June 26, 2026
My name is OKD_72m. I’m a university student who love languages. I’ll introduce you the system of exam for university in Japan.
In Japan, just like in other countries, English is used for exams. They especially play important role in Japan. Whichever university or department you want to go ,you have to have exams of English, expect "Fラン” university(which officially means that universities facing under-enrollment, where so few applicants are rejected that it is impossible to calculate a standard 50% acceptance borderline.Causally, have strong negative meaning which look down on students or graduates of Fランuniversities . It is the epitome of stupidity)
I entered the private university which is famous in Japan. My school is known as the member of MARCH. MARCH is a group of five prestigious private universities in Tokyo. Graduating from a MARCH university gives you a big advantage when looking for a job at major companies.
However, there are more universities which are difficult to entre and give more big advantages when looking for a job at major companies. These are not smartest universities groups!!
One of the biggest Characteristics of private universities is that people only must have exams of three subjects, although national administer them many subjects. Subjects that you do depend on whether you are Humanities or Sciences. For me, Humanities need to do histories (national one or word one), Japanese, English. Other Characteristic is that we can use external examination. In my department, I can use Eiken Grade Pre-1 which prove b2 levels of English and allowed not to have exams of English. Also, I can get 20 extra points that can add to the total score. I also use a score of world history in Common University Entrance Exam. It’s too difficult to explain all systems of exams, so I do not explain about that. Anyway, I only must have a Japanese exam. MARCH is smart universities in Japan, but ,sometimes , they are looked down on by students at national universities because national universities does not have such system. they have to have a lot of exams!!(I originally want to entre national universities.)
Next time , I'll introduce my favorite subjects.
私の名前はOKD_72mです。私は言語好きの大学生です。 日本の大学入試形態について紹介します。
日本では他国同様英語が入試科目として使われてます。特に日本では重要な科目となっています。どの大学のどの学部に行こうとFラン大学(という正式には、入学者不足でめったに不合格者が出ず、50%の合格率が算出できない大学。この言葉はカジュアルな意味としてはFランの大学の学生や卒業性は見下す強い否定的な意味です。バカの象徴のごとく使われてます。)を除いて英語は必ず受けなければいけません。僕は今日本では有名な私立大に通っています。僕の学校はMARCHの一つとして知られてます。
MARCHとは、東京にある5つの名門私立大学のグループのことです。MARCHの大学を卒業することは、大企業への就職活動で大きな強みになります。
だけどこれらの大学は最難関大学ではなく、より大企業への就職活動で大きな強みになりなる大学もある。MARCHは最も難しい大学群ではないよ!!
私立大学の最大の特徴の一つは、国立大学では多くの科目の試験を実施するのに対し、私立大学では3科目の試験しか受けなくてよいことです。受ける科目は、人文科学系か理学系かによって異なります。私の場合、人文科学系なので、歴史(国内史または世界史)、日本語、英語を受けるする必要があります。もう一つの特徴は、外部試験を利用できることです。私の学科では、英語のB2レベルを証明する英検準一級を使用でき、英語の試験を受けなくて済みます。また、合計点に加算できる20点の追加点も得られます。私はまた共通大学入学試験の世界史の点数も使用しています。すべての試験制度を説明するのは難しすぎるので、それについては説明しません。とにかく、私は日本語の試験だけを受ければよいのです。MARCHは日本のなかで頭のいい大学ですが、国立大学にはこのような制度がないため、国立大学の学生からは馬鹿にされるされることがあります。国立大学ではたくさんの試験を受けなければならないのです!!(私はもともと国立大学に入りたかったのです。
次の回では僕の好きな科目について紹介したいです。
About systems ofuniversity entrance exams of universitie systems in Japan
About university entrance exam systems in Japan
A concise title is preferred and more natural-sounding.
My name is OKD_72m.
I’m a university student who loves languages. I’m a university student who loves languages.
"University student" is singular, but the verb "love" is plural.
I’ll introduce you the system of exao the exam system for universityies in Japan.
I’ll introduce you to the exam system for universities in Japan.
(1) The phrase is "introduce (someone) to (something)".
(2) "Exam system" would be more concise and natural.
(3) You're referring to all universities, so the plural "universities" is expected.
In Japan, just like in other countries, English is used for exams.
They especially play an important role in especially in Japan.
They play an important role especially in Japan.
Based on the native text you provided, "especially" is meant to emphasise "in Japan", so it should go right before the phrase.
Whichever university or department you want to go ,you have to have exams ofto, you will have to take English exams, expeccept "Fラン” university(ies (which officially means that refers to universities facing under-enrollment, where so few applicants are rejected that it is impossible to calculate a standard 50% acceptance borderlinrate.
Whichever university or department you want to go to, you will have to take English exams, except "Fラン” universities (which officially refers to universities facing under-enrollment, where so few applicants are rejected that it is impossible to calculate a standard 50% acceptance rate.
(1) "Have (English) exams" is understandable, but "take (English) exams" is probably most common in this context. It also avoids repeating the word "have" back-to-back.
(2) "Exams of English" sounds quite unnatural. Just "English exams" would suffice.
(3) There is more than one "Fラン” university, so the plural "universities" is expected.
(4) "Acceptance rate" is a common phrase you might hear when talking about universities.
Causally, have strong negative meaning which look down onIn casual usage, the term has strong negative connotations where students or graduates of Fラン universities are looked down on.
In casual usage, the term has strong negative connotations where students or graduates of Fラン universities are looked down on.
(1) I find this usage of "casually" a little too vague and unnatural.
(2) The sentence is missing the subject ("the term").
(3) The word "connotation" is more specific than "meaning". It carries the additional meaning of "association". For example, students of Fラン universities may be associated with poor academic ability and poor career outlook.
It is the epitome of stupidity). It is the epitome of stupidity).
Remember to end the sentence ("Whichever university...") with a period!
I entered thea private university whichthat is famous in Japan.
I entered a private university that is famous in Japan.
(1) Using "the" makes it seem like there's only one famous private university in Japan.
(2) Although "which" and "that" seem to be used interchangeably, there is a small difference between them.
"Which" is used to introduce "non-restrictive clauses". In other words, it is used to introduce additional information that may be nice to know, but is not crucial to the meaning of the sentence.
On the other hand, "that" is used to introduce "restrictive clauses". it is used to introduce additional information that is crucial to the meaning of the sentence. For example, in your sentence, the fact that your university is prestigious is a key piece of information. Compare it with the sentence "I entered a private university", where this information is not made known.
My school is known as thea member of MARCH.
My school is known as a member of MARCH.
Again, using "the" makes it seem like your school is either the only member of MARCH, or an exceptionally important member of MARCH.
MARCH is a group of five prestigious private universities in Tokyo.
Graduating from a MARCH university gives you a big advantage when looking for a job at major companies.
However, there are moreother universities which are more difficult to entrer and give more bigger advantages (when looking for a job at major companies).
However, there are other universities which are more difficult to enter and give bigger advantages (when looking for a job at major companies).
You can consider omitting the phrase I've put in parentheses, because it may be redundant. You have already said it in the previous sentence.
These areMARCH is not the smartest group of universities groups!!
MARCH is not the smartest group of universities!!
"MARCH" is a singular group, but "these" and "groups" are plural. Note that you're talking about all five universities as one big group, rather than each university separately.
One of the biggest Ccharacteristics of private universities is that people only must havneed to take exams ofor three subjects, althoughwhile national universities administer themexams for many subjects.
One of the biggest characteristics of private universities is that people only need to take exams for three subjects, while national universities administer exams for many subjects.
(1) "Characteristics" is not a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalised.
(2) "Exams of three subjects" is not natural. We would say "exams for three subjects" or "exams in three subjects".
(3) The grammar structure "..., while..." is often used to indicate contrast.
(4) You can administer an exam, but not a subject.
SThe subjects that you dotake depend on whether you are Humanities or Sciences.
The subjects that you take depend on whether you are Humanities or Sciences.
(1) For your information, "take a subject" is a pretty common collocation.
(2) In casual conversation, "whether you are Humanities or Sciences" is perfectly fine, and in fact pretty common! However, in formal writing, it may be preferable to say "whether you are a humanities or science student".
For me, Ha humanities student like me, I need to dotake historiesy (national one or world one), Japanese, and English.
For a humanities student like me, I need to take history (national or world), Japanese, and English.
I've tweaked your sentence to sound more natural. When referring to the academic subject, we do not use the plural word "histories", even when differentiating between different types.
OThe other Ccharacteristic is that we can ustake external examinations.
The other characteristic is that we can take external examinations.
In my department, I can use my Eiken Grade Pre-1Pre-1 grade, which prove b2 B2-levels of proficiency in English, and allowed not to have exams ofto take English exams.
In my department, I can use my Eiken Pre-1 grade, which prove B2-level proficiency in English, and not have to take English exams.
I've tweaked your sentence to sound more natural.
Also, I can get 20 extra points that can adbe added to the total score.
Also, I can get 20 extra points that can be added to the total score.
I also use a score ofmy world history inscore from the Common University Entrance Exam.
I also use my world history score from the Common University Entrance Exam.
It’s too difficult to explain all systems of examsthe entire exam system, so I dowill not explain about thait.
It’s too difficult to explain the entire exam system, so I will not explain it.
Anyway, I only must havneed to take a Japanese exam.
Anyway, I only need to take a Japanese exam.
"Must" is too strong (and awkward) a word here. "Need to" is more appropriate.
MARCH is the smart universities in Japan, but ,sometimes , they are looked down on by students atfrom national universities because national universities does not have such a system.
MARCH is the smart universities in Japan, but sometimes, they are looked down on by students from national universities because national universities do not have such a system.
(1) It's not wrong to place a comma behind "but", but it's a little unnecessary.
(2) "National universities"is plural, but "does not" is singular.
theyNational university students have to havtake a lot of exams!! (I originally wanted to entrer a national universitiesy.)
National university students have to take a lot of exams!! (I originally wanted to enter a national university.)
(1) It is not clear who "they" refers to, so it's a good idea to state it explicitly/
(2) "Originally" implies a time in the past, so the past tense "wanted" is expected.
(3) You can only enter one university, so the singular "national university" is more logical.
Next time , I'll introduce my favorite subjects.
Next time, I'll introduce my favorite subjects.
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About systems of entrance exams of universities in Japan
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My name is OKD_72m. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m a university student who love languages. I’m a university student who loves languages. I’m a university student who loves languages. "University student" is singular, but the verb "love" is plural. |
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I’ll introduce you the system of exam for university in Japan.
I’ll introduce you t (1) The phrase is "introduce (someone) to (something)". (2) "Exam system" would be more concise and natural. (3) You're referring to all universities, so the plural "universities" is expected. |
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In Japan, just like in other countries, English is used for exams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They especially play important role in Japan.
They Based on the native text you provided, "especially" is meant to emphasise "in Japan", so it should go right before the phrase. |
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Whichever university or department you want to go ,you have to have exams of English, expect "Fラン” university(which officially means that universities facing under-enrollment, where so few applicants are rejected that it is impossible to calculate a standard 50% acceptance borderline.
Whichever university (1) "Have (English) exams" is understandable, but "take (English) exams" is probably most common in this context. It also avoids repeating the word "have" back-to-back. (2) "Exams of English" sounds quite unnatural. Just "English exams" would suffice. (3) There is more than one "Fラン” university, so the plural "universities" is expected. (4) "Acceptance rate" is a common phrase you might hear when talking about universities. |
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Causally, have strong negative meaning which look down on students or graduates of Fランuniversities .
(1) I find this usage of "casually" a little too vague and unnatural. (2) The sentence is missing the subject ("the term"). (3) The word "connotation" is more specific than "meaning". It carries the additional meaning of "association". For example, students of Fラン universities may be associated with poor academic ability and poor career outlook. |
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It is the epitome of stupidity) It is the epitome of stupidity). It is the epitome of stupidity). Remember to end the sentence ("Whichever university...") with a period! |
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I entered the private university which is famous in Japan.
I entered (1) Using "the" makes it seem like there's only one famous private university in Japan. (2) Although "which" and "that" seem to be used interchangeably, there is a small difference between them. "Which" is used to introduce "non-restrictive clauses". In other words, it is used to introduce additional information that may be nice to know, but is not crucial to the meaning of the sentence. On the other hand, "that" is used to introduce "restrictive clauses". it is used to introduce additional information that is crucial to the meaning of the sentence. For example, in your sentence, the fact that your university is prestigious is a key piece of information. Compare it with the sentence "I entered a private university", where this information is not made known. |
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My school is known as the member of MARCH.
My school is known as Again, using "the" makes it seem like your school is either the only member of MARCH, or an exceptionally important member of MARCH. |
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MARCH is a group of five prestigious private universities in Tokyo. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Graduating from a MARCH university gives you a big advantage when looking for a job at major companies. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, there are more universities which are difficult to entre and give more big advantages when looking for a job at major companies.
However, there are You can consider omitting the phrase I've put in parentheses, because it may be redundant. You have already said it in the previous sentence. |
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These are not smartest universities groups!!
"MARCH" is a singular group, but "these" and "groups" are plural. Note that you're talking about all five universities as one big group, rather than each university separately. |
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One of the biggest Characteristics of private universities is that people only must have exams of three subjects, although national administer them many subjects.
One of the biggest (1) "Characteristics" is not a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalised. (2) "Exams of three subjects" is not natural. We would say "exams for three subjects" or "exams in three subjects". (3) The grammar structure "..., while..." is often used to indicate contrast. (4) You can administer an exam, but not a subject. |
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Subjects that you do depend on whether you are Humanities or Sciences.
(1) For your information, "take a subject" is a pretty common collocation. (2) In casual conversation, "whether you are Humanities or Sciences" is perfectly fine, and in fact pretty common! However, in formal writing, it may be preferable to say "whether you are a humanities or science student". |
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For me, Humanities need to do histories (national one or word one), Japanese, English.
For I've tweaked your sentence to sound more natural. When referring to the academic subject, we do not use the plural word "histories", even when differentiating between different types. |
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Other Characteristic is that we can use external examination.
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In my department, I can use Eiken Grade Pre-1 which prove b2 levels of English and allowed not to have exams of English.
In my department, I can use my Eiken I've tweaked your sentence to sound more natural. |
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Also, I can get 20 extra points that can add to the total score.
Also, I can get 20 extra points that can |
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I also use a score of world history in Common University Entrance Exam.
I also use |
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It’s too difficult to explain all systems of exams, so I do not explain about that.
It’s too difficult to explain |
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Anyway, I only must have a Japanese exam.
Anyway, I only "Must" is too strong (and awkward) a word here. "Need to" is more appropriate. |
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MARCH is smart universities in Japan, but ,sometimes , they are looked down on by students at national universities because national universities does not have such system.
MARCH is the smart universities in Japan, but (1) It's not wrong to place a comma behind "but", but it's a little unnecessary. (2) "National universities"is plural, but "does not" is singular. |
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they have to have a lot of exams!!(I originally want to entre national universities.)
(1) It is not clear who "they" refers to, so it's a good idea to state it explicitly/ (2) "Originally" implies a time in the past, so the past tense "wanted" is expected. (3) You can only enter one university, so the singular "national university" is more logical. |
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Next time , I'll introduce my favorite subjects.
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