I am improveing my English skills becausefor my career life. I am improving my English skills for my career.

I amwant to improve my English skills because of my career life. I want to improve my English skills because of my career.

I am trying to improve my English skills because of career life. I am trying to improve my English skills because of career life.

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Hello everybody, I am new to a the/this platform. Hello everybody, I am new to the/this platform.

Hello everybody, I am new to a this platform. Hello everybody, I am new to this platform.

"this" because you're new to this specific platform:)

Hello everybody, I am new to a this platform. Hello everybody, I am new to this platform.

I am Ian industrial Eengineering. I am an industrial engineer.

No need to capitalize your job title

I am an Industrial Engineering. I am an Industrial Engineer.

I am Iworking in industrial Eengineering. I am working in industrial engineering.

I'm waiting for your helpadvices. I'm waiting for your advices.

"advices" sounds a bit better, and the sentence sounds more natural.

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, my native language is Turkish. I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, my native language.

No need to repeat "Turkish" at the end

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, because it's my native language is Turkish. I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, because it's my native language.

You don't have to repeat "Turkish" there:)

I can also help those who want to learn Turkish, m. My native language is Turkish. I can also help those who want to learn Turkish. My native language is Turkish.