Aug. 18, 2025
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In the summer of 2018, I joined a tourist group to Inner Mongolia. I visited Hulun Buir, which is a vast grassland. That was the first time I was on a grassland. So I was shocked to see the grassland for the first time.
When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon, and grass, sheep, cows and horses. There were not any trees, villages, or even people.
The sky was extremely blue and the clouds were so white and low. It felt like people could grab the clouds just by jumping up.
When I was standing there and looking around, I couldn't help shouting loudly into the distance.
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In the summer of 2018, I joined a tourist group going to Inner Mongolia. In the summer of 2018, I joined a tourist group going to Inner Mongolia.
I visited Hulun Buir, which is a vast grassland.
I visited Hulun Buir which is a vast grassland.
That was the first time I washad been on a grassland.
That was the first time I had been on a grassland.
SoAnd I was shocked to see the grassland for the first time.
And I was shocked to see the grassland for the first time.
When I stood on the grasslandit and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon, and grass, sheep, cows and horses.
When I stood on it and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon, grass, sheep, cows and horses.
There were not any trees, villages, or even people.
There were no trees, villages, or even people.
The sky was extremely blue and the clouds were sovery white and low.
The sky was extremely blue and the clouds were very white and low.
It felt like people could grab the clouds just by jumping up.
When I was standing there and looking around, I couldn't help shouting loudly into the distance.
Aug. 18, 2025
Thank you very much.
An English Post
In the summer of 2018, I joined a tourist group toin Inner Mongolia.
In the summer of 2018, I joined a tourist group in Inner Mongolia.
I visited Hulun Buir, which is a vast grassland.
That was the first time I was onent to a grassland.
That was the first time I went to a grassland.
Your version isn’t wrong. It just sounds more natural to me this way.
When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon, and grass, sheep, cows and horses.
When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon, grass, sheep, cows and horses.
There were not any trees, villages, or even people. There were not any trees, villages, or even people.
Your version isn’t wrong, but we usually put “were not” into it’s contraction form “weren’t,” unless you’re trying to be emphatic.
The sky was extremely blue and the clouds were so white and low.
It felt like people could grab the clouds just by jumping up.
When I was standing there and looking around, I couldn't help but shouting loudly into the distance.
When I was standing there and looking around, I couldn't help but shout loudly into the distance.
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Aug. 18, 2025
Thank you very much.
So I was shocked to see the grassland for the first time.
I was shocked to see the grassland for the first time.
When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon, and of grass, sheep, cows and horses.
When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon of grass, sheep, cows and horses.
When I was standing there and looking around, I couldn't help but shouting loudly into the distance.
When I was standing there and looking around, I couldn't help but shout loudly into the distance.
Aug. 18, 2025
Thank you very much.
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In the summer of 2018, I joined a tourist group to Inner Mongolia.
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I visited Hulun Buir, which is a vast grassland. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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That was the first time I was on a grassland.
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So I was shocked to see the grassland for the first time.
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When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon, and grass, sheep, cows and horses.
When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon
When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon,
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There were not any trees, villages, or even people. There were not any trees, villages, or even people. There were not any trees, villages, or even people. Your version isn’t wrong, but we usually put “were not” into it’s contraction form “weren’t,” unless you’re trying to be emphatic.
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