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bajuwa

Nov. 2, 2020

梦日记：《朋友一场》

为了促使自己多做梦，每个晚上做梦之后，我会尽量记起昨晚的梦而写进中文日记。

昨晚睡觉之前我和老公看了一个叫作《朋友一场》的爱情电影。电影的情节很简单，男主和女主原来是高中同学，也是最好的朋友。男主是胖乎乎的，女主却是校花，女主不小心伤了男主的心，他们就这样分开了十年。再团聚的时候，男主已经减了肥，变成了很重要的人物，女主也不再是只跟师哥交往的傻女孩了。再发生一些误会之后他们终于在一起了。
那这部电影跟我的梦日记有什么关习呢？我梦到了一位很胖的女孩，体量217lbs，她想减肥，然后电影里的男主来帮她，一个星期之后她减了6lbs，男主好像说了一点什么，可惜我没听清楚，梦就这样结束了。
我希望以后有更长、更清晰、更有趣的梦，所以我会继续努力写梦日记！

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yelenka

Nov. 2, 2020

请问这个句子是自然的吗？ 🙏❤️

你打我也好，骂我也好，反正我告诉你一句真话。

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Jack

Nov. 2, 2020

Journal

Every time I listen to a song about father I will burst into tears because I never thought of his leaving and I’m not prepared for it at all. When I listen to this song, I can’t help shedding tears again.

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eeprom

Nov. 2, 2020

Bücher

Neulich habe ich noch einmal angefangen, Bücher zu lesen. Eigentlich habe eine Kindle Probelese von Erich Kästner Romanen aus Amazon schicken lassen. Die Sammlung besteht aus 11 Romanen und zum Glück ist die Probelese lang genug, um einen voll Roman zu enthalten.

Der Roman, den ich gerade lese, ist "Emil und die Detektive" und bisher hatte ich keine Probleme, um den zu lesen. Ab und zu muss ich Wörter nachschlagen, aber mit meinem Kindle ist das ziemlich einfach, da es sein eigenes Wortschatz hat.

Um mein Vokabular zu vergrößern, muss ich regelmäßig Romane, Zeitungen, usw. lesen. Daher hoffe ich, nicht bald mit diesem Ziel aufzugeben.

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medpadawan

Nov. 2, 2020

"Deutsche Sprache, Schwere Sprache (Teil 1)"

Ich weiß es nicht, ob ich nur merkwürdig bin, aber in meiner Muttersprache (Englisch) merke ich instinktiv jeden kleinen grammatischen Fehler, sogar die, die andere Muttersprachler machen.

Ich muss mich dann fragen, ob Deutsche Muttersprachler auch so sind. Falls ja, müsste ich einfach damit klarkommen, dass ich für immer komisch klingen würde.

Der beste Beispiel: die Geschlechter der deutschen Wörter. Weißt ihr, wie verrückt es mich macht? Klar, ein paar Wörter folgen Regeln, bzw. die Zeitung, die Forschung mit ihren -ung bleiben immer feminin usw.

Aber was ist mit “das Wort”... und dann plötzlich “DIE AntWORT”...?! 🙃 Das ist mir gerade aufgefallen und ich musste lachen (vielleicht aus Verzweiflung).

Ich dachte, dass ihr Deutsche/Österreicher/Schweizer Regeln lieben.

Schick Hilfe.

(P.S. Das ist nur ein Witz und eine Übertreibung, ich will niemanden beleideigen. Ich lerne Deutsch zwar sehr gern :))

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manc92

Nov. 2, 2020

Les énergies renouvelables et la "cannibalisation"

On a vu une croissance très forte des énergies renouvelables (éolien, solaire) dans les dernières deux décennies. Ces énergies sont "bas-carbones", et de moins en moins chères (grâce à des améliorations technologiques).

Toutefois, elles créent deux problèmes importants. Premièrement, parce qu'elles marchent seulement quand il y a du vent ou du soleil, il faut qu'on garde aussi des énergies plus flexibles (comme le gaz) pour être toujours sur d'avoir assez d'énergie.

Deuxièmement, quand il y a du vent à un parc éolien, il est probable qu'il y en ait aussi aux autres (également pour le soleil et les parcs solaires). Donc, quand il y a du vent ou du soleil, beaucoup d'énergie renouvelable est créée simultanément. Cela peut provoquer des problèmes pour les infrastructures d'électricité, ainsi que baisser le prix d'électricité reçu par les développeurs d'énergie renouvelable (un effet qu'on appelle la "cannibalisation").

On devrait prendre des mesures pour ralentir la cannibalisation et protéger des investissements bas-carbones: cela est essentiel pour lutter contre le changement climatique.

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jaicoholic

Nov. 2, 2020

自炊の日

今日、自炊をした。

ハムにチーズを加えた。　チーズが大好きなの、パルメザンとチェダーを混ぜて料理に入れた。

モッツァレラも加わりたかったけど、切らしてしまった。

うまかったかって？

いえ、まずいよ。

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lu__di

Nov. 2, 2020

제가 래퍼한테 갖고 했던 편견

저는 한국 힙합을 진짜 좋아하는 편이에요. 특히 AOMG라는 기획사에서 나오는 아티스트들이 좋다고 생각해요. AOMG 아티스들을 너무 좋아해서 지금 AOMG/H1GHR MUSIC 번역일팀에 무료로 일하고 있기까지 좋아한단 말이에요. 근데 사실은 한국 힙합을 좋아한지 얼마나 안 됐어요. 8월부터 인가요? 아무튼 한국에 관심이 많아서 아무래도 핫한 래퍼들이 누군지 다 알고 있었지만 그냥 랩 음악을 전혀 듣지 않았어요.

이제 생각하다보니 솔직히 제가 래퍼힌테 몹시 무시한 것 같아요. 어떤 편견을 갖게 했나 봐요. 편견을 갖게 한 이유는 여러 가지 있었던 것 같아요. 근데 적어도 가장 큰 이유가 말쓸드러면 제가 모든 래퍼의 가사를 보여주는 척만 갖고 있다고 생각했어요.

그때는 한국어 가사를 잘 안 봐서 어쩔 수 없이 노래의 내용이 몰랐죠. 이제 제 한국어 실력이 그때부터는 훨씬 더 좋아해져서 요즘 가사로 공부도 해요. 이렇게 공부로 많은 랩 노래가 좋은 내용도 있고 좋은 의미도 있을 수도 있더라고요. Swag이나 보여주는 것만이 아니에요.

당연히 많은 래퍼가 노래 가사를 재미로 만들었겠죠. 근데 옛날에는 가사가 깊은 의미가 있어야 한다고 생각했어요. 이제는 가사가 특히 큰 의미가 없어도 나쁜 노래가 아니라고 생각해요. 예를 들어 마미손의 노래처럼 큰 의미가 없이 재미있는 노래가 꽤 많더라고요.

요즘 저는 주로 한국 힙합이랑 한국 R&B(?) 제일 자주 듣는 것 같아요. 특히 최근에 박재범과 DJ 웨건이 나왔던 Everybody Sucks라는 앨범을 잘 듣고 있어요. 앨범 중에 Deep Sea DRIP, Twist the Plot 그리고 Out of Place이라는 노래를 제가 가장 좋아하는 노래예요. 굳이 뽑자면 제가 제일 좋아하는 노래는 Out of Place이는 것 같아요. 가사도 좋고 비트도 좋고 깊은 의미가 있어도 좀 재미있게 들을 수도 있다고 해야 되나요? 또한 이 노래의 피러링 래퍼는 우원재라는 래퍼라서 더 좋아요. 저는 특히 우원재를 좋아하니까요

https://youtu.be/uY073NNTyk0

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rasata

Nov. 2, 2020

出奇制胜的故事

战国时期，燕兵攻下了很多齐国的城市。这次，他们包围即墨城。即墨城中的守军大将，田单，善于攻略。他想出来“火牛阵”的计谋取胜敌人。

田单先令城内的商人偷偷地奉献金银珠宝给燕兵司令，说：“即墨城快要投降了，别杀我们”。燕军一听，以为守军大将准备投降，放松了警戒。

下一步，田单收集了一千多牛。每一头牛双角绑上尖刀，尾巴绑上草。在一个月黑风高的夜晚，牛尾巴绑上的草被点燃了，使牛拼命往前跑。燕兵没想到如此突然的反击，都被牛撞死、踢死或者被齐兵砍死了。

这场战斗之后，田单追击收复了被燕兵占领的七十多城市。

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nsegal

Nov. 2, 2020

二人の兄弟

「二人の兄弟」という話では二人の子供たちが登場します。一人は、気が長すぎます。もう一人は、気が短すぎます。榎の実がなる季節に、一人は長い時間待ち続きます。もう一人は食べ頃の前に実を収穫します。ある時、彼らは釣りをします。気が長すぎるお兄さんは長い間待ち続けます。魚は餌を食べて逃げます。気が短すぎる弟さんは、いつも釣竿を動かしているので魚は全然きません。

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Jack

Nov. 2, 2020

Journal 11/2/20

Generally, I don't buy clothes until they are damaged. A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip. A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I don't wear new clothing they will not go with me. Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy a new one. But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes. Overall, this is an official business trip. This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside. At ordinary times, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater. That is not very suitable on formal occasions. Because I have new clothes now so that those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wear, but they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away.

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steventart

Nov. 2, 2020

Exercises (3)

1, Normally I wouldn't judged what you do, but this time I would say you have done it wrong.

2, He's never participated in any kind of war but keeps bragging about how brave he was in a war that even has never begun.

3, When I was a child I would go to the cinema every Friday.

4, When I was a child I once went to the cinema but forgot the way to leave.

5, To be honest, it is very kind of you to give me such a great chance, but my hands are tied so I am not able to jump at it.

6, "What are we going to do?" "We will be learning some vocabulary I guess?"

7, "No one wants to be held back a grade, but for god sake, please stop banging on about it, I'm fed up with such nonsense."

8, He's got a bad rep for being so mean to people, but trust me, it's not on purpose, he has been doing so for so many years only because he had a lot of sad experiences several years ago.

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anfer

Nov. 2, 2020

C'est difficile de trouver la motivation

J'étais convaincu que j'allais écrire ici chaque jour, pourtant ça n'est pas ce que c'est passé. Pourquoi? Je ne sais pas, peut-être que je trouve difficile avoir mon exam et je preffere de laisser passer l'opportunité plutôt que travailler dûr et trouver que j'ai echoué même en m'efforçant. C'est une chose très commun chez l'être humain, l'auto-sabotage.
Mais c'est si stupide! Parce que bien si je ne reussi dans cette occasion, je dois travailler dûr n'importe quoi. Si je le fais comme ça, je serai en train de m'amelliorer pour la prochaine occasion! Mais si je refuse, j'aurai perdu un mois entier.
Nous sommes si étranges!

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VitaminC

Nov. 2, 2020

自己紹介

始めまして。キアラと申します、年齢二十歳。ドイツ南西に住んで大学生です。趣味は読んだり音楽を聴いたりゲームをやったり言語学だったりである。日本語は３年半ぐらいから勉強しています。難しいですが楽しいです。いつか通訳者か翻訳者になりたいんです。ドイツ語に関する問題があったら喜んで手伝います。説明のは少し苦手ですが…
では、よろしくお願いします(｀・ω・´)

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tommy

Nov. 2, 2020

What I want to read

Needless to say, authors can't always write what every reader want to read. Even if I realize this fact, I sometimes want to criticize them for what I want them to describe in detail or what I don't want to read.
Recently, I can't make up my mind if I have to buy Light Novels of "Monogatari series" released in English. This manga series are also very popular among foreign countries and you can find good reputations on Amazon. However, I don't like some part filled with sexual harassment enough that I skipped these scene when I watched the anime series.
Reasons why I want them are not only learning English but also cover illustrations. These illustrations are absolutely stunning designed by VOFAN, who is famous Taiwanese illustrator.

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nickvanbergen

Nov. 2, 2020

La tarea de escritura

Distinguido señor o señora, lo agradecería mucho si te tomas un momento para corregirme. Me presentaré. Me llamo Nick y estoy escribiendo este texto para practicar mi español.

Entre tanto llevo seis meses graduándome y ayer fue mi último día. Hice mi última presentación a mis colegas y los convidé a pastel de manzana. Ese mismo día también vi a La Voz a través de una plataforma en línea se llama Atresplayer. Lo disfruté mucho, ya que los candidatos y jueces eran amigables y de buen corazón el uno con el otro. En los Países Bajos esto es mucho menos el caso, debido a este experimento esto como extraordinario.

Más tarde en el programa empezó la juez Laura Pausini a cantar unos de sus más famosos canciones. Reconocí esta canción inmediatamente, dado que crecí con esta canción. La no he escuchado en algunos años y me gustó escuchar esto de nuevo. Tampoco darme cuenta de que ella es la cantante original, pero reconocí su voz pronto como empezó a cantar. Y ahora que estoy estudiando español entiendo el italiano un poco. ¡Esto me hace feliz! En resumen, una noche exitosa!

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karasawa

Nov. 2, 2020

Planning to Playing Table Tennis.

As I haven't been playing table tennis at all lately, I'm planning to invite Hasegawa to play table tennis in the next week or so, but rubbers on my racket have deteriorated and it's difficult to put a rotation on the pinball, so today I went to the Table Tennis shop near Kamiooka station to buy some new rubber.
I had the shopkeeper put a OX short pips made by YASAKA on the back side of my racket and a 2.1mm sponge-thickness soft rubber made by Andro on the front side of my racket.
I am looking forward to playing table tennis with Hasegawa in the next week.

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ponta

Nov. 2, 2020

Deadlines

I'm a university student, so I almost always have assignments during a term. Each assignment has a deadline, which is sometimes far from now and sometimes soon. If I'm not careful, I fall into a situation that I have so much homework that I can't deal with.
Once, I had final exams and term papers and assignments; it was a living hell for me. Since then, I keep in mind to finish my homework one day before the deadline and initiate long-term projects with a margin.

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nueli

Nov. 2, 2020

충주

저는 한국에 있을 떼 충주에서 갔읍니다.
그기에 사과는 많이 있어서 제 생각에 이상합니다. 벽 도 울타리는 사과를 그린 것이 있읍나다!
그레서 충주 큰 삘긴 사과는 먹었읍니다. 맛있음니다. 읽은 사람시는 해봈음니까?

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heavensblade13

Nov. 2, 2020

聲の形

昨日「聲の形」の映画を観ました。楽しくて、感動しました。多分私の一番好きなアニメ映画です。贖いといじめのテーマは深くて、面白いと思います。一週間前に「聲の形」の漫画の単行本セットを買いました。今日は第3巻を読みました。日本語で読むのは満足します。でも、時々知らない言及があります。例えば「耳なし芳一」についてネットで調べなければいけなかったでした。全てで7巻だけがありますので、多分この週で読み終わります。

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karasawa

Nov. 2, 2020

Todays Walk

I went for an hour-long walk because staying indoors all the time is not good for you, but today I'm going to write in my diary a detailed account of what happened during my walk.
I went out of the house around 1:30 pm and it was 21 degrees today and compared to yesterday, it was very warm and I didn't need to wear heavy clothes.
As I was walking to the park, I saw some local junior high school students heading our way, and I thought they were leaving school too early, and at first I wondered if they had skipped school, but now that I think about it, it's not strange that junior high school students leave school at this time of the day, because they have final exams at the end of November.
When I arrived at the park, there were some local college students enjoying their baseball games on the baseball field and a few elderly people running along the park path.
I found a pull-up bar set up near the park equipment, so I did some muscle training for a while, but it didn't last long as I hadn't done any muscle training at all lately.
I walked down the park path listening to music with my Bluetooth Earphone and as I was walking I found a vending machine and just as I was thirsty so I bought a 120 yen can of Coke for 200 yen that I had in my pants pocket and drank the Coke while sitting on the bench.
When I finished my Coke, I looked at my watch and saw that it was past 3:00 and it was time for my mother to get off work and come home, so I started to head home.

Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)

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bonbonmacaron

Nov. 2, 2020

私の家族

私の家族の中で四人がいる：母、父、弟と私。母はロシア人だって、父はアメリカ人だ。しかし、二人はロシア語も英語もペラペラで話せる。母は先に翻訳家だって、今主婦です。父は移民の弁護士です。自分の法律事務所がある。彼はアメリカに住んでいたいロシア人に手伝います。先に母は色々な重要な書類を翻訳して手伝った。実は、父はビエトの崩壊の頃母と会った！モスクワに引っ越した後で、彼は彼女を翻訳家として雇った。
弟は16歳です。もうティーンエイジャーだよ！信じられない！彼は早く育ている。ランニングが好きです。高校のランニングチームの一員だし、毎日付近でランニングをする。すごいと思う！描くも好きです。数々綺麗な絵を描いた。母は描くのが得意なので、弟が彼女の才能を幾分受け継いでいた。
私たちは猫を飼っている。マシャと言う。ロシア語の名前だ。可愛すぎて、遊び好きな猫だ。犬っぽい人懐っこいものだ！私たちは猫といつも遊んでいる。弟が餌をやてるから、猫は彼の部屋に寝るのが一番好き。弟が猫の父っぽい。猫も家族の一員だよ！

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classicalmusiciscool089

Nov. 2, 2020

기타 연습하기

지난 금요일에 아빠에게 내 기타의 D 끈이 부서졌는 거 말하고 어제는 그는 새 끈들이 샀어요.
어젯밤에 너무 행복하고 신이 났는데 새로운 작품을 배우고 싶고 메르츠(?)의 헝가리 판타지를 선택했어요.
몇 달전에 이걸 작품을 처음이 들었는데 내가 들은 녹음에서 재능 있는 니콜라 홀(?)이 연주하고 있었어요.
완전 좋은 클래식 기타리스트예요.
그녀가 18살만 이었고 너무 잘 하는데요!
저널 쓰기 후에 기타 연습할게요.

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Jack

Nov. 2, 2020

Journal 11/2/20

I am not a tea person, so I rarely drink tea. Green tea has beautiful colors and it's very attractive when you see it. But every time I drink it I feel nauseated, so I rarely drink it. I once tried Pu 'er Tea. It's hard to say whether it is good or not, but I am a bit refusing their shape because I always think that as a tea it should not be squeezed into a cake. Plus, it's hard to separate. However, I often hear people say that it is very beneficial for our health to drink tea, so I still want to drink some tea more often and I have learned about black tea. It is said that black tea can warm you up and won't cause you stomach nausea. Then I bought it online and the brand is Keemun Black Tea. I just made a cup of it and it had a color the same as Pu'er tea’s. Also, it was very fragrant. I hope the Keemun Black tea will suit me to drink for the long run.

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fabledlamb

Nov. 2, 2020

Una nueva serie

En general no me gusta ver nada de televisión. Me cuesta ver series o películas porque me siento demasiado conectada a los personajes, pero últimamente he estado viendo New Girl y me gusta mucho. No sé si voy a continuar porque hoy vi cuatro episodios seguidos y sentí que había malgastado mi tiempo, pero a la vez creo que intentar ver algo hasta el final es una buena práctica (porque muchas veces no puedo hacer esto).

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