Dec. 18, 2024
Hi, my name is evelyn and I live in Mexico and I like watching movies and series.
Really, I would like to learn english because It useful for my university, so I need to pass the exam. This vacations I am learning more english and
I feel more save with english.
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Hi, my name is eEvelyn. and I live in Mexico and I like watching movies and series.
Hi, my name is Evelyn. I live in Mexico and I like watching movies and series.
Really, I would like to learn eEnglish because Iit useful for my university, studies so I need to pass the exam.
Really, I would like to learn English because it useful for my university studies so I need to pass the exam.
This vacations I am learning more eEnglish and
I feel more save with english.confident.
This vacations I am learning more English and
I feel more confident.
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Hi, my name is eEvelyn, and I live in Mexico and. For fun, I like watching movies and TV series.
Hi, my name is Evelyn, and I live in Mexico. For fun, I like watching movies and TV series.
Really, I would like to learn eEnglish because Iit would useful for my university, . Also, I need to pass the examan exam (that tests my level of English).
I would like to learn English because it would useful for my university. Also, I need to pass an exam (that tests my level of English).
TFor this vacations, I am learning more eEnglish and
I feel more save with englishcomfortable with this language.
For this vacation, I am learning more English and
I feel more comfortable with this language.
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Hope to hear more from you. I edited your post to sound more natural and avoid redundancies.
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My Beginning
Hi, my name is eEvelyn and I live in Mexico and. I like watching movies and TV series.
Hi, my name is Evelyn and I live in Mexico. I like watching movies and TV series.
Really, I wouldI'd really like to learn eEnglish because Itit's useful forat my university, so I need to pass the exam.
I'd really like to learn English because it's useful at my university, so I need to pass the exam.
This vacations, I a'm learning more eEnglish and
I feel more save with englishcomfortable with it.
This vacation, I'm learning more English and I feel more comfortable with it.
I think you mean "confident" here, but "comfortable could work too. There's a slight difference in meaning though.
Hi, my name is eEvelyn and. I live in Mexico, and I like watching movies and TV series.
Hi, my name is Evelyn. I live in Mexico, and I like watching movies and TV series.
ReActually, I would like to learn eEnglish because Itit's useful for my university, so I need to pass the exam.
Actually, I would like to learn English because it's useful for my university, so I need to pass the exam.
perhaps you mean "required for my degree"?
This vacationsDuring the break, I am learning more eEnglish, and
I feel more save with englishconfident with it.
During the break, I am learning more English, and I feel more confident with it.
I presume you mean a break from school - if you are taking a trip somewhere you could say "for this vacation".
Also I think you mean to spell "safe", but you cannot be "safe" with knowledge.
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Great start overall :)
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Hi, my name is evelyn and I live in Mexico and I like watching movies and series.
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Really, I would like to learn english because It useful for my university, so I need to pass the exam.
perhaps you mean "required for my degree"?
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This vacations I am learning more english and I feel more save with english.
I presume you mean a break from school - if you are taking a trip somewhere you could say "for this vacation". Also I think you mean to spell "safe", but you cannot be "safe" with knowledge.
This vacation I think you mean "confident" here, but "comfortable could work too. There's a slight difference in meaning though.
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