Dec. 13, 2020
Journal 12/13/20
This morning, a language partner asked me if I liked my job. This is a question that is hard to answer. People should have a job for living, so they must have a job, but the job they do is not necessarily their favorite. To be honest, my current job is only my living support. It is hard to say whether I like it or not. Things that I like the most are still doing business and making money. Even if you are a civil servant, you are still an employee, only your boss is the country. As an employee, you can’t be rich in your life and your salary is just able to support your living. Besides, in every aspect you can’t do things according to your opinion. If you run a business, you can act according to your own will and make a lot of money. In my opinion, if you think you are a person with great ability, you better be a businessman rather than be a civil servant.
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Journal 12/13/20
This morning, a language partner asked me if I liked my job.
People should have a job for living, so they must have a job, but the job they do isneed a job to make a living, but it may not necessarily be their favorite.
People need a job to make a living, but it may not necessarily be their favorite.
Your original sentence is understandable. But I suggest a different phrase – "need a job to make a living" – to make the idea I think you're expressing here more clear.
To be honest, my current job is only my living supportto support my needs.
To be honest, my current job is only to support my needs.
You could also say, "To be honest, my current job is just to pay my bills." This means, I'm just doing my job to pay for the things I need (my rent, food, etc.) but not because I like it.
As an employee, you can’t begrow rich in your life and y. Your salary is just able to support your living.
As an employee, you can’t grow rich. Your salary is just able to support your living.
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Nicely written! You may enjoy this book: " Choose Yourself: Be Happy, Make Millions, Live the Dream" by James Altucher - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/17977529-choose-yourself
I think he shares some you your ideas.
Dec. 13, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and comments.
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Journal 12/13/20 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This morning, a language partner asked me if I liked my job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is a question that is hard to answer. |
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People should have a job for living, so they must have a job, but the job they do is not necessarily their favorite.
People Your original sentence is understandable. But I suggest a different phrase – "need a job to make a living" – to make the idea I think you're expressing here more clear. |
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To be honest, my current job is only my living support.
To be honest, my current job is only You could also say, "To be honest, my current job is just to pay my bills." This means, I'm just doing my job to pay for the things I need (my rent, food, etc.) but not because I like it. |
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It is hard to say whether I like it or not. |
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Things that I like the most are still doing business and making money. |
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Even if you are a civil servant, you are still an employee, only your boss is the country. |
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As an employee, you can’t be rich in your life and your salary is just able to support your living.
As an employee, you can’t |
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Besides, in every aspect you can’t do things according to your opinion. |
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If you run a business, you can act according to your own will and make a lot of money. |
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In my opinion, if you think you are a person with great ability, you better be a businessman rather than be a civil servant. |
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