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How am I doing
When I was young, I changed jobs a lot.
But no matter how many times I changed my job, I always worked as a laborer at the bottom of society.
I live with my parents deep in the mountains.
We work on the farm and raise rabbits every day, eating our own vegetables and feeling satisfied.
I think we should live in the present and make the most of every day.
Not thinking about tomorrow or next year.
You never know what tomorrow may bring, but today is happening right now.
Are you happy and satisified today?
Have a great day, my friends.
我年轻的时候，换过很多工作。
但是换来换去，永远在底层做苦力。
我在深山里跟父母住在一起。
我们每天种地，养兔子。
吃自己的种的蔬菜，感到很满足。
我觉得应该活在当下，过好每一天。
不去考虑明天或来年的事情。
明天你永远无法预知会发生什么，但今天的事此刻就正在发生。
你今天过得开心且满意吗？
祝你们有愉快的一天，我的朋友。
How am I doing
But no matter how many times I changed my job, I always worked as a laborer at the bottom of society.
Currently, I live with my parents deep in the mountains.
I think this helps the transition from talking about your past in the previous sentences to talking about your present from now on
We work on thea farm and raise rabbits every day, eating our own vegetables and feeling satisfied.
The = definitive article referring to a known thing, but this is the first time you have mentioned your farm
I think we should live in the present and make the most of every day.
Not thinking about tomorrow or next year.
You never know what tomorrow may bring, but today is happening right now.
Are you happy and satisified today?
Have a great day, my friends.
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Well written! I hope you have a great day as well :)
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When I was young, I changed jobs a lot. |
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But no matter how many times I changed my job, I always worked as a laborer at the bottom of society. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I live with my parents deep in the mountains. Currently, I live with my parents deep in the mountains. I think this helps the transition from talking about your past in the previous sentences to talking about your present from now on |
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We work on the farm and raise rabbits every day, eating our own vegetables and feeling satisfied. We work on The = definitive article referring to a known thing, but this is the first time you have mentioned your farm |
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I think we should live in the present and make the most of every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You never know what tomorrow may bring, but today is happening right now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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