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March 11, 2025

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Don’t make excuses

I want fulfilling days.
So I decided to study English.
But I can’t going well.
First, I’m very sleepy everyday and I sleep long time.
Second, I don’t use English ordinary day so it’s difficult to keep a motivation .
Finally, I make excuses like the two I mentioned before.
I’ll start working hard again from today.

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Don’t make excuses

I want fulfilling days.

So I decided to study English.

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March 11, 2025

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Don’t make excuses


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Don’t mMake eExcuses Don’t Make Excuses

Remember the capitalization rule for your title.

I want fulfilling days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to have fulfilling days. I want to have fulfilling days

Added “to have” for clarity and to make the sentence sound more natural.

But I can’t going well.


But I can’it's not going well. But it's not going well.

But I can’it’s not going well. But it’s not going well.

But I can’t going well’m not making good progress. But I’m not making good progress.

“Can’t going well” is grammatically incorrect. "I'm not making good progress" is clearer and more natural.

First, I’m very sleepy everyday and I sleep long time.


First, I’m very sleepy everyday and I sleep long timea lot. First, I’m very sleepy everyday and I sleep a lot.

A native would more likely say "I'm very tired everyday" rather than I'm very sleepy.

First, I’m very sleepy every day and I sleep a long time. First, I’m very sleepy every day and I sleep a long time.

First, I’m feel very sleepy every day and Itend to sleep for a long time. First, I feel very sleepy every day and tend to sleep for a long time

"Everyday" should be “every day” (two words), as it refers to something that happens each day. “Sleep long time” sounds awkward, so I changed it to "sleep for a long time" for smoother phrasing.

So I decided to study English.


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Second, I don’t use English ordinary day so it’s difficult to keep a motivation .


Second, I don’t use English ordinary daregularly so it’s difficult to keep astay motivationed . Second, I don’t use English regularly so it’s difficult to stay motivated .

You could also say "it's difficult to maintain my motivation".

Second, I don’t use English ordinaevery day so it’s difficult to keep amaintain motivation . Second, I don’t use English every day so it’s difficult to maintain motivation.

Second, I don’t use English ordinary dayin my daily life, so it’s difficult to keep astay motivation .ed Second, I don’t use English in my daily life, so it’s difficult to stay motivated

"Ordinary day" was replaced with "daily life" for clarity. "Keep a motivation" was rephrased to "stay motivated" for more natural phrasing.

Finally, I make excuses like the two I mentioned before.


Finally, I make excuses like the two I mentioned beforabove. Finally, I make excuses like the two I mentioned above.

Finally, I make excuses, like the two I mentioned before.earlier Finally, I make excuses, like the two I mentioned earlier

“Before” was changed to “earlier” for better flow in this context. I also added a comma to separate sentences to make it clear.

I’ll start working hard again from today.


I’ll start working hard again from, starting today. I’ll start working hard again, starting today.

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