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March 24, 2023

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I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so that would be helpful to correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!

Are those prescription sunglasses?
No, they aren't.


Yesterday morning I had a Mister Donut. My favorite is called Angel Cream. They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you couldn't take that out. I don't like to eat at stores.
I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it is originally an American company. It is now a Japanese company, and there are 969 stores in Japan. But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thought they lost out to the competition.


I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today. But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during the day.


One thing I do understand is that you're kind.


The time has finally come, right? I've been ready for it, tho.

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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!

Are those prescription sunglasses?

No, they aren't.

My favorite is called Angel Cream.

I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it is originally an American company.

I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today.

One thing I do understand is that you're kind.

The time has finally come, right?

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sho

March 26, 2023

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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!

Are those prescription sunglasses?

No, they aren't.

Yesterday morning I had a Mister Donut.

My favorite is called Angel Cream.

I don't like to eat at stores.

I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it is originally an American company.

It is now a Japanese company, and there are 969 stores in Japan.

I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today.

One thing I do understand is that you're kind.

The time has finally come, right?

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sho

March 25, 2023

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But tThere seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thought theyhowever, so I think that they might have lost out to the competition.

初めて聞きました。

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mari

March 26, 2023

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sho

March 26, 2023

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アメリカにはドーナツの店がたくさんあることをよく知っていますが、Mister Donutはアメリカの会社のことを全然知らなかったんです。とても驚きました。日系企業だと思っています。笑

I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so that would be helpful to correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!

Are those prescription sunglasses?

No, they aren't.

Yesterday morning I had a Mister Donut.

My favorite is called Angel Cream.

I don't like to eat at stores.

It is now a Japanese company, and there are 969 stores in Japan.

I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today.

But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during the day.

One thing I do understand is that you're kind.

The time has finally come, right?

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sho

March 25, 2023

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I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so that would be helpful to correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!


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I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so thait would be helpful to correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker! I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so it would be helpful to correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!

I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so thait would be helpful toif you correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker! I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so it would be helpful if you correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!

You could also say "it would be helpful for me if you" or "it would help if you"

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!


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Are those prescription sunglasses?


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No, they aren't.


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Yesterday morning I had a Mister Donut.


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Yesterday morning I had a donut from Mister Donut. Yesterday morning I had a donut from Mister Donut.

I don't think you're technically wrong, but this makes it a little clearer what you're saying, especially if your reader doesn't know what Mister Donut is (I didn't).

My favorite is called Angel Cream.


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They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you couldn't take that out.


They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you couldn't take that outan't have it to go. They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you can't have it to go.

They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you couldn't take that an't buy it as takeout. They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat that because you can't buy it as takeout.

They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat thait because you couldn't take that out. They surprisingly have good tantanmen, but I didn't eat it because you couldn't take that out.

Couldn't take what out?

I don't like to eat at stores.


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I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it is originally an American company.


I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it iwas originally an American company. I also did some research on Mister Donut and was surprised to find that there is only one store in the US, even though it was originally an American company.

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It is now a Japanese company, and there are 969 stores in Japan.


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But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thought they lost out to the competition.


But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thoughtink they lost out to theran out of business due to competition. But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I think they ran out of business due to competition.

But tThere seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thought theyhowever, so I think that they might have lost out to the competition. There seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., however, so I think that they might have lost out to the competition.

初めて聞きました。

But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I thoughtfigure they lost out to the competition. But there seem to be a lot of doughnut stores in the U.S., so I figure they lost out to the competition.

I woke up at 5:30 a.m. today.


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But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during the day.


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But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during theall day. I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy all day.

また、 I went to bed at 2:00 this morning so I'm going to be sleepy all day.

But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during the day. But I went to bed at 2:00 a.m. yesterday, or rather today, so I'm going to be sleepy during the day.

This could also end with "so I'm going to be sleepy today."

One thing I do understand is that you're kind.


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The time has finally come, right?


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I've been ready for it, tho.


I've been ready for it, though. I've been ready for it, though.

I've been ready for it, though. I've been ready for it, though.

I've been ready for it, though. I've been ready for it, though.

Depending on when you're saying this it might also be proper to say "But I am ready for it". "tho" technically isn't the correct spelling, but it's completely okay to use in informal contexts like a conversation with a friend. However, for formal writing stick to "Though"

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