Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 20th, 2021 The curfew
Quebec started curfew from January 9 because of the COVED 19. People are not allowed to go out from 8 pm to 5 am.
I think I'm lucky because I don't live in Quebec. And, I realized that my parents didn’t give me a curfew when I was child. They have never told me when I have to go back home. I could go out anytime. They would go out to find me if they found that I didn’t be in home. Especially at the diner time, you know, when they finally finished the cooking. I lived in a quite close neighborhood. All the children played around that area. We were in a same school. Parents knew each other. Many of them worked together. It was safe.
But I had a curfew when I was in the university. All students lived in dorms that was provided by university at that time. The gates of the buildings closed, and the power of rooms shut down from 11 pm to 7 am every day.
I haven’t thought about giving my son a curfew yet, and probably I will haven’t the chance to do it. The problem is that he always just wants to stay home. What I do every day is to convince him to go out, but it is really hard. The world really changed.
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Jan. 20th, 2021 The curfew
Quebec startedhas placed a curfew from January 9 because of the COVEID 19.
Quebec has placed a curfew from January 9 because of COVID 19.
People are not allowed to go out from 8 pm to 5 am.
I think I'm lucky because I don't live in Quebec.
And, I realized that my parents didn’t give me a curfew when I was child.
They have never told me when I have to go back home.
I could go out anytime.
They would go out to find me if they found that I didn’t be income home.
They would go out to find me if they found that I didn’t come home.
Especially at the diner time, you know, when they finally finished the cooking.
Especially at diner time, you know, when they finally finished cooking.
I lived in a quite close neighborhood where everyone was quite close.
I lived in a neighborhood where everyone was quite close.
This sounds a bit more natural to me
All the children played around that area.
We were in athe same school.
We were in the same school.
PAll the parents knew each other.
All the parents knew each other.
Many of them worked together.
It was safe.
But I had a curfew when I was in the university.
But I had a curfew when I was in university.
All students lived in dorms that wasere provided by the university at thate time.
All students lived in dorms that were provided by the university at the time.
The gates of the buildings closed, and the power ofin the rooms shut downwere cut off from 11 pm to 7 am every day.
The gates of the buildings closed, and the power in the rooms were cut off from 11 pm to 7 am every day.
I haven’t thought about giving my son a curfew yet, and probably I will not haven’t the chance to do it.
I haven’t thought about giving my son a curfew yet, and probably I will not have the chance to do it.
The problem is that he always just wants to stay home.
What I do every day is to convince him to go out, but it is really hard.
The world has really changed. The world has really changed.
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Wow, great post. I think the world has changed too. Most people (in my generation) are quite happy to just stay home and play games. Haha.
Jan. 27, 2021
Thank you very much for your corrections. It helps me.
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But I had a curfew when I was in the university.
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All students lived in dorms that was provided by university at that time.
All students lived in dorms that w |
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Jan. 20th, 2021 The curfew This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Quebec started curfew from January 9 because of the COVED 19.
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People are not allowed to go out from 8 pm to 5 am. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think I'm lucky because I don't live in Quebec. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And, I realized that my parents didn’t give me a curfew when I was child. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They have never told me when I have to go back home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I could go out anytime. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They would go out to find me if they found that I didn’t be in home.
They would go out to find me if they found that I didn’t |
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Especially at the diner time, you know, when they finally finished the cooking.
Especially at |
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I lived in a quite close neighborhood.
I lived in a This sounds a bit more natural to me |
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All the children played around that area. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We were in a same school.
We were in |
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Parents knew each other.
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Many of them worked together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The gates of the buildings closed, and the power of rooms shut down from 11 pm to 7 am every day.
The gates of the buildings closed, and the power |
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I haven’t thought about giving my son a curfew yet, and probably I will haven’t the chance to do it.
I haven’t thought about giving my son a curfew yet, and probably I will not have |
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The problem is that he always just wants to stay home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What I do every day is to convince him to go out, but it is really hard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The world really changed. The world has really changed. The world has really changed. |
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