June 9, 2020
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Our issue may appear gigantic at first glance. However, if we make an effort to break it into smaller bits then it would not be intimidating anymore. Moreover, it is simpler to carry on downscaled specific problems than a massive complex one. Therefore, our department can schedule and arrange better for this quarter. As a result we will anticipate more bottom line at the end of the year, outside of our partnership with existing clientele.
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Our issue may appear gigantic at first glance.
However, if we makde an effort to break it into smaller bits then it would not be intimidating anymore.
However, if we made an effort to break it into smaller bits then it would not be intimidating anymore.
Moreover, it is simpler to carry on with downscaled specific problems than a massive complex one. Moreover, it is simpler to carry on with downscaled specific problems than a massive complex one.
Therefore, our department canould schedule and arrange better for this quarter.
Therefore, our department could schedule and arrange better for this quarter.
As a result we will anticipate morean improved bottom line at the end of the year, outside of our partnership with existing clientele.
As a result we will anticipate an improved bottom line at the end of the year, outside of our partnership with existing clientele.
June 10, 2020
Hi Periwinkle. Thank you for your correction. Appreciate it!
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However, if we make an effort to break it into smaller bits then it would not be intimidating anymore.
Moreover, it is simpler to carry on with downscaled specific problems than a massive complex one. Moreover, it is simpler to carry on with downscaled specific problems than a massive complex one.
Therefore, our department can schedule and arrange betterbetter prepare for this quarter.
Therefore, our department can schedule and better prepare for this quarter.
Just sounds more natural for me in this context to use 'prepare'
As a result we will anticipate more bottom line at the end of the year, outside of our partnership with existing clientele.
As a result we will anticipate more bottom line at the end of the year, outside of our partnership with existing clientele.
I don't really understand what you mean by 'more bottom line at the end of the year'
June 9, 2020
Hi Spacecadet, thank you for your corrections.
I was originally using "more profit/revenue", but that is too common, so I looked up for synonym and got 'bottom line' as the result.
June 9, 2020
You can't say "more bottom line." You could say something like "we anticipate that our bottom line will improve."
June 9, 2020
Ok, I was actually unfamiliar with the phrase but I am not involved in business so thanks for educating me!
June 10, 2020
So in some ways "bottom line" is not similar to "profit/revenue" in grammar placement/usage. Thanks for the insight!
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As a result we will anticipate more bottom line at the end of the year, outside of our partnership with existing clientele.
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