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Feb. 9, 2020

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9th Feb 2020

Hi all! I finally got some time to write an entry. I was preparing for my trip to Japan and handling some administrative stuff for university. Now I'm in Hiroshima, Japan!

I actually was in a really bad mood for the past few weeks because of the Coronavirus and our government's inability to take prompt measures to address the issue and prevent the transmission of the virus into our territory. Thanks to her, citizens in Hong Kong now have to queue overnight outside stores that sell face masks. It's a tragedy. All we do now at home is searching for masks online. I thought about cancelling my trip because being in the airport and the plane would increase the chance of catching the virus. However, I really wanted to go to Hiroshima, and the airline didn't allow us to cancel the booking.

It's my 4th day in Japan now. Although this is not the best season to enjoy most of the attractions, I'm still happy that I'm able to put my broken Japanese to use hahaha. I just left Okayama yesterday and I'll be spending the rest of the week in Hiroshima. I'm heading to Miyajima now, I'll post another entry talking about my trip later this week!

I'll be able to correct the Mandarin entries next week!

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I was actually was in a really bad mood for the past few weeks because of the Coronavirus and our government's inability to take prompt measures to address the issue and prevent the transmission of the virus into our territory.

All we do now at home is searching for masks online.

I thought about cancelling my trip because being in the airport and on the plane would increase themy chance of catching the virus.

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Very good English! Only very small grammar mistakes! Nice job :)

Kindred Spirit

9th Feb 2020

Hi all!

I finally gothad some time to write an entry.

IMO had sounds better here

I was preparing for my trip to Japan and handling some administrative stuff for university.

Now I'm in Hiroshima, Japan!

I was actually was in a really bad mood for the past few weeks because of the Coronavirus and our government's inability to take to prompt measures toly address the issue and prevent the transmission of the virus invirus from spreading to our territory/region.

Thanks to therm, citizens in Hong Kong now have to queue overnight outside stores that sell face masks.

It's a tragedy.

I thought about cancelling my trip because being in the airport and on the plane would increase themy chances of catching the virus.

However, I really wanted to go to Hiroshima, and the airline didn't allow us to cancel the booking.

It's my 4th day in Japan've been in Japan for 4 days now.

More natural

Although this is not the best season to enjoy most of the attractions, I'm still happy that I'mve been able to put my broken Japanese to use hahaha.

I'm heading to Miyajima now, I'll post another entry talking about my trip later this week!

I'll be able to correct the Mandarin entries next week!

Feedback

Sounds fun! Take care and enjoy the rest of your trip!

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9th FebFebruary 9, 2020

I'm not sure about the order dates are written in other Englishes, so I just changed it to what is most comfortable for me as an American English speaker.

Hi, all!

I finally got some time to write an entry.

I was preparing for my trip to Japan and handling some administrative stuff for university.

Now I'm in Hiroshima, Japan!

I actually was in a really bad mood for the past few weeks because of the Coronavirus and our government's inability to take prompt measures toly address the issue and prevent the transmission of the virus into our territory.

Thanks to her, citizens in Hong Kong now have to queue overnight outside stores that sell face masks.

It's a tragedy.

All we do now at home is searching for masks online.

I thought about cancelling my trip because being in the airport and the plane would increase themy chance of catching the virus.

However, I really wanted to go to Hiroshima, and the airline didn't allow us to cancel the booking.

It's my 4th day in Japan now.

Although this is not the best season to enjoy most of the attractions, I'm still happy that I'm able to put my broken Japanese to use, hahaha.

I just left Okayama yesterday, and I'll be spending the rest of the week in Hiroshima.

I'm heading to Miyashima now,. I'll post another entry talking about my trip later this week!

I'll be able to correct the Mandarin entries next week!

Feedback

I mostly corrected some little picky comma usage things :D I hope your trip is fun~

9th Feb 2020

9th FebFebruary 9, 2020

I'm not sure about the order dates are written in other Englishes, so I just changed it to what is most comfortable for me as an American English speaker.

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Hi all!

Hi, all!

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I finally got some time to write an entry.

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I finally gothad some time to write an entry.

IMO had sounds better here

I was preparing for my trip to Japan and handling some administrative stuff for university.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I'm in Hiroshima, Japan!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I actually was in a really bad mood for the past few weeks because of the Coronavirus and our government's inability to take prompt measures to address the issue and prevent the transmission of the virus into our territory.

I actually was in a really bad mood for the past few weeks because of the Coronavirus and our government's inability to take prompt measures toly address the issue and prevent the transmission of the virus into our territory.

I was actually was in a really bad mood for the past few weeks because of the Coronavirus and our government's inability to take to prompt measures toly address the issue and prevent the transmission of the virus invirus from spreading to our territory/region.

I was actually was in a really bad mood for the past few weeks because of the Coronavirus and our government's inability to take prompt measures to address the issue and prevent the transmission of the virus into our territory.

Thanks to her, citizens in Hong Kong now have to queue overnight outside stores that sell face masks.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks to therm, citizens in Hong Kong now have to queue overnight outside stores that sell face masks.

It's a tragedy.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

All we do now at home is searching for masks online.

All we do now at home is searching for masks online.

All we do now at home is searching for masks online.

I thought about cancelling my trip because being in the airport and the plane would increase the chance of catching the virus.

I thought about cancelling my trip because being in the airport and the plane would increase themy chance of catching the virus.

I thought about cancelling my trip because being in the airport and on the plane would increase themy chances of catching the virus.

I thought about cancelling my trip because being in the airport and on the plane would increase themy chance of catching the virus.

However, I really wanted to go to Hiroshima, and the airline didn't allow us to cancel the booking.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's my 4th day in Japan now.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's my 4th day in Japan've been in Japan for 4 days now.

More natural

Although this is not the best season to enjoy most of the attractions, I'm still happy that I'm able to put my broken Japanese to use hahaha.

Although this is not the best season to enjoy most of the attractions, I'm still happy that I'm able to put my broken Japanese to use, hahaha.

Although this is not the best season to enjoy most of the attractions, I'm still happy that I'mve been able to put my broken Japanese to use hahaha.

I just left Okayama yesterday and I'll be spending the rest of the week in Hiroshima.

I just left Okayama yesterday, and I'll be spending the rest of the week in Hiroshima.

I'm heading to Miyashima now, I'll post another entry talking about my trip later this week!

I'm heading to Miyashima now,. I'll post another entry talking about my trip later this week!

I'll be able to correct the Mandarin entries next week!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm heading to Miyajima now, I'll post another entry talking about my trip later this week!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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