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Who Bombed the Hospital

The day before yesterday. A hospital in Gaza was bombed and resulted in over 500 people died. This disaster also caused thousands of people in many countries, especially in Arab areas to demonstrate on the street, accusing the atrocity of the Israeli army.
At the first stage after the event, the president of the USA, when he boarded the plane to Israel, also showed his concern about the case and asked for more explanation from the Israeli side.
However, a few hours later, Israel released some footage testifying that the strike to the hospital was indeed from another terrorist team, implying they were from Hamas.

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Who Bombed the Hospital


Who Bombed the Hospital? Who Bombed the Hospital?

Who Bombed the Hospital? Who Bombed the Hospital?

The day before yesterday.


The day before yesterday, a hospital in Gaza was bombed and resulted in over 500 deaths. The day before yesterday, a hospital in Gaza was bombed and resulted in over 500 deaths.

The day before yesterday., The day before yesterday,

Not a complete sentence, so it should connect with the next sentence

A hospital in Gaza was bombed and resulted in over 500 people died.


A hospital in Gaza was bombed and resulted in over 500 people died.

Aa hospital in Gaza was bombed and resulted in over 500 people dikilled. a hospital in Gaza was bombed and resulted in over 500 people killed.

This disaster also caused thousands of people in many countries, especially in Arab areas to demonstrate on the street, accusing the atrocity of the Israeli army.


This disaster also causprompted thousands of people in manydifferent countries, especialparticularly in Arab areas to demonstrate ongions, to take to the street,s and accusinge the atrocity of the Israeli armIsraeli army of committing the atrocity. This disaster prompted thousands of people in different countries, particularly in Arab regions, to take to the streets and accuse the Israeli army of committing the atrocity.

This disaster also caused thousands of people in many countries, especially in Arab areas, to demonstrate on the streets, accuscondemning the atrocity of the Israeli army. This disaster also caused thousands of people in many countries, especially in Arab areas, to demonstrate on the streets, condemning the atrocity of the Israeli army.

At the first stage after the event, the president of the USA, when he boarded the plane to Israel, also showed his concern about the case and asked for more explanation from the Israeli side.


AtIn the first stage afterinitial stage following the event, the pPresident of the USA, when henited States, upon boardeding the plane to Israel, also showexpressed his concern about the case and asked for more explansituation and requested further clarification from the Israeli side. In the initial stage following the event, the President of the United States, upon boarding the plane to Israel, expressed his concern about the situation and requested further clarification from the Israeli side.

At the first stageImmediately after the evincident, the president of the USA, when hile boardeding the plane to Israel, also showed hisexpressed concern about the case and asked for morean explanation from the Israeli side. Immediately after the incident, the president of the USA, while boarding the plane to Israel, also expressed concern about the case and asked for an explanation from Israel.

However, a few hours later, Israel released some footage testifying that the strike to the hospital was indeed from another terrorist team, implying they were from Hamas.


However, a few hours later, Israel released some footage testifying thathat confirmed the strike ton the hospital was indeed fromcarried out by another terrorist teamgroup, implying they terrorists were from Hamas. However, a few hours later, Israel released footage that confirmed the strike on the hospital was carried out by another terrorist group, implying the terrorists were from Hamas.

"implying they were from Hamas..." = here, "they" is rather vague. I think you are referring to the terrorists being from Hamas?

However, a few hours later, Israel released some footage testifyshowing that the strike to the hospital was indeed from another terrorist teamgroup, implying they were from Hamas. However, a few hours later, Israel released some footage showing that the strike to the hospital was indeed from a terrorist group, implying they were from Hamas.

Testifying is done in court

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