Translated story part 2 Translated story part 2

Emma felt overwhelmed by the stress of the next robotics competition. Emma felt overwhelmed by the stress of the next robotics competition.

"robotic" is an adjective. "robotics" is the noun.

The design of her teamHer team's design was almost done, but her rival, Marcos, was always had a step ovahead of her . Her team's design was almost done, but her rival, Marcos, was always a step ahead of her.

If by "team" you meant her robots, your original sentence is correct. But if by "team" you meant her teammates working on the same project, "Her team's design" is more concise and natural. Also, "(be) a/one step ahead" is a set expression.

The design of her team was almost done, but her rival, Marcos, always hadwas a step over ahead. The design of her team was almost done, but her rival, Marcos, always was a step ahead.

Step over= go above something step ahead= has advantage

One night, she discovered a strange malfunctionbug in the system and she suspected in a sabotage. One night, she discovered a strange bug in the system and suspected a sabotage.

You may omit the second "she" so as to avoid sounding too repetitive.

One night, she discovered a strange malfunction in the system and she suspected in a sabotage. One night, she discovered a strange malfunction in the system and she suspected sabotage.

However, instead of panicking, she took a deep breath to soothe herself and worked for a lateong time to fix it. However, instead of panicking, she took a deep breath to soothe herself and worked for a long time to fix it.

However, instead of panicing, she took a deep breath to soothe herself and worked for a late timuntil late to fix it. However, instead of panicing, she took a deep breath to soothe herself and worked until late to fix it.

In tThe next day, her team presencompleted the presentation perfectly. The next day, her team completed the presentation perfectly.

Soon, she heard Marcos admitting that he had sabotaged tohem by penetrating their code. Soon, she heard Marcos admitting that he had sabotaged them by penetrating their code.

Soon, she heard Marcos admitting that he sabotaged toby penetrating their code. Soon, she heard Marcos admitting that he sabotaged by penetrating their code.

With a quiet confidence, she reported him, and justice was achieserved. With a quiet confidence, she reported him, and justice was served.

You may also write "With quiet confidence".

With a quiet confidence, she reported him, and justice was achieserved. With a quiet confidence, she reported him, and justice was served.

This is correct, but it would be more natural to say "justice was served."

The victory, achieved with integrity, was much sweeter than revenge. The victory, achieved with integrity, was much sweeter than revenge.

The victory, achieved with integrity, was much sweeter than revenge. The victory, achieved with integrity, was much sweeter than revenge.

this is very true