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I think skateboarding is pretty cool, and I also think the scene of a group of people playing skayeboard together is very attractive. Though there are a few elementory students play skateboard, they just slip, do nothing technical. I had thought about learning skateboard for 2 years, the reason why I hesitated was that I was not sure if I could insist learning it. In the end, I thought it was time to start, so I started to learn in November 2020. I watched some teaching videos online before I went to the playground. I played alone in the playground in the middle school. It took me several hours to learn how to slip smoothly. And I found out that it was so tired after practising, I thought it was so easy when I saw others playing it.
After learning slipping, I learnt how to turn. Though the playground was too small to skateboard, when I was skating, I went through the wind like a sword. It felt like I was flying or surfing in the sea, which was extremely amazing. I never felt like this before.
I spent a long time to learn how to control the board naturely. When I was turning too fast and felt like I was going to hit the lamppost, I was quite scared. Actually, there was still enough distance for me to turn. If I had been confident enough, I should have succeed. It was more like a mental sport than a physical one. Eventhough, I still wasn't able to succeed every time. Because knowing didn't mean being able to.
Two months later, I thought I was able to learn some technics/styles. (I'm not sure the exact word.) I watched a few videos, some ups advise that shove it should be first style of fresh learner, while the others recommended ollie. I picked shove it. But I was so scared that I wuold get hurt. As a result, I didn't succeed. Eventhough I had practised for a long time. Then I started to learn ollie, it was the same result.
I saw a vedio of a little girl, who is good at skateboarding. She said: when you believe you can do it, you will succeed; if you don't, won't. I was totally agreed with her. I had got hurt a lot when I was young, such as the ankle ligament injury, which relapses easily and takes me long time to recover. I think I am brave enough, but my body remembers the pain and try to protect itself. So I am not sure I can do ollie successfully in the future.
BTW, summer is blistering, so I stop playing skateboard. I am not sure whether I will keep practising in winter, because playing lonely is quit boring.

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It took me several hours to learn how to slip smoothly.

After learning slipping, I learnt how to turn.

It was more like a mental sport than a physical one.

As a result, I didn't succeed.

I was totally agreed with her.

The Skateboarding


I think skateboarding is pretty cool, and I also think the scene of a group of people playing skayeboard together is very attractive.


I think that skateboarding is pretty cool, and I also think that the scene of a group of people playing skayteboarding together is very attractive. I think that skateboarding is pretty cool, and I also think that the scene of a group of people skateboarding together is very attractive.

Though there are a few elementory students play skateboard, they just slip, do nothing technical.


TAlthough there are a few elementory students play skateboard, theyskateboarding beginners who just slip, and do nothing technicspecial. Although there are a few skateboarding beginners who just slip and do nothing special.

I had thought about learning skateboard for 2 years, the reason why I hesitated was that I was not sure if I could insist learning it.


I had thought about learning to skateboard for 2 years, and the reason why I hesitated was that I was not sure if I could inpersist in learning it. I had thought about learning to skateboard for 2 years and the reason why I hesitated was that I was not sure if I could persist in learning it.

In the end, I thought it was time to start, so I started to learn in November 2020.


In the end, I thought it was time to start, so I started to learn it in November 2020. In the end, I thought it was time to start so I started to learn it in November 2020.

I watched some teaching videos online before I went to the playground.


I watched some teachingutorial videos online before I went to the playground. I watched some tutorial videos online before I went to the playground.

I played alone in the playground in the middle school.


I playedractised my skills alone in the playground in theof a middle school. I practised my skills alone in the playground of a middle school.

It took me several hours to learn how to slip smoothly.


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And I found out that it was so tired after practising, I thought it was so easy when I saw others playing it.


Andfter practising for a while, I found out that it was so tired after pracactually very tisring, I thought it was so despite the fact that it looked way easyier when I saw others playdoing it. After practising for a while, I found out that it was actually very tiring despite the fact that it looked way easier when I saw others doing it.

After learning slipping, I learnt how to turn.


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Though the playground was too small to skateboard, when I was skating, I went through the wind like a sword.


Though the playground was too small tofor skateboard, when I was skating, I went through the wind like a sworing and I went through it very quickly when I practised. The playground was too small for skateboarding and I went through it very quickly when I practised.

It felt like I was flying or surfing in the sea, which was extremely amazing.


It felt like I was flying or surfing inover the sea, which was extremely amazing. It felt like I was flying or surfing over the sea, which was extremely amazing.

I never felt like this before.


I had never felt like this before. I had never felt like this before.

I spent a long time to learn how to control the board naturely.


I spent a long time to learn how to control the board natureally. I spent a long time to learn how to control the board naturally.

When I was turning too fast and felt like I was going to hit the lamppost, I was quite scared.


When I was turninged too fast and felt like I was going to hit the lamppost, I wasgot quite scared. When I turned too fast and felt like I was going to hit the lamppost, I got quite scared.

Actually, there was still enough distance for me to turn.


Actually, there was stillused to be enough distance for me to turn. Actually, there used to be enough distance for me to turn.

If I had been confident enough, I should have succeed.


If I had been confident enough, I shcould have succeedturned successfully. If I had been confident enough, I could have turned successfully.

It was more like a mental sport than a physical one.


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Eventhough, I still wasn't able to succeed every time.


Eventhough, IBut still I wasn't able to succeedturn successfully every time. But still I wasn't able to turn successfully every time.

Because knowing didn't mean being able to.


Because simply knowing didn't mean beingthat you can do something does not necessarily mean that you are able to do it. Because simply knowing that you can do something does not necessarily mean that you are able to do it.

Two months later, I thought I was able to learn some technics/styles.


Two months later, I thought I was able to learn some technicques/styles. Two months later, I thought I was able to learn some techniques/styles.

(I'm not sure the exact word.) I watched a few videos, some ups advise that shove it should be first style of fresh learner, while the others recommended ollie.


(I'm not sure the exact word.) I watched a few videos, some ups advise that shove it should be first style of fresh learner, while the others recommended ollie.

I am sorry but this sentence is incomprehensible to me

I picked shove it.


I picked the "shove it" style of skateboarding. I picked the "shove it" style of skateboarding.

I am only guessing that that this is what you meant

But I was so scared that I wuold get hurt.


But I was sovery scared that I wuould get hurt. But I was very scared that I would get hurt.

As a result, I didn't succeed.


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Eventhough I had practised for a long time.


Even though I had practised for a long time. Even though I had practised for a long time.

Then I started to learn ollie, it was the same result.


Then I started to learn ollie, it wasthe "ollie" style and I got the same result. Then I started to learn the "ollie" style and I got the same result.

I saw a vedio of a little girl, who is good at skateboarding.


Then I saw a vediideo of a little girl, who is good at skateboarding. Then I saw a video of a little girl who is good at skateboarding.

She said: when you believe you can do it, you will succeed; if you don't, won't.


She said: "when you believe that you can do it, you will succeed; i. If you don't, you won't". She said "when you believe that you can do it, you will succeed. If you don't, you won't".

I was totally agreed with her.


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I had got hurt a lot when I was young, such as the ankle ligament injury, which relapses easily and takes me long time to recover.


I had got hurt a lot when I was young, such as theer and suffered an ankle ligament injury, which. It relapses easily andwhich means that now I takes me a longer to time to recover if I get injured. I had got hurt a lot when I was younger and suffered an ankle ligament injury. It relapses easily which means that now I take a longer to time to recover if I get injured.

I think I am brave enough, but my body remembers the pain and try to protect itself.


I think I am brave enough, but my body remembers the pain and tryies to protect itself. I think I am brave enough, but my body remembers the pain and tries to protect itself.

So I am not sure I can do ollie successfully in the future.


So I am not sure I can ado ollipt the "ollie" style successfully in the future. So I am not sure I can adopt the "ollie" style successfully in the future.

BTW, summer is blistering, so I stop playing skateboard.


BTW,Since the summer is blistering, so I stop playing hot right now, I had to stop skateboarding. Since the summer is blistering hot right now, I had to stop skateboarding.

I am not sure whether I will keep practising in winter, because playing lonely is quit boring.


I am not sure whether I will keep practising iwhen winter, comes because playskateboarding alonely is can be quite boring. I am not sure whether I will keep practising when winter comes because skateboarding alone can be quite boring.

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