My dDaily rRoutine My Daily Routine

titles are written in something called "title case," which has special capitalization rules

My dDaily rRoutine My Daily Routine

Title capitalization rules

My school finishes at 12.:45 or 3.:30 p.m. My school finishes at 12:45 or 3:30 p.m.

My school finishes at 12.:45 or 3.:30 p.m. (, depending on the day). My school finishes at 12:45 or 3:30 p.m. (, depending on the day).

I would expect a little more information on why you list two different end times. Perhaps on certain days it ends earlier.

After the school., I go to the dormitory. After school, I go to the dormitory.

combined this with the next sentence for an improved flow and to fix the fragment "after the school" you could also say "back to the dormitory" since you are returning there

After the school., After school,

Firstly, I rest in my room. First, I rest in my room.

Then, I go downstairs for have dinner. Then, I go downstairs for have dinner.

Then I go downstairs forto have dinner. Then I go downstairs to have dinner.

I staylive in thea dormitory. I live in a dormitory.

We would use "stay" for short-term / temporary instances, such as a hotel or hostel. We use "live" for dormitories. Switched "the" to "a", since this dormitory hasn't previously been mentioned, you are introducing it in your story.

I leave the dormitory about 8-8.:30 a.m. I leave the dormitory about 8-8:30 a.m.

I leave the dormitory about 8-8.between 8 - 8:30 a.m. I leave the dormitory between 8 - 8:30 a.m.

You can use "at about" when you are fixating around one time. Example: "I leave the dorm at around 8:15 a.m." But since you are mentioning a time range, you should use "between"

I am an eEnglish prep student. I am an English prep student.

I am an eEnglish prep student. I am an English prep student.

English is always capitalized

I feel very tired when my school is finished. I feel very tired when school is finished.

"my" is not needed here

I feel very tired whenby the time my school finisheds. I feel very tired by the time my school finishes.

This is a nuanced difference. I feel very tired WHEN my school finishes => this could be interpreted as the moment your classes are done, you suddenly feel tired I feel very tired BY THE TIME my school finishes => this means that over the duration of your classes, you become increasingly tired, and feel very tired by the end

I go to dormitory.

I go toback to the dormitory. I go back to the dormitory.

You started your day at the dorm, so you are "going back" or "returning"

Maybe I go out with my friends or stay in the dormitaory. Maybe I go out with my friends or stay in the dormitory.

Maybe I go out with my friends or stay in the dormitaory. Maybe I go out with my friends or stay in the dormitory.

AtOn the weekends, I usually see new places because Izmir is a new city for me. On the weekends, I usually see new places because Izmir is a new city for me.

At the weekends, I usually seevisit new places because Izmir is a new city for me. At the weekends, I usually visit new places because Izmir is a new city for me.

It is my first time writing text here. It is my first time writing text here.

this sounds more natural

ItThis is my first (writing text / post) here. This is my first (writing text / post) here.

These are most typically called "posts"