Sept. 9, 2022
When Iwas in middle school I loved painting. My favorite artists in that time was Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso. I used to dream in creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things like: "Anybody can paint" "Painting is useless" "Nobody cares about painting". And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanic, cooking, studying english, music and writing. I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting and sometimes I felt sad because my future was very dull for me. But at the end of highschool I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody whom you love. Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and if you have dicipline and passion, you can be a greatest musician. Read fictional books wouldn't save your from death or gain money but you cry when you read your favorite stories. Anybody can write haiku, even a child can write a beatiful haiku, but if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way like you, this applies for drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc. You're special and everything that you do is special. Yes, maybe you can't gain enough money from something that you love but you can always do it in your free time, you don't need to be famous to do something unique, or try to grow a career. If you're happy when you do something that you like, then isn't useless.
My first painting after three years is about a sunrise with a Van Gogh style. I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.
This haiku is inspired in a song of The Beattles:
After the long night
Here comes the sun ready to shine,
Ready to start again.
And this is a senryu, another kind of haiku that is about feelings and usually about love:
Every day and night
My love for you smell like spring
Even in winter
Thanks for all your corrections :)
Things tThat Are Useless
Things That Are Useless
When I was in middle school I loved painting./I loved to paint.
When I was in middle school I loved painting/I loved to paint.
My favorite artists inat that time wasere Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.
My favorite artists at that time were Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.
Were because you’re talking about a moment in the past
I used to dream inof creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things like: "Anybody can paint" "Painting is useless" "Nobody cares about painting".
I used to dream of creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me: "Anybody can paint" "Painting is useless" "Nobody cares about painting".
And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying english, music and writing. And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying english, music and writing.
I had lost mythe ability and motivation for drawing and painting and sometimes I felt sad because my future wasfelt very dull for me.
I had lost the ability and motivation for drawing and painting and sometimes I felt sad because my future felt very dull.
But at the end of highschool I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody whom you love.
Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and if you have discipline and passion, you can be a greatest musician.
Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and if you have discipline and passion, you can be a great musician.
Reading fictional books wouldn't save your from your death or gainmake you more money but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
Reading fictional books wouldn't save you from your death or make you more money but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
Anybody can write a haiku, even a child can write a beatiful haiku, but if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way like youyou can, this applies for drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
Anybody can write a haiku, even a child can write a beatiful haiku, but if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way you can, this applies for drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
You're special and everything that you do is special.
Yes, maybe you can't gain enough money from something that you love but you can always do it in your free time, you don't need to be famous to do something unique, or try to grow a career.
If you're happy when you do something that you like, then isn't useless.
My first painting after three years is about a sunrise with a Van Gogh-inspired style.
My first painting after three years is a sunrise with a Van Gogh-inspired style.
I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become ian aeven better artist.
I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become an even better artist.
This haiku is inspired inby a song ofrom The Beattles:
This haiku is inspired by a song from The Beatles:
After the long night
Here comes the sun ready to shine,
Ready to start again.
And this is a senryu, another kind of haiku that is about feelings and usually about love:
Every day and night
My love for you smells like spring My love for you smells like spring
Even in winter
Thanks for all your corrections :)
Things that Aare Useless
Things that are Useless
When I was in middle school I loved to painting.
When I was in middle school I loved to paint.
My favorite artists inat thate time wasere: Leonardo Da Vinci, Miguel Achelangelo, Vincent Van Gogh and Pablo Picasso.
My favorite artists at the time were: Leonardo Da Vinci, Michelangelo, Vincent Van Gogh and Pablo Picasso.
I used to dream inof creating my own paintings, making my own techniques and my own style,s but people used to say me things likwould tell me: "Anybody can paint" "Painting is useless" "Nobody cares about painting".
I used to dream of creating my own paintings, making my own techniques and my own styles but people would tell me: "Anybody can paint" "Painting is useless" "Nobody cares about painting".
And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" likethat were more useful: math, mechanic, cooking, studying e, English, music and writing.
And when I started high school I began to do things that were more useful: math, mechanic, cooking, studying, English, music and writing.
Now I had lost my ability andthe motivation for drawing and painting and; sometimes I feelt sad because my future was very dull for meI have no interest in a creative outlet.
Now I had lost the motivation for drawing and painting; sometimes I feel sad because I have no interest in a creative outlet.
You're special and everything that you do is special.
If you're happy when you do something that you like, then it isn't useless. If you're happy when you do something that you like, then it isn't useless.
I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time tolots of time to improve at become ing a better artist.
I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have lots of time to improve at becoming a better artist.
After the long night
Here comes the sun ready to shine,
Ready to start again.
Every day and night
Even in winter
Thanks for all your corrections :)
Things that Aare Useless
Things that are Useless
When I was in middle school, I loved painting. When I was in middle school, I loved painting.
My favorite artists inat that time wasere Da Vinci, Miguel Achelangelo, Van Gogh and Picasso.
My favorite artists at that time were Da Vinci, Michelangelo, Van Gogh and Picasso.
I used to dream inof creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things to me like:, "Aanybody can paint," "Ppainting is useless," "Nnobody cares about painting"."
I used to dream of creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say things to me like, "anybody can paint," "painting is useless," "nobody cares about painting."
This is unfortunate. I'm sorry you were told these things.
And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying eEnglish, music and writing.
And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying English, music and writing.
I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting and sometimes I felt sad because my future wasould be very dull for me.
I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting and sometimes I felt sad because my future would be very dull for me.
future perfect tense
But atnear the end of high school I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody whom you love.
But near the end of high school I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody whom you love.
Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and, if you have discipline and passion, you can be a greatest musician.
Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and, if you have discipline and passion, you can be a great musician.
I have a friend whose boyfriend is a musician and he's having a very difficult time finding employment. I'd say he has discipline and passion. He works very hard. I've listened to his music and he's very, very good so it doesn't make sense to me.
Read fictional books woulding books of fiction won't save your from death or gainhelp you make money but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
Reading books of fiction won't save you from death or help you make money but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
Very nice sentence.
Anybody can write haiku, even a child can write a beautiful haiku, but, if you try writing a haiku, nobody will or can write a haiku in the same way likeas you, t. This applies forto drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
Anybody can write haiku, even a child can write a beautiful haiku but, if you try writing a haiku, nobody will or can write a haiku in the same way as you. This applies to drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
You're special and everything that you do is special.
Yes, maybe you can't gainmake enough money from something that you love but you can always do it in your free time, y. You don't need to be famous to do something unique, or to try to grow a career.
Yes, maybe you can't make enough money from something that you love but you can always do it in your free time. You don't need to be famous to do something unique or to try to grow a career.
If you're happy when you do something that you like, then it isn't useless. If you're happy when you do something that you like, then it isn't useless.
My first painting, after a three years is about a sunrise with a hiatus, is of a sunrise in the style of Van Gogh style.
My first painting, after a three year hiatus, is of a sunrise in the style of Van Gogh.
I don't want to drop out this time,. I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.
I don't want to drop out this time. I'm still young so I have time to become a better artist.
This haiku is inspired inby a song ofby The Beattles:
This haiku is inspired by a song by The Beatles:
After the long night
Here comes the sun ready to shine,
Ready to start again.
And this is a senryu, another kind of haiku that is about feelings and usually about love:
Every day and night
My love for you smells like spring My love for you smells like spring
Even in winter
Thanks for all your corrections :)
Feedback
Very good work!
Things tThat Are Useless
Things That Are Useless
When I was in middle school I loved painting. When I was in middle school I loved painting.
My favorite artists inat thate time wasere Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.
My favorite artists at the time were Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.
was --> were because there are multiple artists (was = only one)
I used to dream inof creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things like: "Anybody can paint", "Painting is useless", and "Nobody cares about painting".
I used to dream of creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say things like: "Anybody can paint", "Painting is useless", and "Nobody cares about painting".
dream of [something]
Commas between the different quotes because it's a list
AndSo when I started high school, I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying eEnglish, music and writing.
So when I started high school, I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying English, music and writing.
And --> So. "So" gives a sense of a next step; because these people said things to you, you chose to do "less useless" things.
Comma between "school" and "I" to make the transition smoother.
I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future was very dull for me. I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future was very dull for me.
Comma added to separate the two ideas.
But at the end of highschool I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody whomthat you love.
But at the end of highschool I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody that you love.
Music is "useless", but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and i. If you have discipline and passion, you can be athe greatest musician.
Music is "useless", but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song. If you have discipline and passion, you can be the greatest musician.
Reading fictional books wouldn't save your from death or gailet you earn money, but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
Reading fictional books won't save you from death or let you earn money, but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
Anybody can write haiku, e. Even a child can write a beautiful haiku, b. But if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way like you, t. This applies for drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
Anybody can write haiku. Even a child can write a beautiful haiku. But if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way like you. This applies for drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
You're special and everything that you do is special.
Yes, maybe you can't gain enough money from something that you love, but you can always do it in your free time, y. You don't need to be famous to do something unique, or try to grow a career.
Yes, maybe you can't gain enough money from something that you love, but you can always do it in your free time. You don't need to be famous to do something unique or try to grow a career.
If you're happy when you do something that you like, then isn't useless.
My first painting after three years is aboutof a sunrise within a Van Gogh style.
My first painting after three years is of a sunrise in a Van Gogh style.
I don't want to drop ouquit this time, I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.
I don't want to quit this time, I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.
"Drop out" is more used for schools or a formal setting. For example, he dropped out of school and decided to work part-time.
If it's a hobby and something that is not at an institution, English speakers tend to use "quit." For example, he quit drawing, or he quit listening to music.
This haiku is inspired in a song of The Beattles:
This haiku is inspired in a song of The Beatles:
After the long night
Here comes the sun ready to shine,
Ready to start again.
And this is a senryu, another kind of haiku that is about feelings and usually about love:
Every day and night
My love for you smells like spring My love for you smells like spring
Even in winter
Thanks for all your corrections :)
Feedback
I agree with your outlook on "useless" things! Even if something doesn't help you grow your career or earn you money, it lets you relax and have fun.
Great work!
Things that Are Useless
When I was in middle school I loved painting. When I was in middle school I loved painting.
My favorite artists inat thate time wasere Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.
My favorite artists at the time were Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.
"at the time" is a set phrase, and because you list more than one it's "was" -> "were"
I used to dream inof creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things to me like: "Anybody can paint", "Painting is useless", and "Nobody cares about painting".
I used to dream of creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say things to me like: "Anybody can paint", "Painting is useless", and "Nobody cares about painting".
AndThen when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" things like math, mechanics, cooking, studying eEnglish, music and writing.
Then when I started high school I began to do "less useless" things like math, mechanics, cooking, studying English, music and writing.
I don't think "And when~" is incorrect, but I think "Then when~" flows better for telling a story.
I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future wasfelt very dull forto me.
I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future felt very dull to me.
But at the end of highschool I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody whom you love.
Music is "useless", but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song a. And if you have discipline and passion, you can be a greatest musician.
Music is "useless", but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song. And if you have discipline and passion, you can be a great musician.
Reading fictional books wouldn't save your from death or help you gain money, but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
Reading fictional books wouldn't save you from death or help you gain money, but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
Anybody can write haiku, even a child can write a beautiful haiku, but if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way likeas you, t. This applies forto drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
Anybody can write haiku, even a child can write a beautiful haiku, but if you try writing a haiku, nobody can write a haiku in the same way as you. This applies to drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
You're special and everything that you do is special.
Yes, maybe you can't gainet enough money from something that you love, but you can always do it in your free time, y. You don't need to be famous to do something unique, or try to growstart a career.
Yes, maybe you can't get enough money from something that you love, but you can always do it in your free time. You don't need to be famous to do something unique, or try to start a career.
If you're happy when you do something that you like, then isn't useless.
My first painting after three years is about a sunrise within a Van Gogh style.
My first painting after three years is a sunrise in a Van Gogh style.
I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.
I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become a better artist.
You can only say "drop out" when you talk about quitting school, which you didn't mention earlier in the passage. Do you mean "I don't want to quit this time" or "I don't want to give up this time"?
This haiku is inspired inby a song ofby The Beattles:
This haiku is inspired by a song by The Beattles:
After the long night
Here comes the sun ready to shine,
Ready to start again.
And this is a senryu, another kind of haiku that is about feelings and usually about love:
Every day and night
My love for you smells like spring My love for you smells like spring
Even in winter
Thanks for all your corrections :)
Feedback
Nice work! This is very inspirational. :)
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When Iwas in middle school I loved painting. When I was in middle school I loved painting. When I was in middle school I loved painting. When I was in middle school I loved painting. When I was in middle school I loved painting. When I was in middle school, I loved painting. When I was in middle school, I loved painting.
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My favorite artists in that time was Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.
My favorite artists "at the time" is a set phrase, and because you list more than one it's "was" -> "were"
My favorite artists was --> were because there are multiple artists (was = only one)
My favorite artists
My favorite artists
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I used to dream in creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things like: "Anybody can paint" "Painting is useless" "Nobody cares about painting".
I used to dream
I used to dream dream of [something] Commas between the different quotes because it's a list
I used to dream This is unfortunate. I'm sorry you were told these things.
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And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanic, cooking, studying english, music and writing.
I don't think "And when~" is incorrect, but I think "Then when~" flows better for telling a story.
And --> So. "So" gives a sense of a next step; because these people said things to you, you chose to do "less useless" things. Comma between "school" and "I" to make the transition smoother.
And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying
And when I started high school I began to do things And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying english, music and writing. And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying english, music and writing. |
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I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting and sometimes I felt sad because my future was very dull for me.
I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future was very dull for me. I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future was very dull for me. Comma added to separate the two ideas.
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Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and if you have dicipline and passion, you can be a greatest musician.
Music is "useless", but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song
Music is "useless", but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song
Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and, if you have discipline and passion, you can be a great I have a friend whose boyfriend is a musician and he's having a very difficult time finding employment. I'd say he has discipline and passion. He works very hard. I've listened to his music and he's very, very good so it doesn't make sense to me.
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Read fictional books wouldn't save your from death or gain money but you cry when you read your favorite stories.
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Anybody can write haiku, even a child can write a beatiful haiku, but if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way like you, this applies for drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.
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Yes, maybe you can't gain enough money from something that you love but you can always do it in your free time, you don't need to be famous to do something unique, or try to grow a career.
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My first painting after three years is about a sunrise with a Van Gogh style.
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I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.
I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become You can only say "drop out" when you talk about quitting school, which you didn't mention earlier in the passage. Do you mean "I don't want to quit this time" or "I don't want to give up this time"?
I don't want to "Drop out" is more used for schools or a formal setting. For example, he dropped out of school and decided to work part-time. If it's a hobby and something that is not at an institution, English speakers tend to use "quit." For example, he quit drawing, or he quit listening to music.
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This haiku is inspired in a song of The Beattles:
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