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I am on the way to Kunshan, which is a county level city belonging to Suzhou, and the number one county level city in economy in China.

Giant is a famous bike brand in China. Although it's actually a bike company from Taiwan, it has three factories in Kunshan.

Compared with Chinese traditional bike brands Phoenix and Forever, Giant is expensive, but it's acceptable compared with Trek and specialized. So it has the best balance between quality, shape and cost.

I have tried to buy a Giant recently, but I can't find an ideal one in my city. I even went to the capital of my province, but I still didn't get one that I was satisfied with.

In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has at least more than twenty Giant bike shops. A comment left me with a deep impression, "if you can't buy a specific model of Giant bike in Kunshan, then you are not able to buy it anywhere nationwide in China."

I want to spend about thirty thousand RMB to buy a carbon-made road bike between the model of Propel and Tcr. I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team players used in the competition, but it was way expensive.

I hope I can buy a Giant ideal bike in Kunshan. Do you like cycling? And what are your bike brands?

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Buy a Bike

Giant is a famous bike brand in China.

Although it's actually a bike company from Taiwan, it has three factories in Kunshan.

I have tried to buy a Giant recently, but I can't find an ideal one in my city.

Do you like cycling?

And what are your bike brands?

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I am on the way to Kunshan, which is a county level city belonging to Suzhou, and the number one county level city in economy in China.


I am on the way to Kunshan, which is a county level city belonging to Suzhou, and the number one county level city in economy in China. I am on the way to Kunshan, which is a county level city belonging to Suzhou, and the number one county level city in economy in China.

I am on my way to Kunshan, a county-level city in Suzhou, and the number one county-level city in economy in China.

I am on the way to Kunshan, which is a county level city belonging toin Suzhou, and the number oneChina’s largest county level city in economy in Chinaic terms. I am on the way to Kunshan, which is a county level city in Suzhou, and China’s largest county level city in economic terms.

Giant is a famous bike brand in China.


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Although it's actually a bike company from Taiwan, it has three factories in Kunshan.


Although it's actually a bike company from Taiwan, it has three factories in Kunshan. Although it's actually a bike company from Taiwan, it has three factories in Kunshan.

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Compared with Chinese traditional bike brands Phoenix and Forever, Giant is expensive, but it's acceptable compared with Trek and specialized.


Compared with Chinese traditional bike brands Phoenix and Forever, Giant is expensive, but it's acceptable compared with Trek and specialized. Compared with Chinese traditional bike brands Phoenix and Forever, Giant is expensive, but it's acceptable compared with Trek and specialized.

Compared with traditional Chinese bike brands like Phoenix and Forever, Giant is rather expensive, but it's acceptable compared to Trek and Specialized.

Compared with Chinesthe traditional Chinese bike brands Phoenix and Forever, Giant is expensive, but it's acceptable when compared [with | to] Trek and sSpecialized. Compared with the traditional Chinese bike brands Phoenix and Forever, Giant is expensive, but it's acceptable when compared [with | to] Trek and Specialized.

suggestion: …but it’s comparable to Trek and Specialized.

So it has the best balance between quality, shape and cost.


So it has the best balance between quality, shape and cost. So it has the best balance between quality, shape and cost.

It has the best balance between quality, shape, and cost.

So it has the best balance between quality, shapegeometry and cost. So it has the best balance between quality, geometry and cost.

I assume you mean the “geometry” of the frame.

I have tried to buy a Giant recently, but I can't find an ideal one in my city.


I have tried to buy a Giant recently, but I can't find an ideal one in my city. I have tried to buy a Giant recently, but I can't find an ideal one in my city.

I recently tried buying a Giant in my hometown, but I couldn't find one that I like.

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I even went to the capital of my province, but I still didn't get one that I was satisfied with.


I even went to the capital of my province, but I still didn't get one that I was satisfied with. I even went to the capital of my province, but I still didn't get one that I was satisfied with.

I even went to the capital of my province, but I still couldn't find one that I was satisfied with.

I even went to the capital of my province, but I still didn't getfind one that I was satisfied with. I even went to the capital of my province, but I still didn't find one that I was satisfied with.

In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has at least more than twenty Giant bike shops.


In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has at least more than twenty Giant bike shops. In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has more than twenty Giant bike shops.

"at least" and "more than", you can pick one, not both together. "At least" means = "or > 20" "more than" means "> 20"

In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has at least more than twenty Giant bike shops. In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has at least more than twenty Giant bike shops.

These past few days, I looked for a bike from livestreams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has *at least/more than twenty Giant bike shops. *You can either use "at least twenty Giant bike shops" OR "more than twenty Giant bike shops", but not both at the same time. Either one will get across the sheer amount of stores in Kunshan

In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has at least more than twenty Giant bike shops. In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has more than twenty Giant bike shops.

A comment left me with a deep impression, "if you can't buy a specific model of Giant bike in Kunshan, then you are not able to buy it anywhere nationwide in China."


A comment left me with a deep impression, "if you can't buy a specific model of Giant bike in Kunshan, then you are not able to buy it anywhere nationwide in China." A comment left me with a deep impression, "if you can't buy a specific model of Giant bike in Kunshan, then you are not able to buy it anywhere nationwide in China."

One comment that stood out to me said that "if you can't buy a specific model of Giant bike in Kunshan, then you can't buy it anywhere in China."

A comment [left me with a deep impression, | made a deep impression on me]: "if you can't buy a specific model of Giant bike in Kunshan, then you arewill not able to buy it anywhere nationwide in China." A comment [left me with a deep impression | made a deep impression on me]: "if you can't buy a specific model of Giant bike in Kunshan, then you will not able to buy it anywhere nationwide in China."

I want to spend about thirty thousand RMB to buy a carbon-made road bike between the model of Propel and Tcr.


I wplant to spend about thirty thousand RMB to buy30,000 RMB (around 4,100 USD) on a carbon-madefiber road bike, specifically looking at models between the model of Propel and Tcrthe TCR. I plan to spend about 30,000 RMB (around 4,100 USD) on a carbon-fiber road bike, specifically looking at models between the Propel and the TCR.

It's a good idea to include the currency conversion when you're talking about money from another country. This makes it easier for the international community to understand how much you're talking about.

I want to spend about thirty thousand RMB to buy a carbon-madefiber road bike [between the model of] Propel and Tcr. I want to spend about thirty thousand RMB to buy a carbon-fiber road bike [between the model of] Propel and Tcr.

I’m not sure what you mean by “between the model of Propel and Tcr.” Do you mean something better than Propel but not as good as Tcr?

I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team players used in the competition, but it was way expensive.


I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team players used in the competition, but it was way too expensive. I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team players used in the competition, but it was way too expensive.

I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team players used in the competition, but it was way expensive. I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team players used in the competition, but it was way expensive.

I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team players used in the competition, but it's way too expensive.

I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team playriders used in the competition, but it wa[is way too | is very] expensive. I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team riders used in competition, but it [is way too | is very] expensive.

I hope I can buy a Giant ideal bike in Kunshan.


I hope I can buy an ideal Giant ideal bike in Kunshan. I hope I can buy an ideal Giant bike in Kunshan.

I hope I can buy a Giant idealmy ideal Giant bike in Kunshan. I hope I can buy my ideal Giant bike in Kunshan.

Do you like cycling?


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And what are your bike brands?


And what are your bike brands? And what are your bike brands?

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