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《天堂旅行团》

这本书的作者是张嘉佳。在Ins有人推荐这本书,所以我开始读。这本小书的更改是有一个20岁的男人,因为他妈得病,他老婆要离婚,所以他想自杀,不过一个要死的7岁的小孩子救了他,怎么救他呢?她求他带她去看一个演唱会。这本书是悲剧的,很容易流泪。故事里说了他们的旅行,然后回来后发生了什么。

我开始这本书的时候,我的想法是男主角是四十多岁的男人,没想到他会那么年轻。他以为自己没什么特别点,但是我在故事里发现他有很多好点,都亏了小孩子-小聚。因为他的妈妈生病,他离开公司。在那段时间,他的老婆想离婚。因为他的妈妈想儿子不离婚,她要自杀,但瘫痪了。我觉得他的老婆像逃避责任。那个情况的确是很难,但是在那个时候离婚,是像用刀刺进他的心里。我得谢谢小聚和他的朋友,因为他们帮他改变那些坏心思。最后他写了一首歌,歌名是小说名。

你看过这本书吗?


The author of this book is Zhang Jiajia. Someone recommended this book on Instagram, so I started reading it.

The story of this short book is about a 20-year-old man. Because his mother is ill and his wife wants a divorce, he wants to commit suicide. However, a 7-year-old child who is also dying saves him. How does she save him? She begged him to take her to a concert.

This book is a tragedy. It is very easy to cry while reading it. The story talks about their journey and what happened after they came back.

When I started this book, I thought the male protagonist was a man in his forties. I didn’t expect him to be so young. He thought he had nothing special about him, but in the story, I discovered that he had many good qualities, all thanks to the little girl, Xiao Ju.

Because his mother was sick, he left his job. During that time, his wife wanted a divorce. Because his mother didn’t want her son to divorce, she attempted suicide but became paralysed instead. I think his wife was trying to run away from responsibility. The situation was indeed very difficult, but divorcing him at that time was like stabbing him in the heart with a knife.

I have to thank Xiao Ju and his friend because they helped him to stop thinking negatively. In the end, he wrote a song, and the title of the song is the same as the title of the novel.

Have you read this book?

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《天堂旅行团》

这本书的作者是张嘉佳。

在Ins看到有人推荐这本书,所以我开始读

这本小书的更改梗概是有一个20岁的男人,因为他妈得病,他老婆要离婚,所以他想自杀,不过一个要死病重的7岁小孩救了他,怎么救他呢?

The author of this book is Zhang Jiajia. Someone recommended this book on Instagram, so I started reading it.

The story of this short book is about a 20-year-old man. Because his mother is ill and his wife wants a divorce, he wants to commit suicide. However, a 7-year-old child who is also dying saves him. How does she save him? She begged him to take her to a concert.

This book is a tragedy. It is very easy to cry while reading it. The story talks about their journey and what happened after they came back.

When I started this book, I thought the male protagonist was a man in his forties. I didn’t expect him to be so young. He thought he had nothing special about him, but in the story, I discovered that he had many good qualities, all thanks to the little girl, Xiao Ju.

Because his mother was sick, he left his job. During that time, his wife wanted a divorce. Because his mother didn’t want her son to divorce, she attempted suicide but became paralysed instead. I think his wife was trying to run away from responsibility. The situation was indeed very difficult, but divorcing him at that time was like stabbing him in the heart with a knife.

I have to thank Xiao Ju and his friend because they helped him to stop thinking negatively. In the end, he wrote a song, and the title of the song is the same as the title of the novel.

Have you read this book?

她求他带她去看一个演唱会。

这本书是悲剧的,很容易惹人流泪。

如果不修改,就是这本书要流泪了呀

故事里说了他们的旅行,然后以及回来后发生了什么。

我开始这本书的时候,我的想法是以为男主角是四十多岁的男人,没想到他会那么年轻。

他以为自己没什么特别,但是我在故事里发现他有很多点,都亏了小孩子-小聚。

因为他的妈妈生病,他离开公司。

在那段时间,他的老婆想离婚。

因为他的妈妈想儿子不离婚,她要自杀,但瘫痪了。

我觉得他的老婆像逃避责任。

那个情况的确是很难,但是在那个时候离婚,像用刀刺进他的心里。

我得谢谢小聚和他的朋友,因为他们帮他改变那些坏心思。

最后他写了一首歌,歌名是小说名。

你看过这本书吗?

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我没看过这本书,但有个疑问:一个20岁的人,有妻子?

《天堂旅行团》


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这本书的作者是张嘉佳。


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在Ins有人推荐这本书,所以我开始读。


在Ins看到有人推荐这本书,所以我开始读

这本小书的更改是有一个20岁的男人,因为他妈得病,他老婆要离婚,所以他想自杀,不过一个要死的7岁的小孩子救了他,怎么救他呢?


这本小书的更改梗概是有一个20岁的男人,因为他妈得病,他老婆要离婚,所以他想自杀,不过一个要死病重的7岁小孩救了他,怎么救他呢?

The author of this book is Zhang Jiajia. Someone recommended this book on Instagram, so I started reading it. The story of this short book is about a 20-year-old man. Because his mother is ill and his wife wants a divorce, he wants to commit suicide. However, a 7-year-old child who is also dying saves him. How does she save him? She begged him to take her to a concert. This book is a tragedy. It is very easy to cry while reading it. The story talks about their journey and what happened after they came back. When I started this book, I thought the male protagonist was a man in his forties. I didn’t expect him to be so young. He thought he had nothing special about him, but in the story, I discovered that he had many good qualities, all thanks to the little girl, Xiao Ju. Because his mother was sick, he left his job. During that time, his wife wanted a divorce. Because his mother didn’t want her son to divorce, she attempted suicide but became paralysed instead. I think his wife was trying to run away from responsibility. The situation was indeed very difficult, but divorcing him at that time was like stabbing him in the heart with a knife. I have to thank Xiao Ju and his friend because they helped him to stop thinking negatively. In the end, he wrote a song, and the title of the song is the same as the title of the novel. Have you read this book?

她求他带她去看一个演唱会。


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这本书是悲剧的,很容易流泪。


这本书是悲剧的,很容易惹人流泪。

如果不修改,就是这本书要流泪了呀

故事里说了他们的旅行,然后回来后发生了什么。


故事里说了他们的旅行,然后以及回来后发生了什么。

我开始这本书的时候,我的想法是男主角是四十多岁的男人,没想到他会那么年轻。


我开始这本书的时候,我的想法是以为男主角是四十多岁的男人,没想到他会那么年轻。

他以为自己没什么特别点,但是我在故事里发现他有很多好点,都亏了小孩子-小聚。


他以为自己没什么特别,但是我在故事里发现他有很多点,都亏了小孩子-小聚。

因为他的妈妈生病,他离开公司。


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在那段时间,他的老婆想离婚。


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因为他的妈妈想儿子不离婚,她要自杀,但瘫痪了。


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我觉得他的老婆像逃避责任。


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那个情况的确是很难,但是在那个时候离婚,是像用刀刺进他的心里。


那个情况的确是很难,但是在那个时候离婚,像用刀刺进他的心里。

我得谢谢小聚和他的朋友,因为他们帮他改变那些坏心思。


我得谢谢小聚和他的朋友,因为他们帮他改变那些坏心思。

最后他写了一首歌,歌名是小说名。


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你看过这本书吗?


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