When I do daily chores like watering flowers in the garden, the parents of the kids pass me by,often walk by and saying, "Great work! When I do daily chores like watering flowers in the garden, the parents of the kids often walk by and say, "Great work!

When I do daily chores like watering flowers in the garden, the parents of the kids pass me by, saying/ praising, "Great work! When I do daily chores like watering flowers in the garden, the parents of the kids pass me by, saying/ praising, "Great work!

RefreshingThose beautiful flowers are a feast for my eyes!"refreshing. Those beautiful flowers are refreshing.

I believe the original sentence is grammatical correct, however, I think it does feel a little unnatural.

RefreshingLively, beautiful flowers are a feast for my eyes!" Lively, beautiful flowers are a feast for my eyes!"

"Refreshing" is more used for drinks (like a cold drink in summer), or to describe a change that is stimulating, like "My coworkers in the office love to complain, so it's refreshing when someone comes in with a positive attitude."

Refreshing beautiful flowers are a feast for my eyes!" beautiful flowers are a feast for my eyes!"

RThese refreshing beautiful flowers are a feast for my eyes!"/ these flowers are beautiful! These refreshing beautiful flowers are a feast for my eyes!"/ these flowers are beautiful!

Depending on what type of English you are, it may sound not natural. Even may be natural. But casually it could be as above.

Getting praised for my flowers assures me that my golden years are bright and satisfying even after I have turned 81 (years old). Getting praised for my flowers assures me that my golden years are bright and satisfying even after I have turned 81 (years old).

Getting praised/ commended for my flowers assures me that my golden years are bright and satisfying even after I have turned 81 years old. Getting praised/ commended for my flowers assures me that my golden years are bright and satisfying even after I have turned 81 years old.

During such fulfilling moments, sometimes it occurs to me that themy memoryies of my elementary school days comes back. to me. During such fulfilling moments, sometimes my memories of my elementary school days come back to me.

During suchthese fulfilling moments, sometimes it occurs to me that the memory of my own elementary school days comes flooding back. During these fulfilling moments, sometimes the memory of my own elementary school days come flooding back.

Or "Sometimes, during these fulfilling moments, I think back to my own memory of my elementary school days."

During such fulfilling moments, sometimes it occurs to me that the memory of my elementary school days comes backto me. During such fulfilling moments, sometimes the memory of my elementary school days comes to me.

DSometimes during such fulfilling moments, sometimes it occurs to me that the memory of my elementary school days comes back. to me/ I recall my elementary school days. Sometimes during such fulfilling moments, the memory of my elementary school days comes back to me/ I recall my elementary school days.

During such fulfilling moments, sometimes it occurs to me that the memoryies of my elementary school days comes back. During such fulfilling moments, sometimes memories of my elementary school days comes back.

As a fifth grader with bobbed hair, I volunteered to become a member of athe beautification club. As a fifth grader with bobbed hair, I volunteered to become a member of the beautification club.

As a fifth grader with bobbed hair, I had volunteered to become a member of a beautification club. As a fifth grader with bobbed hair, I had volunteered to become a member of a beautification club.

Small grammar

However, encouragement from themy schoolmates and the teachers in charge kept usme moving forward. However, encouragement from my schoolmates and teachers in charge kept me moving forward.

However, encouragement from themy schoolmates and the teacher in charge kept us moving forward. However, encouragement from my schoolmates and the teacher in charge kept us moving forward.

However, encouragement from the schoolmates and the teacher in charge kept us moving forwartivated. However, encouragement from the schoolmates and the teacher in charge kept us motivated.

However, encouragement from themy schoolmates and the teacher in charge kept us moving forward. However, encouragement from my schoolmates and teacher in charge kept us moving forward.

Days of 5th grade make my golden age

Days ofin 5th grade makecontribute to my golden age Days in 5th grade contribute to my golden age

Days of 5th grade makehave brought me to my golden age Days of 5th grade have brought me to my golden age

Not sure what you mean by "make"? Like how your days have helped you reach your golden age?

Days of 5Fifth grade makewas my golden age Fifth grade was my golden age

When a sentence starts with a number, the rule is write it out alphabetically (in reality, very few people care about this rule).

This was because I thought I could make every bit of ourmy school life enjoyable through school-beautifying activities such as planting flowers. This was because I thought I could make every bit of my school life enjoyable through school-beautifying activities such as planting flowers.

This was because I thought I could make every bit of our school life enjoyable through school-beautifying activities, such as planting flowers. This was because I thought I could make every bit of our school life enjoyable through school-beautifying activities, such as planting flowers.

It was not uncommon that the flowers that I took good care of withered, or I felt reluctant to pull up weeds under the scorching sun during midsummer. It was not uncommon that the flowers that I took good care of withered, or I felt reluctant to pull up weeds under the scorching sun during summer.

It was not uncommon that the flowers that I took good care of would have withered, or Ithat I would have felt reluctant to pull up weeds under the scorching sun during midsummer. It was not uncommon that the flowers that I took good care of would have withered, or that I would have felt reluctant to pull up weeds under the scorching sun during midsummer.

I believe the experience back in those days had a positive impact on my life,fostered my consideration of others, and affection for plants, having a positive impact on my life. I believe the experience back in those days had a positive impact on my life,fostered my consideration of others, and affection for plants.

I believe themy experience back in those days had a positive impact on my life, as it fostered my consideration of others and affection for plants, having a positive impact on my life. I believe my experience back in those days had a positive impact on my life, as it fostered my consideration of others and affection for plants.

I believe the experience back in those days fostered my consideration of others and affection for plants, having and had a positive impact on my life. I believe the experience back in those days fostered my consideration of others and affection for plants and had a positive impact on my life.

I believe the experience back in those days fostered my consideration of others and affection for plants, havingand hence had a positive impact on my life. I believe the experience back in those days fostered my consideration of others and affection for plants, and hence had a positive impact on my life.

I believe the experiences back in those days fostered my consideration of others and affection for plants, hleaving a positive impact on my life. I believe the experiences back in those days fostered my consideration of others and affection for plants, leaving a positive impact on my life.

Realizing that I'm enjoying my old age to the fullest, I will keep working harder. Realizing that I'm enjoying my old age to the fullest, I will keep working hard.

Realizing thathow much I'm enjoying my old age to the fullest, I will has motivated me to work harder. Realizing how much I'm enjoying my old age to the fullest has motivated me to work harder.

Realizing that I'm enjoying my old age to the fullest, I will work (even) harder. Realizing that I'm enjoying my old age to the fullest, I will work (even) harder.

You could add "even" for emphasis.