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My favourite Japanese snack
My favourite Japanese snack is called Coffee Beat. Its taste is kind of like a coffee been and black chocolate.
When I lived In Japan, I ate this snack when I had a time off as a treat for myself.
I recomended this chocolate to my classmate at the Japanese school, and she said when she went to Japan in the summer holidays, she bought it.
She said it became her one of favourite Japanese snacks.
The podcast that I listened to today, discused their favourite Japanese snacks.
One of them mentioned "Kyabetsutaro." It is kind of like puffs, and there are nori and other stuffs on it. I like it as well.
It has been around for long time, and I really ate it when I was younger.
The another person liked Mochi ice cream and mochi with red beens and strawberries.
she said Japanese ice cream is on the another level and very unique.
I love Japan's and other country 's ice cream.
I feel other country 's ice cream is richer, especially vanilla ice cream.
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My favourite Japanese snack
My favourite Japanese snack is called Coffee Beat.
Its taste is kind of like a combination of coffee beenans and blacdark chocolate.
Its taste is kind of like a combination of coffee beans and dark chocolate.
Coffee been sounds like a coffee bean in the past tense. Maybe it is a coffee bean that has already been eaten :)
We only say white chocolate, milk chocolate, or dark chocolate.
When I lived Iin Japan, I ate this snack whenever I had asome time off as a treat for myself.
When I lived in Japan, I ate this snack whenever I had some time off as a treat for myself.
I recomended this chocolate to my classmate at the Japanese school, and she said when she went to Japan in the summer holidays, she bought it.
She said it became her one of favourite Japanese snacks.
The podcast that I listened to today, discussed their favourite Japanese snacks.
The podcast that I listened to today discussed their favourite Japanese snacks.
OR: In the podcast that I listened to today, they discussed their favourite Japanese snacks.
One of them mentioned "Kyabetsutaro."
It is kind of like puffs, and there arwith some nori and some other stuffs on it.
It is kind of like puffs, with some nori and some other stuff on it.
A good word you could use here is "sprinkled", eg. "It has nori and some other stuff sprinked on it."
I'm not sure "kind of" fits here - I Googled these and they definitely ARE puffs, no "kind of" needed.
You could potentially phrase this sentence as: "They are corn puffs with nori and some other flavourings sprinkled on them."
I like it as well.
It has been around for long time, and I really ate iate it a lot when I was younger.
It has been around for long time, and I ate it a lot when I was younger.
The aAnother person liked Mmochi ice cream and mochi with red beeans and strawberries.
Another person liked mochi ice cream and mochi with red beans and strawberries.
As long as mochi isn't a brand name, it doesn't need to be capitalised.
Either "the one" or "another".
sShe said Japanese ice cream is on the another level and very unique.
She said Japanese ice cream is on another level and very unique.
I love Japan's and other country 's ice cream.
I love Japan's and other country's ice cream.
I feel other country 's ice cream is richer, especially vanilla ice cream.
I feel other country's ice cream is richer, especially vanilla ice cream.
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All this talk of snacks is going to make me hungry :) Excellent writing, keep up the good work!
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My favourite Japanese snack is called Coffee Beat. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its taste is kind of like a coffee been and black chocolate.
Its taste is kind of like a combination of coffee be Coffee been sounds like a coffee bean in the past tense. Maybe it is a coffee bean that has already been eaten :) We only say white chocolate, milk chocolate, or dark chocolate. |
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When I lived In Japan, I ate this snack when I had a time off as a treat for myself.
When I lived |
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I recomended this chocolate to my classmate at the Japanese school, and she said when she went to Japan in the summer holidays, she bought it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She said it became her one of favourite Japanese snacks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The podcast that I listened to today, discused their favourite Japanese snacks.
The podcast that I listened to today OR: In the podcast that I listened to today, they discussed their favourite Japanese snacks. |
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One of them mentioned "Kyabetsutaro." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is kind of like puffs, and there are nori and other stuffs on it.
It is kind of like puffs, A good word you could use here is "sprinkled", eg. "It has nori and some other stuff sprinked on it." I'm not sure "kind of" fits here - I Googled these and they definitely ARE puffs, no "kind of" needed. You could potentially phrase this sentence as: "They are corn puffs with nori and some other flavourings sprinkled on them." |
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I like it as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has been around for long time, and I really ate it when I was younger.
It has been around for long time, and I |
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The another person liked Mochi ice cream and mochi with red beens and strawberries.
As long as mochi isn't a brand name, it doesn't need to be capitalised. Either "the one" or "another". |
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she said Japanese ice cream is on the another level and very unique.
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I love Japan's and other country 's ice cream.
I love Japan's and other country |
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I feel other country 's ice cream is richer, especially vanilla ice cream.
I feel other country |
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