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Jack

July 8, 2022

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I like the blue sky and clouds. I like to take some pictures when I see them.

The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often happen in autumn or the time before autumn.

Today, on my way home from Linquan County, I found the blue skies and clouds very beautiful. I took some pictures.

Now, it's early July, one month before autumn. I think that is the reason why this beautiful scenery happens.

I took this picture against the sun, using an Apple iPhone.

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Jack

July 8, 2022

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I like the blue sky and clouds.


I like to take some pictures when I see them.


The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often happen in autumn or the time before autumn.


The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often happcan be seen in autumn or the time before autumn. The most beautiful blue skies and clouds here often can be seen in autumn or the time before autumn.

I wouldn't say your version is incorrect but it sounded a bit unnatural to me because skies don't "happen".

Today, on my way home from Linquan County, I found the blue skies and clouds very beautiful.


I took some pictures.


Now, it's early July, one month before autumn.


Now, it's early July, one month before autumn. Now it's early July, one month before autumn.

I think that is the reason why this beautiful scenery happens.


I think that is the reason whyof this beautiful scenery happens. I think that is the reason of this beautiful scenery.

Again, it sounded a bit unnatural.

I took this picture against the sun, using an Apple iPhone.


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