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Getting Together with friends from middle school

I met my friends from middle school last night.
It's been a while since we met. I remember the last time we met was last April.

We talked about our daily lives and shared how our kids are growing up for a long time.
Most of us, 5 of 6, had a child or children, so we had a lot of things to talk about.

We were pleased not only by the gathering but also by the delicious dishes.
We first ate 'yakitori', which was grilled chicken with sauce, and sukiyaki, which was 'shabushabu' with soy sauce, and drank adult beverages at a Japanese restaurant.
After eating Japanese dishes, we moved to the second restaurant, which served ram barbecue until midnight.

We promised to meet soon, and I'm looking forward to getting together again.

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I met my friends from middle school last night.

I remember the last time we met was last April.

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I met my friends from middle school last night.

I remember the last time we met was last April.

We were pleased not only by the gathering but also by the delicious dishes.

Getting Together with friends from middle school


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I met my friends from middle school last night.


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It's been a while since we met.


It's been a while since we met've last seen each other. It's been a while since we've last seen each other.

It's been a while since I saw them/we met. It's been a while since I saw them/we met.

My version is less repetitive.

I remember the last time we met was last April.


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We talked about our daily lives and shared how our kids are growing up for a long time.


We talked for a long time about our daily lives and shared how our kids are growing up for a long time. We talked for a long time about our daily lives and shared how our kids are growing up.

We talked for a long time about our daily lives and (shared) how our kids are growing up for a long time. We talked for a long time about our daily lives and (shared) how our kids are growing up.

Better to remove “shared”.

Most of us, 5 of 6, had a child or children, so we had a lot of things to talk about.


Most of us, 5 of 6, hadve a child or children, so we had a lot of things to talk about. Most of us, 5 of 6, have a child or children, so we had a lot of things to talk about.

We were pleased not only by the gathering but also by the delicious dishes.


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We were pleased not only by the gathering, but also by the delicious dishes. We were pleased not only by the gathering, but also by the delicious dishes.

We first ate 'yakitori', which was grilled chicken with sauce, and sukiyaki, which was 'shabushabu' with soy sauce, and drank adult beverages at a Japanese restaurant.


We first ate 'yakitori', which wais grilled chicken with sauce, and sukiyaki, which wais 'shabushabu' with soy sauce, and drank adult beverageslcohol at a Japanese restaurant. We first ate 'yakitori', which is grilled chicken with sauce, and sukiyaki, which is 'shabushabu' with soy sauce, and drank alcohol at a Japanese restaurant.

alcohol sounds more natural than adult beverages

After eating Japanese dishes, we moved to the second restaurant, which served ram barbecue until midnight.


After eatingWhen we finished the Japanese dishes, we moved to the second restaurant, which served ram barbecue until midnight. When we finished the Japanese dishes, we moved to the second restaurant, which served ram barbecue until midnight.

After eating the Japanese dishes, we went/moved to thea second restaurant, which served ram barbecue ram until midnight. After eating the Japanese dishes, we went/moved to a second restaurant, which served barbecue ram until midnight.

We promised to meet soon, and I'm looking forward to getting together again.


We promised to meet again soon, andso I'm looking forward to getting together again. We promised to meet again soon, so I'm looking forward to getting together again.

We promised to meet again soon, and I'm looking forward to gettingthe next get together again. We promised to meet again soon, and I'm looking forward to the next get together.

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