My Week-end My Weekend

My Week-end My Weekend

My Week-end My Weekend

2 days ago, I was just finishing a great week endA great weekend finished 2 days ago. A great weekend finished 2 days ago.

2Two days ago, I was just finishinged a great week end. Two days ago, I finished a great weekend.

we write out small numbers (I saw somewhere to write out anything <20 but I think it depends on context more than anything-- starting a sentence with a numeral looks a bit odd) also you could honestly just say "Last weekend was great." I think the "2 days ago" and specifically "finishing the weekend" are not needed.

2 days ago, I was just finishinged a great week end. 2 days ago, I just finished a great week end.

"was just finishing" --> has the connotation of "I was in the process of finishing something" (maybe something like "j'étais en train de finir")

It was a special one because we had a day off because ofdue to the East celebreation. It was special because we had a day off due to the East celebration.

Do you mean Easter?

It was a special one, because we had a day off because of the East celebreationto celebrate Easter. It was a special one, because we had a day off to celebrate Easter.

It was a special one because we had a day off because ofdue to the Easter celebreation. It was a special one because we had a day off due to the Easter celebration.

Your sentence using "because of" is also correct, just a little repetitive since you use "because" already :)

Moreover, my brother also came home with one of his friends for 5 days (cause they didon't work on friday neither's) and it was good to see him again because it's more difficult with. It's difficult to see him nowadays since his studies who forces him to live in another city which is located 2 hours and a half from our family'us. My brother also came home with his friend for 5 days (cause they don't work on friday's) and it was good to see him. It's difficult to see him nowadays since his studies force him to live in another city 2 hours and a half from us.

Moreover, my brother came home with one of his friends for 5 days (. Because they didn't have work on fFriday neither) an, they stayed with us for five days. It was good to see him again, because it's more difficult with his studies who forces him to live in another city which is located 2 hours and a half from our family'stwo hours away from our family, and it's difficult to get to see him. Moreover, my brother came home with one of his friends. Because they didn't have work on Friday either, they stayed with us for five days. It was good to see him again, because his studies force him to live in another city two hours away from our family, and it's difficult to get to see him.

Moreover, my brother came home with one of his friends for 5 days ((be)cause they didn't work on fFriday neither) and it was good to see him again because i. It's more difficult withbecause his studies who forces him to live in another city which is located 2 hours2 and a half hours from our family's. Moreover, my brother came home with one of his friends for 5 days ((be)cause they didn't work on Friday either) and it was good to see him again. It's more difficult because his studies force him to live in another city 2 and a half hours from our family's.

"which is located" is grammatically correct but a little redundant and more formal.

When they arrived on Thursday, we came watchingwere coming back from a councert. When they arrived on Thursday, we were coming back from a concert.

When they arrived on Thursday, we came watchingwent to (see) a councert. When they arrived on Thursday, we went to (see) a concert.

When they arrived on Thursday, we cameended up watching a councert. When they arrived on Thursday, we ended up watching a concert.

If you're thinking "venir à/arriver à...", I'm not sure there is an exact translation in English, "ended up (faire qqch)" is probably the closest thing.

It's a Frenchwas for a famous French rapper callnamed Damso. It's was for a famous French rapper named Damso.

It' was a French famousfamous French rapper callnamed Damso. It was a famous French rapper named Damso.

adjective order in English is hard :)

It's a French famous was a famous French rapper called Damso. It was a famous French rapper called Damso.

I'm gonna talk more about that in another text, but overall, it was pretty good. I'm gonna talk more about that in another text, but overall, it was pretty good.

Then, on fFriday they went karting. Then on Friday they went karting.

Then, on fFriday, they went karting. Then, on Friday, they went karting.

can be more clear replacing "they" with "my brother and his friends" while I understood what you meant, you spent a couple of sentences on the concert so the context about your guests is lost.

I would have loved to go with them but I just couldn't because of school. I would have loved to go with them but I couldn't because of school.

I would have loved to go with them, but I just couldn't because of school. I would have loved to go with them, but I just couldn't because of school.

I cannot explain why, but to me "just couldn't" sounds more natural when followed by a verb, i.e. "I just couldn't step away from my homework"

And to add insult to injury, I had a 2 hours- long test in one of themy most important subjects (chemistry), so I had to study, otherw. If not for thise, I think I would have gone with them. And to add insult to injury, I had a 2 hour long test in one of my most important subjects (chemistry), so I had to study. If not for this, I think I would have gone with them.

And to add insult to injury, I had a 2two hours-long test in chemistry, one of the most important subjects (chemistry), so I had to study, otherwise I think I would have gone with instead of joining them. I had a two hour-long test in chemistry, one of the most important subjects, so I had to study instead of joining them.

"to add insult to injury" doesn't really fit here. you would have to shift things around a bit for it to fit better, like "I was busy all evening studying for an exam. To add insult to injury, my brother and his friend went to a concert that night, and I had to skip it." I wouldn't put any special phrase at all, because you said in the last sentence that you had school and then elaborated on that same idea. you would use a phrase like that when you're starting to describe something worse. like one could say "I needed to do my homework. To make matters worse, I had an exam coming up."

And to add insult to injury, I had a 2 hours-test in one of the most important subjects (chemistry) so I had to study, otherwise I think I would have gone with them. And to add insult to injury, I had a 2 hour-test in one of the most important subjects (chemistry) so I had to study, otherwise I think I would have gone with them.

Great sentence! Just for your information : "add insult to injury" is quite formal, in casual conversation we'd probably say "on top of that..."

On Saturday, I did the testI took the test on Saturday, and I think I passed it. I took the test on Saturday, and I think I passed it.

On Saturday, I didtook the test and I think I passed it. On Saturday, I took the test and I think I passed it.

It went on pretty well and I knew almost allof the course like the back of my hand so it was pretty simple. It went pretty well and I knew most of the course so it was pretty simple.

It went on pretty well, and I knew almost all the course material like the back of my hand, so it was pretty simple. It went pretty well, and I knew almost all the course material like the back of my hand, so it was pretty simple.

you already said you think you passed, so I would cut out the "it went pretty well" (or keep it and remove the "I think I passed it") for brevity

It went on pretty well and I knew almost all the course material like the back of my hand so it was pretty simple. It went pretty well and I knew almost all the course material like the back of my hand so it was pretty simple.

I hope I wi'll get about 18 out of 20, altough it'sbut I'm not sure at all. I hope I'll get a 18 out of 20, but I'm not sure.

I hope I will get about least 18 out of 20, although [it's not sure at allguaranteed at all] / [I'm not sure]. I hope I will get at least 18 out of 20, although [it's not guaranteed at all] / [I'm not sure].

not fully accurate to "hope you will get about 18", unless you will be sad if you get 20/20 :) you can "think you will get about 18"

I hope I will get about 18 out of 20, although it's not sure at aguaranteed at all that I will do well. I hope I will get about 18 out of 20, although it's not guaranteed at all that I will do well.

You can also say "it's not a sure thing" to express something uncertain.

During the evening, I haunged out with my friends and we played billard and ethen ate outside. During the evening, I hung out with my friends and we played billard and then ate outside.

DuringIn the evening, I haunged out with friends and w. We played billiards and eate outside. In the evening, I hung out with friends. We played billiards and ate outside.

During the evening, I haunged out with friends and we played billards and eate outside. During the evening, I hung out with friends and we played billards and ate outside.

We had a good time, and I wi'll develop that in another text as well. We had a good time, and I'll develop that in another text.

We had a good time, and I will developtalk about that in another text as well. We had a good time, and I will talk about that in another text as well.

text is usually a message sent to someone on phone, in the context of this website you can say "in another post"

To conclude, on Sunday, we went outside with my parents, my brother and his friendFinally on Sunday, me, my brother and his friends, and my parents went outside to take advantage of the beautiful weather. Finally on Sunday, me, my brother and his friends, and my parents went outside to take advantage of the beautiful weather.

To conclude, on Sunday, we went outside with my parents, my brother and, his friend, and I went outside to take advantage of the beautiful weather. To conclude, on Sunday, my parents, brother, his friend, and I went outside to take advantage of the beautiful weather.

To conclude the weekend, on Sunday, we went outside with my parents, my brother and his friend to take advantage of the beautiful weather. To conclude the weekend, on Sunday, we went outside with my parents, my brother and his friend to take advantage of the beautiful weather.

At first, I planned to go there by car, but as I missed my gym training (cause I. However, I'd woken up too late to go to the gym with my father), in the morning, so I decided to run with both my brother and his friend. At first, I planned to go there by car,. However, I'd woken up too late to go to the gym with my father in the morning, so I decided to run with my brother and his friend.

where are you going? you just mentioned you were going outside in the last sentence, but we are expecting some destination when you say "go there by car." or did you mean going to the gym by car, before going outside? I suggested fixes assuming that you and your father were going to go to the gym, but you woke up too late for that, so you went to run to make up the exercise. it's a bit confusing what exactly you're trying to say here. saying "both brother and his friend" is fine but you are emphasizing they were both there for no reason

At first, I planned to go there by car, but as I missed my gym training (cause I woke up too late to go with my father), I decided to run with both my brother and his friend. At first, I planned to go by car, but as I missed my gym training (cause I woke up too late to go with my father), I decided to run with both my brother and his friend.

They told me that we were gonna run for about 5 km, so I was pretty confident, but it turned out we ran. However, we ended up running for for 9 km so, and I was exhausted. They told me that we were gonna run for about 5 km, so I was pretty confident. However, we ended up running for for 9 km, and I was exhausted.

During the ride, my mother told us that there wereas another waypath we could take to run a little more. During the ride, my mother told us that there was another path we could take to run a little more.

I am still confused if you drove to some destination (like a park) so you could run / be outside, or if you ran to the destination. When did you get inside a car? (A few sentences ago you said "At first, I planned to go there by car" which kind of implies that you ended up deciding to not go by car. If you went on the run and then got in a car to go somewhere else, I would pick some different transition words to make it clear.)

I didn't want to at first, but I told myself that I would be weeak if I didn't, so I did it anyway (everyone has their own motivation ahah). I didn't want to at first, but I told myself that I would be weak if I didn't, so I did it anyway (everyone has their own motivation ahah).

I didn't want to at first, but I told myself I would be weeak if I didn't so I did it anyway (everyone has their own motivation ahah). I didn't want to at first, but I told myself I would be weak if I didn't so I did it anyway (everyone has their own motivation ahah).

GlobOverally, I've ran about 13 km and my legs hurted so harbad. Overall I've ran about 13 km and my legs hurt so bad.

Globally, I'veIn total, I ran 13 km, and my legs hurted so har really bad. In total, I ran 13 km, and my legs hurt really bad.

GloballyIn total, I've ran 13 km and my legs hurted so hardbadly. In total, I've ran 13 km and my legs hurt so badly.

The fact is that I'm not used to run and I don't really appreciate thatning. I'm not used to running.

The fact is that I'm not used to run and I don't really appreciate thatI'm actually not used to running. I'm actually not used to running.

not sure what you're trying to say with "and I don't really appreciate that"

The fact is that I'm not used to running and I don''m not really happreciatey about that. The fact is that I'm not used to running and I'm not really happy about that.

However,But running with people is wayalot more enjoyable, so it was pretty pleasantokay even if I suffered a lot. But running with people is alot more enjoyable, so it was okay even if I suffered a lot.

However, running with people is way more enjoyable, so it was pretty pleasant even ifthough I suffered a lot. However, running with people is way more enjoyable, so it was pretty pleasant even though I suffered a lot.