May 29, 2023
FCE Exam Writing Essay - Live concerts vs home concerts
Essay statement:
Which is better: attending a concert, or watching the same concert at home, for example online or on TV?
Notes. Write about:
1- Convenience
2- Atmosphere
3- __________ (your own idea)
The essay:
A live concert is an extraordinary entertainment experience, but in last years many people are changing the attendance to live music events with a more comfortable and intimate alternative: watching them at home.
Undoubtly, watching a concert at home has many advantages, mainly its convinience. Additionally the quality of the the sound in a closed space like your home outperforms to external environments.
However, no matter the quality of sound at tout home can be, the atmosphere and real sensations of being immerse in a crowd, singing and jumping, never can be compared to the loneliness of your home hall.
Even deaf persons like attending to live concerts to feel the music vibrations, and they describe it as a wonderful experience.
Perhaps, in the future, hybrids events celebrated in the metaverse, will offer the best of two worlds.
But till then, I would recommend that, whenever you can, going to live concerts, and enjoy the contact with the people and artists. You never know when it will be your last opportunity of such a real experience in this, more a more digitalized word.
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FCE Exam Writing Essay - Live concerts vs home concerts
Essay statement: Which is better: attending a concert, or watching the same concert at home, for example online or on TV?
Notes.
Write about: 1- Convenience 2- Atmosphere 3- __________ (your own idea) The essay: A live concert is an extraordinary entertainment experience, but in last years many people are changing the attendance to live music events with a more comfortable and intimate alternative: watching them at home.
Undoubtedly, watching a concert at home has many advantages, mainly its convinience. Undoubtedly, watching a concert at home has many advantages, mainly its convinience.
Additionally, the quality of the the sound in a closed space like your home outperforms to external environments. Additionally, the quality of the the sound in a closed space like your home outperforms to external environments.
However, no matter the quality of sound at touhow good the sound quality at home canmay be, the atmosphere and real sensations of being immersed in a crowd, singing and jumping, never can be compared to the loneliness of your home hall.
However, no matter how good the sound quality at home may be, the atmosphere and real sensations of being immersed in a crowd, singing and jumping, never can be compared to the loneliness of your home hall.
Even deaf persons likeindividuals enjoy attending to live concerts to feel the music vibrations, and they describe it as a wonderful experience.
Even deaf individuals enjoy attending live concerts to feel the music vibrations, and they describe it as a wonderful experience.
Perhaps, in the future, hybrids events celebrated in the metaverse, will offer the best of two worlds.
Perhaps in the future, hybrid events celebrated in the metaverse, will offer the best of two worlds.
But untill then, I would recommend that, whenever you can, going to live concerts, and enjoy the contact with the people and artists.
But until then, I would recommend that whenever you can, go to live concerts, and enjoy the contact with the people and artists.
You never know when it will be your last opportunity ofor such a real experience in this, more a more increasingly digitalized world.
You never know when it will be your last opportunity for such a real experience in this increasingly digitalized world.
May 30, 2023
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Essay statement: Which is better: attending a concert, or watching the same concert at home, for example online or on TV? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Write about: 1- Convenience 2- Atmosphere 3- __________ (your own idea) The essay: A live concert is an extraordinary entertainment experience, but in last years many people are changing the attendance to live music events with a more comfortable and intimate alternative: watching them at home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Undoubtly, watching a concert at home has many advantages, mainly its convinience. Undoubtedly, watching a concert at home has many advantages, mainly its convinience. Undoubtedly, watching a concert at home has many advantages, mainly its convinience. |
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Additionally the quality of the the sound in a closed space like your home outperforms to external environments. Additionally, the quality of the the sound in a closed space like your home outperforms to external environments. Additionally, the quality of the the sound in a closed space like your home outperforms to external environments. |
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However, no matter the quality of sound at tout home can be, the atmosphere and real sensations of being immerse in a crowd, singing and jumping, never can be compared to the loneliness of your home hall.
However, no matter |
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Even deaf persons like attending to live concerts to feel the music vibrations, and they describe it as a wonderful experience.
Even deaf |
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Perhaps, in the future, hybrids events celebrated in the metaverse, will offer the best of two worlds.
Perhaps |
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But till then, I would recommend that, whenever you can, going to live concerts, and enjoy the contact with the people and artists.
But until |
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You never know when it will be your last opportunity of such a real experience in this, more a more digitalized word.
You never know when it will be your last opportunity |
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