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TOMO_o

Jan. 12, 2026

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Do you like adventures?

I love adventures. I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited in a brand new world. One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to do now in Japan. Maybe I’ll go there years later.

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Do yst thou like adventures?

Archaic English sounds better in this scenario.

I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited in a brand new world.

One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to doam busy now in Japan.

Maybe I’ll go there years later.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 13, 2026

139

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I was able to write the kana very well this time.

Do you like adventures?

I love adventures.

I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited inexplore a brand new world.

One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to do now in Japan.

Maybe I’ll go there years laterin a few years.

We only really use "years later" when telling a story.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 13, 2026

139

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I was able to write the kana very well this time.

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Anonymous123456789

Jan. 13, 2026

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You're welcome.

Maybe I’ll go there years later[ ].

The phrase "years later" is usually used to refer to an event in the past.
For an event in the future, it is much more common to use "some day" or "in the future."
If you wanted to include the word "years," then "in the coming years" would work, but I don't like placing the opposite words "go" and "coming" so close together in your sentence because it feels like a change of direction.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 12, 2026

139

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You gave detailed explanations of what type of sentences certain vocabulary expressions fit in, which is very helpful for studying.
I was able to write well with the kana this time.

Do you like adventures?

I love adventures.

I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited in a brand new world.

One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to do now in Japan.

Maybe I’ll go there years later.

The sentence is correct. Another way to write this sentence: "Maybe I'll go there sometime a few years down the line."

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Excellent writing on this post! Hope you can enjoy an espresso in Italy one day!

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TOMO_o

Jan. 12, 2026

139

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I was able to write the kana very well this time.

Do you like adventures?


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Do yst thou like adventures?

Archaic English sounds better in this scenario.

I love adventures.


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I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited in a brand new world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited inexplore a brand new world.

I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited in a brand new world.

One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to do now in Japan.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to doam busy now in Japan.

Maybe I’ll go there years later.


Maybe I’ll go there years later.

The sentence is correct. Another way to write this sentence: "Maybe I'll go there sometime a few years down the line."

Maybe I’ll go there years later[ ].

The phrase "years later" is usually used to refer to an event in the past. For an event in the future, it is much more common to use "some day" or "in the future." If you wanted to include the word "years," then "in the coming years" would work, but I don't like placing the opposite words "go" and "coming" so close together in your sentence because it feels like a change of direction.

Maybe I’ll go there years laterin a few years.

We only really use "years later" when telling a story.

Maybe I’ll go there years later.

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