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Als ich herausgefunden habe, dass ich schwul bin.
Die Geschichte von "Raus aus Åmål" ist so süß! Besonders an dieser Zeit (vor 20 Jahren) war die Szene, in der sie Händchen haltend aus dem Klo herauskommen, so süß und bedeutungsvoll... Nun ja, ich glaube, es hängt vielleicht von der Person ab... Ich persönlich hatte viele Schwierigkeiten. Es war gar nicht einfach, als ich bemerkt habe, dass ich auf Männer stehe. Am Anfang habe ich versucht, mich selbst zu betrügen, aber ich war am Boden zerstört, als ich endlich gemerkt hatte, dass ich auf jeden Fall lieber einen Mann küssen wollte. Ich hatte eine katholische Erziehung und ich erinnere mich sehr gut daran, als ich wortwörtlich am Boden in meinem Zimmer war und geweint habe. Ich habe Gott gefragt: Warum ich?
Es war ein langer und komplizierter Vorgang, bis ich damit klargekommen bin. Vielleicht deshalb waren bzw. sind Filme wie "Raus aus Åmål" so wichtig für mich und haben mich so viel berührt. Wenn du aber einen Film mit Männern sehen will, empfehle ich dir:
https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heute_gehe_ich_allein_nach_Hause
Versuch auf Netflix ihn zu suchen. Liest aber die Handlung nicht, oder nicht die ganze Handlung, hehe.
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May 11, 2021
Writing: Invention
In today's fast-paced world, the ability of invention is needed in all fields. The importance of invention is demonstrated in the following aspects.
First, invention would particularly affect the worlds of finance and commerce, where throwing up a sign with invention is seen as a trendy way of grabbing potential customers' attention. Because of the pursuit of creative products, many people believe that having creativity is a prerequisite for achieving success. Second, invention can bring the vitality and competitiveness, both individually and as a group. Creativity allows individuals to find their value; it also brings new jobs to companies.
Getting an invention requires more than just a good idea. After the idea is born, you need to be confident that your idea will stand out from the rest, be knowledgeable about how to protect it, and you need to know your target market inside out. Get advice from lots of different people – not just one. Be hard-headed and committed – you have to be seriously passionate to go all the way. You will bring people with you if you are, it is infectious.
May 11, 2021
Descriva il sistema scolastico australiano
*Ho scritto questo tardi quindi ci sarà molti errori. :(
Il sistema scolastica australiano è molto diverso rispetto al sistema scolastica italiano. Il nostro sistema scolastica in Australia è similmente divisa nelle quattro parte. Sono asilo nido, la scuola primaria, la scuola superiore e poi “Tafe” o Università.
In Australia, Asilo Nido è obbligatoria e è per i ragazzi dai 3 al 5 anni. Non c’è un corso educazione particolare che i ragazzi devono a seguire, quindi è considerato di essere un ambiente più rilassato. Non c’è molto enfasi da imparare i contenuti.
La scuola primaria inizia a “Prep” ad anno 6, dove i ragazzi dai 5 a 12 anni frequentano. È obbligatoria, e c’è enfasi da imparare, dove gli studenti seguono un progetto educativo non come l’asilo nido.
La scuola superiore inizia a 13 ai 18 anni, e continua da anno 7 a anno 12. Non come in Italia, non ci sono le scuole superiori specializzate. Le materie sono insegnanti ugualmente e non c’è enfasi su le materie particolare. Gli studenti scelgono le materie che vogliono (di solito 6), tenendo presente che l’inglese è obbligatoria. Simile a Italia, gli studenti devono sostenere un esame per il loro accesso all’università simile all’esame di maturità.
Però l’esame sono diverso in Australia. Nell’anno 11, lo studente inizierà il loro corso educativo (si chiama VCE) sulle loro materie scelte. Al fine di anno 12, lo studente manterrà l’esame finale e il più importante. I voti sono combinati per dare un “rango” dove gli studenti sono classificati contro l’altra. In Italia si ha un vuoto di 100, in Australia, si ha un “rango”.
Come in Italia, non è obbligatoria per completare la scuola superiore. Uno studente può decidere “ad abbandonare” se si ha 16 anni (di solito anno 10).
Una volta che ha finito la scuola superiore, non è obbligatoria a frequentare all’Università. È popolare di prendere un anno sabbatico prima di Università. TAFE è un’opizione simile ai istituti.
May 11, 2021
我生活的故事，小時候
我的親生媽媽還是十五歳生出了我。
在同時，我親生爸爸還是十八歳。
我親生媽媽真愛過我親生爸爸。
我親生爸爸真愛過我親生媽媽。
但是我親生爸爸入伍成美國空軍，所以他沒辦法陪我親生媽媽，因為他需要搬家去得克薩斯州。
我親生父母都是愛荷華州人。
我親生媽媽很愛喝啤酒。
她小侍候開始喝酒。
她的爸媽覺得給孩子們在家里喝酒比較好因為這懩會嚷他們不要找别地方可以喝酒。
但是就穰孩子們喜歡 喝酒。
我親生媽媽有哮喘，還有喝酒就加劇她的哮喘。
我還是只有兩歳時，我親生媽媽屈服於一個大哮喘發作。
她蕟生營養狀態，然後她的爸媽決定關閉生活支持。
她1993年06月13號死了。
我1993年06月16號蕟生三歳。
入伍 ： Rùwǔ ： enlist
美國空軍 : Měiguó kōngjūn : US Air Force
得克薩斯州 ： Dékèsàsī zhōu ： Texas
愛荷華州 ： Ài hé huá zhōu ： Iowa
哮喘 : Xiāochuǎn : asthma
加劇 : Jiājù : exacerbate
屈服於 : Qūfú yú : succumbed to
哮喘發作 ： Xiāochuǎn fāzuò ： asthma attack
營養狀態 : Yíngyǎng zhuàngtài : vegetative state
決定關閉生活支持 : Juédìng guānbì shēnghuó zhīchí : decided to turn off life support
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May 11, 2021
Quoting from the Alchemist
I just finished reading the Alchemist.
I really like the book, so I have read it third times.
Every time I read it, I feed impressions from different sentences.
At this time, I want to quote this part.
"Before a dream is realized, the Soul of the World tests everything that was learned along the way."
...
"Every search begins with beginner's luck. And every search ends with the victor's being severely tested"
Always keep in mind that there is learning at the end of every test.
May 11, 2021
Интервью на русском [часть 1].
- Всем привет! Сегодня я буду разговаривать с Анной. Анна из Испании, и она изучает русский язык. Привет Анна!
- Привет!
- Анна, расскажи, пожалуйста, немного о себе.
- Меня зовут Анна, и, как вы уже знаете, я из Испании и живу в Касересе. Я люблю изучать русский язык переводя, особенно видео на ютубе.
- Скажи, пожалуйста, как давно ты уже изучаешь русский язык?
- Я учу этот язык с 2015 лет, но это не было серьёзно. Я только захотела знать как читать и писать на русском, а потом этого, я решила учить основные фразы, и в этот момент, я узнала, что русский очень красивый язык, и пыталась учить дальше, но из-за школа, я должна была сделать паузу. Каждый лето, после школы, делаю какой-то вызов, где учу почти каждый день 4-8 часов. Благодаря этому, мой прогресс увеличивается, вместо того, чтобы застрять.
- Хорошо. А почему ты стала изучать этот язык?
- Это была чистая жертва. С детства, я любила учить иностранные языки, но, кроме английского, я никогда их изучала серьёзно. В 2014, я начала играть игру называется Дота 2. Там были много русских людей, и они не говорили по-английски. Я захотела знать, что они мне сказали, и решила учить как читать, так что я смогла уложить текст в переводчик.
- Здорово! Скажи, пожалуйста, трудно тебе изучать русский язык?
- Да, очень.
- Какие трудности вызывает изучение русского?
- Падежи, глаголы движения, некоторые слова очень длинные, неправильное произношение, грамматика... Как видите, много всего.
- Я думаю, у тебя всё получится.
May 11, 2021
Automation and AI won’t necessarily displace people
I don't agree. For some simple and basic jobs, robots can completely replace people, and the cost is lower. For example, toll stations on expressways, because automatic vehicle identification technology leads to the birth of etc, so there are many fewer artificial channels, leading to the rise of the unemployment rate, because there may be the risk of finding the wrong money in the first place, Besides, ETC can not work for 24 hours，but people can't.
This phenomenon shows that automation and AI are gradually replacing people, so in order not to be replaced, as a freshman, I will strive to improve my competitive barriers and make myself the one and only company that I can not do without. On the other hand, I would be more inclined to brainwork than simple and repetitive work, such as design.
May 11, 2021
여성도 교육 받을 권리가 있다
최근에 충격적인 뉴스 기사를 읽었다. 아프가니스탄에서 발생한 폭탄 테러에 대한 기사였는데, 여성들을 표적으로 삼아 가한 것이었다. 아프가니스탄 가불에서 이슬람 원리주의 단체가 여성들이 교육을 받는 것을 막기 위한 소행이었다. 여학생들이 하교할 때쯤 학교 주변에서 폭탄을 폭발 시켜 53명을 살인했다. 부상자도 적지 않았다.
이 사건에 대한 기사를 처음 읽었을 때 마음이 여러 차원에서 아팠다. 같은 인간으로서 아이들과 또 다른 죄가 없는 사람들이 그런 극단적이고 무서운 일을 겪게 돼서 참 슬프다. 아이들을 가르치는 선생님으로서 교육을 받는 죄가 아닌 죄로 어린이들이 목숨을 잃게 돼서 또 마음이 아프다. 그리고 여자로서 여성들이 교육을 받는 것을 아이들을 살해할 정도로 차별적이고 고약한 사람이 2021년에도 존재하고 있다는 사실에 분노가 터진다.
여성도 교육을 받을 권리가 있다. 우리는 남자와 똑같이 교육을 받아서 우리 미래를 더 밝게 만들 권리가 있다. 이런 테러를 저지른 사람들이 여성의 힘을 무서워하는 겁쟁이일 뿐이다.
May 11, 2021
About Ending my Days off
I've been enjoying two weeks off from work, and I have been relaxing. Since there isn't much to do because of Covid19 restrictions, I haven't been able to travel. That's why I've stayed in my province all fifteen days long, and I've found out that you don't need to go far from home to have a really good time.
I've read a lot, I've gone to cool restaurants, and I've practiced yoga and weight training. And best of all, I've hung out with friends and family without constantly needing to keep an eye on my watch. When you are bound to a timeshift, you can't be truly free. It's a pity that working is mandatory in order to pay bills. But I guess that working so hard makes us value our spare time even more.
Tomorrow I'm getting back to work, so freedom is over. I will try to make time to keep on writing and correcting on LangCorrect. I think finding a way to enjoy ourselves is healthy, even though society is always striving to make it all about our job. Don't let it success!
May 11, 2021
Spieghi nel dettaglio il funzionamento dei debiti formativi
I debiti formativi è considerato quando uno studente ha tre materie insufficienze alla fine dell’anno che si ritiene può superare. Il debito verrà superato se lo studente frequente i corsi estivi su loro materie e alla fine sostiene un esame da recuperare di loro all’inizio dell’anno scolastico successivo.
Se uno studente ha tre o il più materie insufficienze, lo studente verrà bocciato e dovrà ripetere lo stesso anno scolastico.
May 11, 2021
Toco Toucans
Toco toucans are originated in South America and called "Jewel of the Amazon" because of their big and vivid orange bill.
At a zoo in Japan, it turned out that a pair of toco toucans were both females after the zoo had tried breeding for five years. The zoo bought two toco toucans, Toto and Poko, as a pair of male and female. Toto was regarded as male because she was bigger than Poko. In addition, Toto courted Poko and gave her feed.
Toco toucans lay two to four eggs at once. However, Poko laid six eggs that are all unfertilized. Recording the inside of the birdhouse, Toto seemed to lay eggs. Finally, it was proved by DNA profiling that Toto is female.
May 11, 2021
Übungen mit schwierigen Verben
Mit der Zeit spürt man, wie die Leidenschaft erlischt.
Sei bitte vorsichtig, damit du mit deinen Füßen nicht die Blumen zertrittst.
Dieses Unternehmen wirbt regelmäßig hochqualifizierte Arbeitskräfte anderer Firmen an.
An dieser Stelle quellt Wasser aus der Erde. Wir haben die Quelle vor Kurzem entdeckt.
Mein Chef erwartet eine baldige Entscheidung. Er dringt auf eine schnelle Entscheidung.
May 11, 2021
How embarrassing
It was during the summer break. I was spending most of my free time with my friend playing and driving our bikes. We decided to mark this summer break with some new adventure.
I suggested my friend going to the movies. Everybody liked that idea and I was very excited. That morning I was beautifully dressed from head to toe, washed my teeth, made my hair, but my dad's perfume, and went to the movies with my mum.
She left me there and I went to the mall, jumping with happiness. I met my friend there and we all went to the movies. On the way I saw a beautiful girl from our school, I was staring at her and didn't even notice that there was a big glass door in from of me.
I was looking only at her all the time and then BUM! The next thing I remember is that I'm lying on the floor while all my friends are laughing at me. The beautiful girl approached me and helped me get up. She introduced herself but I was still really ashamed.
My big adventure turned into a nightmare but I still got to meet my new sympathy.
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Donner de l'argent aux chômeurs est-il contre-productif?
Pour moi, c'est une question difficile. D'un côté, je pense qu'un pays ne devrait pas laisser ses citoyens avoir faim; d'un autre, donner trop de l'argent peut encourager les gens de ne pas travailler.
Le plus difficile de ce problème est les décisions qui marchent pour le population générale ne marchent pas nécessairement pour les cas particuliers. Et quand on parle d'un pays de millions de citoyens, il y a beaucoup des cas particuliers. Donc, une solution conçue pour l'agrégat pourrait vraiment être horrible pour les cas individuels qui font l'agrégat!
C'est pourquoi, par exemple, on entends aux États-Unis des restaurateurs qui ont du mal à trouver des travailleurs. J'ai lu que c'est parce que le gouvernement donne plus de l'argent que ce que les gens pourrait gagner en travaillant dans un restaurant. (Bien sûr, cela peut aussi vouloir dire que l'économie de la restauration aux USA ne marche pas bien!)
May 11, 2021
Una visita al oftalmólogo
Hoy fui al oftalmólogo para hacer mi examen anual. Primero, tuve que revisar y firmar unos documentos. Luego, la asistente midió la presión y sacó unas fotos del interior del ojo.
Cuando el doctor estaba listo, me preguntó si tenía alguna queja o sentía algún dolor en los ojos. Le dije que no y que mis ojos no me parecían tan secos ahora que llevo gafas más a menudo que las lentillas.
Al final, la graduación ha cambiado un poco. En un ojo ha empeorado y en el otro ha mejorado. Ahora me toca elegir un estilo de montura para mis nuevas gafas.
May 11, 2021
May 11, 2021
Los otros idiomas que he tratado de aprender
El español es el idioma que he estudiado por el período de tiempo más largo. Empecé cuando tenía doce años, estudié al extranjero en España donde viví con una familia española, y continué tomar clases hasta que me gradué de la universidad. Hoy en día intento mantener mis habilidades para que pueda usar el idioma cuando viaje y en mi propio país que tiene muchos hispanohablantes.
Traté de aprender japonés durante el colegio, algunos años después de que empecé a aprender español. Lo hice a causa de mi fascinación con la cultura, los medios de comunicaciones (sí, el anime), y la comida. Es muy diferente que el español a causa de su gramática diferente y uso de símbolos en lugar de un alfabeto fonético. Era muy difícil y eventualmente paré de estudiarlo.
Tenía mucho tiempo libre a causa de la pandemia, y por eso empecé a estudiar alemán. Lo escogí porque es el idioma más hablado en Europa, mi familia viene de países que hablan alemán, y es parecido con inglés y español en algunos aspectos. Sin embargo, es muy intimidatorio empezar con un idioma nuevo cuando ya he alcanzado un nivel alto en español.
May 11, 2021
Journal
The Chinese rose is our city flower, and now it is in full bloom. It is so beautiful.
In summer, I think there should be an alternate weather between clear and cloudy. The air quality in our region is at a medium level in China, not too bad nor too good. But I think the air quality where you live must be the best.
Compared with other seasons, our summer is humid. If the clothes in the cabinet are not taken out to dry, they may be moldy. You may have heard of the mildewy rain season in China, that is, when Jiangnan plums are ripe, it is rainy and humid during this period.
I didn't expect you to go to so many places. Strictly speaking, I have not been abroad. I only visited Hong Kong and Macau once in 2010 or 2011. If it is now, I don’t even have the qualifications to go to Hong Kong and Macau, because the country now controls public officials very strictly. Unless there are immediate family members overseas and you need to visit them, you are not allowed to go abroad.
I checked the information and said that the maximum temperature of the cement pavement in summer can reach more than 80 degrees. In this way, the eggs can almost be cooked.
May 11, 2021
FIRE Movement
Financial Independence, Retire Early that is the meaning of FIRE.
30 years ago, when I start my first job.
The colleague sitting next to me already said the same thing.
I will retire at the age early 30 (our age was early 20) and travel the world…
I was young and especially stupid, so I believe that is my dream too!
Some years later we both working in other company.
I never contact him but I am sure he didn’t achieve his “dream”.
Me too!
30 years later, people just don’t change.
Same idea with a new “package”.
So, if you just step out school and start your first job.
I will tell you don’t follow “FIRE” is a wishful thinking!
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