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Jan. 23, 2021

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Use of Social Media

I think children should be restricted to use social media because they don't have enough knowledge. Using social media, we can relate to various people, but we can't know what they are like accurately. They may be a scammer or a malicious person. Even though some adults, who have common sense and life experience, are deceived by them, children are too gullible to use the internet.
Frankly speaking, there is too much inaccurate and harmful information on social media, for example, conspiracy theory. Children don't have well-established self-consciousness, so they may be inspired by radical thoughts.

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Use of Social Media

They may be a scammer or a malicious person.

Children don't have well-established self-consciousness, so they may be inspired by radical thoughts.

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ponta

Jan. 24, 2021

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Use of Social Media


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I think children should be restricted to use social media because they don't have enough knowledge.


I think children should bhave restricted to useaccess to social media because they don't have enough knowledge. I think children should have restricted access to social media because they don't have enough knowledge.

Using social media, we can relate to various people, but we can't know what they are like accurately.


Using social media, we can relate to variousmany people, but we can't know what they are like accurately. Using social media, we can relate to many people, but we can't know what they are like accurately.

They may be a scammer or a malicious person.


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Even though some adults, who have common sense and life experience, are deceived by them, children are too gullible to use the internet.


Even though some adults, who have common sense and life experience, are deceived by them, children are too gullible to use the internet. Even some adults, who have common sense and life experience, are deceived by them, children are too gullible to use the internet.

Frankly speaking, there is too much inaccurate and harmful information on social media, for example, conspiracy theory.


Frankly speaking, there is too much inaccurate and harmful information on social media, for example, conspiracy theoryies. Frankly speaking, there is too much inaccurate and harmful information on social media, for example, conspiracy theories.

if you say conspiracy theory (singular) then I think you need to specify a specific example.

Children don't have well-established self-consciousness, so they may be inspired by radical thoughts.


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