Nov. 19, 2020
Journal 11/19/20
Why do you learn a foreign language? This is a great question. For me, there are no special goals for learning English. I am a person who always likes doing things, and I don’t want to waste time. Currently, my work is not very busy and I think I have a lot of space time, so I want to do some things to entertain myself. But what can I do? According to our government policy, I am not allowed to run business although I am very into it. The things I would do must be available when I am at work, so that definitely would be learning. Thus, I chose to learn English. Why don’t I learn another foreign language? Because I think that English is more popular in the world. All above is the reason why I study English.
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Journal 11/19/20
Why do you learn a foreign language?
This is a great question.
For me, there arI have no special goals for learning English.
For me, I have no special goals for learning English.
I am a person who always likes doing things, and I don’t want to waste time.
Currently, my work is not very busy and I think I have a lot of spacfree time, so I want to do some things to entertain myself.
Currently, my work is not very busy and I think I have a lot of free time, so I want to do some things to entertain myself.
To make it sound more natural, you could say
"These days, it hasn't been very busy at work and I feel like I have a lot of free time, so I try to do things to entertain myself."
According to our government policy, I am not allowed to run business although I am very into it. According to our government policy, I am not allowed to run business although I am very into it.
Do you mean you can't do business while at work or you can't run a business in general?
The things I would dodo in my free time must be available whento me while I am at work, so that definitely would be learning.
The things I do in my free time must be available to me while I am at work, so that definitely would be learning.
Thus, I chose to learn English.
Why don’t I learn another foreign language?
Because I think that English is more popular in the worldwide.
Because I think that English is more popular worldwide.
All of the above isare the reasons why I study English.
All of the above are the reasons why I study English.
Nov. 19, 2020
According to our government policy, I am not allowed to run business although I am very into it.
Do you mean you can't do business while at work or you can't run a business in general?
Can not run business in general
Nov. 19, 2020
Then I would say: "According to the policy of the government, I am not allowed to run a business, although I would really be into it."
Nov. 19, 2020
Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.
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Why do you learn a foreign language? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is a great question. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For me, there are no special goals for learning English.
For me, |
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I am a person who always likes doing things, and I don’t want to waste time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Currently, my work is not very busy and I think I have a lot of space time, so I want to do some things to entertain myself.
Currently, my work is not very busy and I think I have a lot of To make it sound more natural, you could say "These days, it hasn't been very busy at work and I feel like I have a lot of free time, so I try to do things to entertain myself." |
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But what can I do? |
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According to our government policy, I am not allowed to run business although I am very into it. According to our government policy, I am not allowed to run business although I am very into it. According to our government policy, I am not allowed to run business although I am very into it. Do you mean you can't do business while at work or you can't run a business in general? |
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The things I would do must be available when I am at work, so that definitely would be learning.
The things I |
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Thus, I chose to learn English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why don’t I learn another foreign language? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because I think that English is more popular in the world.
Because I think that English is more popular |
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All above is the reason why I study English.
All of the above |
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