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11. Den bästa saken som jag äger
Det är förmodligen min iPad. Jag köpte den av en vän i 2018 innan jag åkte till Grekland. Jag hade långt drömt att ha en iPad men hade inte pengarna för att köpa en. Men min vän hade en och ville köpa den nya 2019 iPad. Hon ville sälja hennes iPad som var inte alls gammal (hon köpte den i början 2018) men hon föredrog några karakteristiker av den nya. Hon sålde hennes iPad för mig för ett riktigt bra pris och jag kände mig så glad. Det är också den dyraste saken jag har. Med min iPad kan jag rita, läsa, studera, spela på Minecraft, spela videospel, etc. Det är den bästa enheten!
June 11, 2021
Day Eleven
My favorite property is a T-shirt. The T-shirt is indigo and made by a craftsman. The blue is deep and it is said that indigo dye works as an insect repellent. The T-shirt was quite expensive because it took time and effort to produce. However, the company's philosophy of this shirt is "We make clothes that can be used for 10 years.", which is antithesis for mass production and mass consumption society. I like to use one thing for a long time even though it's expensive. The indigo will change as time passes, and it'll make a special texture. It means the shirt turns to be unique for me.
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Mi libro especial
Mi cosa favorita que tengo es un libro específico. No recuerdo el nombre del libro, pero recuerdo que tiene un furro negro. Para ser honesto, nunca he leído este libro. Pero es mi cosa favorita que tengo porque era un regalo de mi profesor favorito en la escuela. Este profesor inspiró a mi y me ayudó mucho. Antes de estar en su clase de psicología no me gustó la escuela por muchas razones, pero su clase era fenomenal y por eso me gustó la escuela otra vez. Él siempre será mi modelo a seguir.
Él me regaló este libro durante los últimos días de la escuela. Adentro del furro está un mensaje por él y el mensaje es muy amable. Cuando lo recibí de él, no podría creerlo. Es el mejor regalo que he recibido en mi vida.
Siempre llevo el libro conmigo cuando viajo. Ahora es mi “amuleto de la suerte”. Y espero que vaya a leerlo eventualmente… 😊
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Fremdsprachen im kindergarten
Das Thema " Fremdsprachen im kindergarten" finde ich sehr interessant,deshalb möchte ich meine Meinung äusernd .Ich stimme Ahlams Meinung nicht zu ,weil die kindern schnell lernen können und das kling gut . Die kindern werden ein besser zukunft ,wenn fermdsprache lernen z.B können sie zukunft viele arbeit finden und um welt einfach verreisen .Obwohl die kindern waren ,wird neue fremdsprachen sein ,ist gut .auf anderseites können sie Muttersprache verlassen und auch kein Tätigkeit machen ,weil kein zeit haben werden und das fuheren zu ,dass kinde in der kinderheit nicht fröhlich sind . Mein ehrliche meinung um dises Thema ist ,dass Eltern ihren kindern fremdsprache lernen sollen ,weil das Lösung für gut leben ist .
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Urlaub im Strand
Das Thema " Urlaub im Strand " finde ich sehr interessant ,deshalb möchte ich meine Meinung äusern.Ich stimme Ahlams Meinung zu,weil man alle Urlaub im strand gehen soll ,weil das stress des arbeits verlessen und das ist gut. Wir weißen ,dass Urlaub im Strand viele Aktivität und das ist auch gut für unsere gesundheit ,z.B kann man im viele zeit sport triniert andererseites verliert viele zeit und kann nicht andere Tätigkeit machen und das nicht gut.Mein ehrliche Meinung ist ,dass man sein Urlaun schwört zu mehr Tätigkeit, und ich denke ,dass keine neue Ahnung
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Entschuldigen
Sehr geehrte Herr Schneider,
Ich möchte Ihnen schreiben,weil ich Ihnen bedanken bin.dass Sie mir geantwortet für deine Mietwohnung . Es tut mir wirklich leid ,aber dises termin passt mir nicht ,weil mein vater sehr krank ist und muss ich ihm in krankenhaus farhen.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Oumaima.
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Ausflug gemacht
Liebe Manal ,
Hallo Manal wie geht es dir? Ich hoffe ,dass du gut gesund bist .
Wie du weißt ,dass wir am wochenende mit freunden aus dem Deutschkurs einen Ausflug gemacht haben ,aber du hast nicht leide mit uns gekommt. Tätsichlich dises stadt wart sehr schön .es gibt dort viele sehenswüdigkeit und auch viele bekannte. Das war erste mal in meimem leben gern einen Ausflug,weil wir vile spaß gemacht haben und unsere freundins Ahlam war diese stadt beraten,weil sie ihr Elteren dort wohnen und sie diese stadt kennen. Ich möchte nächste woche auch besuchen ,obwohl ich viele arbeit habe ,aber Ausflug gefallt mir ,weil wir neue kultuer kennegelernen haben und neue person auch . Ich empfehle dich ,dass diese stadt besuchst ,weil ich weiß ,dass du sie gern wirdst und auch wirdst du deine stress verlassen .
Oumaima .
June 11, 2021
Die kinos sterben
Das thema "die kinos sterben" finde ich sehr interessant ,Deshalb möchte ich dazu äusern. Ich stimme jans Meinung zu,weil die kinos nicht schließen sollen ,weil das kino ein große rolle in unsere leben spielt . Es abbaut uns unsere stress und hat uns Spaß machen besonder kleinen kinder. Einseites das kino gebt uns viele information und die kindern dort lernen dort neue person kenne .andererseites das kino kostet Geld Man soll nur Die kultuerfilme dort sehen ,weil es andere filme nicht gut für uns und unsere kindern gibt. Mein ehrliche Meinung nach,dass man ins kino gehen soll ,weil das ist gut und kann man dort neue kultuer entdicken ,Deshalb sollen die kinos nicht sterben
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Ideal Correction, Input and Output
Trimming just seemingly redundant words is not for learners to improve. Understanding the thought behind or what they try to say and why they describe like so etc. is important.
Just correcting them to easier or more natural expressions is also not an ideal form. This is because learners want to use some specific expressions and to know more about those proper usages than those easier.
I bought a dictionary yesterday because I finally found a book worth paying to learn English thereby.
This book is based on corpus analysis, consists of comparatively highly frequent words and their colocations.
All the descriptions are written in English without translation into Japanese, priced at about 3700 yen (about 35 dollars).
I already have at least 12000 words as per the result of official vocabulary tests in Japan conducted in the Summer of 2019.
So, I might possibly reach the level of 15000 because I have continuously learned English through so-called authentic materials such as reading news for generally native speakers, which I love, not the text-like study.
My initial target when I started English was reading a thick book about religion which I favor without looking up a word in a dictionary, But I have largely gotten to manage to do so successfully. Then I became also accustomed to reading random stuff in news especially from one news publisher online based in Japan. But I never stick to staying in one place as I always did. Eternal evolution is needed.
The next target is to read rapidly as soon as possible on news, especially focused on those about individual stocks.
The speed is critical to input various information and to finally find out lucrative or fruitful information and as a by-product to secure time to use effectively for other purposes.
And I also have much chance of output using English thanks to the development of virtual society and borderless one, including this site we are. There is no reason not to use English as output for me because I spent much time on studying English, which could be wasteful without effective utilization.
That's why I added that dictionary as a powerful weaponry to my arsenal for the next prospects of my life battle.
I am certain that this dictionary will help me to be armed with more accuracy and naturality close to the native speakers.
Ultimately, I could go beyond them at least in some parts if I keep my study constantly and strenuously! (arbitrary delusion)
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Dia onze de junho - A Minha Coisa Favorita
A minha coisa favorita é uma câmara velha do filme.
De acordo com a superfície do câmara, produziu em 1970's.
Comprei-lo para uma loja na Internet quatro anos atrás.
Com isso, tenho de comprar os filmes a fim de tirar fotos.
Os filmes são muitos caros agora, mas eu quero tirar fotos para-a porque fotos do filme são mais lindos dos que fotos do digital.
Normalmente, eu tiro fotos para câmara do filme por a minha família, os meus amigos, coisas aleatorias eu vejo e numa viagem.
Tenho tirando milhares fotos do filme desde 2017, e estará tirar mais fotos do futuro.
*A pergunta: é câmara ou câmera?
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English novel_Mother and Uncle
Unlike my other friends, I don't have my father. I'm not sure why but I don't have him from the first.
" Mom, where is dad? I wonder why I don't have dad unlike my friends."
" Listen Jay, I couldn't even think about my life with a person, say, it's your dad. I know it's hard to understand now to you but probably, there is another chance to tell you."
Since then, I kept being quiet about it not to get mom recalled about what she had decided something before. The memory wouldn't be pleasant to her, I assume.
"Jay, one thing you need to know. Mom chose you and don't regret it. So, stretch your back and keep walking to the world like a man."
In fact, I'm not shrunk because I don't have dad. I understand there are a few more family types which are not the same as, so called 'a normal family' type. I sometimes think about the normal thing. Does the 'normal' means 'common'? Do you agree with it? I don't think so. I know we are living in the democratic capital world and it supports common society. So it is important to have public support in our time. The normal is to have support from the most people. But it is not the 100% support. There is a definite minority voice. Maybe, my mother and even my uncle would belong to the minor group.
Why my uncle? I think he is the most strong minority in the world. He also has a daughter but he doesn't have a wife. A divorce? No! He delivered his daughter. Do you think I'm kidding you? I'm serious, unfortunately. He gave a birth to his daughter. How it can be? He was a she originally. When he was a she, he felt something strange inside. After quite a while, he understood he was born to be a he and got a sex exchange surgery. But the surgery didn't give him a perfect transformation. He had a breast removal surgery so his appearance was closer to a man and with the help of male hormone, he looked like the more perfect man. But, he couldn't remove his womb inside. He appeared to live sometimes without thinking about it but he realized it when he was badly lonely on a day. Soon, he decided to make a family and started to seek sperms. One day, he, at last, could reach a helpful hand: a sperm bank. He instantly stopped jabbing of male hormone and tried to be a mom by taking care of his daughter so she didn't feel the empty of her mother. He was so happy when he looked at his daughter growing but some times he felt so sorry to his daughter since she had to bear some bias from the eyes in the village. His daughter became a small talker and a quieter. He worried about her and it's much painful for him to look at his daughter in the center of all the bias. He was okay when he got the surgery. He though it didn't matter how cold the eyes from the neighbor could be as it was more important to retrieve himself.
"Daddy, why I don't have mom?"
"Oh, Mirae, you have your aunt instead."
"Aunt can't be mom..."
"Of course but... there are many things you can't understand in the world. One day, I do hope I could tell you some."
The day was raining. Mirae's house was right opposite side from our house. She was looking at the outside from the window. I could see her feeling down with a sorrowful face via the window in my room. I suddenly felt I wanted to be with her and try to listen to what she was concerning. So I ran down to the first floor and snatched an umbrella from the holder then quickly crossed the street. Soon, I could arrive right below the window she was looking down. I tried to let her know I was standing there. She moved her eyes down and her eyes met my ones. I said "Would you like to come down? I want to be with you. I might be a good listener to you." she glanced down on me and disappeared from my sight. There was a stamping noise inside and the front door was open. We walked along the stepping stones leading to the back yard where a bench was under the roof. We sat down on the bench and an empty moment was filled with a silence for a while.
"What is wrong with you? You look unhappy!"
"Life can't always be happy and now it's the moment. That's all."
"May I ask what made you unhappy?"
"I don't have mom, you know."
"But you have dad instead."
"I envy you. You have mom instead."
"So you are sad?"
"No, it just hurts me. The eyes and lips from people, though now I'm aware where their whispers were originated from. It was because of him, my father."
"Do you mind letting me know some?"
"Later maybe."
"Okay, just call me if you need someone to talk to. Now, you look less unhappy at least."
I couldn't tell her about what I know about him, my uncle and her father. Mirae, one day, comes to know that her father was her mother once, though he was now her father. I know how hard she is. Even when I encountered the fact first time, I was also shocked and couldn't believe it.
"Sister, can't you be on my side even though all the people point a finger at me?"
"Can't you live just like the normal? I'm very confused and ..."
"Who decide the normal? So are you happy because you are normal? FrankIey saying, you are also an extraordinary person just like me, aren't you? I know I'm special but no one can blame on me as I'm the special."
"My case is acceptable but your case is obviously not! You were once my cute little sister. How I can accept you who want to be my brother in a day?"
"What's the difference between us? You know? I will have my baby. I'm seeking sperms in the bank. Now, same same!"
"Are you crazy?"
"Yeah, I already expected your that kind of reaction but... Okay, now I admit I'm the super special but I feel sad a little. You are the same as you in the younger age. There was a time I needed your tender eyes. It was only thing I wanted from you back then. But now we are the grown-ups. I thought you could understand me. You are the person, at least, living with your own will fighting against the eyes from the most who claim they are the normal. Hope you could understand me one day."
Since then, I realized I was the son of a Mr. unknown and my mother even didn't need to know. Now I understand why she said she 'CHOSE' me. I may try to find out the Mr. unknown but I don't want it as it could be considered that I blame my mother's selection. I'm truly on her side. I don't want to let her down in any way. For my aunt, no uncle, I tried to accept it as I thought it was a kind of mistake by God and it was just a thing that he wanted to recover the mistake. It was not his fault originally, you know. I don't understand why the same creatures push out a person because the one is made differently by God's mistake. I think people are the complex of bias and arrogance. They don't even know a tip of unfortunateness that comes in the nearer future of them. That is why we have to be humble so. By the way, how I can explain about this to Mirae?
My mom is a fighter against the world: the bias from company, communities where she belongs to. I know she is a strong-minded person. I believe that is why she made the decision so beforeㅡgiving a birth to me without the help of male, more correctly saying, without the physical help of male. It could be dispirited for males, I assume, as a boy. Perhaps she would be punished by God as she was dare to glance God's realm. No, she must be suffering the punishment since she has been taking care of meㅡthe seed of her suffering and her responsibility. Despite of all the bias, she has been living proudly by herself.
The night, mom and I were deep sleeping as much as we didn't know even someone broke in. As usual, mom was sleeping in her room in the 1st floor and I was sleeping in my room in the 2nd floor. On a sudden, I woke up from a strange noise in the 1st floor. I opened the door and staggered down rubbing my sleepy eyes. At the moment, I could heard a voice that I never heard before: "You poor lady, I know you like my thick and long bat one day!" Soon, I was freezing with fear but the voice quickly disappeared with a bang from the front door. I couldn't move at all but I worried about mother so I rushed to move my legs to her room. She sat down with a vacant look and tangled hair, and started to cry out soon after she found me. I went to her to hug her but mom hugged me tightly as I reached near her and said "It's nothing..nothing.. so you don't need to be scary, Jay." After a few days, I heard some about the noise on the night in my house: A suspicious shadow sneaked in her room and tried to donate his sperms to her without her consent. But it was failed due to her determined resistance. Since the night, mom frayed her nerve about home security. There are some people who want to force to beg consent. Maybe, they would have never consented or been consented. Why some can't even think there are always some others on their opposite side? I feel sometimes a difference means enemy and death. People have never agreed with some on the other side but they just kill or strongly or less strongly force the opponents to be on their side. Do you think I'm saying about old stuff in the middle age? It has not been changed anything since we started to live on earth.
"Mom! Thank you for choosing me!"
One morning after that event, I wanted to let mom know that I was earnestly on her side.
"Oh, what's the matter with you, son? What led you to that thinking?"
"I just want you to know I'm on your side, always."
"I'm sorry, Jay. Mom should have been careful to say that but happy to know that you seem to understand some."
"Don't worry, mom. I will protect you!"
"From what?"
"From the people on the other side."
"Jay, listen, mom is stronger than you think and mom will protect you from whatever. So please never say that again!"
"Mom, I'm also a man, though it will take some more time to fully take care of you!"
"Thank you, son...now let's have a breakfast then go to school."
Mom hurried to cut our talk and prepared some food. She seemed a bit embarrassed but I didn't really want to let her feel uncomfortable. Maybe, she would think that I should be stay in the young boy's world not in the man's world. I know taking beyond the borders is always to be difficult and even dangerous. Maybe, she doesn't want me to do that just like her as it's the hardest way to live on.
People carefully whispered behind mom and me since Mr. unknown wasn't with us. I don't know why mom doesn't leave this damn town and move to other one where nobody knows she selected a different way from the common like them. She was born and grown in this town so some could see her life partially but not entirelyㅡI know it's impossible to be fully understood by others or even by oneself. Mom was grown from a poor family. Grand ma and grand pa struggled to survive in the harsh world with their children so they didn't have much extra energy to take delicately care of their children. Mom was lonely even though her younger sister was with her. Just like her parents, she was not considerate that much. Unlike mom, her little sister sought her love always sticking to her, as if she needed to fill out her empty heart which wasn't filled with the love from her parents. But mom filled the lonely time with her own particular undauntedness by only focusing on her thoughts: for instance, escaping from the current life with family. She thought the only way to escape from the poor family was to marry with an ordinary man who had no worry about earning to live on so she tried to have a chance to meet several gentlemen. But there was a huge gap between her thoughts and the gentlemen's thoughts. They just wanted to steel her physical beauty but didn't want to marry with her. She was deeply frustrated as much as she was eatless and sleepless. After a certain hard time, one early morning, she moved her steps to the street and didn't come back to the house for quite a long time. But, on a sudden day, she came back to the house, with a different figure. Her parents and little sister were surprised at her figure. There was a baby inside herㅡit was me. Some awkward days passed and she was accepted again as the member in the family as before. Grand parents didn't ask anything about me inside her but took care of me very well as soon as I came out to the world, as if they compensated and comforted mom.
Knock knock!
"Who's there?"
"It's me..Jake."
"Come in."
"Sister, I'm worrying about Mirae."
"What's wrong with her?"
"She feels empty due to the absence of mother. Should I tell her about it?"
"Do you think Mirae would accept it?"
"She may not...Perhaps she would be in a big chaos in an instant.."
"I don't think it's not a good idea to tell the truth this time. Why don't you try to sound her out telling it as if it were not the case of you?"
"How do I do if Mirae thinks I'm a monster?"
"Jake, you can't lose your mind. You chose your own way and did it. Do you regret?"
"Not at all but I'm just worrying if my selection would hurt Mirae."
"You chose the different way from others and you bear with it anyway. Just take your responsibility!"
"What a good damn lesson for me....Okay..enough.."
"What do you want me to say then?"
"Gotta go!"
Bang!
To be continued..
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墨西哥三奶蛋糕
因為我的生日是下個禮拜三，所以兩個朋友明天要來我家跟我一起慶祝，吃生日晚餐。
我先覺得要一起去吃泰式料理，但是台灣現在有武漢肺炎，全國三級警戒延長至6月28日。
我好喜歡給我朋友吃真墨西哥飲料或美國料理，看他們的反應，所以我想要給他們吃墨西哥晚餐。
我自己做墨西哥捲餅皮，很好吃，很簡單。
昨晚自己做墨西哥三奶蛋糕。
天啊！怎麼作錯了啦？為什麼奇怪？
不是我記得的三奶蛋糕。
我昨晚用的食譜是墨西哥美國女生寫的。
因為她住在美國，所以她用cups、ounces、tablespoons、teaspoons、等等測量配料。
也是她說要用室內溫度蛋白，但是用冷的蛋白比較好在我的經驗中。
因為她說要用室內溫度，所以我用室內溫度的蛋白。
我今天想要再試試看一次，但是要用住在墨西哥的墨西哥人寫的食譜。
她會沒有美國的影響，也是她用毫升、克、等等。
我也要用冷到蛋白！
新的單字及忘了的單字：
慶祝：Qìngzhù：celebrate
幾級：X jí：level X
警戒：jǐngjiè：alert
延長：yáncháng：extended
至：zhì：to/到
反應：Fǎnyìng：reaction
食譜：Shípǔ：recipe
測量：Cèliáng：measure
配料：Pèiliào：ingredients
毫升：Háoshēng：millilitre
室內溫度：Shìnèi wēndù：room temperature
在我的經驗中：Zài wǒ de jīngyàn zhōng：in my experience
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日記（３）
今日はお絵描きクラブを行ったが、オンラインだった。先生はどうすれば、コミックのキャラクターを描き教えてくれた。とりあえず、描くの基本を勉強する必要がある。
天気はめちゃ寒い。この朝、起きたの前に颯と雨がふっていた。太陽が見えない。
新しいアプリをダウンロードした。アプリというはLearn Kanjiだ。漢字を学ぶのに役立つ。来年、日本語能力試験N4に合格したい。
私の夢は日本に住む。だから、日本語でペラペラになりたい。日本語は綺麗と思う。七年生の時、初めての日本語を勉強した。漢字は難しいが、本や漫画を読んだり、アニメを見たり、ゲームをしたりするので、楽しい。日本語の論理は説得力がある。そして、たくさん面白い言葉を勉強することができる。皆さん、日本語の何が好きだか？
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