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My Week-end

2 days ago, I was just finishing a great week end.
It was a special one because we had a day off because of the East celebreation.
Moreover, my brother came home with one of his friends for 5 days (cause they didn't work on friday neither) and it was good to see him again because it's more difficult with his studies who forces him to live in another city which is located 2 hours and a half from our family's.

When they arrived on Thursday, we came watching a councert. It's a French famous rapper called Damso. I'm gonna talk more about that in another text but overall, it was pretty good.

Then, on friday they went karting. I would have loved to go with them but I just couldn't because of school. And to add insult to injury, I had a 2 hours-test in one of the most important subjects (chemistry) so I had to study, otherwise I think I would have gone with them.

On Saturday, I did the test and I think I passed it. It went on pretty well and I knew almost all the course like the back of my hand so it was pretty simple. I hope I will get about 18 out of 20, altough it's not sure at all.
During the evening, I hanged out with friends and we played billard and eat outside. We had a good time and I will develop that in another text as well.

To conclude, on Sunday, we went outside with my parents, my brother and his friend to take advantage of the beautiful weather.
At first, I planned to go there by car, but as I missed my gym training (cause I woke up too late to go with my father), I decided to run with both my brother and his friend.
They told me we were gonna run for about 5 km so I was pretty confident, but it turned out we ran for 9 km so I was exhausted. During the ride, my mother told us there were another way we could take to run a little more. I didn't want at first, but I told myself I would be week if I didn't so I did it anyway (everyone has their own motivation ahah). Globally, I've ran 13 km and my legs hurted so hard. The fact is that I'm not used to run and I don't really appreciate that. However, running with people is way more enjoyable so it was pretty pleasant even if I suffered a lot.

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I'm gonna talk more about that in another text but overall, it was pretty good.

On Saturday, I did the test and I think I passed it.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text!

Please tell me what you thought of my English.

My Week-end


My Week-end My Weekend

2 days ago, I was just finishing a great week end.


2 days ago, I was just finishing a great week endA great weekend finished 2 days ago. A great weekend finished 2 days ago.

It was a special one because we had a day off because of the East celebreation.


It was a special one because we had a day off because ofdue to the East celebreation. It was special because we had a day off due to the East celebration.

Do you mean Easter?

Moreover, my brother came home with one of his friends for 5 days (cause they didn't work on friday neither) and it was good to see him again because it's more difficult with his studies who forces him to live in another city which is located 2 hours and a half from our family's.


Moreover, my brother also came home with one of his friends for 5 days (cause they didon't work on friday neither's) and it was good to see him again because it's more difficult with. It's difficult to see him nowadays since his studies who forces him to live in another city which is located 2 hours and a half from our family'us. My brother also came home with his friend for 5 days (cause they don't work on friday's) and it was good to see him. It's difficult to see him nowadays since his studies force him to live in another city 2 hours and a half from us.

When they arrived on Thursday, we came watching a councert.


When they arrived on Thursday, we came watchingwere coming back from a councert. When they arrived on Thursday, we were coming back from a concert.

It's a French famous rapper called Damso.


It's a Frenchwas for a famous French rapper callnamed Damso. It's was for a famous French rapper named Damso.

I'm gonna talk more about that in another text but overall, it was pretty good.


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Then, on friday they went karting.


Then, on fFriday they went karting. Then on Friday they went karting.

I would have loved to go with them but I just couldn't because of school.


I would have loved to go with them but I just couldn't because of school. I would have loved to go with them but I couldn't because of school.

And to add insult to injury, I had a 2 hours-test in one of the most important subjects (chemistry) so I had to study, otherwise I think I would have gone with them.


And to add insult to injury, I had a 2 hours- long test in one of themy most important subjects (chemistry), so I had to study, otherw. If not for thise, I think I would have gone with them. And to add insult to injury, I had a 2 hour long test in one of my most important subjects (chemistry), so I had to study. If not for this, I think I would have gone with them.

On Saturday, I did the test and I think I passed it.


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It went on pretty well and I knew almost all the course like the back of my hand so it was pretty simple.


It went on pretty well and I knew almost allof the course like the back of my hand so it was pretty simple. It went pretty well and I knew most of the course so it was pretty simple.

I hope I will get about 18 out of 20, altough it's not sure at all.


I hope I wi'll get about 18 out of 20, altough it'sbut I'm not sure at all. I hope I'll get a 18 out of 20, but I'm not sure.

During the evening, I hanged out with friends and we played billard and eat outside.


During the evening, I haunged out with my friends and we played billard and ethen ate outside. During the evening, I hung out with my friends and we played billard and then ate outside.

We had a good time and I will develop that in another text as well.


We had a good time, and I wi'll develop that in another text as well. We had a good time, and I'll develop that in another text.

To conclude, on Sunday, we went outside with my parents, my brother and his friend to take advantage of the beautiful weather.


To conclude, on Sunday, we went outside with my parents, my brother and his friendFinally on Sunday, me, my brother and his friends, and my parents went outside to take advantage of the beautiful weather. Finally on Sunday, me, my brother and his friends, and my parents went outside to take advantage of the beautiful weather.

At first, I planned to go there by car, but as I missed my gym training (cause I woke up too late to go with my father), I decided to run with both my brother and his friend.


They told me we were gonna run for about 5 km so I was pretty confident, but it turned out we ran for 9 km so I was exhausted.


During the ride, my mother told us there were another way we could take to run a little more.


I didn't want at first, but I told myself I would be week if I didn't so I did it anyway (everyone has their own motivation ahah).


Globally, I've ran 13 km and my legs hurted so hard.


GlobOverally, I've ran about 13 km and my legs hurted so harbad. Overall I've ran about 13 km and my legs hurt so bad.

The fact is that I'm not used to run and I don't really appreciate that.


The fact is that I'm not used to run and I don't really appreciate thatning. I'm not used to running.

However, running with people is way more enjoyable so it was pretty pleasant even if I suffered a lot.


However,But running with people is wayalot more enjoyable, so it was pretty pleasantokay even if I suffered a lot. But running with people is alot more enjoyable, so it was okay even if I suffered a lot.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text!


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Please tell me what you thought of my English.


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