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chou_fleur

July 28, 2020

Eins

Die Katze von meine Freundin hat einen Vogel attrapieren. Aber der Vogel war nicht tot und ist weg geflugen. Ich hätte Angst, aber zum Ende alles war gut.

Meine andere Freundin hat mir einen Bericht geschikt.

Ich habe mit meinem Mann sehr gut gesprochen.
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Die Katze meiner Freundin hat einen Vogel gefangen. Aber der Vogel war nicht tot und ist weggeflogen. Ich hatte Angst, aber am Ende war alles gut.

Meine andere Freundin hat mir einen Nachricht geschickt.

Ich habe ein gutes Gespräch mit meinem Mann geführt.

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spionen

July 28, 2020

Alaska

Yirmi beş yaşımdayken dokuz ay boyunca Alaska'da yaşadım. Erkek arkadaşım ve ben aynı dukkanda çalıştık. Ben deniz ürün bölümünde çalışıyordum, o meyve sebze satıyordu. Buna ek olarak da ben tütüncüde bir işim vardığı için haftandan yedi gün çalışıyordum ve seyahat edip eyaleti görmeye fırsatım yoktu. Yaz aylarında ışıklı ve kış aylarında karanlık olduğu çok mu çok tuhaf bana geldiğimi hatırlıyorum.

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eeprom

July 28, 2020

Angs vor Prüfungen

In Kürze kann ich eine Niederlassungserlaubnis beantragen, da ich eine Blaue Karte EU besitze und ich seit fast 21 Monaten in Deutschland wohne.

Um die Niederlassungserlaubnis bzw. die unbefristete Aufenthaltstitel in nur 21 Monaten zu kriegen, muss man "ausreichende" Deutschkenntnisse prüfen. Das heißt, dass man zumindest ein B1-Zertifikat haben muss.

Ich habe noch nie eine Deutschkenntnisse Prüfung gemacht und ich muss verraten, ich habe angst davor. Ich habe schon ein paar Videos auf Youtube geguckt, die die mündliche B1-Prüfung zeigen. Auf ersten Blick sieht alles nicht so schwer aus, trotzdem habe ich Angst, dass ich während der Prüfung nervös sein könnte oder dass ich einfach alle meine Deutsch vergessen könnte.

Ich denke, dass ich für diese Prüfung gut vorbereitet bin, mal sehen, ob ich sie bestehen kann.

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laoan

July 28, 2020

Nova ferramenta

Como relatei na minha entrada de ontem, estou instalando uma bomba de calor na minha casa.

Para fazer este trabalho, precisei de uma ferramenta que sempre me fez falta: uma grande tenaz para tubos. Me decidi comprar um produto alemão. Não é só para apoiar a indústria local nesta época de crise, mas também porque todo o mundo sabe que as ferramentas alemãs são as melhores. Também pudiese haver comprado um produto fabricado na China que custa menos. Mas este tipo de tenaz tem muitos usos e seria uma pena se quebrar rápido.

Agora que a tubagem está completa posso dizer que realmente foi um bom investimento. É cômodo e eficaz trabalhar com esta tenaz. Estou com certeza que vai me servir para muito tempo.

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SteppeBrother

July 28, 2020

Five Tips for Someone Preparing to Move Abroad

1. Learn the most common expressions in the target country’s language.
2. Don’t take too much stuff. You can buy anything you need on the arrival.
3. Make sure you have enough cash in the local currency for expenses.
4. Be open-minded and friendly to the people you meet.
5. Take some time to explore your new surroundings, sample the local cuisine and discover other aspects of the local culture.

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SteppeBrother

July 28, 2020

Public Transportation Conclusion

Generally speaking, public transport is far more efficient and environment-friendly for cities than the means of personal transport. It can be difficult at first for people to stop using their cars, but as a result it will be better for everyone. In majority of cases, however, it costs city administration greater expenses to purchase public transport models and recreate streets, therefore this measure should be planned some time ahead.

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atomcdismantling

July 28, 2020

עבודה קבוצתית

למרות שזה יכול להיות מייאש עבור חלק, עבודה קבוצתית היא ניסיון בעל ערך. בנוסף, זאת מיומנות חשובה לפתח כי אנחנו נשתמש בה לאורך החיים שלנו. אישית, אני יכול לחשוב על שלוש סיבות שמסבירות את החשיבות של עבודה קבוצתית. ראשית, היא עוזרת לנו להבין מושגים יותר טוב. בכל עבודה קבוצתית, דיונים מתקיימים. לפי דעתי,הם משחקים תפקיד מרכזי כי במשך דיונים, חברים בקבוצה חולקים את המידע והרעיונות שלהם. בעליל זה מעשיר את הידע שלנו בנושא הקשור. חוקרים רבים גם מאשרים את העובדה שאפשר לשפר את ההבנה שלנו על ידי ללמד אותה לאחרים, אפילו אם אנחנו כבר מבינים אותה טוב. שנית, עבודות קבוצתיות מחדדות את הכישורים החברתיים בצורה מסוימת. כשעובדים עם אנשים אחרים, אנחנו צריכים להתמודד עם הרבה אישיויות והעדפות שונות. במקרה הזה, טקט מספק מסגרת חשוב להצלחת עבודה קבוצתית. כשאנחנו מנסים לתת דיעה בזהירות, בעצם אנחנו גם עובדים על הטקט שלנו. שלישית, יש לה גם תועלות לשוניות. בעוד שהתועלות יחסית עלומות, הן אכן קיימות. לדוגמה, לפעמים אנשים אחרים מתארים הרעיון שלהם עם מילים שחדשות לנו. אפשר לשנן המילים האלו ולהשתמש בהן אחר כך. בסך הכל, אני חושב שעבדה קבוצתית היא אחת הדרכים היעילות ביותר לסיים עבודה.

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this

July 28, 2020

월27일

사람들이 왜 끈힘없이 물건들을 사는지를 모르겠다. 매일 깨는 시간 중에 8시간 이상 직업에서 보내서 그럴까 봐. 현대의 사람은 16세기의 농장 노동자보다 오래 일하다. 현대인이 현재하는 인간 관계가 없니 목적 없이 매일매일 외롭게 하다. 그래도 현재 세계의 상태에서 먹고살다면 어쩔 수 없이 시간을 팔다. 전통 대신에 회사 지침대로 따르고, 혈통 위한 인생 아니라 경제 위해 고생하다. 자기 만족만 하면 불만족하다. 물질의 존재가 불쌍하다.

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sefirat

July 28, 2020

Day 27 - Globetrotters

When asked about their most cherished dream, many people always reply that they want to travel the world, see different cultures, and have adventures. However, only a few accomplish this dream. Some would excuse themselves saying that life got in the way; either in the form of marriage, children, or a job and that because of that they had to put their dream aside. Others would blame their lack of money, and others would say that they didn’t have the courage to chase their dream. Whatever is the reason, in many cases the dream of travel the world remains on the back burner for years until it is eventually forgotten. Nevertheless, there are other sorts of people, more of a dreamer than the rest. Who, driven by their ambition to broaden their horizons, at some point in their lives, decide to make a change and start over.
These cases are scarce, and because of that, they are also very inspiring for those who aspire to the same freedom. You can see them cycling around your city with their bikes fully equipped, either traveling accompanied but most probably on their own; or, in more extreme cases just wandering the world on foot. One of these cases is an Argentinian man in his 60s, who after grabbing a couple of items, set out to roam America by foot. He started in Patagonia and is actually on his way up to Alaska. What at the beginning was seen as madness ended up as a life lesson to all those who have followed his journey. An adventure that has been full of determination and also of the kindness from those who have helped this man along his way either with food, accommodation or with a simple ride. Another case I like is an Argentinian woman who began traveling when she was 22 and continued for the next ten years. During all that time she used to write a blog telling her experiences and thoughts. She would always emphasize how traveling had changed her as a person and would encourage other women to do the same; to leave their fears aside and travel on their own. Personally, traveling the world is not something that moves me, but what I do admire and would like to integrate into myself is the courage that these people have shown to go against the current and do whatever they want with their lives.

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Tubatf

July 28, 2020

Ein Schifsteller

Er heißt Marcus Brauer. Er arbeite als Schiftsteller. Sein Tag beginnt nicht so früh wie bei anderen Menschen. Eigentlich steht er um 11 Uhr auf. Er setze sich an den Computer, ein Geschichtsroman zu schreiben. Manche nachmittags geht er zur Uni für Forschung. Danach trifft er mit seinen Freunden ins Cafe. Wenn Wein ihn inspiriert, kann er weiter sich etwas ausdenken. Gegen 2 Uhr geht er ins Bett und mit einer Medizin schlaft.

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minhvu

July 27, 2020

Davids Geburtstag

Heute feiert der Flur Davids Geburtstag.
David ist der netteste Haussprecher, den ich je habe. Eigentlich sollte ich ihm mehr bei dem Kochen geholfen haben, aber ich war zu faul :P. Ich hoffe, dass David bei jedem Schritt seines Lebens immer Glück haben wird.
Ich habe auch heute zum ersten Mal Pizza gerollt und in einem traditionellen Ofen gebacken.
Ich habe heute auch bemerkt, dass Johannes gerne "wütende" (wie soll ich sagen...) Musik hört und eine etwas aggressive Neigung hat.

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meanbowler

July 27, 2020

Today's Weather!

Today it was quite hot. When the weather is too hot, I cannot stay in my room. So, I go outside for a walk. if it rains, I am usually happy because I can stay in my room and study. I am not against hot weather, it is just that I cannot study when it is hot.

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meanbowler

July 27, 2020

Heute war ziemlich heiß!

Ich denke, dieses Jahr ist es ziemlich warm als letztes Jahr. Nachmittags kann ich in meinem Zimmer nicht bleiben, weil es zu warm ist. Ich weiß nicht, ob die deutschen Menschen dieses Wetter mögen.

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sila

July 27, 2020

Earthquake

I missed Istanbul. Due to fear of an earthquake became the early fall semester, I moved back to my hometown which is called Kocaeli. Kocaeli is the neighbor city of Istanbul. With car, you can go from Kocaeli to Istanbul around 1-2 hours. It might increased due to traffic statue. I used to fast train for transportaion, it cames to 1.30 hours around. I knew the people who lived in the Istanbul, and spend more time than me in the trafic.

Those days are tiresome.

Istanbul, Kocaeli and arounds are first degree earthquake zone. 17 August 1999 earthquake which is base point was Gölcük/ Kocaeli, it was horrific. More than 17.000 people died in their sleep. The sea side of Gölcük- Karamürsel downed to deep of sea. I couldn't remember those days but, it still hurts. The people couldn't help to people who was screaming under the ground. Everyone firstly tried to save own relatives.

Thanks God, we weren't there that night. We were coming back to my mother's hometown to Kocaeli with train. And at 3 in the night, the train suddenly stopped. Nobody couldn't understand what's going on. Everyone said a different story.

The people who try to go their home, found a bus and contiune to their journey. At night, we were at the Kocaeli. Everywhere dark. A person was shouting and running "run, run, Tüpraş will explode!".

My mother and father still couldn't get the how terrible is the situation. When they reached to nearby of house, they saw my uncle who was going to funeral the person who knew.

We couldn't stay there more then few days. To dropp us to my mother's homeland, my father and his cousin taked a pickup, we went back to my mother's homeland.

My mother's homeland's potatoes are famous. They saw a potato field and asked owner to buy all of them for earthquake victims. Owner gave them free for sake of them. My father and his cousin came back to Kocaeli, left to the pickup in the center of village to people could take it.

Big Istanbul earthquake is expecting anytime and I am afraid, a lot of people going to die again.

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caption628

July 27, 2020

Diseñar logotipos - madebyjames

Hace dos semanas que no entro en mi cuenta de LangCorrect. Leí la explicación del logo nuevo y hubo una mención del diseñador al final: James Martin. Visité madebyjames, su canal de YouTube, y vi un video en el que explica su proceso completo de diseño de logos.

Primero, un cliente encuentra a Martin a través de su sitio web, Instagram, LinkedIn, Dribbble, o por el boca a boca. Martin pide al cliente un resumen y un moodboard. El resumen provee información del cliente y su negocio. El moodboard muestra la personalidad visual del cliente. Después de leer el resumen y mirar el moodboard, Martin llama al cliente. Durante la llamada Martin necesita asegurarse de que lo que el cliente le dice iguala lo que le envió.

Lluego, Martin imprime el resumen. Lo lee muchas veces y lo anota. Hace un diagrama usando las palabras del resumen para encontrar conceptos relacionados. Cuando el diagrama está terminado, escoge dos a cuatro elementos que puede transformar en un logo simple.

El próximo paso es hacer muchos bocetos. Martin puede que dibuje por diez minutos o una hora. Puede que use una página o tres. No trata de hacer dibujos complicados o inteligentes. La meta es tener una variedad de ideas para elegir. Lluego elige una idea para mejorar y muestra el diseño mejorado al cliente. Por último, el cliente da su opinión del diseño.

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brambsie

July 27, 2020

Meine Reaktion zu "Der Trailer genügt"

Heute habe ich einen Text namens „Der Trailer genügt“ gelesen. Dieser Beitrag befasst sich mit der Meinung des Autors nach Trailer und Filmen. Er denkt, dass Trailer genügend sind. In Vorschauen können die Zielgruppe alles sehen, was nötig ist. Sie zeigen in zwei Minuten die Höhepunkte des Films. Zum Beispiel beinhaltet der Trailer eines Actionfilmes Explosionen, Streite, Kämpfe, usw. Ebenfalls hat ein Liebesfilm die Hauptsachen der vorgestellten Beziehung in seiner Vorschau. Man weiß viel über einen Film nur vom Trailer, deshalb ist die Zeit manchmal verbraten, ins Kino zu gehen.

Aber ich habe eine andere Meinung dazu. Obwohl Trailer sehr interessant und aufregend sind, kann man das Inhalt und die Aussage nicht davon begreifen. Es ist ähnlich wie, wenn man die Handlung eines Buches liest. Der Konsument muss daran Interesse haben, um etwas zu lesen oder schauen. Deswegen muss die Vorschau erregend sein, aber das bedeutet nicht, dass das Inhalt gespoilert ist. Ich glaube, dass man den Film und die Geschichte nur genießen und nachvollziehen kann, wenn man ihn schaut.

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laoan

July 27, 2020

Bomba de calor

Tenho um objetivo para o ano 2020. Estou instalando uma bomba de calor na minha casa.

Os brasileiros talvez não imaginam que a calefação é um elemento muito importante nas casas alemães, já que a Alemanha não é um país tropical. No momento, minha casa está equipada com uma caldeira que queima petrôleo. Essa tecnologia é fiável mas também cara. Se precisa fazer entregar o combustível, se precisa fazer chegar um instalador para fazer a manutenção anual, se tem um tanque de petrôleo que consuma muito espaço e que precisa de manutenção também, e uma vez por ano chego o limpador de chaminés. Tudo isso é bastante caro, particularmente as peças de reposição devem ser feitas de puro ouro. Além de tudo isso, queimar petrôleo emite gás de efeito e a crise climática é um prolema que devemos encarar pronto.

A bomba de calor que estou instalando vai retirar calor da atmosfera para aquecer água. O água quente circula no meu sistema de calefação. Para isso vai consumir energia elétrica que parcialmente vêm de células solares, de centrales eólicas mas também, em dimensões degressivas, de centrales de carvão.

Neste fim de semana quase completei o tubagem necessário para ligar a futura bomba de calor e meu sistema de calefação. Então poderei encomendar a bomba em breve, um aparelho que me costará 2900 Euros.

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spionen

July 27, 2020

Yeni kitaplarım

Bugün büyük bir gündür! Ismarladığım iki kitap gelecekmişler. Bir kitap Türkçe'nin en önemli iki bin sözcüğünü öğretiyormuş, diğer kitap Türkçe için işitsel kursla geliyor. Yeteneklerimi geliştirmek için hazırlıyım! Gündelik sohbetleri anlamak çok istiyorum ve yeni kitapların bana yardımcı olacağını düşünüyorum. Çok az eleştirisi buldum ama çok ümitliyim.

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Bees

July 27, 2020

Faire des changements pour la santé

Récemment, je me sens un petit peu pas en pleine forme. Je mange de plus en plus de la nourriture sucrée, et de moins en moins des fruits et légumes. J’ai blessé mon dos, donc je ne fais pas tant de l’exercise comme au passé. J’ai grossi un peu, et quand je crois qu’il faut que je fasse quelque chose pour améliorer ma santé. Donc, j’ai décidé à écrit un journal dans lequel je peux noter tout ce que je mange dans la jour. Je n’ai pas de problème quand je mange mes repas: je ne mange pas assez, et je mange des choses bonnes pour la santé comme la salade, le yaourt, etc. Mon problème plus grand est que j’aime trop grignoter ! Un petit chocolat de temps en temps n’est pas trop mal, mais si on en mange constamment... Quand on mange des petits morceaux pendant la journée, il est très facile manger trop de calories sans se rendant compte de ce qu’on fait. Je vais écrire mon journal dans cette façon:

Je vais utiliser mon portable et mon iPad parce que je les apporte quand je vais à n’importe où. Je peux utiliser mon portable pour prendre des photos de mes repas et des autres chose que je mange. Ensuite, je vais copier ses photos dans un journal digital sur mon iPad. Au côté des photos, je vais écrire la raison pourquoi j’ai mangé les choses dans les photos. Je crois que ce sera la chose le plus important parce que j’ai l’habitude de manger des petites choses quand je m’ennuie ou quand se me sens triste, et pas parce que j’ai faim. Si je peux me rendre compte aux temps et situations dans lesquels je mange trop de choses pas bonnes pour la santé, je pourra améliorer ces habitudes et devenir de plus en plus en bonne santé !

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eeprom

July 27, 2020

Modale Satzverbindung (III)

Ersatzhandlung (stattdessen, anstatt .. dass (zu), statt + Genitiv)

Du solltest auf keinen Fall auf eine Party gehen. Stattdessen solltest du ein Buch zu Hause lesen.
Anstatt dass du auf eine Party gehst, solltest du ein Buch zu Hause lesen.
Anstatt auf eine Party zu gehen, solltest du ein Buch zu Hause lesen.
Anstatt des Gehens einer Party, solltest du ein Buch zu Hause lesen. (Ich weiß, dass es komisch klingt).

Fehlende Handlung

Ohne die Empfehlung zu folgen, ging er auf die Party.

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SteppeBrother

July 27, 2020

Living in a Large City

Nowadays, moving to large cities is becoming increasingly popular. More and more people attempt to settle down in cities such as New York or London, in their pursuit of better life, happiness and success. However, living in a big city has its positives and negatives. In this essay, I will look at the both sides and draw some conclusions.
Let’s start by looking at some positive aspects. One of the significant advantages is greater number of work opportunities. Considering the fact that large cities attract all kinds of industries, everyone who have ambitions can find his place and succeed in one of the many companies. In addition, working in such companies allows you to have more impact on the society. Another major benefit can be is that the city proposes a wider choice in shopping, hobbies and entertainment. This could be central particularly to the young people, who want to broaden their horizons and try new experiences.
To the turning side of the argument, living in a large city could be much more expensive. The more you earn, there more you need to pay. This may lead to a stress and anxiety, forcing people make wrong decisions in their life and career, just to make ends meet. Another main disadvantage of living in a large city is health issues. In most cases, the environment in some large cities is far from being pleasant. As a result, it affects negatively on health, increasing medical expenses and making life of the citizens poorer.
All aspects considered, living in a large city could add some values to the peoples’ lives but also has some inevitable drawbacks. While big city life is always going with more opportunities, the negative aspects could outweigh for some of us. I believe that for a mindful and joyful human-being it is not the matter where you live but rather how you feel inside.

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sadsa

July 27, 2020

[Negocios poco fiables]

Toc toc, toc! ¿Hola, quién es? Soy Pancho, ábreme la puerta, pero ya! Ay perdón, se me pasó la hora. Sabes que no soy un mañanero. Sí, ya me doy cuenta. Oye, anoche me acabas de perder 300 euros por tus putas cagadas! La gente del kiosco se pusieron re sospechosos no tenía más remedio que entregar toda la plata a la policía por si nos descubrieran. Che, tenés que tomar más cuidado y no te olvides a atender a los cabos sueltos, sino acabarás por perdernoslo todo. Ya sé que no sos un tarado, pero basta con cometer un pequeño error y nos van a joder en grande.

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theredchair

July 27, 2020

Мент 2

Сегодня был обычный день. У города было чёрное небо. У жителей чёрные настроения. Дождь, как всегда, шёл без конца, и мутная вода разливадась на нижниэ уровнях.

Мент встал ранним утром, потом ушёл на работу. В пути о смотрел наверх, на плотину, которая стояла высоко как охранник. Мент чувствовал, как будто у неё призрение к гражданам города. К нему самому, в частности.

С другой стороны города тучи висят над горизонтом, словно топор палача, подвешивающий над шеею приговорённого к смерти приступника. Если взор плотины давал ощущение её призрения, то от взора туч мент ощущал чувство своей дурацкой, криминальной юности. Он вспомил о прошлом, когда его тащили в плиточную комнату и поставили на бетонновый пол перед судом, кто дал ему выбор:

Либо пистолета, мигающая юношу своим одним глазом, либо клятва, на святой томе, служить городу и беречь плотину до смерти.

Это был самый лёгкий выбор его жизни. И конец той дурацкой юности, тоже.

Пришедши в участкок, мента встретил незнакомец. Исследователь с другого района города приехал в участок чтобы провести расследование, связанное с этим районам. Похоже кое-кто здесь действует с нечестными намерениями. Кое-какие бандиты, как ходят слухи.

Исследователь же застал мента врасплох, но он наоборот рад. По крайней мере, это дело не касается его личного поведения. Но зачем же исследователь проявляет заботу о тривиальной вещи вроде бандитского присутствия в мало известном районе?

—Ты же детектив,— говорил мент. —Пусть обычный мусор справится с обычными пустяками. Исследователи должны сосредотачиваться на реальных делах.

—В этом-то и суть,— отвечал исследователь. —По словам очевидцов, эти бандиты и есть сами менты из твоего участка.

《Ага,》думал мент. 《Значит исследователь пришел за мой счёт.》Он услышал о таких исследователях до этого. Они считают себя обязанным убрать грязь среди полицейских сил.

Одна проблема. Этот бывший бандит и нынешнтй мент был честным, хорошим полицейским. Но чтобы найти и остановить настоящих бандитов, сначала пришлось избежать подозрения исследователя.

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qqmorais

July 27, 2020

A letter to a writer and movie director

First of all, I'd like to thank you for your wonderful movie. This masterpiece was what was missing. It's not just a movie. It's a story that needed to be told. And I think it is already impacting lives around world. I Wish there was a movie like this 15 years ago, when was a teenager. It would be less hard to deal with my confusions feelings back then. But I'm glad that it exists now, and that this generation has gotten more representation these days.

So, your work is beautiful , but We need a sequel. there's so much to say, There's so much to explore about Flores, her point of view and confusion mind. I want to see her self discovery. I want to see flores growing, navigating at the college and making...BOLD STROKES. And Ellie..I love this character, such a strong and smart one. I'd love to see her getting more comfortable with who she is, exploring all the possibilities, making friends and of course, keeping in touch with Paul.
The second movie wouldn't be just the two mainly characters getting together, but about their path, growing, and new life experiences.
A sequel of this beautiful movie would be a present for us. I'm longing for it. I can't do anything but think about it and read fanfictions. But I'm tired of fanfics (most them are horrible). I need to see those especial characters on the Screen again. Please 🥺
I know you're not a fan of sequels and I know that a sequel not depends only on you, but at least consider writing and fighting for a second movie, please.

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July 27, 2020