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Weather Today
Today the weather in North of France is changing. This morning there was wind and even a little rain. This Afternoon we have luck because the sun is up and the sky is totaly blue. It's rare here so Everyone are outside for take a coffee, smoke a cigarette (very french) and enjoy the sun. It's crazy how the weather can change mood.
Aujourd'hui le temps dans le nord de la France est changeant. Ce matin il y avait du vent et même un peu de pluie. Cet aprèm midi nous avons de la chance car le soleil est haut et le ciel totalement bleu. C'est rare ici alors tous le monde est dehors pour boire un café, fumer une cigarette et profiter du soleil. C'est fou comme le temps peut changer nos humeurs.
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Today the weather in Nthe north of France is changing.
Today the weather in the north of France is changing.
You could also say "Northern France".
TWe've been lucky this Aafternoon we have luck because the sun is up and the sky is totally blue.
We've been lucky this afternoon because the sun is up and the sky is totally blue.
Putting "this afternoon" before "we're lucky" wouldn't be incorrect, but it sounds more natural this way.
You could say "we're lucky", but "we've been lucky" better shows that the weather's been nice throughout the afternoon.
It'This is rare here, so
This is rare here, so
Eeveryone areis/has been outside for takto have a coffee, smoke a cigarettes (very french) and enjoy the sun.
everyone is/has been outside to have a coffee, smoke cigarettes (very french) and enjoy the sun.
I prefer putting a comma before the final "and" in a sentence, as I think in many cases it makes the sentence more clear, but not using one isn't wrong either.
It's crazy how the weather can change one's mood. It's crazy how the weather can change one's mood.
You should specify whose mood the weather changes. "One" could imply it changes anyone's mood, but you could also say "our moods" or "people's moods".
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Today the weather in North of France is changing.
Today the weather in You could also say "Northern France". |
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This morning there was wind and even a little rain. |
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This Afternoon we have luck because the sun is up and the sky is totaly blue.
Putting "this afternoon" before "we're lucky" wouldn't be incorrect, but it sounds more natural this way. You could say "we're lucky", but "we've been lucky" better shows that the weather's been nice throughout the afternoon. |
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It's rare here so
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Everyone are outside for take a coffee, smoke a cigarette (very french) and enjoy the sun.
I prefer putting a comma before the final "and" in a sentence, as I think in many cases it makes the sentence more clear, but not using one isn't wrong either. |
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It's crazy how the weather can change mood. It's crazy how the weather can change one's mood. It's crazy how the weather can change one's mood. You should specify whose mood the weather changes. "One" could imply it changes anyone's mood, but you could also say "our moods" or "people's moods". |
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Everyone are outside for take a coffe, smoke a cigarette (very french) and enjoy the sun. |
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