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If l could have a animal as a pet, what is my choose
l think l will choose the dog as that has three advantages, one of the advantages is that l feel the dog is so cute and very loyal never will leave me. and then, when l go out the dog can protect my home don't be robbed if have robber. but anyway, the dog must be a big dog. The last advantage is the dog is our best friend and a good listener, so l will choose the dog.
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Students today
Many people say, "work hard, play hard when you are a student". However, I think you should not say this to student instantly, because students today tend to think that "work hard" means only attending a class and getting a passing grade at exams with the least effort.
(This is a kind of translation homework. Let me say, I don't deny that some students are idle(and I used to be one of them), but diligent students must get angry at this kind of saying. Some elderly people say this kind of stuff, and I really hate that. Though I know that it is possible that I will be one of them in the future...)
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Mobile game
Last four months, I've really into a mobile game named "Magia Record", is based on the famous anime series "Madoka Magica".
The story is about magical girls struggling with the fates to die in return for making their dreams.
The game was 3rd anniversary two weeks ago, so people were excited at a commemorative event. However, it was suddenly announced that English-dubbed version are going to close.
Naturally, players of English-dubbed version were upset and angry at the news, and claimed that the inventors should extend it.
But now, some people are moving to Japanese version, and others start a signature campaign to request taking back.
I hope that they can keep enjoying it without wasting their time and money.
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Occupations
Be an official, go to school and run business. If let you choose one, which one would you like to choose? I also don’t know how to choose them, but I can share with you guys some of my points.
Being an official definitely is not a bad thing, especially in China. But it seems no matter what position you have, you would never be satisfied with it and you would think you should have a higher position. If you don’t, you probably feel dissatisfied and complain a lot. Going to school is really a tough thing and many people hate it. But no matter what grates they get, few people are dissatisfied with it. For instance, others were admitted to Peking university but you aren’t, do you complain? Or do others get a high score but you don’t, do you complain? Run business is also hard work, doing the same business and someone becomes a millionaire while someone gets broken. Do the brokers complain? Generally they are not. Different occupations have different characteristics. The key is which occupations suit you enough, then you can do it.
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My problem
When I see clothes in a situation that pretty people wear, the clothes would be love at first sight.
Then, I used to try to find similar ones and buy them.
After all, I would realize they look good when beautiful people wear at many times.
I’ve finally stopped starting such a pity cycle.
However, as a result of my perspective, I’ve started to always aim for being skinny in order to suit the clothes perfectly.
Yesterday, I watched Jennifer Aniston’s interview, and she said that many people is working on unrealistic goals in this interview.
I totally agreed with this.
Moreover, my mind turned happy after her stating that be happy with who you are, where you are and what you love about yourself.
She is a true Savor of me.
Recently, my thing is listening to podcasts or musics on body positivity.
I had been riddled with that I am fat and ugly, so I’m not worthy, so Therefore, something’s wrong with me because of the fat shaming voices I received from a male teacher, female and few male schoolmates in high school, much older man, and my mother.
According to my experience, in Japan, even though I have about or a little under healthy weight, I would receive fat shaming.
Today, so after changing my mindset, my mother told me you were chubby when you passed the high school entrance exam.
I was shocked but now I am okay.
I have a healthy weight and am called as chubby.
I don’t understand this world, but I have no problem about it.
I never think I want to communicate with you who loves body shaming or condescending in terms of a body shape.
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Übersetzung Übung 1. Teil
Wie viel Geld hast du zur Zeit auf deinem Bankkonto?
Der Zug aus Liverpool wird um 11.15 ankommen, falls er pünktlich ist.
Unser Präsident ist gerade zu einem Staatsbesuch nach London aufgebrochen.
Vergiss nicht, dir die Zähne zu putzen bevor du ins Bett gehst.
Unser Englischlehrer versuchte der Klasse die Grammatik zu erklären.
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Italy and tomato
Though "Italy is all about tomato" is accepted commonly, tomato is originated not in Italy but in South America. Moreover, it has not been so long since tomato was eaten in Italy. It has been 200 years or so. Considering Italian cuisine has its origin at the age of ancient roman, it seems like Italy and tomato started their relationships "yesterday".
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L’HISTOIRE DES RÉSEAUX SOCIAUX EN INDONÉSIE
Je vais parler d’un sujet léger, mais toujours intriguant : les réseaux sociaux en Indonésie et comment ils se développent au cours des années dernières. Parmi tous les choix de plateformes dans lesquelles les Indonésiens sont très actifs, je choisis de me concentrer sur Facebook, Twitter, et Instagram.
Facebook est le premier réseau social qui a prospéré dans mon pays. Je me souviens d’avoir créé il y a dix ans un compte de Facebook, malgré la restriction d’âge, pour jouer aux jeux en ligne avec mes camarades de classe. Après environ trois ans, les jeunes ont commencé à le délaisser. Ce sont les personnes âgées qui y restent jusqu’à aujourd’hui. Je pense qu’ils trouvent d’autres plateformes inutilement compliquées, ou tout simplement, Facebook leur suffit. Aujourd’hui, on regarde Facebook comme une source de hoax fabriqués et propagés par ces « boomers » influençables. Au fur et à mesure que Facebook déclinait, Twitter montait en puissance. Comme Facebook, après un certain temps, il a ennuyé les internautes. Toutefois, Twitter a en quelque sorte pris une tournure intéressante. Puisqu’il n’y avait plus beaucoup de monde sur Twitter, ceux qui restaient n’hésitaient plus à s’y confier. Ils racontaient ce qui s’est passé dans leur vie de tous les jours, sans peur d’être jugés. Ils partageaient aussi leurs connaissances et expériences spécialisées, ce qui a ouvert la voie à des discussions étincelantes. Par exemple, il y avait des médecins attachants qui partagaient les astuces médicales ou leurs expériences poignantes avec leurs patients. Grâce à son nouveau climat, Twitter connait un regain de popularité. On dirait que la sincérité des internautes et les contenus de qualité font Twitter le meilleur réseau social pour l’heure. Cependant, il y a ceux qui se croient les plus ouverts à l’esprit que les autres car ils ont appris une ou deux opinions impopulaires sur Twitter. On les appelle « twittards» . Quant à Instagram, je ne sais pas trop quoi dire. Je spécule que les aspects visuels d’Instagram l’aident à asseoir sa popularité. Bien qu’Instagram soit la plateforme la plus utilisée, en même temps on le déteste aussi car il grouille de commentaires toxiques, d’interactions superficielles, et de contenus banaux et répétitifs.
Selon des recherches, l’Indonésie occupe la quatrième place des pays les plus actifs dans les réseaux sociaux. En toute honnêteté, même s’il n’y a rien de mal avec cette immense activité, les distractions sont indéniables. En tout cas, ce qui nous inquiète le plus, c’est que les réseaux sociaux contribuent également à exacerber notre santé mentale. Pour cette raison, le mouvement de détox numérique est très prisé en Indonésie.
Sept. 6, 2020
Eine Reise nach Luzern
Ich wohne für ein paar Jahre mit meine Familie in Zürich. Wir haben Drei Jährige Tochter. Gestern möchtet wir sie Schnee und ein Gletscher schauen. Es gibt ein Titlis Gletscher, das ist um 100 km von Zürich entfernt. Man kann den Gletscher mit dem Gondola errechnen. Das Dorf wo das Gondola fang sich heißt Engelberg. Wir fuhren nach Engelberg mit einem Auto, aber es war grosse überraschende Stau am Luzerne. Die Autos fuhren sehr langsam. Wir hatten Angst, dass unsere Tochter weint und nimmt sich nicht gut. Deshalb entschieden wir zu aufhalten und gehen stattdessen zum offen Schwimmbad am Vierwaldstättersee Luzerns. Das Wetter war schön und wir haben schön zeit verbracht. Am abend spazierten wir entlang dem Ufer ins Stadtzentrum von Luzern.
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Yolo
If I am allowed to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries. The first is the most developed countries like America, England and Germany. The second is the most beautiful countries, like New Zealand, Australia,
France and Switzerland. The third is the most civilized countries, like Finland, Japan and
Singapore, etc. it's said developed countries almost all adopted the Capitalist system, but I have never seen it in the field and I am so curious about it. Civilization is a presentation of citizens' comprehensive qualities and that's what we human beings are supposed to pursue. As for beauty, I think everybody likes it and I especially worship nature beauty. In my opinion, there is nothing that can beat down nature. I hope I can realize these hopes and I am sure that no matter how developed, civilized and beautiful those countries are,
China is not any worse than those countries and I love China the most because it is my mother country. Anyway, you only live once, be yourself, do things you like as much as you can.
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日本語日記 第１４話
私にとって、２００６から２０１３ぐらいのアニメ時代は一番いいと思います。私の大好きなアニメは「鋼の錬金術師 （２００９）」と「銀魂（２００６）」と「ハンターxハンター（２０１１）」と「サイコパス（２０１２）」です。一般に最近のアニメはまあまあと思います。異世界のジャンルのアニメは多いすぎると思います。でも複数の例外があります。2年前の間で「かぐや様は告らせたい？」と「モブサイコ100 II」が好きです。
私の意見で、欧米で三型のアニメファンがあると思います。一型の人にとって、古いアニメは一番いいです。この型の好きなアニメの例は「カウボーイビバップ」と「銀河英雄伝説」です。古いの方は他よりネットで攻撃的な行動をします。昔は、欧米でアニメの趣味は珍しくて変なことです。この理由のせいですので、この連中は趣味を守ろうと思いました。この態度が攻撃的になりました。この人たちは真面目にアニメを観ると内容を論ずります。最新のアニメを強く責めます。一般的には「elitist」な連中です。（この言葉の日本語で変わりがありますか？）
二型の人にとって、少年ジャンプのアニメは一番いいです。この型の好きなアニメの例は「ドラゴンボール」と「ナルト」と「BLEACH」と「ワンピース」です。この時代にアニメはだんだん欧米で人気になっています。この型は子供の頃からアニメが好きです。多分この型はもう大人になりました。
三型の人にとって、新しいアニメが一番いいです。この型の好きなアニメの例は「ソードアート・オンライン」と「僕のヒーローアカデミア」と 「進撃の巨人」です。この時代に、欧米でアニメは普通になりました。ストリーミングサイトのせいで、アニメを観るのは人気で、安くて、易いです。
この区分は絶対正確ではないですが、三型の傾向は本当と思います。誰も一つの型をすっかり合っていません。欧米で、一番いいのアニメ時代について同意がありません。
Sept. 6, 2020
Las bodas
Me gustan mucho las bodas. Ver la novia caminar por el pasillo es siempre conmovedor. Me interesa la música y el lugar que la pareja escoge para su día especial. En tiempos normales, también me gusta conocer a los familiares y amigos de los novios... y por supuesto, disfrutar la fiesta y banquete que sigue.
Pero no quiero decir que quiero alguna! Me siento aliviada que no hay presión para casarme pronto. Me imagino que organizar una boda es algo estresante, especialmente en medio de una pandemia!
Sept. 6, 2020
Trip by car
My girlfriend comes to my house for holydays, and next monday we have to back to class, for this reason I have to take her to her house, she lives in other city, and the problem is that driving fear me too much and I don't know why, I have to drive by road and inside the city, the fact that I could crash into another car make feel panic.
Sept. 5, 2020
Eine Geschichte, die ich heute gelesen habe
Heute habe ich eine lustig Geschichte gelesen. Sie war über eine Mädchen, die eine neue Gesichtelehrerin hatte. Der üblich Gesichtelehrer ist krank geworden. Dann hatte sie einen ägyptischen Gesichtunterricht. Sie hat eine anti antik ägryptischen Skarabäus von ihrem Vater zum Unterricht mitgebracht. Die Lehrerin hat gesagt, dass sie der Skarabäus in den Klasseschrank legt soll und am Ende des Schultages sie sollte der Gegestand genommen.
Wenn die Klasse Ende hatte, der Skarabäus war nicht im Klassenschrank. Und die Mädchen hat von ihrer Lehrerin misstraut!
Am Ende der Geschichte, die Mädchen hat herausgefunden, dass die Lehrerin eine Betrügerin war... und ihr üblich Geschichtlehrer war nicht krank, er war zu Hause gebunden und geknebelt! Die Betrügerin wirklich war.. eine Diebin von ägyptischen Gegestände!
Sept. 5, 2020
Mi programa favorito
Mi programa favorito en la tele es un programa que se llama West Wing. Fue hecho hace muchos años, pero todavía me gusta mucho. El programa se trata con la política y temas políticas muy interesantes que todavía tiene importancia hoy en día. Como sugiere el título, el programa es sobre un presidente ficticio y los miembros de su administración. Los espectadores pueden ver como ellos lidian con los problemas políticos. Tiene caracteres muy interesantes que empezamos a querer inmediatamente. El programa me hace triste y feliz. Me hace reírme y llorar. Y también me ha enseñado mucho. He visto este programa (todos los episodios) muchísimas veces durante muchos años, y me estoy disfrutándolo otra vez ahora, porque me gusta fingir que este presidente ficticio es de verdad nuestro presidente en vez de el que tenemos ahora. En el programa, el presidente es un buen hombre con integridad y compasión para todos ciudadanos. Que diferente que la actualidad!
Sept. 5, 2020
Beetroot
Many people dislike beetroot, even though it's known to be healthy. For some reason, most of the supermarkets only sell it boiled and packed in plastic. I belong to the people who dislike that, too.
If you can get fresh beetroot, you can make a delicious salad. It might convince beetroot haters that they are wrong.
First, peel and grind a beetroot.
Chop a few stalks of parsley.
In a glass, mix equal amounts of spicy mustard (dijon type), balsamic vinegar and olive oil. For one medium sized beetroot, I use two tablespoons of mustard but the exact quantity depends on how strong your mustard is. Mix everything nicely, add salt and pepper as you like.
This self confident salad goes very well with roasted bread.
Recently, I took a large bowl of it to a garden party. I was worried that I would end up eating it all by myself. But even though the beetroot had turned a bit soft due to the salt, my bowl was the only one that was completely emptied that evening.
I recommend this dish, and I am grateful to the Frenchman who taught it to me a few years ago.
Sept. 5, 2020
Permettimi di Presentarmi
Mi chiamo Sara Colosimo e abito a Salt Lake City, Utah negli stati uniti. È una città nell’una valle circondata delle montagne. Sono quasi in pensione. Lavoravo come una ingegneria civile per più di trent’anni. Adesso, io e mio marito siamo proprietari di parecchie società che gestiamo. Vivo con, il mio marito, Paolo. In questo tempo, inoltre con mio figlio, Sam. Sam è appena difeso la suo master tesi in ingegneria meccanica a Colorado State Università. Si trasferirà a Portland in Oregon per lavora. Nel frattempo, lui sta restando a casa per alcune settimane. Sono molto orgoglioso di lui.
Nel il mio tempo libera faccio golf, guida la bici e ovviamente studio italiano. Studio italiano perché io e mio marito avremo volevamo sempre abitare in Italia. Adesso, mia figlia, Lucia abita in Svezia, e se abiteremo a Roma, saremmo molto più vicino di lei. Mio marito è un cittadino d’Italia, perché la sua famiglia d’origine sono d’Italia. In effetti, miei figli, tutte a due, hanno i loro cittadinanza. Tutto la mia famiglia, neanche, Grover, il cane di Lucia, hanno un passaporto europeo. Mi sento a fuori, ed ecco perché io vorrei ottenere la mia cittadinanza. Spero che dopo questo classe, sarò molto preparato per fare l’esame, CILS B1 per cittadinanza.
Una cosa mi piace d’Italia è il modo che le gente parla, quando dire un storia, specificamente quando si racconta una storia divertente. Mio suocero avevo sempre detto, “È molto più divertente in’italiano, e è vero. M’amo il suono, il ritmo e il riso nella lingua italiano.
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-나 보다, -자마자, -(으) 려고 하다, -다가 연습하기
1. 오늘은 시장에서 과일을 사다가 친구가 만났어요. 제 친구는 사과 먹고 있었어요. 사과를 좋아하나 봐요. 그 사과가 맛있었나 봐요. 저도 사과를 사자마자 먹었어요. 내일 어머니한테 사과를 주려고 해요.
2. 등산하다가 넘어졌고 넘어지자마자 사람들이 저를 도와졌어요. 제가 다쳐 보였나 봐요. 내일 병원에 가려고 해요.
3. 아침을 먹다가 전화 받았어요. 전화 받자마자 벨 소리 나지만 문을 열어서 아무도 없었어요. 농담이 이었나 봐요.
4. 학교 앞에 걷고 있다가 지갑을 찾았고 주웠어요. 누군가 잃었나 봐요. 지갑을 줍자마자 지갑 안에 ID 카드를 찾아봤어요. 아무것도 없었어요. 내일 학교의 분실물에게 가지고 가려고 해요.
5. 셀프 제본해 보려고 준비물을 사려고 해요.
Sept. 5, 2020
Children today
Children today have more things than those of past generations. Despite that, they do not look happy. I think that is partly because adults around them have a strong influence on cases of who they should be. In those days, children were happy because they were not concerned with the adult's society. These days, children look depressed because they are expected, protected by their parents, and forced to lead a life that their parents decide.
(this is not about me)
Me personally, as a young at the age of 18, I am happy to go the way my parents suggested. Last year, I was wondering whether I should try to get a same job that my parents have, and I decided to do. I think it was me who took the opportunity and made a choice. Though I am not sure now that I will regret this decision, I am sure I will not blame my parents for what is happening now and what will happen in the future.
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