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요즘은 보던 프로
요즘은 보던 좋은 프로가 빈센조입니다. 제가 오랫 동안 빈센조를 보고 있는데 아직 웃깁니다. 빈센조는 긴장감 넘치며 재미있기도 있어서, 오랫 동안 보도 즐거운 시간을 보냅니다. 지금까지 15화를 봐서 5화나 ('5화'를 어떻게 읽습니까? '오화' 아니면 '다섯화' 입니까?) 남으니까 너무 슬픕니다. 근데 제가 가장 좋아하는 부분들은 (my favourite parts) 나쁜 것을 있는 듯할 때, 그렇지만 주인공이 벌써 해결했고 복수를 세웠습니다. 이거는 너무 멋있고 똑똑합니다. 그리고 송중기가 맡았던 주인공 빈센조가 마피아 인데 좀 친절하고 아직 원숭이 듯이 장난꾸러깁니다.
Aug. 25, 2021
20/30 Le super-héro / la super-héroïne dans la vie réelle
Un super-héro ou une super-héroïne sont souvent des personnages qui n'apparaitent que dans les films. Ils ont des pouvoirs supérieurs ou des capacités hor du commun pour sauver le monde. Quand j'étais petite, je croyais toujours qu'un jour je serais rencontrer un ou une entre d'eux ou bien découvrirait que j’aie aussi ces pouvoirs spéciales. Malheureusement en grandissant, je ne croyais plus de ces contes de fées. Mais l'histoire de Spiderman français a changé mon point de vue.
Ce scène incroyable a été lieu en mai 2018, dans le XVIIIème arrondissement de Paris ou il y avait un petit garçon suspendant dans le vide en accrochant au balcon du 4ème étage d'un immeuble. C’était très dangereux très dangereux, et en même moment, un jeune homme a escaladé les quatre étages à mains nues en moins d'une minute et a attrapé le garçon pour le remettre en sécurité. Tout ça, ça m'a vraiment étonnée de voir cette performance digne de Spiderman ! Mais dans la vie ville, il n'était qu'un clandestin qui avait vu dans la misère, il a cependant monté de pouvoir extraordinaire.
Ça m'a rappelée un autre film : «les Indestructible IX ». Même c'était quand même une bande dessinée et les caractères avaient des capacités hor du commun, mais un de ses thèmes parlait le « super-pouvoir » de Maman. Il disait que même le papa avait des capacités hor du common, mais il n'a arrivé pas à gérer bien ses enfants quand la Maman était en mission. Je suis tout à fait d'accord pour dire que mamans soient les super-héroïnes dans la vie ville.
Au-delà de Mamans, je crois que en fait tout le monde peuvent devenir son propre super-héro parce que chaqu'un a son talent (même s'il est caché quelque part). L'auteur de «Winnie the Pooh» a dit : «Tu es plus courageux que tu crois, plus forte que tu te semble et plus intelligent que tu pense.» (You are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think.)
Aug. 25, 2021
Exercise
My friend invited me to run tonight. It had been a month since my last run, and my feet felt a little uncomfortable, I thought I wouldn't run more than 1.5 km. To my surprise, I ran 2.18 km in the end, which was the longest distance during the summer vacation. I couldn't remember what I was thinking about when I was running. Maybe thinking nothing helped me manage to run farther.
Besides, my feet didn't feel uncomfortable during and after my running, while my shoulder felt a little sore when I had run 2 km. But it felt better soon after I stopped.
I am going to swim tomorrow, which makes me feel free, so it is my favourite sport. After doing some high strength sports, such as runninng, playing basketball and swimming, I will become sleepy soon. Riding a bike can't make me feel tired amd sleepy, but it can make me feel pleasant because of the connection with nature. Hence, riding my bike more like an emotion exercise than a physical one. Therefore, we should do different kinds of exercise alternately.
Aug. 25, 2021
Hallo
Hallo freunds, ich komme aus Australien. Ich bin lernen Deutsche für vier wochen nuen.
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- Ich bin ein jung Mädchen das ist schlecht mit ihr Deustche. Ich habe Duolingo und YouTube zu hilfe. Sehr bisschen hilfe... Aber ich glaube es geht.
- Ich leibt in eins groß stadt in Australien. Es ist ein bisschen laut, aber es ist OK. Die stadt hat gut essen. Für mir, ich leibe das Schnitzel, sehr lecker mit Salat. Essen ist super, teuer nicht. Komme du muss zu Australien, wunderbar es ist und schön heir.
- Ich bin eine schwester und tochter mit zwei brüder. Eins ist jung, eins ist alte. Mein brüder bist cool, aber aufregend nicht. Meine mutter und vater ist auch cool und nett.
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Uh ja. Es ist nacht. Bis später. :)
Aug. 25, 2021
(practice)
Q:What do you think are the reasons that attract a large number of graduates to stay and work in Shanghai?
From my point of view,reasons why a large number of graduates choose to stay in Shanghai are as follows.
Intially,this wonderful city offers more opportunity for young people’s development.Not only can graduates find more appropriate jobs in various fields,but also broaden their horizon and acquire advanced information,which will exert profound impact on their career paths.What’s more,to many graduates,the fast pace and fierce competition here inspired them to try their best and discover more possibility.
Aditionally, many graduates are attracted by the convenience of living in Shanghai,especially after four years’ personal experience.Here in Shanghai, you can always meet a convenience store at the street corner.If you want to go to the CBD,just get on the metro,even if you live in the countryside.
Plus,as an international cosmopolitan,Shanghai enjoys a high popularity for its multiple culture.Special history shaped this city as a perfect combination of traditional Chinese culture and the advantages of western culture.Today,hundreds of important exhibitions and performances are held in Shanghai every year.Therefore,graduates,as a group of enthusiastic youth pursuing mental enjoyment,are undoubtedly spellbound by the culture atmosphere of Shanghai.
For the reasons above,Shanghai is a glamorous city which worth living and working for a lifetime especially for graduates.That's why many of them choose to stay in Shanghai.
Aug. 25, 2021
Home Applications
Home applications have made my lives a lot easier these days.
First, I am always appreciate of the fridge.
I can keep food longer than the original storage period, so I can eat delicious food anytime.
Next, the washing machine helps to save my time.
And I can wear clean shirts and pants everyday.
Lastly, I really like the dishwasher.
There are 7 members in my home, so there are too many dishes each time.
Without the dishwasher, I should spend more time washing them.
In the end, these applications help me relax.
Aug. 25, 2021
McKenna in Amazonien
Das ist eine lustige Geschichte über wie Terence McKenna auf einem Pilz-Trip in Amazonien seine bizarre Theorie der "TimeWaveZero" entwickelt hat. Er glaubte, ein Muster in der Menschheitsgeschichte gefunden zu haben, das aus Zyklen von Neuheit und Gewohnheit besteht, und bezeichnete 2012 als das Ende dieses Zyklus und den Beginn einer neuen Ära für die Menschheit. Wenn man bedenkt, dass 2012 nichts Besonderes passiert ist, war seine Eschatologie wahrscheinlich falsch. Mckenna hatte jedoch noch einige andere sehr interessante Ideen. Er war der Erste zum Beispiel, der vorschlug, dass Psilocybin in der menschlichen Evolution eine Rolle gespielt haben könnte. Er war auch ein Fan des Internets und nannte es "the birth of the global mind".
Aug. 25, 2021
My Tip for Waking Up Early
When I have to wake up early, I open the curtain near my bed before I sleep. By doing so, the sunlight disturbs my sleep as the day dawn. In addition, opening the window slightly is also effective because sounds such as mail carriers' bike sounds make me awaken. However, the best way is to go to bed earlier and set a lot of noisy alarms.
Aug. 25, 2021
A agenda do Felipe (FUTURO DO PRESENTE COMPOSTO DO INDICATIV
A semana do Felipe está bem movimentada. Na segunda-feira, ele terá ido ao dentista, e logo terá almoçado com o cliente do banco. Na tarde, terá feito uma aula de ginástica.
Na terça-feira, ele não terá feito nada de manhã, mas às 14.00hs terá feito a apresentação do relatório na reunião, e depois terá feito a revisão do projeto de arquitetura. Na quarta-feira ele terá dormido até tarde, e terá ido a trabalhar para fazer a montagem do Power Point para apresentação de quinta-feira, e depois terá feito outra aula de ginástica.
Na quinta-feira, finalmente, terá feito a apresentação do projeto de arquitetura, e então terá assistido a uma reunião com a equipe de trabalho. Na sexta-feira somente terá ido ao médico. No sábado, ele não terá feito nada, ele descansará.
(Prática do FUTURO DO PRESENTE COMPOSTO DO INDICATIVO)
Aug. 25, 2021
Aug. 25, 2021
Aug. 25, 2021
Journal
Shangri-La is located in the northwest part of Yunnan Province, more than 2500 kilometers away from my city, which is a plateau Tibetan area. There are many snow capped mountains, and the scenery is very beautiful.
China has many glaciers and they are mainly concentrated on the Qinghai-Tibet plateau, which is also the birthplace of the Yangtze, Yellow and Lancang rivers.
It's early autumn in my place. The temperature is moderate and very comfortable. Spring and autumn are the two most comfortable seasons here.
Yes, not long ago, Zhengzhou in Henan province suffered a heavy rainfall that was unprecedented in a century, and it's said the amount of rainfall pouring down in just a few hours is equivalent to the annual Zhengzhou rainfall. This flood caused the subway to flood and the tunnel was submerged, resulting in the deaths of more than 300 people. Currently, the investigation team sent by the State Council is conducting a further investigation into this incident in Zhengzhou city.
Like the wildfire in Canada, I don't know why, extreme weather disasters have been particularly frequent in recent years.
I suddenly remembered that I went to the Yulong snow mountain when I visited Yunnan last time. I will send some pictures of it later.
Aug. 25, 2021
Dia vinte e cinco e agosto
Quando nós chagamos a Espanha, estava perto do Natal.
A minha amiga e eu visitamos Alcalá de Henares.
A cidade pequena há muitas coisas.
Nós visitamos a universidade de Alcalá de Henares.
A universidade é muita velho, e aquela foi construído cetentas anos pertos.
Então, nós vimos uma árvore de natal grande na central da praça.
Que bonita!
Eu vi árvore de natal grande em Taiwan atrás, mas ele foi uso comercial.
Eu gostei de árvore muito.
Depois, nós entramos na universidade e passamos.
A universida foi bonita também.
Eu tirei fotos na porta de universidade.
Aug. 25, 2021
Aug. 25, 2021
3/4 of 2021 Gone
In past I will usually write a short report at March, June…
To conclude what have I done.
And I usually will say time fly too fast!
This year I didn’t write such report.
But today when I look at the calendar next week will be September.
3/4 of 2021 was gone!
The biggest worst moment (in last 9 months) I can remember was between March to June.
I almost give up my daily and part time job.
I still don’t know how can I recover from such low point in my life.
The mostly prod moment happened in 2 months ago.
I can keep exercise as a daily habit and still continuing now.
I also don’t know why I can do that.
Wish I can continue this positive behavior.
Aug. 25, 2021
My best language friend
I want to share with you the story about how I met my best language friend because I think that an amazing aspect about learning languages is that you can find incredible people and make valuable friendships with people who doesn't speak your first language and who lives very far away from you.
I met my best language friend two and a half years ago in an app to practice languages with native speakers. I had been using this app for a while and I had met some interesting people before but I was a little frustrated because I had been looking for a person to practice languages seriously, but they just disappeared after some days or weeks. It was quite sad because I thought I was doing friends and it was a lie! Haha.
Then I met my friend Gibran, an afro-american guy who was really into Spanish learning so we started to talk by phone some days per week. I was terrifying to speak English in that time, but he helped me a lot to get confidence and to improve my fluency.
Since then, we haven't stoped talking, we've shared a lot not only about our languages and our cultures, but about ourselves so we've built an amazing friendship.
After have been talking for so long, we finally met each other some months ago when he came Mexico!! So yes, maybe I wanted to show off a little (but in a good way, of course) because I feel very lucky for this friendship and I really hope more language learners can live this beautiful experience too.
P.D. You know who you are @llamameyi jajaja
P.D. 2 I'd really appreciate your comments and corrections, thank you!!
Aug. 25, 2021
Meine Lieblingsmusikgenres
Wenn jemand fragt mich, was meine Lieblingmusikgenre ist, oder welche Art von Musik höre ich gern, gebe ich immer die gleiche Antwort: ich höre gerne alle Arten von Musik... mit ein paar Ausnahmen.
Als ich junger war (11-15 Jahre alt), hörte ich sehr gerne elektronische Musik. Ich erinnere mich daran, dass meine Lieblingsmusiker wären Skrillex, Avicii und Kygo. Eigentlich habe ich gelernt, elektronische Musik zu produzieren. Ich habe FL Studio heruntergeladen und angefangen, es zu benutzen. Ich wollte wie ihnen zu werden, weil sie meine Vorbilder waren.
Als ich erwachsen wurde, bemerkte ich, dass ich eigentlich viele mehr Musikgenres gehörte gern. Zum beispiel Rock und Pop. Ich habe dann angefangen, dass man musste nicht nach der Musikgenres unterscheiden, weil Musik zu verschiedene (wie wir, Menschen) ist.
Aug. 25, 2021
Aug. 25, 2021
어제는 친구와 보낸 날
어제는 covid 19때문에 오랜만에 만난 친한 친구와 드디어 만났다. 우리가 5시에 만날 계획이 있었지만 내가 5분이나 일찍 왔네 ㅋㅋ. 보틍은 우리 만날 때 내가 제일 늦게 와서 너무 충격적인 일이다. 아무튼 친구가 5분뒤에 왔을때 마음이 너무 기뻐서 얘 쪽으로 뛰었다. 우리는 팔짱 끼며 우리의 시간들을 이야기하며 서점으로 걸어갔다. 그곳에 우리의 관심을 끄는 책들을 서로 보여주며 1시간 쯤 머믈렀다.
제가 사게 된 한 쌍 책들 중에는그건 바로 Despierta란 예쁜 시 담아 책이고 Pequeñas Grandes cosas라고 이름 붙인 책인데 Pequeñas grandes cosas은 아주 코대한 책이고 500장이 있어서 너무 신기하다.
솔직하게 말하자면은 Despierta는 내 취향에 맞추지 아닐 거 같다고 생각했지만 생각보다 새삼 좋네.
(2021만 해도 15권 책을 도통 읽어 오네)
아무튼 책들을 사다가 우리는 해가 질때까지 서점 주변에 걸으면서 이런저런 얘기를 나눴고 나서 '안녕' 하고(?) 각 집으로 갔다.
여기까지 읽어주셔서 너무 감사합니다~
어색한 부분을 고쳐 좀 주세요!
Aug. 25, 2021
La situazione di lavoro in Italia tra i giovanni
L'economia italiana deve affrontare un numerose sfide, uno dei quali e' disoccupazione. Come risultato dell'economia italiana storia, sta diventando sempre per' difficile trovare un posto di lavoro, specialmente per i giovani italiani. Questa instabilità' che abbia influenzato i giovani italiani della loro vita di tutti i giorni, dei futuri obiettivi, e dei loro valori. In modo da trovare occupazione in Italia, i giovani stanno rinunciando ai propri sogni perseguire un lavoro stabile. I problemi principali che i giovani italiani devono affrontare sono 'fuga dei cervelli' e i soldi.
I neolaureati italiani hanno più vulnerabili alla disoccupazione in il lavoro marcato. Quindi i giovani non hanno la possibilità di trovare un lavoro stabile perché il sistema scolastico italiano non prepara gli studenti per la forza lavoro. In 2018, circa 48% di studenti dopo scuola hanno detto che avrebbero accettato un lavoro che non corrisponde ai loro sogni. Questo si traduce in i giovani preferiscono studiare o emigrare all’estero per evitare di non trovare il lavoro.
Un altro problema per i giovani e’ che se anche trovano lavoro molto spesso lo stipendio e’ molto basso, non superarci neanche il mille euro al mese. Uno studio ha rivelato che ¼ dei neolaureati hanno detto che avrebbero accettato un lavoro con uno stipendio mensile di cinquecento euro. Inoltre, I lavoratori più’ anziani sta stanando nella forza lavoro perché la data di pensionamento e’ stata posticipata da una riforma fatta dal governo. Questo si traduce in un aumento di lavoratori anziani perché hanno più esperienza. Questa significa che i giovani devono competere con i lavoratori anziani per alcuni lavori disponibile.
I giovani italiani di oggi sono vulnerabili all’instabilità dell’economia che minaccia a occupazione. I problemi che i giovani italiano devono affronate sono non prepara gli studenti per la forza lavoro e concorrenza sul mercato. E’ facile trovare qualcuno disposto ad assumerti magari per lavori piccoli, ma e’ più difficile trovare un lavoro stabile con un salario adeguato. Italia deve servire a sostenere i giovani altrimenti la generazione è a rischio.
Aug. 25, 2021
Blitz und Donner
Heute in Chicago gab es um etwa 19 Uhr auf einmal sehr starken Blitz und Donner. Das machte mich ein bisschen überrascht, weil ich seit langem, und besonders im Sommer, die beiden gar nicht erfahren habe.
Es scheint, dass das heiße und schwüle Wetter es verursacht hat, Wolken voll mit Regen zu formen. Dies war aufgrund des kalten Wassers des Michigansees, der sich in der Nähe von uns befindet.
Aug. 24, 2021
日本に到着後の困ったこと
（自然ではないところかもっといい表現があれば、直してみてもいいです。）
コロナのため、今年来日は大変になったそうです。手続きも何倍も多くなったし、マスク着用もあるし、隔離も必要です。その隔離を済ませるのに、やるべきことは、毎日熱を測ってもらったり、アンケートを仕上げたりすることのみでした。
あまりに失敗すると、帰国させられるようになるでしょう。誰も言ったことがありませんが、自分で心配に思ったんです。
アンケートは毎朝メールで届きました。リンクをタッチして、アンケートのウェブサイトがアクセスできます。まず、ウェブサイトは全部日本語で書いてありますが、その時、日本語がまだできないので、英語に設定しました。質問は二つしかありません。すなわち、「熱がありますか」という質問と、「友達は熱がありますか」という質問です。
ある朝、講義を出席している途中で、スマホの通知が鳴り出しました。あっ、アンケートが届きました。けれども、講義の途中なので、真面目に勉強すべきでした。何回もアンケートを記入したことがあるので、見ないでボタンを押すことができるだろうと思ったんです。すると、あっ、アンケートは短すぎるのではないか。言語も全部日本語ですね。どうしてねえ。ちょっと心配が出てきましたが、勉強を続けました。
次の日、着信がありましたが、取りませんでした。タイの友達も受けましたが、取りませんでした。誰も何についてのかわかりませんでした。ちょっと変だと思いましたが、きにしませんでした。夜になって、あっ、アンケートはまだ届いていないと気づきました。すぐに、友達に聞きました。「皆さん今日はアンケートはないね。」すると、「へえ、普通に届いたよ」とみんなは言いました。
困りました。どうすればいいでしょう。帰国させられるかもしれません。そこで、原因を調べようとしました。メールは二つのリンクがあります。一つ目は普通のリンクですが、そのとき、気づかないで二つ目のリンクをタッチしてしまいました。そのリンクは、本メールに心当たりはないというリンクです。あああ、わかりました。アンケートは短すぎるわけですね。本当に困りました。すぐに熱を測ってくれた人と相談したらいいと思いました。
朝になって、すぐエレベーターで一階に下りて、下手な日本語で会話をしようとしました。「私はこのリンクをタッチしました。あ、ダメです。このリンクではなくて、これです。いいえいいえ、タッチしました。」「タッチしてしまいしたか。」「はい、そうですね。」ああ、その人はちょっと不安なように見えました。本当にとても困っているでしょう。そこで、彼は厚生労働省にメールで連絡するのを手伝いました。メールの内容は全然わかりませんでしたが、アンケートは普通に届くようになって、安心しました。その人、ありがとうございます。今まで日本にいるのはあなたのおかげです。
困ったのに、学んだこともあります。大切なことをしているとき、いつも常に注意すべきです。今回はとても大変でしたが、次回は決してないようにします。
Aug. 24, 2021
Oveja negra parte uno
Vi una película que contaba la historia de un chico que estaba harto de vivir en la pobreza, así que montó un plan para salir adelante. Había un pueblo pequeño en el que nació un bebé que nombraron Juan. Poco después de nacer sus padres fallecieron, así que el padre adoptó el bebé y lo crió con la ayuda de las monjas. Trataba de enseñar a Juan a trabajar en la iglesia y a ayudarle durante las misas. Pero se aburría fácilmente y cuando la gente iba para recibir la comunión, a Juan le gustaba tomarle el pelo a ella para divertirse. A la hora de comulgar, la gente se dirigía hacia la cabeza del santuario y se arrodillaba en frente de Juan. Juan se hacía como que metiera el pan en su boca, y cuando estaba a punto de cerrarla Juan retiraba el pan.
Entonces el cura pensó que le iría mejor a Juan que estuviera en otro entorno. Había un rico que presumía su riqueza en cada ocasión que podía, incluso en las misas dejaba caer lentamente varios billetes cuando el saco le pasaba para recolectar limosnas. El cura instó al rico que acogiera a Juan y que le permitiera trabajar en su granja. Además el rico tenía un hijo y el cura pensaba que les venía bien tener la compañía del uno al otro. Entonces el rico encargó a Juan pastorear las ovejas.
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