言葉で改正する。簡単なパターンですけど、頭を空っぽにすれば面白くになる。
番組の最後に漢字の歌もある。それはある漢字から関連する漢字を歌っている。例えば一の歌は一を基づいて、上にトを加えれば上になる。下にトを付けば下のなる。教育番組の雰囲気満々なので子供ごろに思い出して懐かしい気分になってしまう。

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Michael_P

Sept. 4, 2020

Sotto la coperta di buio

Dal sua torre altissima, I'imperatore Crassio controllava tutto il regno. Non nessuno riuscirebbe scappare il suo trattamento brutto e crudele.
Maria era una cameriera della torre. Ma anche era lei un agente della resistenza. Ha deciso prendere un rischio calcolato per liberare tutto il regno. Nella torre era una pozione magica con una potenza molto forte. Doveva rubarla e scappare dal regno.
Era notte. Sotto un cielo buio e senza la luce della luna, quando non nessuno stava guardando, Maria ha iniziato la sua avventura. Lei si ha avvicinato la torre. Accanto al torre, nei cespugli, Maria aveva nascosto una scala per salire alla finestra.
Maria si è sposta silenziosamente tramite le corsie della torre. Ha trovato la porta del laboratorio magico. Si ha tirato fuori le chiave che aveva rubato di prima quel giorno.
Le chiave ha scivolato dalle sue mani. Sono cadute le chiave nel pavimento e hanno sferragliato.
Maria si è fermata. Si è passato un attimo. Non nessuno ha sentito il rumore delle chiave.
Maria le ha ritirate e ha aperto il laboratorio. Ha trovato la pozione, è sgattaiolata fuori, poi è scesa alla scala.
Maria sperava che l'esercito del regno vicino potessero usare la pozione per sconfiggere Crassio e salvare tutti.

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bryant_bcp

Sept. 4, 2020

Meine neue Kaffeetasse :)

In letzter Zeit habe ich eine neue Kaffeetasse im Internet gekauft. Die Tasse ist weiß, und stellt viele süße Tiere zusammen im Weltraum dar. Die Hauptfigur ist eine gelbe Katze, als ein Astronaut, beim Steuern eines Raumschiffs zum Mond.

Die Tasse stand im Online-Laden eines meiner Lieblingskünstler zum Verkauf. Deshalb war ich sehr fröhlich, sie zu kaufen, als Zeichen meiner Unterstützung für den Künstler. Und jetzt habe ich endlich eine Tasse groß genug, dass sie genug Eis für meinen Eiskaffee am Nachmittag behalten kann :)

Es ist wirklich schade, dass ich keine Fotos hochladen darf, sonst würde ich gerne eine Foto mit euch teilnehmen.

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julieeeeee

Sept. 4, 2020

What do you like about school? What do you dislike about school?

École x Université

Maintenant, j'étude dans une université et j'aime tout: mes collegues, les cours, les professeurs. Parce que j'apprends les choses que j'adore commes l'art et le graphisme. Mais quand j'étudiais dans une école, je deteste presque tout. Ma routine étais trés exaustif et les cours étaient ennuyeux.

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julieeeeee

Sept. 4, 2020

Journal 1

C’est la première fois que j’utilise ce website. Je trouve que il est parfait pour pratiquer mon français. J’apprends le français depuis un an et j’ai beaucoup de difficultés quand j'écris. Donc, j’irai écrire des petits textes ici et j’irai parler sur mes passe-temps et ma vie.

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meanbowler

Sept. 4, 2020

Ein Gast!

Heute Abend kommt ein Freund von Hannover. Wir haben geplant, morgen Köln zu besuchen. Ich habe ein Semesterticket, mit dem wir nach Köln kostenlos reisen können.

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Mares

Sept. 4, 2020

Der Podcast unserer Fakultät

Obwohl das neue Schuljahr während des Coronavirus in Havanna noch nicht angefangen hat, haben wir die Studenten der Fremdschprachenfakultät schon an einem paar Schulaktivitäten, zu arbeiten begonnen. Eine davon ist der offizielle Podcast unserer Faku, in dem über vielfältige Themen diskutiert wird, die mit unserer Schule und Studium zu tun haben.
Ich arbeite dabei als Ton Herausgeber mit einem Freund von mir. Wir zwei sind, mit der Hilfe einem anderen Dozent, für die Aufnahme und Herausgeben des Podcasts verantwortlich.
Jede Episode dauert ungefähr 30 Minuten und wird monatlich präsentiert.

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magmulan

Sept. 4, 2020

Effective communication in the workplace

Listening is more than hearing. Active listening should include these five parts:

Focus fully on the speaker
Tactics to avoid interrupting. Some interruptions can be helpful. If you are not clear about something then you need to let the speaker know. You should do this as soon as possible because the longer the situation goes on, the longer it will take to put it right.
Showing interest
Avoiding seeming judgemental. Try to avoid stereotyping and making assumptions about people based on their difference from you.
Providing feedback. The key skills required in giving effective feedback are paraphrasing, summarising, and reflecting.

Asking effective questions are very practical parts that include these question types: open questions, probing questions, hypothetical questions, reflective questions, leading questions, deflective questions, closing questions.

Except for actively listening and asking effective questions, we still need to pay attention to four useful communication skills:

Increasing your self-awareness allows you to communicate more honestly, with greater openness to the feedback you might receive.
Learning empathy is crucial.
Being able to adapt your communication style to suit the situation or environment.
Building trust and relationships.

Through these methods, you will communicate more effectively with those around you.

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watreedisishomie2

Sept. 4, 2020

Shortsenteces13

1. Biz kaybolan parlak kırmızı arabası bulmadık. We did not find the shiny red car which is lost.

2. Biz üç tane mercimek çuvalı taşıyan adama yardıma ettik. We helped the man who was carrying three sacks of lentils.

3. Onlar kırmızı köprünün altında koşan adama bağırdılar. They shouted at the man who is running under the bridge.

4. Onlar kaybolan siyah cüzdanı adama iade ettiler. They returned the black wallet which was lost to the man.

5. Parlak kırmızı kaybolan arabayı bulmadık. We did not find the shiny red car which is lost.

6. Ofisimizde çalışan marangozlara soğuk su şişeleri teklif ettik. We offered the Carpenters who are working cold water bottles.

7. Onlar birbirine peşinden koşan sincaplara izlediler. They watched the squirrels who are running after each other.

8. Murat lokantada sigara içmeyi yasakan adamdan nefret ediyor. Murat hates the man who banned smoking in the restaurant.

9. Şahin plajda dondurma satan adamdan çilek ve çikolata dondurma aldı. Şahin bought strawberry and chocolate ice cream from the who is selling ice cream on the beach.

10. Balık tutmayı öğüt için bilen arkadaşıma sordum. I asked my friend who knows how to fish for advice. Öğüt için balık tutmayı bilen arkadaşıma sordum.

11. Umarım dünyanın bütün hayvanları işkence eden insanlar büyük ceza alır..

12. Suyun üzerinde yüzüyeblien yılanlardan korkuyorsun. You are afraid of snakes who can swim above water.

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Khalid_SE

Sept. 4, 2020

Könnten Sie das bitte verbessern?

Professor Klage sucht Studenten , die ihm helfen , für eine Studie statistische Daten zu sammeln. Schreiben Sie an Herrn Professor Klage. Teilen Sie ihm Ihr Interesse an dem Job mit und erkundigen Sie sich höflich nach Einzelheiten

Sehr geehrter Herr Professor Klage,

ich möchte Sie informieren, dass ich Ihrer Job für „eine Studie statistische Daten zu sammeln“ gekannt habe und mich dafür interessiere. Ich teile Ihnen mit, dass ich im 2 Semester Informatik studiere. Zum Schluss bitte ich Sie, mit genauere Informationen über Arbeitzeiten und anderen Einzelheiten zuzuschicken. In Erwartung Ihrer Antwort bedanke ich mich bei Ihnen für Ihre Mühe im Voraus.

Mit freundlichen Grüßen
John MILLER

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eeprom

Sept. 4, 2020

Geben

Was würden wir als Gesellschaft für die Freiheit unseres Volkes geben? Wir würden alles dafür geben.

Was gäben wir denn? Ich glaube, dass wir für unsere Freiheit alles gäben.

Ich denke, dass unsere Lehrerin heute die Testergebnisse nicht geben wird... Ach, das ist ja schade, ich hatte vor, mein Ergebnis zu meiner Mama zu zeigen.

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dmitry159

Sept. 4, 2020

Photography

The Instagram has changed the communication between people. Now people can communicate with each other using photos. It's much more emotional than just words. It's much better to see it once in a shot than describe it in 100 words.
Most of the photos I snap in a good mood or whan I I hang out. This is crystal-clear, I try to keep the memory of remarkable moments and share it with my friends.
My last memorable photo was taken a month ago. I climbed the top of a mountain in the Urals and stood looking at the forest, lake and surroundings from the top.
I really like night photography, but I don't have a tripod. Without it, the photos are blurry. In the future, I'd like to buy it and improve my creations.

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anton_rich

Sept. 4, 2020

The Photo Essay I Would Like to Make

I have to admit that I didn't about essays in a photo format. This was a discovery I made today.

So, what kind of photo essay would I like to make?

Preferably, I would like to capture my walks in the neighborhood I live. These past years I have started to notice how green is the city I live in. When I go out for a walk or a jog I started noticing all the flowers and trees and private houses that integrate with nature so well. I wish I could captured it all, however, right now I don't have the camera that I desire.

Hopefully, in the future I will have a phone with a good quality camera that will help me capture this majestic beauty. I would prefer a phone camera as it is more convenient to bring it around and snap some photos on the fly.

I believe it is possible now to take crystal-clear photos with your phone. A friend of mine recently had shown me his brand-new phone and what kind of photos he takes. I was flabbergasted.

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