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I passed out. Hell no way I want to do this shit.
My legs are shaky. The whole body feels like collapsing.
But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life.
11 h-Hours s Shift
11-Hour Shift
HellThere's no way I want to doin hell that I'll want to keep doing this shit.
There's no way in hell that I'll want to keep doing this shit.
My legs are shaky.
TheMy whole body feels like collapsing.
My whole body feels like collapsing.
"My whole body feels like it's gonna to collapse," sounds more natural.
But I gotta move on, s. Sometimes it's just life.
But I gotta move on. Sometimes it's just life.
"But I gotta (keep moving) on. Sometimes that's just life," sounds more natural.
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I'm sorry work has been brutal for you lately. An 11-hour shift is no joke. I hope you can find a different job soon.
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11 hours shift
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I passed out. |
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Hell no way I want to do this shit.
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My legs are shaky. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The whole body feels like collapsing.
"My whole body feels like it's gonna to collapse," sounds more natural. |
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But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life.
But I gotta move on "But I gotta (keep moving) on. Sometimes that's just life," sounds more natural. |
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