Dec. 17, 2021
Noisy
The dormitory keeper told me that three students of mine played mobile phone and chatted in the hallway at late night. What they did had badly disturbed the others resting. Especially two of them had been violated many principles. He asked me to deal with the situation.
I notified all of their parents of their sons' bad behaviour. For the worse boys, I asked their parents to have their sons stayed at home for a week. One parent asked me why the students would still carry their phone to school since the school had prohibited it before. I told her that apart from the phone, what her son did had violated the principles, so he must be punished. Then, another boy's grandpa asked me about the phone as well. I totally didn't want to respond him. Soon after, he talked it on the Wechat parents group, and some parents joined in. Ironically, the parent who was the most active in the discussion, her son had violated many principles as well.
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Noisy
The dormitory keeper told me that three students of mine played mobile phone and chatted in the hallway at late night.
What they did had badly disturbed the others resting.
Especially tTwo of them had been violated many principrules.
Two of them had violated many rules.
For the worse boys, I asked their parents to haveof the worst boys to keep their sons stayed at home for a week.
I asked the parents of the worst boys to keep their sons at home for a week.
One parent asked me why the students would still carry their phone to school since the school had prohibited it before. One parent asked me why the students would still carry their phone to school since the school had prohibited it before.
I don't actually understand this sentence and how it is meant to connect with the next sentence.
I told her that apart from the phone, wthe phone policy was beside the point. What her son did had violated the principrules, so he must be punished.
I told her that the phone policy was beside the point. What her son did had violated the rules, so he must be punished.
I totaldefinitely didn't want to respond to him.
I definitely didn't want to respond to him.
totally is very casual and it seems out of place in the rest of the text
Soon after, he talked about it on the Wechat parents' group in WeChat, and some other parents joined in.
Soon after, he talked about it on the parents' group in WeChat, and some other parents joined in.
Ironically, the son of the parent who was the most active in the discussion, her son had violated many principrules as well.
Ironically, the son of the parent who was the most active in the discussion had violated many rules as well.
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The dormitory keeper told me that three students of mine played mobile phone and chatted in the hallway at late night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What they did had badly disturbed the others resting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Especially two of them had been violated many principles.
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He asked me to deal with the situation. |
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I notified all of their parents of their sons' bad behaviour. |
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For the worse boys, I asked their parents to have their sons stayed at home for a week.
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One parent asked me why the students would still carry their phone to school since the school had prohibited it before. One parent asked me why the students would still carry their phone to school since the school had prohibited it before. One parent asked me why the students would still carry their phone to school since the school had prohibited it before. I don't actually understand this sentence and how it is meant to connect with the next sentence. |
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I told her that apart from the phone, what her son did had violated the principles, so he must be punished.
I told her that |
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Then, another boy's grandpa asked me about the phone as well. |
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I totally didn't want to respond him.
I totally is very casual and it seems out of place in the rest of the text |
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Soon after, he talked it on the Wechat parents group, and some parents joined in.
Soon after, he talked about it on the |
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Ironically, the parent who was the most active in the discussion, her son had violated many principles as well.
Ironically, the son of the parent who was the most active in the discussion |
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