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Nov. 21, 2020
How would your life be if mobile phones didn't exist?
If mobile phones didn’t exist our lives would change drastically and our lifestyle would be completely different as it is now. Everyone has a phone, and especially young people use it on a daily basis. There are even some people who cannot live without it!
If someday phones disappeared our daily lives would be similar as they were a decade ago. Personally, it would save me a lot of time. I would wake up without checking and scrolling through Instagram and other apps. You don’t really notice it, but you can easily spend up to an hour just looking at your phone, wasting time. I would also enjoy doing activities outside or spending more time on my hobbies, which I often abandon since I can’t find time for them. My attention span would also improve notoriously, given the fact that my phone distracts me from whatever task I’m doing.
Even though mobile phones bring us amazing opportunities and makes our lives easier, we’ve become too dependent on them. We should find balance and learn to use them wisely in order to make phones something useful and positive for us.
Nov. 21, 2020
Meine Katze
Als ich ein Junge war, hatte ich beide Hunde und Katzen. Heute habe ich nur eine Katze, weil ich in einer kleinen Wohnung wohne. Sie ist eine schwarz-weiße Katze. Ihr Rucken ist schwarz und hatte auch einen schwarzen Fleck auf den Kopf. Sie heißt Cosima und ist etwa vierzehn Jahre alt. Leider ist sie nicht so verspielt as früher. Im moment, schläft sie auf dem nahe gelegenen Sofa. Bald ist es Zeit, Cosima zu futtern.
Nov. 21, 2020
Deux vaccins contre la COVID-19
Dans les semaines dernières, deux entreprises pharmaceutiques ont annoncé les résultats préliminaires de leurs essais cliniques. Selon ces résultats, les vaccins de Pfizer et de Moderna sont efficaces à plus de 90%, une efficacité au-delà des attentes des experts, qui disaient qu'un vaccin efficace à 50% pourrait être utile dans la lutte contre le virus.
Une fois que ces vaccins reçoivent l'appui des agences gouvernementales, on peut commencer la distribution des vaccins. Tout le monde espère que les vaccins seront disponibles bientôt, mais il reste quelques défis importants. Il y a beaucoup de gens qui disent qu'ils n'ont pas envie de se faire vacciner, ce qui pourrait empêcher les pays d'atteindre le seuil de l'immunité collective. Par ailleurs, les pays pauvres n'auront pas le même accès aux vaccins que les pays riches.
Nov. 21, 2020
What are the key things to get right when designing services
Customer satisfaction & Performance management
When designing services in order to delight customers in service organizations, one of the key external metrics is customer satisfaction. Customer satisfaction is the difference between the customer’s expected and perceived performance of the service. (DCU, 2019) Through questionnaires and surveys, or mystery shoppers to measure customer satisfaction is the used way to be assessed. If we know more information about customers' expectations, the more we would know what the firm might need to do to improve their services. Moreover, through those exact data and comments, it provides evidence to help managers to make action plans.
From inside of service organizations, the key operational performance objective is to achieve consistency of outcome for customers. (Robert et al., 2016) Customers couldn’t directly know how your organizations worked, but they can feel about what you say and what you do. Therefore, effective performance management is the key factor related to measuring customer satisfaction, cost-effective and maximising profit. Lord Kelvin (1885) stated:” when you can measure what you are speaking about, and express it in numbers, you know something about it”. Especially if you can manage your service performance through numeric metrics.
If we further refine how to control performance, we can break it down to the strategic level and operational level, even societal level. Day to day operations include quality, speed, dependability, flexibility and cost. Organization’s strategies include risk and resilience, capital utilization, service and revenue, efficiency and cost and capability for innovation. (DCU, 2019) In general, we use a balanced scorecard as a framework to develop metrics and cover every aspect of operations. And then we also can through benchmarking as an approach to continuously measuring products, quality and services, we can adapt our operational approach to achieve high-quality performance, to align with advanced market standards, to maintain the market leadership.
Service operations improvement
Services need to be a continued improvement to delight customers. Never changed services couldn’t follow the change of the era and aren’t able to satisfy customers. Then how to improve the service? Based on real situations organizations can choose different improvement strategies: continuous improvement or radical improvement. The mature approaches include total quality management, six sigma and business process re-engineering.
In order to provide faster and more efficient services, we need to continually improve service system design. For example, through cross-training of employees to request employees to do additional things when they are waiting for the customers, it can reduce setup times, and also create more values for the company. Based on service blueprinting, it’s easy to see which parts will directly serve to customers, which parts are the internal process. The goal is to provide good services to customers and focus on internal process efficiency.
Lean thinking is original from services, mainly focusing on process improvement. Through the lean concept, we can synchronize and balance information and workflow, increase total visibility of all components and processes, eliminate waste, increase flexibility in the use of resources.
Nov. 21, 2020
Nov. 21, 2020
Shortsentences24
1. Gökyüzündeki havai fişeklerin farklı renkleri herkesin ilgilisi çekti. The colors of the fireworks in the sky got everyones attention.
2. Okula gitmek için daha önce toplu taşıma sistemine bindim. İ once rode the public transit system to get to school.
3. Bilal'ın arkadaşının doğum gününün partisi parkta var, orada oyun alanında arkadaşlarla oynanacak.
4. Bilal'a oyun alanında oynarken dikkat ol söyledim. İ told Bilal to be careful while playing on the playground.
5. Emine, Bilal'i biraz sıkılmış görünüyor, onu oyun alanıya alalım. Emine, Bilal looks a little bored, let's take him to the park.
6. Mahallemizdeki oyun alanıyı eski püskü oldu. The playground in our neighborhood has become raggedy,old.
7. Neden dün bana bir şeyi yaz zahmet etmedin? Why didn't you bother to write me something yesterday?
8. Bana yardım etmeye zahmet ediyorsun, çok teşekkür ederim. You are going out of your way to help me, thank you.
9. İşime gitmek için toplu taşıma otobüsü binmem gerek. İ have to ride the public transportation bus to go to work.
10. Amerika'da bir arabaya ihtiyaç olacaksın çünkü şehrin çoğu çok kötü bir toplu taşıma sistemi var. İn America you will need a car because most of the cities have a bad public transportation system.
11. Bence Amerika'daki sadece büyük şehirlerinde iyi toplu taşımayı var. İn my opinion, i think there is only good public transportation in big cities in America.
12. Belediyemiz yeni bir oyun alanı inşa edecek. Our municipality will build a new playground.
13. Boş evimde sesimi yankılanıyor. My voice is echoing in my empty house.
14. Ben bağırırken, sesimi dağların içinden yankılandı. My voiced echoed throughout the mountains while i was yelling.
15. Ben sokakta yürürken, bütün mahallenin içinden birinin çığlığı yankılandı. While I was walking on the street, someone's scream echoed throughout the whole neighborhood.
16. Eve sapasağlam seni alacağım, merk etme. İ will take you home in perfect condition, don't worry.
17. Mağaradaki turist rehberin sesi yankılanıyor.
18. Çikolata pastaları bizim tarafımızdan satılacak. The chocolate cakes will be sold by us.
19. Her gün burası ekmek satılır. Bread is sold here everyday.
20. Sinemada yeni film gösterilecek. A new film will be shown at the cinema.
Nov. 21, 2020
An essay
According to the letter, the women suggests that the school should set a snack shop which is operated totally by students. This is because it can offer a lot of job opportunities and convenience to students. The man supports this change. To begin with, he points out that such a student-run snack shop can provide students the useful job experiences which can train the students’ business ability. Moreover, he argues that it can be more convenient for students, eating in the cafeteria of school needed to take a long time. And although one has a car, half of an hour should be taken for a shopping in the town. Not to mention the students who don’t have a car. The snack shop on campus will be convenient, and the time saved can be used for studying.
Nov. 21, 2020
Zocken
Heute ist endlich die Grafikkarte, die ich seit mehr als 2 Monaten bestellt habe, bei mir eingetroffen. Deswegen will ich den ganzen Tag auf meinem Computer Computerspiele spielen, leider wird das nicht passieren, da ich immer noch Rückenschmerzen habe.
Aber, es geht mir schon besser, zumindest im Vergleich zu einer oder zwei Wochen vorher. Die Schmerzen, unter den ich leide, sind z.B. heute nicht so stark. Trotzdem will ich an den Wochenende nicht so viel vorm Rechner verbringen. Na ja, irgendwo muss es eine Balance zwischen Spielen und Entspannen geben.
Nov. 21, 2020
Nov. 21, 2020
我的生活故事 （第二篇）
在奥地利，我们小学学完之后要选一个初中学校。一般来说，我们有两个选择，普通中学和高级中学。大部分的孩子去普通学校，成绩比较好的孩子可以申请去高级中学。因为高级中学也称为文理中学专注于学术道路，所以大部分的文理中学生（或者他们的父母）打算以后去读大学。高级中学分为两类：公立学校和私立学校。学校能够接收的学生人数有限所以挺难申请到。你通常要有一个亲人在这个学校读过，不然的话就很难申请到。虽然我没有被私立学校录取但是公立学校录取了我。与许多其他国家不同的是，在奥地利，公立和私立的差别不大。我收到的教育很好但是我还是觉得我们国家的教育系统让孩子做选择太早。即使你普通中学读完之后还可以申请到高级高中但是很少人能做到。几年前，我们政府改变了我们的教育系统可是我对这个变化的影响或者效率不太熟悉。我怀疑这个政策有预期的效果，但是我不是专家。好，这一片我说道这里吧。
Nov. 21, 2020
Que faites-vous pour réduire l'anxiété ?
1) Je fais de l’exercise presque chaque jour, soit je cours soit je vais au gym (mais pas maintenant à cause du virus). Cependant, parfois l’excercise est une source d’anxiété pour moi parce que quand j’ai une blessure et je peux pas courir, ça me rend très triste.
2) Je fais de la méditation, mais souvent j’oublie à le faire ou j’ai pas la motivation. Mais, je devrais le faire plus régulièrement parce que ça me calme beacoup.
3) J’écoute a la musique. J’aime beaucoup de genres, de la musique classique à la musique pop.
Nov. 21, 2020
Dialogue entre deux colocataires
1: Je suis en train de faire une liste de courses. Tu peux me dire qu'est-ce que on a dans la cuisine?
2: Bien sûr! On n'a pas beaucoup dans le frigo. On n'a ni lait ni beurre.
1: On a des œufs?
2: On n'a que 3 alors on a besoin de un carton d'œufs aussi.
1: D'accord, et qu'est-ce que on a dans les placards?
2: On a beaucoup de cereals mais on n'a un seul légume où fruit.
1: On a encore du pain?
2: No, on n'a plus du pain. Je l'ai fini ce matin.
1: Tu a besoin d'autres choses?
2: No, je ne pense pas! Merci!
Nov. 21, 2020
Une maison abandonnée
Je faisais une randonee quand, tout à coup, j'ai trouvé une maison abandonée. C'était très grande avec beaucoup de salles. Il y avait des muebles aussi commes des armoirs, des lits, et des tapis. Il y avait une grande escalaire aussi. Mais, il n'y avait pas un trace de vie. Je n'ai vu personne ou aucunes animals. Je n'ai entendu un seul son. Rien n'était propre et il semblait que personne n'a veçu la pour un très longtemps.
Nov. 21, 2020
语法练习 - 第14课
这个星期我需要用到的语法点或单词 ：够，以，于是，既然，什么的
在我的课本上，这个星期的内容是保护环境。课文描述了地球为什么有污染。其中一个原因是为了使用塑料袋，在超市我们买东西时，超市提供免费的塑料袋。使用塑料袋非常方便，所以很多人用它们曾家环境污染。既然塑料袋对环境不好，一些超市已经停了提供免费的塑料袋，鼓励顾客带来自己的购物袋。不仅塑料袋有污染的问题，也是所有的用塑料产的品，比如塑料的叉子，刀子什么的。于是从下年开始欧盟的国家的超市不能卖塑料刀叉。
我不知道关于上面的内容写用「够」和「以」的句子。所以我写的句子没有和上面的文章关系：
- 我加的盐够了吗？
- 我们以最快的速度给你做饭。
Nov. 21, 2020
스마트폰
현대적인 일상 생활에서 휴대 전화가 빠뜨릴 수 없는 것이 된 것이다. 사람과 통화도 하고 음악도 듣고 인터넷을 이용도하고 등등 여러 가지 기능이 갖추어져 있다.
시계, 카메라, 라디오 따위 같은 도구가 스마트폰으로 다 대체 된 것이다. 배움과 통신 같은 활동을 진행에 효과적이다. 스마트폰을 사용함으로써 새로운 공부할 방법을 쓸 수 있겠다. 틀림없이 사람에게 도움이 매우 되는 것이다. 실제로 스마트폰 때문에 모두 사람들의 생활 방식까지 완전히 딸라지게 되었다.
한편으로 스마트폰이 비록 좋은 것은 많지만 지나치게 의지하는 것은 좋지는 않고 사람에게 나쁜 영향도 줄 것이다. 예를 들면 운전하면서 스마트폰을 쓰기로 인해 사고가 발생한다는 경우도 많다. 그리고 만약 아이들이 스마트폰에 중독 되어 있다면 스스로 벗어나기 어렵다.
단순히 말하면 사람들이 휴대 전화가 없는 삶은 이제 상상할 수가 없는 것이다. 이런 상황에 좋은지 나쁜지 각자 판단해야 겠다.
Nov. 21, 2020
Beschwerde über Jungen Camp
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
ich habe Ihre Anzeige in der Zeitung gelesen, dachte ich sofort, dass ich viel Spaß in Ihrem Camp haben und viele Erfahrungen haben. Ich besuchte das Camp vom 1.08. bis 1.10.2017 und bezahlte 1100 Euro, was ein sehr hoher Betrag für meine Familie ist. Ich habe schon vor einer Woche bei Ihnen teilgenommen, aber ich war mit das nicht zufrieden. Aus diesem Grund schreibe ich Ihnen und möchte ich mich bei Ihnen beschwerte.
Zuerst hat die Anzeige gesagt, dass die Teilnehmerzahl ist 30, aber dort waren 50 Teilnehmer. Aus diesem Grund war die Unterrichte immer sehr Laut. Die Betten waren sehr schlecht und es gab nicht genügend Betten für alle auch, so ich konnte nicht bequem schlafen. Auch die Dusche war kaputt. Ich habe mit dem Helfer gesprochen, aber er hat mir lediglich gesagt, dass er sich um dieses Problem kümmern wird, aber leider hat er sich sehr verspätet.
Die Helfer waren Studenten und sie haben Erfahrung im Problemlösung nicht. Aufgrund der irreführenden Information in Ihrer Zeitungsanzeige bitte ich um Erstattung meiner Kosten. Ich bin auch mit der Reduzierung des Gesamtpreises einverstanden.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
YM
Nov. 21, 2020
Nov. 21, 2020
演讲
我的演讲题目是我学习中文的方法. 首先，我把学汉语分成了以下几个阶段包括掌握语音、掌握基础词汇、学习语法和句子，最后，我将练习用汉语跟中国人交流。刚学中文的时候，我花很多时间练习发音, 有一些观点认为发音不重要, 但是对我来说发音很重要 因为我想以后去中国生活. 当我学习中文时，我当然犯了很多错，但是我不怕犯错。因为改错可以帮我记住更长时间。学了一段时间的发音后，我开始学词汇，我的目标是学得3000个单词。我通过例句学习语法， 当我学习一个句子的语法时我觉得写作是练习语法的好方式。每天我都用中文语法写日记，这样可以帮我练习用中文表达自己的想法。看电视和电影对我来说也是一种很好的方法，还有各类学习视频，网站，工具之类的都不错。虽然遇到了一些困难但是有各位老师和同学的帮忙这些问题都解决了 为了不辜负大家我要更努力的学习汉语，我的演讲结束了，谢谢
Nov. 21, 2020
Nov. 21, 2020
キャラクターを面白くする方法
書かれたキャラクターをもらうのは、LARP前の手続きのワクワクとした部分なのに、キャラクターが気に入らない場合は大変ですね。 面白くないキャラクターを貰えば、楽しみにしているキャラクターにするにはどうすればよいですか？
まずは尋ねましょう。このキャラクターは誰ですか？ このキャラクターの歴史や個性の重要な要素は何でしょうか？
このキャラクターの動機かやる気はどこからですかね？
LARPのストリーの中で、キャラクターの役割は何ですか？
責任があるのでしょうか？
キャラクターのストーリーの可能性があるのですか？
LARPのジャンルとか他のキャラクターの要求によると成功するために大変な努力が必要でしょうか？
https://nordiclarp.org/2020/11/05/making-a-flat-character-sing/
Nov. 21, 2020
Nov. 21, 2020
Man behöver en särskild förmåga...
...När det gäller att vara ansvarsfull.
När vi pratar om arbetsplatsen, där man anställer andra personer, måste man visa ansvarsfulla egenskaper för att föra jobbet och ta hand om sina anställda osv. Om man inte är chef sedan kan det vara (det beror på situationen, helt enkelt) lättare att koppla av lite mer, eftersom en vanlig anställd person bara behöver göra sitt eget jobb.
Emellertid finns det skillnader när man talar om hur ansvar påverkas av kultur och geografi. Så, I länder såsom Sverige och Storbritannien, till exempel, tar människor mycket ansvar eftersom det är också kopplad till tiden. Tiden är väldigt viktiga till personer som bor I länder såsom dem. Det kan visas att: ”ju mer norr ett land ligger, desto viktigare blir tiden” på jobbet eller när man mötes.
Nov. 21, 2020
食テロ
LangCorrectのデザインやサイトの更新のため 、ずっと頑張っていて、あまり日本語を勉強しなくて日記もあまり書かない。今考えると、最後に日記を書いた時から一月過ぎが経った。。。
今日のミニ日記のテーマは食テロだ。「飯テロ」を日本語に翻訳してみると、思っていたの「Food Terror(ism)」じゃなくて「Food Porn」という。「○○Porn」の意味はちょっと説明しにくいけど、だいぶ「○○にそそる」という意味だ。「Food Porn」の場合には美味しい食べ物を見るとお腹がそそって
空いてくる。全然そのエロいの意味じゃないね！難しいね。英語へようこそ！ｗ
なぜ飯テロについて書いているのかと思った？理由は親友は僕がちょっとポニョポニョになったので断続的断食していることを知っていて、ここが夜になると彼から美味しい食べ物の写真を送ってふざける！:D
Nov. 21, 2020
Luck
This week somedays feeling lucky.
But somedays feeling so unlucky.
Makes me think my life is always control by luck.
“Luck” is when you compare other persons like colleagues or friends.
You feel they are worst then you.
Or, when you give only less than 50% effort but you get more than 50% result.
But luck is never in your hand.
Question?
How about put in this way.
Each time you are given 100% of what you got.
As long as satisfy the outcome there are not winning or loss count.
What a beautiful words to make an excuse.
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