Jan. 12, 2021
It's Really Cold
In Japan, it's really cold this winter. Compared with last year, it snows more and temperatures are lower. I prefer winter to summer, but excessive cold is also annoying because I don't want to go out and feel sluggish even in my room. I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes. If it occurs in my room, a waterfall will appear from the ceiling. It must be terrible.
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I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.
I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water froze in the pipes.
Or alternatively "...because the water was frozen in the pipes."
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Added a small correction. Keep up the good work!
Jan. 13, 2021
Thank you so much!
I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.
I watched news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.
If ithat occursred in my room, a waterfall willould appear from the ceiling.
If that occurred in my room, a waterfall would appear from the ceiling.
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Very good job!
Jan. 13, 2021
Thank you!
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It's Really Cold |
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In Japan, it's really cold this winter. |
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Compared with last year, it snows more and temperatures are lower. |
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I prefer winter to summer, but excessive cold is also annoying because I don't want to go out and feel sluggish even in my room. |
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I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.
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I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water froze Or alternatively "...because the water was frozen in the pipes." |
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If it occurs in my room, a waterfall will appear from the ceiling.
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It must be terrible. |
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