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The last episode that I have seensaw yesterday The last episode that I saw yesterday

We can use "saw" instead of "have seen" here.

One of them showed enthusiastically shows off his new guitar and told toells his friends that it hadidn't have any scaratches or marks. One of them enthusiastically shows off his new guitar and tells his friends that it didn't have any scratches or marks.

One of them showed enthusiasticm for his new guitar and told to his friends that it hadidn't have any scars or marks. One of them showed enthusiasm for his new guitar and told his friends that it didn't have any scars or marks.

'one' instead of 'on', simply spelling mistake. Enthusiastic is a adjective, but for your sentence, you want to use enthusiasm instead. You don't need to indicate a 'to' before friends here, as it is implied that you all talking to them. Instead of "hadn't", you should say "didn't have" Think of it as "it did not have any" rather than "it had not any"

Unfortunately, the singer, whicho was completely high, took his friend's instrument and crushed it on the floor. Unfortunately, the singer, who was completely high, took his friend's instrument and crushed it on the floor.

The patient's blood work showed that he was a drug users. The patient's blood work showed that he was a drug user.

Although he had a fainting episodes attribuible to the drugs, apparently it couldn't be associated towith his addiction because he hadn't had any dose in the last ninety-six hours. Although he had fainting episodes attribuible to the drugs, apparently it couldn't be associated with his addiction because he hadn't had any dose in the last ninety-six hours.

Although heas had a fainting episodes attribuibleted to the drugs, apparently it couldn't be associated to his addiction because he hadn'ts not had any doseugs in the last ninety-six hours. Although has had fainting episodes attributed to the drugs, apparently it couldn't be associated to his addiction because he has not had any dugs in the last ninety-six hours.

just some gramma issues

Even though the blood work didn't show any suspectthing, dDoctor House, whicho is the main character of the show, wasn't sure about the first diagnosis. Even though the blood work didn't show anything, Doctor House, who is the main character of the show, wasn't sure about the first diagnosis.

Even though the blood work didn't show any suspect, doctor House, which is the main character of the show, wasn't sure about the first diagnosis. Even though the blood work didn't show any suspect, doctor House, which is the main character of the show, wasn't sure about the first diagnosis.

just a spelling issue.

In fact, House suspected that the patient hasd cancer, due to his bloody eyes and his commonfrequent migraines. In fact, House suspected that the patient had cancer, due to his bloody eyes and his frequent migraines.

In addition, the doctor noticed an unusually high level of some parameters concerning the immune system. In addition, the doctor noticed an unusually high level of some parameters concerning the immune system.

In addition, the doctor noticed an unusually high level of some of the parameters concerning the immune system. In addition, the doctor noticed unusually high level of some of the parameters concerning the immune system.

Small tweaks on grammer

After that, House confirmed his suspecticions, which explained the new symptoms like the singer's abdominal pain even after the huge dose of strong painkillers. After that, House confirmed his suspicions, which explained the new symptoms like the singer's abdominal pain even after the huge dose of strong painkillers.

After that, House confirmed his suspectsicion, which explains the new symptoms like the singer's abdominal pain even after the huge doseages of strong painkillers. After that, House confirmed his suspicion, which explains the new symptoms like the singer's abdominal pain even after huge dosages of strong painkillers.

Suspects is used mostly for multiple potential options, but in this case, his is confirming a suspicion on cause.

After that, doctors explained to the patient the high risk of chemotherapy but he refused to start the curereatment. After that, doctors explained to the patient the high risk of chemotherapy but he refused to start treatment.

InAt the end of the episode, after long dialoguescussions, the patient's condition became irreparable and after a lot of suffering bewas dead two days later. At the end of the episode, after long discussions, the patient's condition became irreparable and after a lot of suffering was dead two days later.

In the end of the episode, after long dialogues, the patient's condition became irreparable and after lot of suffering be deadied two days later. In the end of the episode, after long dialogues, the patient's condition became irreparable and after lot of suffering died two days later.

died is the correct word here.

I hope you understand at least a 70% of my writing, I'm trying to do my best. I hope you understand at least 70% of my writing, I'm trying to do my best.

Have a nice day. Have a nice day.

Today I would like to recap to you the last episode theat I have seen of a famous TV series on Netflix: Dr. House, episode number seven, "wWhatever iIt tTakes". Today I would like to recap to you the last episode that I have seen of a famous TV series on Netflix: House, episode number seven, "Whatever It Takes".

In English, the name of the show is just "House".

Today I would like to recap to you the last episode the I have seensaw of a famous TV series on Netflix: Dr. House, episode number seven, "whatever it takes". Today I would like to recap to you the last episode the I saw of a famous TV series on Netflix: Dr. House, episode number seven, "whatever it takes".

We can use "saw" instead of "have seen" here.

The episode starts duringat night, showing a group of four guys, who are apparently they were members of a small band of NY cin New York City. The episode starts at night, showing a group of four guys who are apparently members of a small band in New York City.

The episode starts during night, showing a group of four guys, apparently they were members of a small band ofin NY city. The episode starts during night, showing a group of four guys, apparently they were members of a small band in NY city.

"of NY city" makes it sound like the band is apart of a larger group called NY city. Since NY city is a place, we use "in" instead.

After that, three of them comewent back to the stage except for the singer, who suddenly started having difficulty to breatheing before fainting and passing out. After that, three of them went back to the stage except for the singer, who suddenly started having difficulty breathing before fainting and passing out.

Next, the episode shows two doctors checking the vital signs of the singer, who was being hospitalized (I think here would be better: who has been hospitalized but I'm not sure)now hospitalized, the same night. Next, the episode shows two doctors checking the vital signs of the singer, who was now hospitalized, the same night.

Next, the episode shows two doctors checking the vital signs of the singer, who was being hospitalized (I think here would be better: who has been hospitalized but I'm not sure) the same night. Next, the episode shows two doctors checking the vital signs of the singer, who was being hospitalized (I think here would be better: who has been hospitalized but I'm not sure) the same night.

"who has been hospitalized" is the correct one