Sept. 14, 2024
How I discover this website
During this afternoon I was boring and I was scrolling on youtube.
Until I discovered the youtube chanel of https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries and she made a video about how to learn english like an adult (or something like this).
Next in her video she mentioned this website.
So just after I will go check this website out .
I think that website is really great because I can improve my english level to later because I really would like to move in USA.By the way during this summer I went in Houston for 1 month in family and it was amazing.
For the moment I'm a teenager and I'm from France. What we learn in English subject at school is really bad.
So I hope my english is not too bad.
Have a good day
Cet après-midi, je m'ennuyais et je scrollais sur YouTube, jusqu'à ce que je découvre la chaîne YouTube de https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries .
Elle avait fait une vidéo sur comment apprendre l'anglais en tant qu'adulte (ou quelque chose comme ça).
Dans sa vidéo, elle mentionnait un site web. Juste après, je suis allé y jeter un œil. Je pense que ce site est vraiment sympa parce qu'il me permet d'améliorer mon niveau d'anglais pour l'avenir, car j'aimerais vraiment déménager aux États-Unis.
D'ailleurs, pendant ces vacances d'été, je suis allé à Houston pendant un mois, dans une famille, et c'était génial.
Pour le moment, je suis adolescent et je viens de France. Ce qu'on apprend en anglais à l'école est très insuffisant. J'espère donc que mon anglais n'est pas trop mauvais.
Passez une bonne journée !
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During this afternoon I was boringed and I was scrolling on youtube.
During this afternoon I was bored and I was scrolling on youtube.
Until I discovered the youtube chanel of https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries and she made a video about how to learn english like an adult (or something like this).
Until I discovered the youtube chanel https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries and she made a video about how to learn english like an adult (or something like this).
Next, in her video she mentioned this website. Next, in her video she mentioned this website.
So just after I willanted to go check this website out .
So just after I wanted to go check this website out .
I think that website is really great because I can improve my english level to later because I really would like to move into the USA.By the way during this summer I went into Houston for 1a month inwith my family and it was amazing.
I think that website is really great because I can improve my english level to later because I really would like to move to the USA.By the way during this summer I went to Houston for a month with my family and it was amazing.
For the momentCurrently, I'm a teenager and I'm from France.
Currently, I'm a teenager and I'm from France.
What we learn in English as a subject at school is really bad. What we learn in English as a subject at school is really bad.
How I discovered this website How I discovered this website
During tThis afternoon, I was boringed and I was scrolling on yYoutTube.
This afternoon, I was bored and I was scrolling on YouTube.
UntilThen, I discovered the yYoutTube channel of Veronika's Language Diaries, this is the link to her channel (https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries and s). She made a video about how to learn eEnglish like an adult (or something like thisat).
Then, I discovered the YouTube channel of Veronika's Language Diaries, this is the link to her channel (https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries). She made a video about how to learn English like an adult (or something like that).
Next iIn her video, she mentionedtalked about this website.
In her video, she talked about this website.
So just after I will gImmediately after watching the video, I came to check this website out .
Immediately after watching the video, I came to check this website out.
I think thate website is really great becausegreat. I can improve my eEnglish level to later, because I really would like to move into the USA. By the way during, this summer I went into Houston for 1 month inwith my family and it was amazing.
I think the website is great. I can improve my English, because I would like to move to the US. By the way, this summer I went to Houston for 1 month with my family and it was amazing.
Proper nouns e.g. English, YouTube should be in capital letter.
For the moment I'm a teenager and I'm from France.
I'm a teenager and I'm from France.
What we learn in English subject at school is really badIn school, we are not taught English very well.
In school, we are not taught English very well.
So I hope my english is not too bad.
Have a good day
Feedback
Welcome, I hope you'll have a great time here.
Have a nice day too.
How I discovered this website How I discovered this website
During thise afternoon, I was boringed and I was scrolling on yYoutTube.
During the afternoon, I was bored and was scrolling on YouTube.
UntilThen, I discovered the yYoutTube channel of https://www.youtube.com/@"veronika_languagediaries" and she mhade a video about how to learn eEnglish likeas an adult (or something like this).
Then, I discovered the YouTube channel of "veronika_languagediaries" and she had a video about how to learn English as an adult.
Next iIn her video, she mentioned this website.
In her video, she mentioned this website.
So jus, right after I will go checkwatching the video, I went and checked out this website out .
So, right after watching the video, I went and checked out this website.
I think that this website is really great because. I cwant to improve my eEnglish level to later because I would really would like to move into the USA. By the way, during thise summer, I went into Houston for 1 month inwith my family and it was amazing.
I think that this website is really great. I want to improve my English level because I would really like to move to the USA. By the way, during the summer, I went to Houston for 1 month with my family and it was amazing.
Be careful of sentences with multiple "because" -- your first sentence has 2x "because". This is a signal that you might need to have more than one sentence.
ForAt the moment, I'm a teenager and I'm from France.
At the moment, I'm a teenager from France.
You don't need to 2x "I'm"
What we learn during English subjectclasses at school is not really baduseful.
What we learn during English classes at school is not really useful.
Or:
"What we learn from our English lessons at school is not really useful"
So, I hope my eEnglish is not too bad.
So, I hope my English is not too bad.
Have a good day
Feedback
Great work.
Some tips:
- Remember to always capitalize proper nouns (e.g. YouTube, English, French)
- Review the sentences you write. If you see duplication, it may mean there's a way to simplify things. For example, be careful with (2x "I am") or (2x "because").
Sept. 14, 2024
Alright I take some notes thank you. But yeah I think one of my bigest problem is that I lack of vocabulary. And just i have one question how do you know if you must put 'this' or 'that' because the difference is a little bit tricky for me .
Sept. 14, 2024
To build vocabulary quickly, I'd recommend to find something that interests you and immerse yourself in content around that topic. For example, if you love gaming or sports, or movies, travel, food, etc. then you can find lots of great content on Netflix, YouTube, etc.
If you search "this that these those" on Google, you can find lots of resources.
e.g. https://www.lewolang.com/index.php/english-grammar/6/this-that-these-those
Don't worry if you don't get it perfect. Even if you mix up "this/that", we can still understand what you mean.
Good luck!
Sept. 14, 2024
It's also called "demonstrative determiners" -- you can search for that online
Sept. 14, 2024
Ok , thank you I will take a look
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