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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Decision-making is critically important in people's lives whether it may be alone or with the help of others. Some people think that they can take rational decisions in major issues, while others believe that discussing the problem with others might bring better outcomes. I strongly think that taking others input while making an important decision plays a vital role in the end results than self-decisions. This is because others look at the problem from different perspectives and provide valuable suggestions, and because experienced individuals people can analyze the pros and cons of the issue.
First of all, I am inclined to believe that when making a crucial decision it is better to consider others contribution because they provide unbiased judgements. This means individuals when they are dealing with a situation their judgements are masked and unable to identify the accurate information, whereas others are not in that position so they will give a fair advise. For example, when I was majoring in pharmacology, I was in a relationship with my girlfriend it went well for a while. Later, she started involving in my personal matters. Therefore, I lost my personal space and had a hard time to resolve the issue so; we have separated apart for a while. Then, when I discussed with my friend about this conflict, he suggested that explaining the situation to her might help to reinforce our relationship. I thought staying apart might help but never thought of reviving it. However, with my friend’s advice, I expressed my views to her, and she understood the situation. Now, my girlfriend is transparent and happier with me.
Second of all, seeking other's advice in making important decision enables people to get a clear picture of the plan. This structured planning comes with practical experience and better analytical skills. Therefore, inputs from experienced people helps to analyze the situation and avoid risks rather than considering self judgements. For instance, when I was preparing for TOEFL iBT, I purchased an online application My Best Test to practice the tests. However, the test materials were not adequate enough to support my studies and application expired in a month. Then, I asked my friend about this application, she clearly stated that there are free applications for practicing TOEFL along with strategies. Thus, I came to know the importance of others in while taking major decisions.
In essence, I think people would benefit more when they seek advice from others while taking an important decision than making by themselves. This is because some people give new insights to the issue and evaluate the condition in an experienced approach.
Feb. 3, 2021
Wat is je favoriet eten?
Ik heb altijd houden van sushi. Ik vind het super lekker smaken. Er is iets met sushi dat heel interessant is, bijvoorbeeld de kunst van het maken van sushi. Toen ik naar Japan reisde, leerde ik dat in Japan een sushichef een sushi-opleiding moet volgen voordat hij sushichief wilt worden. De cursus duurt drie jaren. Als ik thuis sushi maak, vind ik het rollen van sushi erg moelijk omdat een zeewiervel gemakkelijk scheurt. En als ik veel ingredieten op de rol zet, is het is ook erg moelijk om te rollen. Dus ik vind sushi rollen een prachtige kunst. Je moet de exacte hoeveelheid rijst, komkommer, en vis weten die je op moet doen. Mijn favoriete soort van sushi zijn de California rollen. Ik zette vroeger vis op sushi maar sinds ik een vegetarier ben geworden, is mijn nieuwe soort is avocado rollen. Ik kan het elke dag eten. Vind je ook sushi leuk?
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STRANJAH
STRANJAH has unveiled his remix of SAINt JHN’s “Roses.”
The DJ & music educational content creator has posted a snippet of his rework of “Roses” on his Instagram Feb. 2.
In this released short video, viewers can enjoy a bleak drum'n'bass version of “Roses,” which has a very different tone from the original.
SAINt JHN’s 2016 weighty hip-hop track “Roses” shook up the dance music scene last year when it was remixed into a breezy house track by Imanbek. The remix version has attracted more than 100 million YouTube views.
STRANJAH’s “Roses” remix is available to stream for everyone via his SoundCloud.
Feb. 3, 2021
Sume
Sume ("Onde?") é uma banda de rock de Groenlândia. O grupo se encontrou em Dinamarca, em um campus universitário. Começam a cantar em Groenlandês. A banda usou a música para chamar atenção à vida quotidiana na Groenlândia. Havia uma necessidade de reformo. Seu primeiro album foi "Sumut," ou "Para onde?"
Além da música, foi um tempo de mudanças rápidas. Groênlandia votou para autonomia.
O Sume tornou-se famoso. Em 2014, foi lançado um filme contando a história da banda.
Feb. 3, 2021
Adults doing exercise
"According to most doctors, adults need thirty minutes of physical activity at least five days a week to be healthy. However, most adults do not get this recommended amount of exercise. What can be done to help people get the exercise they need? Give examples to support your answer"
Exercise is one of the most important things in the people's life. Not only help to maintain physically healthy, but also help to be mentally relaxed. This physical activity can give them a lot of benefits, that I strongly support it. Some ways can help adults to get exercise understanding the benefits of doing exercise and writing down on a whiteboard to help remembering it.
My principal reason is that the physical activity helps to body to be with a huge energy, after that people had finished doing the exercises. This behaviour, people need to understand this benefit in their bodies during the time-work. It considerably count on a great advantage to them. I remember when I started doing some exercises at gym. The first week, it always is the worst; but after that, I could feel how my body gained this extra energy that I needed it, and it was really helpful in my diary activities.
Secondly, people may write down a small exercise schedule per week, for example, on a whiteboard or in a calender. It can help them to remember doing the exercises that they need it. Maybe, this habit could be easily forgotten, but if people see the schedule and remember doing it every day, I will surely they can achieve their goals that it is doing enough amount of exercise. A good example of this idea is my cousin. She has her own schedule on the whiteboard, and she can easily remember any activity or event that she has to do.
In conclusion, adults should be aware of exercise they need and look for some ways that can help them to remember it.
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Feb. 2, 2021
El cliffhanger
Los cliffhangers, los hemos experimentado todos nosotros. No me cuesta entender mis sentimientos de ellos. Aunque sé que se usan para construir tensión, los odio. También sé que es irracional que odie una técnica, pero no cambia mis sentimientos. Opino que es una idea asombrosa, sino usada demasiada. Un ejemplo excelente es las películas de Marvel (y su competencia). Los llevan usados en casi cada una de sus películas. Es tan popular esta moda, que ahora el público los espera.
Incluso los tienen las series populares en televisión. Entiendo la razón de que se usa al fin de una temperada. Aún así, no me gusta, especialmente cuando no está seguro de que regrese la serie. Eso es cómo lo del fin de la serie Agent Carter sucede. Al fin de temporada dos, lo mataron un personaje principal, pero nunca era una temporada tres. Aunque para ser justo, si se incluyó otro personaje principal en otra serie de Marvel, pero eso no es el punto. Cuando ocurre algo significativo en una serie al fin de temporada, les alienta a seguir mirando la serie a los fanáticos. Sin embargo, si la renovación no es asegurada, les puede salir desilusionados.
Al fin y al cabo, el cliffhanger es una técnica muy antigua, y aún se usa en nuestros días por una buena razón. A pesar de esto, deseo que se use mejor, y que su meta no sea tan clara.
Dos oraciones con "por mucho/más que".
1. Por más que me rogaras, no vas a alentarme a hacerlo.
2. Por mucho que me fascinara, no iré a allí nunca.
Feb. 2, 2021
Overnight Stay At The Desert
I will never forget the night I spent at the Sahara. When I was twenty years old, I visited Morocco and Spain with my friend of high school for two weeks. (I think that "visit" doesn't fit with this sentence, but "spend the time" has already used in the previous sentence.)
We were really looking forward to joining the desert tour from marrākish, Morocco. It takes three days by bus to arrive at the desert. During the bus trip, I got upset that some couples often kissed each other. I wondered why they can be indifferent to others since people must feel embarrassed and aren't likely to kiss in front of others in Japan.
The night has come soon after we arrived at the Sahara.We enjoyed a dinner and sounds of ethnic instruments. Then, tour guides laid out everyone's betting directly on the ground. We can look upon the stary sky while lying on the bed.
I got acquainted with the dutch couple during the tour. They let me know that the Sahara is popular as a honeymoon destination among European people.
Feb. 2, 2021
Sentences 009: Cryptos, hype, invest, loose
Money chasers turn out thousands of fake articles about obscure crypto currencies every week to lure gullible people to invest.
He invested 200 thousand pound sterling in Bitcoin without batting an eyelid.
The downfall of this crypto currency was an accident waiting to happen.
Feb. 2, 2021
Japanischer Rap
Ich höre Rap selten, aber ich habe eine japanische Rap Playlist gefunden und fand es wirklich gut. Ich glaube der Beat ist eher wie Hip-Hop als Rap, was einem komischen Gefühl der Nostalgie bringt. Außerdem, ich verstehe gar nichts was sie sagen und deshalb kann ich nicht den Text nicht mögen. Eine Gruppe insbesondere die mir gefällt ist Buddha Brand, ihr Lied "人間発電所", was übersetzt bedeutet "menschliches Kraftwerk" ist wirklich toll,"天運我に有り" (Es ist im Himmel) auch. Ich habe sogar Übersetzung der Texte gesucht, aber den originell Sinn ist etwa verloren.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ii-_EtWBVSM&t
Feb. 2, 2021
aufschieben
Ist aufschieben die beste deutsche Übersetzung von ,,Procrastinate" ? Also schiebe ich jetzt alles auf, das ich tun soll.
Ich erkläre mir ein bisschen. Ich habe eine mündliche Prüfung in 2 Wochen und es geht um Geschichte, ich habe schon alles gelesen und sollte den Inhalt sehr gut kennen. Aber ich fühle mich sehr nervös und vermeide es zu lernen. Vielleicht das ergibt keinen Sinn, aber die Probleme zu vermeiden ist eigentlich einen sehr bekannten Abwehrmechanismus. Ich denke, dass vielleicht es besser ist, wenn ich nur ein bisschen täglich lese und dann mir selbst fragen, was ich gelernt habe. Diese ganze Situation ist aber sehr nervig. Ich drücke mir die Daumen.
Feb. 2, 2021
der beste Platz zum übernachten
Ich möchte in ein Hotel in Yucatán übernachten. Vielleicht gibt es so viele luxuriös und berühmt hotels in die Welt aber für mich was können besser sind, das Natur, Geschichte, Maya architektonische Ruinen, unterirdische Cenoten, Dschungel und mexikanisches Essen.
In Yucatán gibt es so viele "Haciendas", Haciendas sind großen Bauernhöfe aus der spanischen kolonialzeit in Mexiko. Für mich ein Hacienda hotel ist der beste Plazt zum übernachten.
Feb. 2, 2021
Mehr Übungen mit voran
Gestern hat mir laoan den Unterschied zwischen die Verben "vorankommen" und "vorangehen" erklärt. Deshalb will ich im heutigen Beitrag diese zwei Verben weiter üben:
"Endlich ging durch die Unterstützung der Regierung das ursprüngliche Projekt voran"
"Rolf konnte wegen des Stromausfalls nicht mehr in seinen Folien vorankommen"
"Die Doktorarbeit meines Cousins ist zum Glück relativ gut vorangegangen"
"Beim Deutschlernen komme ich jeden Tag gut voran"
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Pasé veinte cinco minutos enseñar el maestro inglés Mandarín, que aprendió Mandarín durante un mes, pero su pronunciación es muy fabulosa. Yo hablé mucho con él porque está aprendiendo tradicional Mandarín y tuvo muchos amigos Taiwanés. Es raro encontrar a alguien que aprender tradicional Mandarín.
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Mes Amies
Aujourd'hui je vous parlerez des mes amies. Elles méritent la reconaissance pour tous qu'elles font pour moi et pour toujours élever mon esprit aux jours sombres. Je suis reconnaissante qu'elles me font rire dans les leçons ennuyeux et qu'elles m'aident avec des sujets dificiles. Elles ont des bonnes qualités comme être attentives, travailleures, gentilles et marantes.
C'est mon premier text sur LangCorrect donc j'espère que c'était amusant à lire.
Feb. 2, 2021
Un matin
Bonjour!
Pour commencer le jour, je préfère de pas utiliser mon smartphone avant de me sentir moins timide. J’aime cette tactique parce que ça me donne la chance d’un jour plus actif et concentré.
Donc, après m’avoir levée, je vais dehors pour quelques minutes. J’aime l’air frais au début d’un jour!
Après, je fais le petit-déjeuner avec ma famille et nous mangeons ensemble.
C’est ce que je peux dire au sujet de mon matin normale.
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Sätze mit 'werden'
Es ist meiner Meinung nach sehr wichtig, Fremdsprachen zu lernen.
1. Als ich jünger war, wollte ich eine Meeresbiologin werden.
2. Ich möchte eine mehr geduldige Person werden.
3. Sie wird eine bessere Schwester.
4. Wenn er groß ist, möchte er ein Lehrer werden.
5. Niemand will ein Artz nicht mehr werden.
6. Wenn ich das gesagt habe, wird sie sehr wütend.
7. Ich musste nach Hause gehen, weil ich sehr müde wurde.
8. Ich werde eine bessere Person werden.
9. Er wurde ein Friseur, als er nur 16 Jahre alt war.
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