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Freizeitaktivitäten
Freizeitaktivitäten, die ich am meisten in meinem Alltag treibe sind Lesen, Sport treiben und Kochen. Lesen ist ein untrennbares Teil meines Lebens seit der Grundschule. Verschiedene Arten von Büchern sind mir höchstinteressant. Dazu gehören z.B. liebes Romane, Kochbücher und Selbstbewusstseinbücher. Seit geraumer Zeit habe ich Interesse an Kochen und probiere neue Gerichte sehr gerne aus. Sport spielt auch sehr große Rolle in mein Leben. Über die Jahren habe ich sehr viele Sportarten gewechselt. Alle sind im Bereich Selbstverteidigung. Mit Judo habe ich angefangen. Dann Ringen und als letztes Kickboxen. Schon zwei Jahre trainiere ich Zuhause allein. Sport war nie ein Ziel für mich um berühmt zu werden, sondern um fit und gesund zu bleiben.
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锅盔
我在成都的时候， 就热爱吃锅盔。锅盔的做法是先煎后烤， 使它的外面吃起来嘎嘣脆， 同时里面还是很软的。
有一天我在旅行中买了一个从来没吃过的锅盔， 和之前吃过的好不一样，问了师傅小吃叫什么名字。“锅盔！”， 他笑着回答。 那个时刻我才意识到，我知道的锅盔不是唯一的锅盔， 其实有很多种类。
我在成都喜欢吃的那个锅盔包着一种特好吃的馅。其实，我不知道馅由什么原料组成，但是一定要放胡椒，辣椒，猪肉或者牛肉，还有必不可少的花椒。成都人吃肥肠粉的时候经常也点一个锅盔。不过，我最喜欢的锅盔店不是卖粉。这家店不是餐厅，而是一个很小的不能进去那样的地方。菜单上只写着十二个字：
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猪肉锅盔4元
牛肉锅盔5元
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这家店离我的房子只几步就到这么近， 所以我离开家或回到家的时候感觉有点饿，就随便买一个。一年中吃的锅盔放在一起做一个食塔, 塔可能是比我身体高两倍！
April 4, 2021
Mein Weg nach C1
Mein Weg bis hierher war gar nicht kurz oder leicht. Damals als ich angefangen habe Deutsch zu lernen, habe ich gar kein Ziel gehabt. Mehrere meiner Reise habe ich ohne Ziel fortgesetzt. Dazu gehört auch die deutsche Sprache. Ich habe in der Schule angefangen Deutsch zu lernen und so ganze zwei Jahre in meiner Heimatland. Aber es ist immer anders, wenn man neue Sprache lernt, dies aber nicht gesprochen wird. Also es fiel mir schwer in der Schule, bis ich nach zwei Jahre nach Deutschland kam und die deutsche Sprache genau gegen mir stand. Es war schön bedeutungslos, ob es mir schwer fehlt oder nicht. Ich war schon da und musste es allein schaffen. Dann kam meine schwerste Höhepunkt in Deutschlernen. Ich ging zur Schule und alles war auf Deutsch. Es war ein Schock für mich. Deswegen habe ich mein Leidenschaft zu Bücher ins Spiel gesetzt und seitdem hat sich mein Verhalten zu diese Sprache, die so fremd für mich war, sehr viel verändert. Ferner ist zu erwähnen, dass ich jegliche Bücher gesucht und gelesen habe. Die Tatsache: ich musste meine Sprachkenntnisse erweitern. Was mir auch sehr viel half war Radio. Neben Musik hören, habe ich sehr viele Nachrichten angehört und neulich auch Podcasts. Seit einem Jahr habe ich mir ein Ziel gesetzt und das war das Niveau B2, aber nachdem ich die Prüfung bestanden hatte, hatte ich es noch nicht satt. Mein Gehirn würde immer neugieriger auf das, was noch kommt. Aus diesem Grund habe ich weitergemacht. Jetzt bin ich kurz vor meiner C1 Deutsch Prüfung und freue mich auf jeden Tag auf das was mich noch erwartet. Ich bin offen für Herausforderungen und nehme sie an. So stehe ich hier und möchte nach vier Jahren nicht aufhören Deutsch zu lernen. Darum versuche ich mich jeden Tag zu verbessern, weil die deutsche Sprache ein Teil von mir geworden ist und ich vorhabe noch mehr davon zu erfahren.
April 4, 2021
Please correct me.
Dans Dusku, acheter les produits locaux et préférable des habitants.
J’étais le témoin de l'accident avec Mos et Ghas (mes amis).
Le government a publié le contrat avec un pay.
Dans le bureau, on dois respecter les déontologie.
Atlas garantit les produit pour un an.
Des contenus du réseau social ne me bénéfice pas, sauf si je peux augmenter ma connaissance.
Des individus disent des mensonges et les ressemblent à quelques choses vrais.
April 4, 2021
Adopting an active method for language learning
So far I've been exposed a lot to the English language since it's quite a ubiquitous language. Essentially, I think that the best and easiest to find content regarding many matters on the internet is in English, therefore I just started translating content and started picking up something here and there, starting with texts then evolving to watching YouTube videos and watching anime series with English subtitles. As time went on, I started noticing that I was already able to understand a lot of this language and some time ago, choose to be more immersed in English: I changed the language of my smartphone and computer to English, decided to only watch movies in English, to play videogames only in English; and, more recently started watching American TV, which I found very good for getting used to spoken English, I've been watching the channel CBS News, that contains subtitles but they appear a little after the speeches so I can pay total attention to the voices and when I don't understand something, I look for the subtitles. Sometimes I can understand the written word but sometimes not, so I look for its dictionary definition or translate it to Portuguese. I also plan to buy an e-reader, those things seem to be pretty helpful when it comes to reading books in a foreign language since I can easily look for the dictionary definition of words in a very practical way. Initially, I'm planning to read translated Chinese wuxia and xuanhuan novels, history books about the bronze age Europe and Stephen King's books as well, he seems to be a good author for people who fall in the intermediate level.
But still, although I've been receiving all these language inputs, I noticed that I'm not really producing anything with the language I'm learning. So I looked up places to learn how to properly and ended up here in LangCorrect, that's exactly what I was looking for! I'm looking forward to producing texts on a regular basis and tackle English grammar. I also find it pretty cool that I can help people with their Portuguese skills, it's great to be helpful for someone, I know how hard is tough learning a language can be, especially regarding output skills, since even if we can understand reasonably well a language, many times we don't pay much attention to grammar words (I have a bad time trying figure out if I should use 'in', 'on' or 'at'; 'this' or 'that'; and even 'to' or 'for', for instance).
To conclude, I find it noteworthy to say I'm actually surprised that I was able to write all this. Even in my own native language, I have always been a bad writer and struggled to learn grammar as I speak in a somewhat grammatically incorrect way and always had low scores whenever I had to write something while in school. I'm also a lurker on most websites and online communities I frequent, so I'm pushing myself a little to do this since I find it important for the development and improvement of my English skills. The Grammarly browser extension was also fairly useful to write this, it corrected some mistakes I did.
April 4, 2021
4/30 Il mio cibo preferito
Non posso scegliere il mio cibo preferito, è impossibile. Croquetas, tortillas... Allora, scelgo il cibo spagnolo. È una parte molto importante della nostra cultura.
E il cibo che non mi piace è un cibo specifico per la Pasqua, chimato "Torrijas", che è un pezzo di pane fritto, bagnato in late, con le uova e un po' di zucchero. L'odio perché quando ero piccolo lo dovevamo cucinare a scuola ogni anno, e c'era tanta pressione a farlo bene e velocemente, perché non dovevamo bruciarlo.
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Day 2: Hobbies
I don’t have many hobbies, for sports I’m very lazy, I don’t make much exercises or workouts but I really enjoy reading, so my favorite hobby, or the one I actually do more often is to read.
I like to write and to read.
I also like watching Tv series but I don’t think that could count as a hobby.
Back to the topic, I like to read a lot of things, since articles, blogs, environmental stuff and novels, usually I read more novels: novels of love, or books of fantasy.
I like Harry Potter and I have lost the count of the times I have read that book series, the seven of them. My favorite writer is J.K. Rowling, I also enjoy Carlos Ruiz Zafon, who is an Spain writer that died last year from Cancer, but his books are so good that I thing, everyone needs to give him a chance.
So, I could say I have two hobbies. Writing and reading.
April 4, 2021
4. April Challenge Beitrag
Das heutige Thema ist Essen. Was esse ich am liebsten oder was ist mein Lieblingsessen und mein unbeliebtestes Essen. Bevor ich nach Deutschland umgezogen war, aß ich gern Tacos. Leider sind meiner Meinung nach Tacos bzw. mexikanisches Essen in Deutschland zu schlecht, da das Geschmack des Essens nach dem deutschen Gaumen angepasst ist.
Deswegen ist Döner jetzt mein Lieblingsessen. Ich liebe es, einen wärmen und knackig Döner zu essen. Auch ist das Preisleistungsverhältnis eines Döners unschlagbar. Zum Glück mag meine Frau auch Döner und normalerweise essen wir Döner einmal pro Woche.
April 4, 2021
Talking about food
It's not easy to choose just one dish, because I love eating, but I guess that french fries with fried eggs would be on the top of my list. However, the more I grow older the more I'm fond of spoon dishes and vegetables. I guess I'm starting to concern about my health and french fries are not famous for their benefits.
What I have no doubt about is that breakfast is my favorite meal; the best thing about waking up is eating a delicious breakfast. I like eating oatmeal, usually with berries, but I also add bananas, chocolate, or nuts. I sit at the table and eat while drinking black tea.
On the other hand, there's no one specific dish that I hate or something. I don't especially enjoy corn in salads, neither I like sugar on my tea or coffee (I'd rather sweeten it with milk). But I'm not allergic to any ingredients and I don't find any plate disgusting, so I can eat at anybody's mama's home without having a bad time. And that's great for every first time having dinner with your couple's parents.
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Meu prato favorito
Meu prato favorito se chama Spätzle. É um tipo de massa que vem do sul da Alemanha. Os ingredientes são farinha, água e ovos. Nós comemos com lentilhas ou em uma sopa chamada Gaisburger Marsch.
Além disso, temos um prato chamado Maultaschen. É um tipo de massa também, mas parece um grande ravióli. Esse prato foi inventado na idade média porque naquela época a igreja proibia comer carne às sextas-feiras. Por causa disso, as pessoas escondiam a carne dentro da massa.
Eu não gosto de peixe ou algum animal que vem da agua. Eu não gosto do gosto de beringelas e zuccinas também.
April 4, 2021
Food? - Day 4
I'm not really fond of eating so this question especially hard for me to answer. Also considering I don't have appetite recently, it is hard to come up with one. I like them equally? Howewer, I really like my brother's hamburger. Unlike me, he likes to be in kitchen and he is very good at it.
There are ton of I don't like to eat. I guess, leek would be first among the things I don't like to eat. I don't know why but I really doesn't like leek.
April 4, 2021
れんしゅう
Ｑ：かさはいくらですか。
Ａ：このかさは1200えんですよ。
Ｑ：それはなんですか。
Ａ：これはとけいです。
Ｑ：じゃあ、しんぶんじゃないですね。
Ａ：そうです。
Ｑ：あれはなんですか。
Ａ：あれはぎんこうです。
Ｑ：このペーは290えんです
Ａ：あのコンピュートは68000えんです。
Ｑ：そのノートは3500えんです。
Ｑ：すみません。あのジーンズはいくらですか。
Ａ：あのジーンズは5700えんです。
Ｑ：たかいです。そのほんはいくらですか。
Ａ：このほんは2600えんです。
Ｑ：じゃあ、そのほんください。
Ａ：どうぞ。
Ｑ：すみません。トイレはどこですか。
Ａ：トイレはここですよ。
Ｑ：ありがとうございます。
Ｑ：それはだれのえいごのほんですか。
Ａ：そのえいごのほんはたけしさんのえいごのほんですね。
Ｑ：このＴシャツはメアリーさんのＴシャツですか。
Ａ：いいえ。
Ｑ：じゃあ、だれのＴシャツですか。
Ａ：それはわたしのＴシャツですよ。
Ｑ：メアリーさんは２ねんせいです。まさとさんも２ねんせいです。
Ａ：ロバートさんは22さいです。わたしも22さいです。
Ｑ：これはなんですか。
Ａ：それはこうちゃです。
Ｑ：これはなんですか。
Ａ：それはサラダです。
Ｑ：おいしですか。
Ａ：おいしいじゃないです。パスタはおいしいです。
Ｑ：じゃあ、パスタおねがいします。
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Lemon pie and roast
I'll start with my least favorite food: roast. Around 2 years ago I felt a bad taste, that disgust gradually advanced. I don't know why but It happened.
It was like my body said "Nope". Now even if I try to eat meat (turkey, chicken, pig or bovine) I get a terrible headache and nauseas. I can only eat them with a sandwich or another things (in a sauce for example).
My favorite food is lemon pie, I really love this dessert. So sweet and acid at the same time. Every time I go to a cafe I ask for it, unfortunately they usually don't have lemon pie or it's terrible. Many times I ate lemon pies so nasty and old. But I paid for it and I don't want to waste food or money, so I ate them anyways.
But if it's a lunch, lasagna is wonderful for me. It can have vegetals, two types of sauce, cheese, literally whatever you want to eat. It's like a tower of tasty things.
Talking about sauces, I really love white sauce. Spaguettis with white sauce, mushrooms and chives. It's so simple and nice.
I don't want to write so much today because I must to study. It's 13:56, lunch will be ready soon.
Honestly, I feel so clumsy when I read what I wrote.
I say to myself "come on, you can read pretty well. Where's your vocabulary?"
This is so poor, redundant and simple. I feel a bit pity.
April 4, 2021
4.4.21: Mon plat préféré
Mon aliment préféré et essentiel est le pain. Pas n'importe quel pain, mais du pain noir allemand. J'aime bien aussi manger le pain blanc comme la baguette, mais pour moi rien n'est aussi savoureux que le vrai pain allemand. Il y a des étrangères qu'ils pensent que le pain allemand est trop dur, mais pour moi un pain allemand frais avec du beurre est la perfection. Quand je vivais à l'étranger, j'ai souvent rêvait du pain allemand. Dans mon rêve, j'ai souvent trouvé une boulangerie allemande dans mon quartier et j'ai pensé : " Waouh, pourquoi je n'ai pas trouvé cet endroit plus tôt ? " Un jour, j'ai participé à une conférence pour les professeurs de langue allemande à Pékin. Il y avait une boulangerie qui a vendu du pain allemand. Le pain était encore chaud. Tous les Allemands ont porté le pain comme un bébé et avait un sourire béat sur leurs visages. Les Allemands sont connus pour aimer les pommes de terre, mais en fait, c'est le pain qui les rend heureux.
April 4, 2021
Day 1
I have been learning English for almost all my life, since I was very little, at kindergarten, but to be honest, I never paid too much attention to the classes, so, when I get graduated from school at age 16, I didn’t know much about the language, just basic stuff.
I always liked to watch tv series in English and movies, to hear music as Taylor Swift and I think that, through the years, I have acquired some vocabulary but, my biggest debilities is the grammar, I haven’t practice my grammar and for that my writing skills are not as good as I wanted it to be.
I am studying grammar now, I have quiet two months or so, I want to know English very well, to be able to write, speak and listening in a high understanding level.
My biggest chance, I believe is to not mix different tenses, as Present, Continuous and Past, is a little difficult for me now, because when I write, I think that one of my most commons mistakes is to star writing in Present and then move to Past abruptly.
I’m going to continuing practicing and improve!
April 4, 2021
Pâques.
Aujourd hui c'est Pâques! Au royaume uni, ou J'habite, ma famille célèbrent avec un barbecue dans le jardin de ma mère. Elle a un grand jardin cela parfait pour festivités. Traditionnellement nous mangeons rôti d’agneau, si nous avons ça avec les autre aliments de BBQ, comme des hamburgers, des 'hot dogs', de la quiche et du pain avec romarin (cette une étrange mélange des aliments n'est pas?). Tout les enfants jouent à un jeu s'appelle 'egg hunt', où les adults cacher oeufs aux chocolate dans le jardin et les enfants doivent trover eux. Normalement ma soeur fait un gateaux 'simnel', c'est tres traditional ici, et c'etais prefere de mon pere - mais mon pere a décédés il y a huit moins et nous étions trop triste pour gateaux simnel cette anee. Peut être l'année prochaine :)
April 4, 2021
Practica de gramática #1
- Él le cocinó un sandwich de queso y se lo trajo la semana pasada.
- Yo tenía que les escribo una nota y se lo mando anoche.
- El estudiante le pintó la bicicleta de gris y se lo dio ayer.
- La conductora le limpio las llaves y se las pone sobre la mesa del garaje.
- Pedro no ha se compró estos libros todavía.
- Mientras mi hermano comería el pastel de zanahoria, mis padres leerían los libros maravillosos.
- De niño, yo compartía mis juguetes con mi hermano.
- Había dos payasos en el armario grande en la película.
- Los estudiantes primero estudian por el examen y luego van a el restaurante para comian.
- Los estudiantes primero estudian para el examen y luego van al restaurante para comían.
- No me gusta está medicina porque es muy amarga.
- Ella siempre olvida de cambiar su vendaje.
- El médico necesita aprender muchos cosas.
- El niño odia mucho la sangre.
- El pelo de la mujer es muy hermoso.
April 4, 2021
El Retorno de mi Compañera de Conversación
Ha pasado un largo rato desde la última vez que escribí una entrada española. Vamos a ver si todavía puedo hacerlo ;)
Hacía casi dos años, conocí a una mujer española en Hellotalk. Ella tiene una pasión por el íngles, y nos llevamos tan bien que intercambiamos los números de teléfono y charlamos en Whatsapp. No hablamos o enviamos mensajes cada día, pero conversamos al menos una vez por semana.
Hacía más de un Mes, paró de contestarme. Vale, no pude quejarme. Ella tiene su propia vida y las cosas suyas tienen la prioridad. Me preocupé un poco por su salud porque soy una persona nerviosa, pero ayer me envió una nueva mensaje :). Me alegro que ella esté sana y salva y que todavía tenga mi compañera de conversación.
Gracias por leer :)
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